Influence of Demons by gabrielleabelle

hannah
11/14/2013 10:39 am
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So the sequel is where?

Brit Girl
09/01/2012 02:47 am
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WOW!!! What a great story! It had a bit of everything. So I see you completed it this year so does that mean you do still plan to do the sequel?

07/29/2012 08:36 am
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Fantastic Story - I really liked Buffy and Spike in this older extreme hard life experiences version.  Your treatment of how they had to live seemed plausible, especially for Buffy. 

I think your treatment for all the character was excellent - I like that Avery was able to find peace at the end. 

06/03/2012 08:22 pm
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i loved this story. in usually only like stories that are pretty close to canon but i decided to take a chance on this story. i am sooo happy that i did. i LOVED it. i'm eagerly awaiting the sequel:)

05/21/2012 11:10 pm
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Very good story. I am excited that there will be a sequel as there are many questions still to be answered. I really hope to see Buffy find her self respect and build a strong relationship with Spike without all the drama from the Scoobies.

Jags
03/21/2012 03:00 pm
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this was a wonderful story. nicely done.

Jo
03/01/2012 11:17 pm
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What a fantastic and refreshing conclusion, you are in rare form!
I am very pleased with how you wrapped this up.

shefelldown
03/01/2012 09:07 pm
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Gah.  Smiling so huge.  I love them, the dysfunctional weirdos that they are, your slightly different Spike and Buffy.  So awesome.  Thanks for sharing this fic!

Eyghon
03/01/2012 08:05 am
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Good thing you left an author note, because I would have been so disappointed without "follow-up", plus I was looking forward to hearing Buffy talk to Joyce and Dawn about "over there" and to see how Spike would fit into her life. Thanks for a wonderfully-written adventure. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Spikez_tart
02/22/2012 04:38 am
Battles         
Very exciting and more betrayal and wickedness to come.  Goody!

02/17/2012 11:23 pm
How Things Were; How Things Will Be         

Great chapter - Buffy was so twitchy it started making me shake.  :)

 

Eyghon
02/16/2012 01:04 am
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Still reading, still loving every word of it. Very powerful, these buffy "self-reflections", I like the way you're handling the whole Dawn thing. Looking forward to more, great job.

02/15/2012 10:19 pm
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Buffy needed Dawn. For balance. For purpose.  

There is the truth!  This should be interesting between all the information on where Buffy has been and the truth about Dawn it will turn everybody's world upsidedown.  I wonder what change this different Buffy will make in dealing with Glory.  This is a harder more ruthless version of the Slayer (and I wonder what difference Dawn, the dimensional key, might have in this dimensional situation coming up).  Fascinating!

Both Spike and Buffy have been broken in many ways and need each other to find what pieces there are.  Love the metaphor with the jigsaw puzzles.

Giles is being decent.  I think he understands far better than Buffy would imagine.

Willow and Xander are so young...they have no idea how to relate to Buffy.  I doubt they'll ever have the same closeness, not after all that's happened.  They did her no service in telling their significant others meanwhile disparaging her feelings for Spike.  They are young and she is ancient at this point.  No wonder she has much in common with the ancient key.

Excellent update.
Kathleen

02/07/2012 04:56 am
Demons         

Excellent chapter.  Loved Dawn, Buffy was beyond pathetic and all her friends are skunks, except maybe Giles.  And mean mean Spike, too.  That is the best.

02/04/2012 08:27 pm
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Really excellent chapter.  Clearly he's read Avery's death wish and will be willing to release her.  He's flummoxed to think that Buffy's spared him a thought much less a plan but that's good. He'll have the reason now to make clear decisions.  Between the two of them on their different sides of this dimensional problem they will (as always) work perfectly together if they keep focused.

I'm delighted with how well Xander and Willow have handled the information about Buffy's past 5 years.  There is a big gap between them now (experience alone!) but their love and acceptance will help to bridge that and give her the support system that has always stood her in good stead.  Willow is particularly helpful with her non-judgmental practicality regarding both the drugs and the importance of Spike.  Well done!  I love when they act reasonably from their real love for her and not just a knee-jerk reaction to unpleasant circumstance (or the mention of Spike as a positive).

Kathleen

shefelldown
02/03/2012 07:14 pm
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Seriously loving this fic.  

Jo
01/29/2012 03:44 pm
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Billiant that you are finishing this 'darker' story, there are not many in this category that hold water over so many chapters, so consistently. Thanks for making my reading more diverse and for making it very enjoyable to log back on Bloodshedverse.

01/29/2012 02:05 am
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Very interesting developments.  And interesting how Anya always makes everyone feel guilty about using the shop. 

01/28/2012 07:25 pm
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TextOh dear!  I was afraid the soul situation would be the factor and wondered at the quick demise of Jigal........things are going to get rather nasty.  Of course they could always use Glory to plug the opening once they get Spike out and kill two birds with one stone LOL.

Poor Buffy....of COURSE nothing will ever be the same for her.  She will be dealing with PTSD from the sexual abuse and drug use as well as five years of experience (and maturity) that will make her friends far more distant than they ever were before.  Nothing will ever be the same.  To try to just pick up the pieces and go on would be futile.  Love how she uses the Spike in her mind to urge her to do the necessary though.  He'd do that and she knows it.  On some level they are now tied forever.  Kind of like people who serve and survive war together are always "family"....so it would be between her and Spike now.

Glad Giles is listening and acting.  Anya is informative and likely could even be of more help if they let her.

Excellent....SO glad this story is revived!!

Kathleen

Eyghon
01/28/2012 11:15 am
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Just found this story, love it! Please continue with the regular updates, you're doing a fantastic job. what a treat!

01/22/2012 11:33 pm
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Text OH I am so glad this is being updated!!!!!!   I've thought about this story off and on and hoped for more but know that it comes when it comes (sometimes IF is the operative word).

WELL worth the wait!  Really interesting information on Spike's soul (not his own, eh?  WOW that explains so much and offers many a question in and of itself.).  Then again...he didn't pass through the portal!  Oh my!!!  Have a feeling this (if not part of the hallucination) is going to be interesting.  Buffy will likely want to rescue him at the very least because he helped her out of the hell she was in.  The others won't understand that OR the changes in her.  Spike will be in a world of hurt in the hands of Dehevret.  Then there's the information that Dehevret is looking for something in OUR dimension that needs to play out.....WOW!

Really love this story...very original and emotionally powerful.  Hope the muse (and RL) keep your marvelous creative juices flowing.

Excellent
Kathleen

01/22/2012 03:11 am
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Great chapter and are you evil!  And I so don't believe that Spike doesn't still love Buffy.  Pfftt

01/19/2012 05:10 am
Mind-Fuck         

Buffy may not want to know but we do!  Interesting chapter and just what B deserves for squishing that little demon.

01/17/2012 04:34 am
Nicotine         

whew - Buffy went to an ugly place there.  Something bad must have happened to her when Avery did the spell?  Great story.

11/27/2009 04:10 pm
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Yeah, evil will be evil. Hopefully our two heroes will be able to get where they need to without further intervention. But I love the way you write evil...so much of it.

11/21/2009 11:46 pm
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as you sow...   good read, thank you.

11/19/2009 12:40 am
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  Poor Avery made a baaaaad decision.

  I love the way you describe Buffy's high.  It was very visual and put us in her place.  I enjoyed these last two chapters very much and I hope you continue soon.

verito
11/17/2009 04:35 pm
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I love this story... 

11/27/2009 03:49 pm
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Wow..addiction's a bitch. And suddenly I feel for Jigal. Excellent dialogue.

11/21/2009 11:27 pm
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bad trip and release her powers sounds like a great  combination. good chapter, thank you.

11/27/2009 03:09 pm
The Least Worst Option         
Spike's instincts were right. Poor Buffy. What an ominous ending.

11/21/2009 11:15 pm
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happy to see this back. good read, thank you.

Cate
09/10/2009 05:57 pm
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:'( I can't read your story for some reason!

03/06/2009 06:00 pm
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I am not seeing the tale.  And I could see diabola's test.  Really want to read ch 5.  Thanks!
Ack. I didn't realize the BSV was having problems. I tried getting the text to show up, but it's not working. The story's up on my lj.

03/01/2009 07:46 am
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very good read, thank you. is spike right about buffy's soul?

Cas
03/01/2009 02:46 am
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Thanks for the update.  I'd forgotten how much I liked this story.  It's so different from usual fare.

02/28/2009 08:38 pm
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I feel sorry for Jigal...kinda wish Buffy and Spike would befriend him.  Dehevret is an ugly customer and now that he is aware that Buffy is the Slayer who knows how his plans might change.

Enjoying this story a lot.  Interesting dynamic in so many ways.  Glad you addressed the soul issue where Buffy is concerned...I had wondered.

Kathleen

03/01/2009 07:26 am
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very good read, thank you. doesn't answer any questions, just adds more. which if fine. guessing where your going is fun. even when the guesses are not even close.

Brunettepet
01/31/2009 02:40 am
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Buffy's cowed response to being lost in the poker game was sad and in character for her circumstances, so I was delighted that Spike immediately leapt to her side.  The fight was vivid and brutal, and Buffy trying to regain some power makes sense after seeing Spike in all his violent glory.  He shouldn't be in the savior seat, but he is.

 Buffy is trying to get her bearings back, but she just seems to be using sex and violence just like a demon would.   Not being able to enter that portal with a soul seems to be pointing to Buffy having lost hers somewhere along the way.  If she's soul free, how is she supposed to get back to Sunnydale with Spike?  I'm looking forward to finding out. 

01/19/2009 10:30 pm
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Ah the real Buffy returns.  Can't believe they were playing poker for money.  No kittens in this dimension?

OMG
01/19/2009 05:40 pm
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Excellent fic. Does Spike have Buffy's soul? Can't wait for more :)

01/19/2009 03:48 pm
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These two are just so tragic!  I wonder about the soul he has and if that is why he no longer loves her.  Interesting hint about the soul in Buffy too.....did she lose it when she passed through?  You'll let us know but in the meantime...lots of speculation.

Kathleen

01/19/2009 04:07 am
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What?! Buffy really is not together ..sort of confusing but hopefully she will be together soon.  It's just weird seeing her as a rabbit although understandably so.

All4Spike
01/18/2009 03:04 am
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What a sad chapter. They're each as damaged as the other, aren't they? They're going to have to come to some sort of amicable arrangement if they're going to get home, though...

Brunettepet
01/28/2009 11:58 pm
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The past five years have made a muddle of both Spike and Buffy's lives.  Spike looks at her and sees home and she looks at him and sees uncertainty.  This world has been good to Buffy in its own way - kept her numb and busy.  She'd escaped the pressure of saving the world. Spike's been an outsider, seeking escape and not finding it.  They're right not to trust one another.

01/25/2009 06:30 am
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fine read, thank you. nice twist, the soul is not spike's.

01/19/2009 10:19 pm
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Cool - I figured the glow was Spike's soul, but I see it's not going to be that easy. 

01/16/2009 04:38 pm
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Knew it couldn't be that easy!  I just hope Spike and Buffy are prepared.
 Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for commenting! :)

01/10/2009 02:25 am
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Oh, very interesting story you have running here! If not his, then whose? Buffy's, perhaps? And, ouch. Even though he doesn't remember Sunnydale and loving Buffy, that 'I hate you' must have stung. Great chapter.
 Glad you're enjoying so far. The next chapter is out so I hope you continue to enjoy. :) Thanks for reviewing!

01/10/2009 12:47 am
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Hummmmmm interesting difference there.  Not HIS but A.

Poor pair....Spike has forgotten his love for her (or has yet to see HIS Buffy in this one) and she has forgotten her desire for her home and family (or is ashamed to go back).  That I hate you had to hurt though.

Excellent.
Kathleen
 I'm so late on replying. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Buffy and Spike are being put through the wringer now, but things should get better. Hopefully. If I stick to my plans...

Anyway, the next chapter's out. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy! :)

All4Spike
01/09/2009 01:09 pm
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Something told me they'd got that book too easily... And Spike hasn't got his own... that is William's... soul which probably explains his difficulties trying to come to terms with it. I wonder whose soul he's got? I'm also wondering about Buffy's sudden change of heart...
You've really got me hooked! More please...
 I am horrible at responding to reviews on these sites. Thanks so much for commenting! The good news is I just posted the newest chapter! :) Hope you enjoy.

01/25/2009 06:17 am
Subverted Identity         
wicked place to stop. very good read. thank you.

01/19/2009 10:08 pm
Subverted Identity         
Why do I think Buffy is going to make a bad bad choice.  Great story.  Love the mean Spike. 

01/16/2009 04:23 pm
Subverted Identity         
Arrgh!  Good cliff hanger but I worry about Spike.

Brunettepet
01/07/2009 01:02 am
Subverted Identity         
This is already very entertaining.  You're doing an excellent job conveying the dark changes this world has wrought in Buffy.   She was left with no choices, so it's no wonder she turned to drugs in order to get through the day.  She's also become inured to using her body to get what she wants, so her aggressiveness toward Spike makes sense.

Spike's always enjoyed the level of humanity he's been left with, so I can understand pursuing the glow so he wouldn't lose it completely.  Buffy's complete dismissal of returning home is certainly a complication.  If she keeps fighting Spike, the journey is going to be that much more difficult.  
Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. It's always nice to see that people are "getting" the subtler parts of the story. I'm glad you're enjoying so far. :)

Carol
01/06/2009 03:58 am
Subverted Identity         
I hope Buffy made the right choice. 

Love this so far.
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

m.
01/06/2009 02:17 am
Subverted Identity         
I'm on the edge of my seat! Can't wait for an update!!!
You got one! The next chapter is up. Thanks for reviewing. :)

sirc
01/05/2009 11:03 pm
Subverted Identity         
Great chapter
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Spikestussi
01/05/2009 05:23 pm
Subverted Identity         
 I can't wait to see what Buffy does. And what the glow is , and how they got to where they are and.... and....
lol. The next chapter is up. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

All4Spike
01/05/2009 02:33 am
Subverted Identity         
Ah, a sealing spell. That makes sense. So I wonder which Buffy has chosen? To stay with Spike and get her powers back but have to go home, or make off with the cash and try to get back to her brothel to live in denial?... Hmm... Depends just how much of Buffy there is left in there...
Sorry for the late reply to you. I do have the next chapter up, though. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for taking the time to review!

01/05/2009 12:33 am
Subverted Identity         
Oh, evil cliffhanger!
Sorry...

But I have the next chapter out already!

(Note to self: reply to reviews more quickly. I'm such a lame writer)

:)

07/27/2012 02:43 pm
A Stranger You Know         
Great start - intriguing right from the first sentence. 

01/25/2009 06:04 am
A Stranger You Know         
very attention grabbing first chapter. thank you for the fine read.

01/19/2009 09:57 pm
A Stranger You Know         
Very exciting story, G.  Can't believe our Spike stopped looking after a mere year.

01/16/2009 04:10 pm
A Stranger You Know         
Really great dialogue.  It was a shame about Jory but understood given what Spike needs.

sirc
01/05/2009 10:46 pm
A Stranger You Know         
This is a very intriguing idea. Well done.

01/04/2009 07:13 pm
A Stranger You Know         
Great start -  interesting story!  Can't wait for more!
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Liza
01/04/2009 04:34 pm
A Stranger You Know         
I like it.  Very hardboiled.  The loners have always done it for me - makes it so much sweeter when they let someone in. 
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

All4Spike
01/04/2009 12:46 pm
A Stranger You Know         
Very original. I can see where if she was left totally alone in a demon world Buffy would do everything she could to survive. Puzzled that her Slayer abilities don't seem to be working though. Perhaps it's because this world never had a Slayer the slayerness didn't come with her?
5 Years have changed Spike too. I wonder why he got the soul (glow = soul, right?)
Can't imagine what the reaction will be with Buffy aged 5 years and fundamentally changed when they get back to Sunnydale with Glory still to deal with.
Can't wait for more.

m.
01/04/2009 06:01 am
A Stranger You Know         
All I can say is wow! I can't wait for an update! Truly amazing...
Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up within a week. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

01/04/2009 01:31 am
A Stranger You Know         
Really unique....I'm hooked.  This glow sounds a lot like a soul to me.  Buffy is tragic, she's survived the best way she can and it has taken its toll on her.  Interesting that they will be returned to the same TIME and place as they entered this dimension...that will be an interesting experience for those left behind to deal with!

Great start...going to favorite so I don't miss updates.

Kathleen
Yeah, the glow does sound rather soul-like. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. I hope to get the second one posted soon. Thanks for reviewing! :)