hey there!  i loved the reading so far!  can't wait to read some more... i'm interested in who that blond is going to be that Spike saw just now. maybe just an ordinary victim that would remind him of Buffy, or it is Buffy? anyway... great work so far..

Hi - just so you know, I tried to go back to remind myself what was going on and found that the first two chapters aren't there. You must have posted them a long time ago when we were having the posting issues? Anyway, if you want readers to be able to read the whole fic, start to finish, you'll probably need to repost chapters one and two.  With luck, they won't end up being after the two that are okay, but I'm not sure about that.

This karetaka loves fight scenes.  The fight between Buffy and Spike was tight!

good read, thank you.

That was an awesome fight!

glad to see this update. very good read, thank you.

Really good dialogue! Wonder what Spike will do once he's back in commission? 

So glad to see this update, it's been a while.  Thought the name sounded familiar though.  Surprized to find that Tara is a vamp though, but I suppose it makes sense.  What's a little odd is that Buffy didn't dust at least one of them when the building crashed - seeing that Willow wasn't hospital bound.  But then that would have changed the story considerably, especially if she'd managed to dust a stunned Spike!  Please try to update a little more quickly this time (says someone who's left a story hanging for years - I really do intend to finish it).  Anyway, know how it can be, and jsut FYI am trying to encourage you to continue writing and positng.

very good opening chapter. thank you.

Wow!  The creativity of you writers never ceases to amaze me.  What a concept for an AU although I do miss Giles.  Wesley is far more ...blah in the setting of a watcher.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

The olot thickens!  Great start, can't wait for more!  And I love how he can smell the charm - clever idea.  But what is he doing with tara, and what has already happened in a sunnydale without Buffy?

Interesting set up.  I'm in...looks to be a good ride here.

Kathleen