BSV Forum - Writing - Beta

Will you be my beta please?!?

Apr 02 2007 11:25 am   #1YourMyDream

Hi :wave: new writer here, I have started a couple of fics, but haven't really thought any of them up to scratch until now... I have the first few chapters of a fic that I want to post, so now I am looking for a beta! I'm not sure if I need help with much... IMO I'm pretty good at spelling and grammar, can't help the odd typo or two, but generally that stuff is ok. And I've got a lot of my plot mapped out, I basically want someone with an objective mind to read over it and give me their honest, unbiased opinion, and tell me whether it's worthy of the BSV, or only worth of my trashcan... lol :P so if you're interested in helping me out, please let me know!! :)

cheers!

Katie xox

Don't worry, be happy :)
Apr 02 2007 02:12 pm   #2slaymesoftly

Hey, Katie, Not sure I want to volunteer to beta for anyone else, but I'll be happy to take alook at a couple of chapters and let you know how it looks to me.  If all you need is typo help, we should be able to find you someone (or, very small voice, I might offer to do it until you find someone else.) You might also check the beta list at Riters_R_Us.


I am not a minion of Evil...
I am upper management.
Apr 02 2007 06:41 pm   #3GoldenBuffy

Can't promise anything but you can send it my way as well. I can read over it. Grammar and all that stuff is not my strong though.

And in the air the fireflies
Our only light in paradise
We'll show the world they were wrong
And teach them all to sing along
Apr 02 2007 07:51 pm   #4Spikez_tart

Hi Dream = I just took on another writer, but I have this advice for really fast improvement:  The Key, by James Frey and Immediate Fiction by Jerry somebody, I think.  Also, James Frey has two books - How to Write a Damn Good Novel I and II.  If my other writer doesn't work out, I'll let you know.

If we want her to be exactly she'll never be exactly I know the only really real Buffy is really Buffy and she's gone' who?
Apr 02 2007 08:46 pm   #5DreamsofSpike

If all you need is just a good look-over-er, and fixing the occasional typo, I could take it on, love, if you need me to...looks like you've got quite a few offers, though :)

 

*hugs*

DoS

Apr 03 2007 10:00 am   #6YourMyDream

*takes a deep breath to calm down* lol, some of my very favourite writers offering to help me... *jumps excitedly* omg I feel like I'm starstruck or something!!! :P I really appreciate all the replies, it made my day when I saw there was responses *blush* I don't want to offend anyone by not choosing them to be my beta lol, but Slaymesoftly, GB and Spikez_tart, you girls sound like you're already busy being someone elses beta, which I totally understand, so I think I'll accept DoS' offer... if she's still keen to take me on, that is :)

Cheers!

Katie xox

 

Don't worry, be happy :)
Apr 03 2007 08:37 pm   #7DreamsofSpike

certainly, love, my email is darkdreams1222@yahoo.com , feel free to send me whatever you want me to look over :)

*hugs*

DoS

Apr 03 2007 10:07 pm   #8slaymesoftly

NP, sweetie.  You need someone who will be free to work with you whenever you need - which may or may not have been me. :)

I am not a minion of Evil...
I am upper management.
Apr 05 2007 06:06 pm   #9dhwriter

hello, I'm a new writer, and I was wondering if anyone would like to be my beta.

Apr 05 2007 08:58 pm   #10DreamsofSpike

dhwriter, what sort of fic do you write? do you possibly have a sample? i dont know about most betas, but for myself, those are the kind of things i would want to know before making a decision ;)

 

*hugs*

DoS

Apr 05 2007 09:11 pm   #11dhwriter

well, I write a bunch of kind for fun, but the one I'm working on to post is a crossover. It's called Harry Potter and the Vampire Slayer. I thought it'd be fun to toy around with. This is what I have in my disclaimer:

Summary: Giles, Buffy, and Spike travel to England to help Hogwarts and Buffy and Spike become allies of Harry Potter and his friends.

A/N: I named the story "Harry Potter and the Vampire Slayer" for the sake that it takes place during the fifth book "Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix", but the heart of the story is for the Buffy the Vampire Slayer TV series.

 

Also, for the sake of the fanfiction, even though the timelines don't match up, we'll say that the midnight of the Thanksgiving episode, "Pangs", is after Chapter Twenty-One in the book "Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix", page 451, after Hagrid's lesson that Professor Umbridge examined (simply because it's before December and Thanksgiving isn't mentioned in the Harry Potter books because it's an American holiday).

Apr 05 2007 09:38 pm   #12DreamsofSpike

hmmm....sounds interesting but i'm not personally into Harry Potter enough to want to do it....I'm sure someone will though :)

*hugs*

DoS

Apr 05 2007 09:40 pm   #13dhwriter

kk thx anyway :)

Apr 09 2007 05:43 pm   #14cereza

Okay, there was no point in starting a new thread, when we have this one and I want to ask you for the same thing YourMyDream did. 

I've got a problem, 'cos I've lost contact with my Beta. I don't know if she's gone away, doesn't want to keep in touch with me any more or has no access  to the Internet... The thing is, I started publishing my story "Insight" you might have read and I can't go on without a Beta. The chapters so need to be checked, 'cos (and I might have already mentioned that somewhere else) English is a foreign language for me and I can't risk publishing something with lots of mistakes...

I'd like to ask if there's anybody willing to help me. It may be just a temporary job. It may become more serious collaboration as well. Anyway, I'll be really grateful for your help.

So, anybody? Please?

"People," Geralt turned his head, "like to invent monsters and monstrosities. Then they seem less monstrous themselves. (...) They find it easier to live."
~ Andrzej Sapkowski, The Last Wish
Apr 29 2007 05:29 am   #15dhwriter

I still need a beta. Someone help me please?

Apr 29 2007 03:00 pm   #16slaymesoftly

Have you ladies tried the beta list at Riters_R_Us?  It's not very long, but the people on it are good and they know their stuff.

http://community.livejournal.com/riters_r_us/tag/beta+list

I am not a minion of Evil...
I am upper management.
Apr 29 2007 03:17 pm   #17Spikez_tart

Dhwriter - I might be able to help, provided you don't mind that I've never read a Harry Potter.  Let's talk off line.

charlotte.alexander@rcn.com

 

If we want her to be exactly she'll never be exactly I know the only really real Buffy is really Buffy and she's gone' who?
Jun 01 2007 11:30 am   #18Madcowx

hi ya is anyone willing to be my beta??!! pretty please my fic has a lot of mistakes but i really wanna start posting can anyone help? x

Jun 01 2007 11:46 pm   #19Spikez_tart
Diabola - if youre reading

Anything happening on updating the Beta list?  We have some desperate fledglings.  I already have three (what was I thinking?)

If we want her to be exactly she'll never be exactly I know the only really real Buffy is really Buffy and she's gone' who?
Jun 02 2007 12:00 am   #20slaymesoftly

That was my thinking, Spikez_tart. I hate to bug Dia when she's obviously still busy with RL stuff, but an updated beta list would be good. Maybe we can just start a thread where anyone who is willing to beta can make an entry ? Just to tide us over until Dia has time to put up the fancy beta form? What do you think guys? Would that work?

I am not a minion of Evil...
I am upper management.
Jun 03 2007 04:49 am   #21Spikez_tart

Sounds good to me.

If we want her to be exactly she'll never be exactly I know the only really real Buffy is really Buffy and she's gone' who?
Jul 01 2007 04:28 am   #22chlarkspuffy

I am writing my first Spuffy fic and was hoping to find a kind soul on these boards who is willing to beta it for me. I anticipate needing help with regards to plot points/structure the most. I sometimes tend to lose the forest for the trees and would appreciate someone keeping me on track. I am also not well-versed with Buffyspeak, so help on that front would also be required. The fic is a challenge response and I already have an outline. Thus far I have written the prologue and plan on finishing chapter one next week.

Any takers? :-D

"If there's anything more important than my ego around, I want it caught and shot now."

- Zaphod Beeblebrox
Jul 03 2007 01:23 am   #23slaymesoftly

You can send it to me chlarkspuffy - if nothing else, I can get you going until you find a permanent, full-time beta.

I am not a minion of Evil...
I am upper management.
Jul 03 2007 02:58 am   #24chlarkspuffy

Thank you, slaymesoftly!

"If there's anything more important than my ego around, I want it caught and shot now."

- Zaphod Beeblebrox
Jul 04 2007 04:23 am   #25Irishrose

Another thing you might consider is browsing the beta list at the BTVS Writers Guild. It's specific about what the beta's will and won't beta, and their preferences. Also, check out any other potential archives you want to post it at, they usually have a beta list.

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