that made me so sad!!!! why did u have to turn buffy!!? naw it was good. i always want buffy to be the chosen  one but i think you wrote for dawn perfectly. and good spuffy sceens. 

I went from "wait Dawn - The Slayer?!?" to "ohmygodIlove" in two minutes flat. Loved this story. Thank you!

I loved this so much :)
cute ending as well, nice to see that despite the lack of soul she still cares
xx

fun fun story.  :)

Cruel Buffy making Spike sleep on the floor.  :)

Hee hee Buffy is just full of little lies. 

Great chapter - except for Doofus.  Guess you have to let him come in for plot purposes.  :)

hah ah Buffy as the bratty sister.  Nice turn of events.

Like the non Slayer Buffy.  Hope she kicks SPike's butt.