Questions by xoChantelly

12/27/2009 01:00 am
Chapter 4         
his hair was platinum blonde - what happened to Spike's hair?  Sorry if I missed something.

12/20/2009 12:19 am
Chapter 4         
 Clifferhanger!! darn it! awesome story please continue!

12/27/2009 12:55 am
Chapter 3         

In this chapter, you switch back and forth from Buffy's head to Willow's head.  Probably would be better to stay with Buffy and have them talk all this out.  Also, I think Angel would try to tell Buffy the reason why she has to stay away from Spike.  Then, she can tell him he's full of baloney.

Cas
12/03/2009 03:17 am
Chapter 3         
Timing of Angel's arrival with this big 'problem' just has to make me wonder whether this is just a distraction.  Please don't stop posting.  I am sure people are reading even if they are not reviewing.

lol You'll find out soon! I promise I won't stop posting, I love this fic and its nice to know that you are too =D I wish more people would review, but I'm happy with what I get. Thanks!!

12/27/2009 12:49 am
Chapter 2         
finding every psychic or wizard that could help him.  - it would be good to see him go to one psychic and go through the ceremony rather than just tell that he went to a bunch.  Like the Angel going to kill him before Buffy - good tension.

Cas
12/03/2009 03:16 am
Chapter 2         
How typical of Angel!  Please, would some Angel stakeage be too much to ask for?
lol Yup, Angel is being pretty douche-ish lol. I wish I could just have him staked, but he is gonna be playing a BIG role in this series! Glad you're enjoying =D Thanks for the reviews!!

12/27/2009 12:42 am
Chapter One         
Bless you for dumping all that Cordy/Connor crap.  It was just unbearable.  Good solid beginning.  It might be stronger if you have Spike look through his own clothes to find a wallet or some id.  Does it matter if he finds out who the woman was?  Also, I wouldn't use Spike's name in the first part.  We all know who he is, but he doesn't.  Also, you might trim the song down to a few pertinent lines.  Loved the Angel blackmail.  His singing is beyond scary.  Looking forward to more.

Cas
12/03/2009 03:14 am
Chapter One         
Loved the beginning.  I can't believe you're not getting lots of reviews.  But then the site seems kind of quiet - I guess everyone is holiday shopping or something.
Awww, thanks! That means a lot. I haven't been getting many reviews for this fic where ever I post, but my all human fics get lots. I was thinking the same thing, with the holidays around, Spuffy is all quiet. I won't stop posting, because I absolutely adore this fic and I enjoy writing it. Thanks for reviewing, you're awesome!!