Chapter 12 on: no content.

Very well written.

the story is going fabulously great but i can't seem to be able to view chapter 12....n its killing me!..i don't understand why its happening,but its happened with other stories before as well. u open the page n it just has the title n no text...is it a problem with the site or something else?i hope u can help bcoz the story is marvlous n really don't wanna miss out on the ending.v done a great job!giles n angel definitely got what they deserve...n yay for spuffy!great work keep it up...n pl.help me with how i can view the last chapter...!

I enjoyed your story very much - really liked how you resolved the Spike and Buffy post Sunnydale.  Very neat idea of doing the fake Vamp Buffy.  I am sorry to see that Buffy and Giles had their final break down of trust and deep affection.  Giles really got taken in by Angel and his own lack of faith in Buffy and Spike. 

Hope to read more of your works - thanks for a great Spuffy story.

ohh...i loved it!

Cute story.  It was nice to read that Buffy had complete faith in Spike.  She will be happier this way.

Great family time, but I will miss this story now that it's finished.  Thank you for writing for us.

Good job!  You should think about writng a sequel to this, there are plenty of possibilites. 

Perfect ending... although I wouldn't mind if you decided to pop in and see them again sometime along the line. I want to hear more about these old powerful vamps that Spike is now Master of!

 very good loved the vamp buffy i was kinda sartled for a while about her actully being evil but then i remembered that Spike wpuld omly turn her if she kept her soul and only in extreem emergency god i love that Vamp

 Thank you so much for the great story.  Wonder what Willow will do, other than the usual jealousy.

Oh sweet! Love the little trick.
“It doesn’t matter where we live. A crypt, a penthouse suite, a house in the suburbs with a white picket fence; as long as we’re together that’s all that matters.”

Yup, that's love all right!

pacing of the story is fine - loved what you did in the warehouse, I actually had my mouth open while reading it! I am looking forward to the conclusion - this has been well-written, tight and sexy!

They shouldn't have tried to keep them apart, so it's only what they deserve.  Keep up the great work.

love it please update soon

love it please update soon

Yaay, together at last!  Thanks for the update!

Yaayyy!!  That couldn't have gone better.  No recriminations, just honesty and love.  Just the ticket for a Sunday morning.  Big thank you.

Wonderful reunion! Tender and honest. More please.

LOVE IT!!!

Sneaky Buffy, I like it!  Thanks for the update.

Not sure at all about the morality of Spike's plan.  Armour's not looking quite as shiny to me.  Can you work in some 'who knew he had an evil twin?' thing, perhaps?

love it please update soon

Great story. Very in character.

loving it - but now can't wait for the next chapter, go Buffy get your man!

Ooooh possible spuffy on the horizon!!!  Thanks for the great chapter.

YAY Buffy has her wits about her.  Got a feeling that once this is all sorted out Angel is due for a major arse kicking.  Giles can forget about ever returning to his once trusted place (thanks to Angel there too).

Excellent update.  Glad Spike is no longer being played for an idiot and that Giles finally spilled it all to Buffy.

Love her reaction...the threat to feed Giles to Spike herself.

Kathleen

love it please update soon

Spike's plan seems to have worked - and Buffy is doing some straight thinking.  Things are looking up!!!

I'm not altogether sure that Spike's plan, whatever it is, is a good idea... but then, that's nothing new. I'm glad Vi is one of the slayers kidnapped, I always liked her and hopefully she'll be able to figure out what's going on.
Go find your vamp, Buffy!

Spike deserves a ray of hope, Giles needs to be found out, and the same for Angel, only moreso!  Vile beasts.

Angel should have known it was pointless to try and keep Spike away from her forever.  Here's hoping for a reunion soon!

Good for Faith, declaring how proud she is of Spike. Japan now huh? Poor, poor Spike. Hope he finds out the trick and can either get back to the US soon or be guided to the UK this time. Love Clem with the kittens in all his pockets..

Oh I hope Faith is not clueless about Angel...she might be tight with him but she also knows his Buffy obsession (yup...Angel is the one obsessed...like a dog with a bone he no longer wants!)

YAY Clem!  Spike could use a friend.

GRRRRRRRRR Gps...hope Spike figures that part out too.  Time to sell the SUV.

Excellent chapter.
Kathleen

God you'd think Angel would have a bit more to do than obsess about Spike.  He'll probably get more info from the demons....  if Faith doesn't balls it up for him!

love it please update soon

At least Spike has all the time in the world to search for Buffy - it looks like he's going to need it.  There had better be serious payback for what Giles and Angel are doing.  Despiscable.

"Giles could feel the multitude of sins he was perpetrating against Buffy weighing on his soul"
But not weighing nearly heavily enough! Bad Giles!
So... it's off to Cleveland...

So Angel is having twinges of guilt....GOOD!  I doubt it will be enough for him to be honest with anyone but I am glad he is "suffering" at least a bit.

Giles is also feeling guilty and in his case he may crack.  I hope he does and soon. 

Excellent update.

Kathleen

Fantastic chapter here....nice plot movement and intrigue.  Will Ilonia actually be helpful as she really seems to be.  The Immortal seems to want to screw Angel a bit as well.  True they weren't fully honest but they weren't following Angel's plan at least. 

Love the enchanted mirror idea!  Never seen that used in story or on the show but it fits nicely with the way the ME writers made helpful things like this work...NICE piece of writing there.

"He had noticed the fixtures in the bathroom were gold, and there were several other things of value he could remove from the plane and sell. Finding what he needed, he proceeded to unscrew, pry off, and lift anything a fence could sell for him. ....  it’s not like the damn lawyers couldn’t afford to replace anything."
Excellent way of showing the spark of the old self in Spike (and once more that the soul does not guarantee "good" and moral choices).  This would make complete sense and I just had to chuckle at him prying away at the jet!

Lovely.
Kathleen

love it please update soon

No no - not the jacket!  LOL at Spike's soul nudging him for not saying thank you but not bothering him over ripping off all the plane fixtures.

Help from unlikely places, let's hope it's enought to help our hero.

'Spike pledged his fealty to Hedrick before he dusted him.  You may draw your own conclusions about that.' -- That was low, even for Angel.

Oh dear...more lies and misleads for Spike.  Giles needs to wise up.  Hope Buffy really makes her point felt with Angel when she finds out what's been happening (but then she DID lead him on with her cookie dough speech). 

Lovely update.
Kathleen

 This is turning into a great adventure for Spike.  More soon please.

like this a lot - but please let Giles work out he is being played! Angel bad is always good.

Surely the fact that Spike dusted the Master of London after he swore fealty should raise a few questions with Giles? He can't be that thick.. and what happened to not trusting Angel? Idiot.

love it please update soon

Nice atmosphere.  Love how Spike turned on the charm on Giles'  housekeeper.  He didn't lie either.

Kathleen

Oh I love this, Spike on a quest to find his lady despite everyone conspiring against him! Let's just hope that someone has a bit of honour left and informs Buffy of what's going on. I'm betting on either Wes or Fred...

Last section was very good - I'd like to see you write out the first two sections rather than summarize.  Looking forward to more story.

i like it  cant wait for next chapter

love it please update soon

Oooh, diabolical Angel. Don't tell me that his soul makes a difference.  It just lets him plot quietly and not as outrightly dastardly.   I hope Spike isn't too bruised though.

Now this is believable in every way.  Great start.

Kathleen

Interesting start mg - wish we could have that scene with Angel and Spike bitching about Giles together.

ooh i hope we don't have to wait to long to see our spuffy reunion. Lord know I'm still waiting for it with the comics.  Ofcourse its enough to know that Sarah thinks she should be with Spike.

Intriguing!  Looking forward to more. 

and if Giles hasn't learned yet not to keep information from Buffy, he will be in for the ultimate ass-kicking of his life.
Of course he hasn't learned and still thinks he knows best (like Angel do). And if he has - color me surprised.
I ask myself how do they come to think like that after being proven wrong time and time again?

Very good start, looking forward to seeing where it goes.

What a charming Angel! Despicable.

Nice.  I like the potential here for plenty of misunderstandings and mixed signals.  Look forward to the next chapter.