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Because She Needs Me by callmekitten DebBartram 01/06/2010 03:51 am Chapter 28 Yay! Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more! very good update, thank you. "I don’t know when or where, but Kaia wasn’t there anymore. But—she is.” i don't know either, but it works well. “So much has happened, so much is happening..." very good read, thank you. hope you update soon =) fine update. another evil place to stop. thank you for both thanks vladt! *giggles like a crazy person* Oh boy, this is going to be surprises all round! heehee yep, wonder how each one will respond... ohhh come on....!!!! *giggles* I will have more for you next week. I promise! really trying to feel compassion for willow... not working. good update, thank you. thanks vladt :) more on willow soon. spike should know better. no good deed goes unpunished. good chapter, thank you. thanks for the read and review vladt, heehee agreed :P verito 09/18/2009 02:48 pm Chapter 23 i hope willow fries...lol good chapter!!! Thanks for the review verito. Willow will get hers, don't worry. Hey, I got your message. No worries :) I'm glad you enjoyed the update. red's pride has become arrogance, she will probably not like the consequences. spike seems to have a couple of difficulties to overcome. very good read, thank you. Thanks again vladt. Willow will get hers, dont worry. and you are right about Spike. Watch for my next update, which was submitted this morning! seems it had to be spike. very good read, thank you. Thanks vladt, I look forward to your reviews with every chapter posted. 08/28/2009 12:04 pm Chapter 20 Ah it will be bitter sweet for them to part. But I think the prehistoric story ark has run it's course, unless you're planing another twist. hmm well let me first say I have no idea whom you feel it will be bittersweet for... and the prehistoric arc (ark is a large ship) is far from over. AND if you read, there are twists in every chapter, so I'm not sure why you left a review.. and without your name. verito 08/26/2009 04:43 am Chapter 20 i like it, what i didn t get was why the person who goes after her cant come back with her... Thanks for reading and reviewing verito, but I was a little concerned by your review. I'm not sure why you thought the person who goes through the portal cannot return. They will return... the question is, will she come back? You might have misinterpreted something, but for the life of me, I'm not sure where you got that idea. I even had my beta reread it and see if I had some wording off.... feel free to email me with any questions or the sentence that gave you this impression. I came late to this story on the board but I love every chapter. I don't know why somoene didn't try to put a stop to Willow before now. She has really gone too far. I just know that Spike is doing all he can to not walk out of the house and hunt Willow down. I do like the trick on Angel. He just never learns. He couldn't even watch Willow before stepping in it. But I have a feeling that if they do 'find' Buffy she may not want to go back. She and Groma and Kaia have creaed their own family. I hate that she had to go through all of that but at least they are out of the caves and on their own. Thanks so much Letitia! I am thrilled to have a new fan of the story :) There's plenty going on, and I try to get a view on each characters situation in each chapter. Theres so much more to share, stay with me, please *hugs* a breakfast picnic, delightful choice. very good read, thank you. Thanks vladt :) I thought so too *hugs* verito 08/19/2009 07:21 pm Chapter 19 can´t wait to read the rest Thanks verito, thats a huge compliment! being warned while doing a spell and being warned in her nightmare, she still persists. pushing it, maybe. good update, thank you. Thanks vladt, Willow needs help. Plain and simple. 08/19/2009 12:29 am Chapter 18 Please, please, do continue the story! I so hate when a good story is left unfinnished! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Rest assured, I will follow through to the very end. we are about half way through. shame angel did not share kahn's fate. very good chapter, thank you. *giggles and flicks Angel* He is such a wet blanket isnt he Thanks for the review is kahn related to angel? he just watched her destroy five vampires and he still thinks he will take. loved spike and angel's "chat on the porch." fine read, thank you. :) *hugs my faithful reader* glinda did a fantastic job on angel. buffy and kaia did a great job on the vampires. maybe they can combine talents to give kahn what he deserves. very good read, thank you. Thanks for the R&R Vladt... the plot thickens from here on out Martha (shadyvale1963) 08/04/2009 04:34 am Chapter 15 I just had a read 11 chapters of your story. Very good I really enjoyed it. YAY! A new reader/reviewer! *bounces in box* I am thrilled you are enjoying :) Much more to come! stick around :) Good action scene. maybe Buffy can twist Kahn's head off next. Thanks! My first "action" scene ever :) Kahn needs ... something nasty, head twisting to quick. You should have Tara say out/do the spell and show how it's white/good magic, then there will be something to contrast with Willow's black magic. Good idea :) Tara and Willow both still have "screen" time coming up. Willow has wandered down a road that's going to take someone very strong to pull her back... Thanks again for the R&R, glad you are enjoying! really like a confident tara. good read, thank you. glad to see that this has a long way to go. Thanks vladt, yes, lots more to tell and tickled that you are along for the ride :) *hugs* Thanks so much for another update. Looking forward to seeing what Tara can do to help. Yay! A new reader/reviewer :) I'm tickled you are enjoying, there's lots more to come :) As I told you elsewhere (SR) I love, love this tale. We will be voting for you. Thanks MarzBar, I don't have a big following, but the ones who have tried the story seem to be enjoying. Please rec to your friends, and thanks for the confidence. Liked Tough Tara - she's a lot more interesting than Tara usually was on the show. I think so too. I think Joss missed out on her potential... I like her coming into her own. Thanks for the read/review :) red's really gone. think it's up to tara and spike, and possibly buffy,to fix this. even if i'm wrong, i am sure you will. very good chapter, thank you. Vladt, my faithful reader, thanks so much for sticking with me and my story. I promise a happy ending, but it has quite a way to go. red's egomania is developing into megalomania. very good update, thank you. Thank you vladt, your comment made me smile. verito 07/09/2009 11:44 pm Chapter 12 i love this story.... i can´t wait to the next update....:) :) <-- This is me after reading your review! *bouncing* More soon, I promise! cannot understand Ullah. not your presentation of the character, but the person. i have met her many times over the decades and i still do not understand her. very good read, thank you. Ullah personifies the woman who is so envious of what everyone else is or has, she cannot be happy unless she is creating drama... thus making herself center of attention. Thanks, vladt can understand why "Groma was a valued member of the clan." very good update, thank you. Thank you vladt, Groma is awesome, more than I can put into words. Excellent chapter - at least Tara and Spike are on her trail. Thanks Lou, I really appreciate the feedback :) very good read, thank you. concerned about tara's observation. loved: " ...or shall i say we...." Thanks vladt, much more to come concerning Tara and Spike kahn could an ancestor of angel. good read, thank you. *giggles* I thought about that as I wrote him :) Thanks for the review, vladt. Callme - just wanted you to know how much I'm enjoying this very unusal story. I had to read offline and will try to put some actual reviews on this weekend. Looking forward to more. Its do good to get another reviewer on this story. I was wondering is readers on this site were liking it *hugs Spikez_tart* not a bad way out of a difficult situation. not what i expected from buffy, but then, i write short comments on the works of those who have talent. good read, thank you. Vladt, my loyal and faithful reviewer. Thank you so much for your complement. You made my day. I enjoy writing this very much and sharing it is half the fun. should have known you were going to do that. very good read, thank you. thanks for the review vladt! more to come soon, so glad you are enjoying! very good read, thank you. can't wait to see how buffy handles this. *spins and twirls* I love this story and am thrilled you llike it too now buffy questions what red did. very good read, thank you. My one faithful reviewer *hugs tight* more soon I promise red's has everything under control, right! good chapter, thank you. Thanks R&R vladt! more to come, watch for updates! your red is at least honest with herself. very good read, thank you. Once again I thank you! you rock! Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a new fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, "Because She Needs Me", has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Monthly Poll Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Buffy Weekly Poll at (without spaces): http:// thereadershavechosen. eternflame. com/ forum/ index. php? topic= 550.0 ~Cat HUH, who knew?Thanks to whoever rec'd me and I hope you enjoy future chaps in the story :) very interesting start. sure red "won't say a word." Thanks vladt! Reviews make my day and the mean more than you know *hugs* Callme - did you get my review? I saw it wasn't up, but it was before. Liked the story idea, anyway. I did not, but I did now! Thanks so much! This story is coming out quickly, I hope you enjoy future chapters as well. I have been posting elsewhere and this site is new. The other story is complete and I will be posting a chapter daily. *hugs and squishes* | |||
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