Green-Eyed Monster by ya_lublyu_tebya

04/12/2013 12:45 pm
Thirteen         
Great Story :)

05/29/2010 09:42 am
Thirteen         
Lovely story. If only the real Buffy could have used that whole debacle to grow a brain instead of turning all psycho hosebeast.

05/29/2010 09:41 am
Thirteen         
Lovely story. If only the real Buffy could have used that whole debacle to grow a brain instead of turning all psycho hosebeast.

09/29/2008 01:31 am
Thirteen         
Yep, hindsight sure can be a bitch.  Lovely story with a perfect ending.

sister cuervo
09/27/2008 05:03 pm
Thirteen         
 Good for Jonathan and what a fun read!  really enjoyed Buffy's development and Xander 's too.

spacibo
09/27/2008 07:15 am
Thirteen         

Enjoyed it

Rose
09/25/2008 03:19 am
Thirteen         
Finally we found out why green ey monster! LOL great story! as usual! love all your fics!!! keep them coming :D
I am, I am - a new one started recently and I'm sure many more to come! :-) Thank you for reading. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

09/24/2008 08:04 pm
Thirteen         
Buffy has learned plenty!  Thanks for the lovely ending.
She has, hasn't she? She finally realised what Spike meant to her. Thank you very much for reading!

09/24/2008 07:38 pm
Thirteen         

Aww, what a great ending to a lovely story!

Thank you! :-) I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading.

All4Spike
09/23/2008 06:27 pm
Twelve         
Yay for Jonathan! What a relief!

Tamara
09/22/2008 10:50 pm
Twelve         

Great view of thier patrolling togethre. Spike really is Buffy's partner unlike the others.

shadow
09/22/2008 09:52 pm
Twelve         
love it please update soon

09/22/2008 08:46 pm
Twelve         
Thanks for a lovely update - glad the zapper is taken care of.  Wondering if we can expect anymore out of Warren? 
Yep, no more headaches for Spike :-) And I wanted Jonathan to be shown as a bit better than the other two (maybe I've been watching too much S7!) Very glad you liked.

09/22/2008 07:10 pm
Twelve         
Good thing for Jonathan, he was never like the other two.  I hope the shooting doesn't still happen.  Warren should be more mad at Jonathan, though.  Buffy's not the one that broke his balls...lol!  Yeah, that part had me laughing.
It just had to be done :-) Glad you enjoyed.

09/19/2008 01:04 am
Eleven         
As reunions go, that was pretty damn fine!

shadow
09/18/2008 09:35 pm
Eleven         
love it please update soon

Bridget
09/15/2008 03:47 pm
Ten         
Thank you for this chapter.  I am glad that you wrote Xander as being somewhat normal and considerate of Buffy's feelings.  I also liked the way that Buffy explained everything.  Great chapter.  Now I hope that Buffy can have an honest conversation with Spike.

athena606
09/15/2008 02:51 am
Ten         
If only that had actually happened on the show.

shadow
09/15/2008 12:51 am
Ten         
love it please update soon

sanityfair
09/14/2008 11:29 pm
Ten         

That went well - I'm quite thankful and happy to see Xander understanding.  Looking forward to more soon.

09/14/2008 11:19 pm
Ten         
That went suspiciously smoothly!!  I hope it lasts.

09/14/2008 11:05 pm
Ten         
wonderfull chapter very lovely 

09/14/2008 10:36 pm
Ten         
yay! go wills and xanman for being good friends! and of course, dawnie is just ecstatic about them being together. lovely chappie!

Bridget
09/11/2008 01:55 am
Nine         
I really like this story.  Buffy and Spike seem so relaxed with each other when Buffy lets her guard down.  They have an easy camraderie.  I do hope that at some point they have a talk but I am enjoying reading what you have written so far.

09/11/2008 12:49 am
Nine         
Absolutely positively a possibility!!!!  Good to see some sensible thinking from the Scoobies.

shadow
09/10/2008 11:54 pm
Nine         
love it please update soon

09/10/2008 10:03 pm
Nine         
Okay...love the way you go back and forth from the Revello revelations and the crypt conversations.  By the time Buffy gets home they will have already started to process and that can only help.  Xander is already even past the yelling and scream fit stage and that is good.  Willow is pretty much on board and Dawn is engineer on the Spuffy train.

You've brought up the zapper and I have a feeling it will come into play again once some issues are in the open.  It might just be what will trigger (no pun intended) her realization that she DOES love him not just could.

Excellent update.

Kathleen

09/09/2008 02:20 am
Eight         
oh, some scary thoughts Buffy's having, but asking him into her bed is a step in the right direction.

09/08/2008 11:26 pm
Eight         
Boy, they're having a hard time getting things out when the kissing keeps getting in the way! Looking forward to more of your story soon!

shadow
09/08/2008 09:40 pm
Eight         
love it please update soon

09/08/2008 09:05 pm
Eight         
“You know, the kissing was much easier than this talking thing.”

Well, Buffy, you can always play to your strengths! Heh. Very nice chapter, with the actual talking, difficult though it may be.

09/08/2008 09:03 pm
Eight         
Yeah but the talking is necessary at this point.  He needs to head to the light and not let her dwell on that darkness.  After Faith it's too scary a place for her to let herself go there no matter how true.

YAY an update!  Love the story.  Expect more Xander trouble and that intervention though. 

Kathleen

09/03/2008 01:27 pm
Seven         
Don't tell me she's going to ask the Scoobies' permission.  Stick up for yourself, girl!!!
Of course she's not! She's not that whipped :-) Thanks for reading!

09/02/2008 11:46 pm
Seven         
Thanks so much for the update, I'm glad she made the decision to speak with him first. Seems she's taking the right steps, hope she continues in that direction!
Guess that time apart - and catching him kissing Anya - really helped to sort out her feelings! And I think talking to him first was important for them- she needs to know what to tell the Scoobies after all :-)

shadow
09/02/2008 10:23 pm
Seven         
love it please update soon
Thank you very much! Next update should be coming soon... Thanks for reading.

09/01/2008 03:07 pm
Six         
Much as I am totally freaked by the knowledge of the Nerds, it seems to have been a catalyst of the much needed talk between these too.

fangfaceandrea
09/01/2008 01:39 pm
Six         
I just hope the scoobies , Xander specially , don't be asses.

09/01/2008 03:17 am
Six         
nice timing scoobies... as always. *scoff*
oh well. brilliant chapter nonetheless.

shadow
08/31/2008 08:18 pm
Six         
love it please update soon

08/31/2008 07:58 pm
Six         
Buffy, that was good progress for today. A little honesty is therapeutic. Please continue to work on that.

Bridget
08/31/2008 06:39 pm
Six         
Nice chapter.  Looking forward to the next one.

08/31/2008 06:33 pm
Six         
Thanks for another great chapter - glad they seem to be moving forward!

08/29/2008 09:26 pm
Five         
Nice fight with excellent visuals - though Buffy should have dealt with Warren's power source.
At least he was out of the way and she can get back to Spike :-) Glad you liked the fight - always the hardest thing to write.

08/29/2008 08:57 pm
Five         
Okay, an interesting twist and all, but is she really letting them walk out with the device that can trigger Spike' chip? Buffy is not that tactically idiotic.
I think she just wants them gone. She can always go beat them up later. And that ass-whooping might have knocked some sense into them... Thanks for reading!

08/29/2008 07:15 pm
Five         
Even though Warren was not aware of the chip's function in canon, I like this version. Poor Spike who's unable to back up the Slayer though. 
Yeah, he missed a good fight - he would have enjoyed it. :-) Thanks for reading - I always like reading your comments.

08/29/2008 06:39 pm
Five         

Oh dear she didn't get the remote control from them!  BUFFY YOU IDIOT!  Didn't see them coming but it makes perfect sense.  Warren still has his magic balls too (that always makes me have a guilty snicker). 

This is baddddddd...

Nice twist!  Happy to see the update too.  Hope the group saw all that and remind her of what she missed by underestimating these three.

Wonderful twist.
Kathleen


Small oops though....Think you mean "get the best of me" instead of "take the best of me"
I think she wasn't exactly on top form after Spike kissage :-) You can't blame the girl really, can you?!!

Thanks for the careful reading but yep, I did mean take- as in, they couldn't take her full strength because they're weak little boys. Or so she thought...

Thanks for reading! So glad to hear you're thoughts.

shadow
08/29/2008 06:06 pm
Five         
love it please update soon
Very glad you liked. Thanks for reading!

08/29/2008 04:00 am
Four         
Oh oh oh - please let it be Xander and let Buffy kick his butt. 

08/27/2008 01:04 am
Four         
Finally catching up on favorite stories.

Ooooooo who could it be???  This is a tense cliff hanger.  My mind boggles...could it be Riley?

Glad they are all witness to the goings on for so many reasons.  It should be clear to all that these two are in a relationship and Xander needs to back the heck off!  I much prefer this story to how they went on the show. 

Excellent.

Kathleen

kamla
08/26/2008 05:55 pm
Four         
ummmm, i hope you are not sitting there reading reviews when you should be writing so I can find out what is happening!!!  lol--sorta. what a great story and I can't wait for the update

08/26/2008 03:37 am
Four         
Hmm...must be Xander.

08/26/2008 01:35 am
Four         
aw, cliffie! dang! lovely chappie on the whole though. really like the emotion in the story.

08/25/2008 01:13 am
Four         
God save us - it's another 'protector'!

08/25/2008 12:40 am
Four         
oooh - evil cliffhanger! Just when it seemed that Spike was making progress. ;)

08/25/2008 12:37 am
Four         
Very exciting chapter - hoping you'll update soon, let us know who this intruder is!

June
08/25/2008 12:06 am
Four         
I know some fics have Spike's chip work in different ways, like working on his intent to hurt. so either he thought of hurting whoever came in, understandable at the interruption, or whoever came in was able to make the chip go off, or something I'm totally missing and will be pleasantly surprised by in the next chapter.... Oh, who knows but I look forward to finding out!

shadow
08/24/2008 10:54 pm
Four         
love it please update soon

10/26/2013 10:18 pm
Three         
Go Spike!  What a way to break down defences!

Alethea
08/23/2008 04:34 pm
Three         
more, more, more, please ? :)

Ciandra
08/20/2008 09:25 am
Three         
Love

08/20/2008 04:41 am
Three         
beautiful.

All4Spike
08/19/2008 11:32 pm
Three         
Oh, nice. I'm glad the Scoobies got to see the truth while there was still time to rescue the relationship. Glad Spike didn't shag Anya either. Even though they were both drunk I always thought it was out of character for both of them.
Yeah, shagging not good. Did NOT want to repeat that. Thanks for reading!

08/19/2008 10:54 pm
Three         
Well said. I do wonder what the kids back home are making of this.

08/19/2008 10:52 pm
Three         
Ooooh, lips of Spike.
mmmmmmm, lips of Spike :-)

shadow
08/19/2008 10:00 pm
Three         
love it please update soon

08/19/2008 09:25 pm
Three         
Wonderful chapter- loved their communication-however tentative. Hoping for more soon.
It was about time they started communicating. If there had been more of that, Seeing Red would never have happened - in my humble opinion. More to come soon.

08/19/2008 10:51 pm
Two         
heh heh - whoops Buffy the secret is out.

striker
08/19/2008 04:21 pm
Two         
please i cant wait any longer for the next chapter

sliverWolf
08/19/2008 01:44 am
Two         
great story cant wait for next one

kw
08/18/2008 05:22 am
Two         
cute

08/18/2008 04:49 am
Two         
hehehehe!  I love it!  :D

sin_amatic
08/17/2008 08:36 am
Two         
Buffy is soooooo BUSTED!!!  About time the "Scoobs" learn what their _fearless_ leader is all about.  Thanks for another fun chapter.

BTW   Looking forward to reading about Xander's head imploding!!!! <G>  

Ta!

Sandra
08/17/2008 01:52 am
Two         
Excellent, please update soon!

08/16/2008 06:45 am
Two         
lol, loved it! go dawnie. she is brilliant. like you!

08/16/2008 03:01 am
Two         
hahaha.  excellent!  do we get to see the same scene but at the magic box in the next chapter?

08/15/2008 11:12 pm
Two         
Xander will probably still want to dash off to 'rescue' Buffy, but it looks like she's managing fine rescuing herself.

shadow
08/15/2008 10:41 pm
Two         
love it please update soon

08/15/2008 09:59 pm
Two         
So glad that Dawn managed to stop Xander.  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

08/15/2008 09:37 pm
Two         
Thanks for having Dawn as the voice of reason and for giving us a fabulous update!  I'm looking forward to seeing what that kissing is all about!

08/15/2008 08:54 pm
Two         
NOOO!
I really like this story and the last chapter was great reasoning and thoughts from Buffy and how she and Spike really would conflict, but please don't tell me Spike is going to let Buffy use him again! I hated how much of a doormat he let himself be and like he really was only after sex and I hope they break off the kissing and start talking instead next chapter!

08/15/2008 08:06 pm
Two         
She started it!

I'm curious to see if this change in tactics is going to slow Xander down at all.

09/26/2008 04:16 am
One         
Good bickering and fighting. 

08/19/2008 10:48 pm
One         
Good start lub

Bec
08/15/2008 03:20 pm
One         
Great start, hope her friends are catching the violence on tape. It would make life for Buffy a little bit more interesting :) Update soon.

08/15/2008 12:18 pm
One         
great story - every word rings true and is so Spike and Buffy, would like more soon - thanks

08/13/2008 05:40 am
One         
Very cool!  Excited to see more!  :)

08/13/2008 03:10 am
One         
oh, won't wills find the camera in there soon? Brilliant beginning to what I'm sure will turn out to be another brilliant story!!! Can't wait to find out what happens!

08/13/2008 02:26 am
One         
ooh!  looks like the start of another excellant story.  can't wait to read what happens next!

08/13/2008 02:23 am
One         
Oh dear!  If Willow has found that camera they'll see he can hit Buffy and it would get very very ugly indeed!

Always a treat to see a new story from you.  This one look to be a good one too.

Glad you had them interrupted before the table sex.  This is just as telling about how Buffy really feels though.

Kathleen

08/13/2008 02:07 am
One         
Buffy, Buffy, Buffy. I just hope her friends are getting all this on tape.

fangfaceandrea
08/12/2008 10:21 pm
One         
wow!

really angry Spuffy fighting, ooh how I miss the old days XD 'course you're doing a great job reminding us XD

Btw, Spike's last line? priceless and spot on XD. please note, that while I'm not  a Buffy hater, quite the contrary, I do like to see her  being on the other side of angry lashing when she deserves it. It makes for fun consequences

08/12/2008 09:27 pm
One         
Great to see something new so quickly. They're all in so much pain--looking forward to where you take us!

shadow
08/12/2008 08:40 pm
One         
love it please update soon

Michelle D.
08/12/2008 08:01 pm
One         
Great start!  I suppose their fight is being caught on camera.

08/12/2008 07:59 pm
One         
I'm glad Spike was able to tell Buffy a few much needed home truths before she started with the punching.