In The Space Between by DreamFlight

sil
02/22/2009 12:51 pm
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thank you so much...i haven't been here recently to see if anyone answered the challenge, so when i saw the response story and it was so awesome i had to do a little lap to run some of the awesomeness off...thank you, thank you, thank you

the first chapter is great   
"Come, halfbreed," she commanded, "I am your priority."
that is illyria all.the.way
it's so freakin' awesome

thank you...and i can't wait for more!!!

12/17/2008 09:35 pm
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Oh, lovely lovely lovely! I've been wanting to read something with both Illyria and Sunnydale for a while now, and of course to do that I'd need timetravel. But I never figured on Fred or two Spikes! Lovely!

lilashannah
12/02/2008 04:53 am
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Great start! I never really watched Angel (Hate him) so is that how Illyria really is? Cold and Dispassionate?

11/16/2008 08:01 am
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definitely score well with the opening. very good read, thank you.

sin_amatic
11/07/2008 01:36 pm
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OMG... I love _time travel_ or _dimension hopping_ or _let's go back and muck it up all over again_ and this looks oh so promising.    

Adding Illyria to the mix is inspired and will be a "hoot" as my grandmama would say. 

Ta!

sin_amatic
11/07/2008 01:35 pm
Bitter Beginnings         
OMG... I love _time travel_ or _dimension hopping_ or _let's go back and muck it up all over again_ and this looks oh so promising.    

Adding Illyria to the mix is inspired and will be a "hoot" as my grandmama would say. 

Ta!

11/03/2008 11:57 pm
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It's an interesting concept.  Looking forward to see where you take it. 

11/03/2008 07:55 pm
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Cool :) I love time travel fics.
Good in a way that the lizards tried to attack Spike; otherwise they wouldn't have gone back *g*
But it sounds as if there are two Spike now. *wonders*
Interesting start; you've made me curious and wanting to read on.

Flames to dust
11/03/2008 09:34 am
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That´s a bloody beginning. The possibilities that Illyria offers will be the better. Waiting for the next chapter.
Bloody time travels!!!

11/03/2008 07:17 am
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How interesting!  I like the touch of Fred that appeared in this chapter and hope she will get to come out again.  I miss her character even tho' I find Illyria fascinating.  I can't wait to see what happens with Spike meeting himself; most writers just have the time traveler replace the other one, so meeting himself is going to be really intriguing!  Great start on your story.  I hope there is more soon.

Black_Rose
11/03/2008 02:13 am
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I'd been hoping someone would reply to this challenge, it sounded like such a good idea.

Great opening chapter, cant wait for more.

11/02/2008 10:19 pm
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 i like it i think that it works i love Illyria she is awsome any way i like it so far