Beautiful, just absolutely amazing!

That was wonderful.  Such a treat to see them actually enjoying each other.

Squeeeeee!!!! That was an awesome chapter! Glad you fixed it and/or my computer had a sane moment. Great stuff, I'm on the edge of my seat for more!!!!

I'm completely in love with your story! I can't wait for more! But I'm hoping that chapter 11 is just author's notes and that I'm not missing a whole chapter because my computer is crap! Please continue with this wonderful piece of work!

Well written story with very good charachterization, thanks! I hope there is more to come?

Well written story with very good charachterization, thanks! I hope there is more to come?

sweet romantic scene

give in to temptation buffy. very good chapter, thank you.

I like how you managed to fit something 'domestic' in, like having to go pee. A lot of authors tend to forget that Buffy is human and has to do mundane things like eat and drink. I like the transition of Spike too. That was perfect!

very good read, thank you.

This was tooo perfect! You have Buffy pegged! She was never good with talking, or emoting. Spike's reaction and confession was spot on!

she's making some progress at verbalizing. a hundred or so years... well spike has the time. very good read, thank you.

Best chapter yet!

buffy's thoughts are progressing nicely. her ability to express them is not. very good chapter, thank you.

A very lovely scene. I also like how you/Spike define love vs affection vs attraction.

Ecellent Chapter - I really like how you handled his pain and the pain of both the characters - it's a good balance of blame and responsibility for his attempted rape and her history in this truly tragic affair. 

Wonderful piece thus far -

well thought out chapter. very good read, thank you.

 I like where this is going. Keep it up!!!!

Thank you for letting Buffy choose her words carefully in a painful moment for Spike. He needed that.

very good read, thank you. love the last line.

Buffy is so mercurial at times that it's confusing but I suppose that was her whole mood in S7. 

I'm enjoying the care and attention to the emotional detail.  There is a hesitancy and sweetness that really brings the characters to life.  I can feel a thoroughly satsifying read coming on! 

I'm really enjoying this story, and can't wait to keep up with your updates!

I'm in love with every word. This looks great, I can't wait to continue!

You have such a wonderful writing style and are so creative with your phrasing...not to mention the beautiful, tender yet tentative relationship you are building between Spike and Buffy.  I hope now that BSV is working again, you will post all the other chapters I've seen on other sites here at BSV as well.

very good read, thank you.

This is a scene that should have been in the show.  You filled it in beautifully!

I'm so glad to see you posting here! I think this fabulous story will be well received! Good Luck!