Origins: Revelations by Niamh

03/11/2012 06:01 am
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Lots of hard stuff happens in this one... very well done... another gripping epic that kept me from the rest of my life...  Sorry that Casey died, but there's real consequences to horrid stuff.  Was sad that Angel had to die, but there wasn't really a way back from the things he did. 

I'm very intrigued with the way you've put Jenner and Faith together... hope to see how that grows... do hope he'll allow her to feel a bit more control, however, as developing trust in the untrusting usually isn't accomplished by taking away their control when they're still skittish.  that I found a bit disturbing, but I don't expect their relationship to be like Spike and Buffy...  Love Faith, however, so I am kind of hoping she'll play some role in the next parts of this tale. 

Not sure why, but when i display whole story, a lot of the last several chapters show up in italic and bold... which is very hard to read for long stretches.  Not sure whether the problem occurs in single chapter mode, as I didn't try it.

Peace,

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alya
04/15/2011 02:00 am
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Text I have spent the last few days lost in the world of Origins and have loved every moment. A blissful suspension of reality! Thank you.

marcy
09/26/2010 03:09 am
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AWESOME STORY  I spent all day reading it. Origins was awesome as well/ I sure wish the series had gone more like this. Thank You

01/04/2008 07:06 pm
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such a pleasure to read this again a second time -

angel29100
09/13/2007 05:14 pm
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Great! Just - great! I managed to read it in two days. Can't wait for the sequel

nmcil
08/14/2007 10:55 am
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Wonderful tale - thank you for bring this work for us to enjoy - Loved It -

Vickie
07/25/2007 10:23 pm
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Loved this story! Can't wait to read the sequel.

MARGARET
07/13/2007 02:42 am
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS FANTASTIC STORY, I'VE REALLY ENJOYED READING EVERY LITTLE BIT OF IT AND CAN'T WAIT TO START ON THE NEXT CHAPTER. i REALLY APPRECIATE WRITERS LIKE YOU THAT FINISH THEIR FANTASTIC STORIES, EVEN IF IT TAKES A WHILE!

Vinity
06/26/2007 06:16 am
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Awww there are two of them. I'm not usually into baby fic but this one got me :)

LOVE the interaction of Faith and Jenner. And everyone else. I'm so glad you've decided to make another book. I'd miss this take on these characters so much.

Thanks for all your hard work

ohgodspike
06/21/2007 04:03 am
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FOR STARTERS SPOILER ALERTS THROUGHOUT THIS REVIEW. IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE STORY YET, DON'T READ THIS REVIEW!! Origins was the most perfect story i have read in my years of fanfic reading. I loved it so much. as not a fan of WIPS, i've been tracking Origins: Revelations for almost a year and when i finally saw it was done i was overjoyed. I started reading June 13 and finished this morning, June 20. What an epic - and the sheer size of this story is astounding - over 700 pages. I love this story so much. i considered writing here to say i was starting the story and what i hoped to find, but quickly got absorbed in the story. YES, YES please continue on with this story. There is so much more that i want to see. I want to know what happens when Willow sees everybody, I want to see what happens with Xander - will he shit or get off the pot? I loved the pairing of Anya and Giles, you wrote them wonderfully. I also truly enjoyed the little bit we got to see of Faith and Jenner - it was good to see how Faith had matured and also showed her vulnerability. Tara and Oz - just a great pairing. Loved when Oz realized that Tara was Pack! I of course loved the way you had Dawn be Buffy and Spike's daughter. Was so very very happy when Spike finally put an end to Angel. There could have been more of a big deal made of that, but they were still in the thick of the crisis, so i can deal with that minor disappointment. and of course, Drusilla is still out there, so i'd love to see what you do about her. Just the repercussions of Angel's death and Drusilla's survival are things that i want to know what happened. There aren't even words enough to tell you how beautifully you write Buffy and Spike and how you portray their relationship. This fictitious relationship has provided me with much healing and given me an idea of how real, true love works. it's a beautiful thing. OOO and it was pretty nifty with Wesley being so attracted to Dawn - love to see where that would go - although i'm sure Spike and Buffy would not be happy about the age difference. I do wish that Willow had gotten way more in the way of payback, but i might just be a vindictive bitch! It is so chilling to read this Willow and how unfeeling she really was. HOw she played God without a thought and she was so far gone that she was threatening Tara. And she was still even being an angry, power mad sort when she was in the Otherworld. So i would like to see a continuation of her suffering and also know what future Kristen came back to prevent - the hints about Spike's reaction to Dawn's loss were intriguing. And don't want to forget Cordelia and her horrible suffering at the hands of Angelus. I have to say again i'm so glad it was Spike that got to put an end to Angelus - he is truly the very definition of evil, just causing pain and horror for its' own sake. Spike got to literally kick his brains out - go Spike (this is only fictional bloodlust; i would never cheer a person being killed like that!) You are simply a great writer. The time that you take to compile your quotes for each chapter has me in awe of your brains and wondering where you come up with them - is it all stuff that is already in your brain or is there some handy, dandy website where you can pull up appropriate quotes for any subject? No - don't tell me if there is, it doesn't matter. I think i could go on and on, but i think i'll stop now. thank you thank you so very much for sharing this beautiful saga with us. And i think it's really cool that your sons acted out a battle for you - that's just awesome. Love this story very much. Thank you for just being you Niamh! XOXOXO

Nika
06/18/2007 03:10 pm
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Awesome fic. One of the best Spuffy fics I've ever read. Love how you made Dawn, Spike and Buffy's daughter, and them raising Connor.

sister cuervo
06/15/2007 06:36 pm
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Ah! Fabulous ending to a great saga! Well worth re-reading. Definately hoping for Part 3 and a continuation of this 'verse. Intriguing bits leave lots of room for new stories to grow.
Excellent work and well deserving of winning many awards.

06/13/2007 11:44 pm
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Awesome story from start to finish. A true epic piece of fiction. Wonderful!!

Angel
06/13/2007 04:35 am
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I loved it! I've been reading this off and on over the past year or so waiting anxiously for the ending and now I can't wait to read the next book! Although I could've done with a little less Xander bashing, I don't really disagree with your opinion of him. Besides, you nailed Spike's character (and wouldn't we all love to do that?). There were some truly great Spike-isms in here and I could hear him speaking every line you wrote. Excellent story!

06/06/2007 03:03 pm
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The perfect winding down for this epic, Faith has met her match and twins on the way for Spike and Buffy. This is one of my all-time favourites, a terrific piece of work.

Anonymous
06/05/2007 06:38 pm
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Oh wow. This was such a wonderful story...Please write more. I'd love to see what happens with the twins, with Faith and Jenner, with Conner, and especially Willow. Thank you so much for writing this.

sheila
06/04/2007 05:35 am
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barvo barvo barvo Nia..Can't wait for the sequal

tamrha
06/03/2007 04:58 pm
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is the 3rd part going to be posted on here?

if not could you tell me where?

tamrha80@hotmail.com

tamrha
06/03/2007 04:57 pm
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Excellent!

cant wait for the 3rd part!

tam

06/03/2007 04:11 pm
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Very nice ending. So now they know there are twins, which will make it interesting since they already knew about Kirsten but she managed to not talk about her twin. I wonder how they will take the news that they have even more children to look forward to. It'll be interesting considering they have the two aged children, and now two babies to contend with. I'm glad Buffy let Connor know she was glad to have him back in any form.

I liked the interactions between Jenner and Faith. Seems like Faith is going to go with the relationship even though they both admitted feeling some fear. I think it's good for her to have someone so strong so that she can be weak when she needs to. It will be interesting to see how things develop between them in the next book.

06/03/2007 03:11 am
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wonderful wrap up to a fantastic tale, thank you.

06/03/2007 12:35 am
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Congratulations of finishing this second book. My mind is just boggled by anyone who has so many ideas, so much plot, so many characters running around in her head - nevermind the focus and fortitude to get them down on "paper". This entire world that you've created is a wonderful achievement and I join everyone else in looking forward to Book Three and the new adventures for these characters.

pretty_in_fangs
06/03/2007 12:19 am
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Eeeeee!!! So happy to see this chapter, yet sad for the story to end. Luckily, you've promised that it's not, so I can be happy again.

Wonderful close to the second book. The family has fallen apart and rebuilt themselves and reached calm once again, like hte close of the first book. Very nice.

Squid
06/01/2007 10:26 pm
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OH MY GOODNESS! That was so amazing. You are an awesome story teller. You follow the plot so well, and even though you are getting tired you don't just drop the story. This is great - I've read to many stories where the author has done this.
I can't wait to read the next installment. Don't let it go, although if you do decide not to go on, I thank you for ending it the way you did.
In the next one, I'd love to see more Dawn and Wesley - I think she deserves someone great and Wesley is probably best even if he is older than her.
Great Job, again!

LindsayH
06/01/2007 10:04 pm
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"Thank you" doesn't begin to describe the gratitude I feel towards you for writing this story. It's more than awesome, greater than great...words fail me. But thank you, all the same.

06/01/2007 07:32 pm
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oh wow...wasn't expecting that :) can't wait to see where you take the next book, pet, this was such a lovely, intense journey, with many unpredictable twists and turns and a lot of originality (pardon my pun :P) thanx so much for writing it, and looking forward to the next one :)

woz
06/01/2007 05:25 pm
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BRAVO! I'm so happy you are doing a third book. Love this story!

Kawaki
06/01/2007 04:16 pm
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TWINS! Good thing Connor is grown otherwise they would be in trouble. Great ending. Can't wait until book 3.

kat
06/01/2007 02:19 pm
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wow wow wow! thank you so much for such a wonderful story! you've renewed my faith in fanfiction. i look foreward (hopefully very soon) to the next part of the story. you keep writin' and i'll keep readin'!!!

06/01/2007 01:27 pm
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Twins! Aww.. I can't wait for the next book.
The whole story has been great, I love the way you write all teh characters.

06/01/2007 07:25 am
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I'm so glad Faith and Jenner took a chance on each other. I've enjoyed the story and the way you told it, loved the intro quotes and the way they fit each chapter, the brush with Celtic mythology and history, and the character motivation and interactions. I'll miss the excitement of seeing an update, but am looking forward to the next section. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.

06/01/2007 07:12 am
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It's been a long, lovely ride! I know I haven't been so good with the reviews...but you are one terriffic writer.

BerMH
06/01/2007 06:36 am
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Once again, you don't disappoint, and I didn't have to wait long for my answer. Yay me for obeing right about the twins thing! I can't wait for more! ~Amber

Murph
06/01/2007 06:17 am
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I've been following this story for what seems like forever. Just amazing stuff. There is just so much to love. What a great family you've given Spike and Buffy. The kids are awesome. Hoping to see more of Kirsten and grown up Connor. Love the vampires, especially Lawson and his figuring things out as he goes along. Tara and Oz and as always hot British ex-watchers. Too much goodness to list. Thanks for crafting such an engaging story. Looking forward to the next book.

06/01/2007 06:08 am
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OMG! How can you do that?! Leaving it like this! Well...you totally have me panting for the next book! Can't wait please hurry! By the way did I mention that I love this, because I SO DO!

Judy
06/01/2007 04:43 am
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Twins -- that's just neat! Sorry to see this one end but happy knowing there will be a third.

Aonadharcach
06/01/2007 04:07 am
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It was wonderful!!!! I'm going to go back and read the whole thing over again! Thank so you much for this wonderful tale. I look forward to reading the next installment and any other stories you would like to post. :) Blessings :)

LeeAnne
06/01/2007 03:43 am
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I loved, loved, loved it! I just can't express how talented I think you are. The amount of emotion, the sheer brilliance of your characterizations...just wonderful. I know you said in previous notes that this is another part in the story, does that mean there will be more? I know I will be one of the many to read it if more comes along.

06/01/2007 02:46 am
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LOVED IT!!!!! can't wait for MORE MORE MORE!!!! Thank you!

Cat
06/01/2007 01:35 am
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Thank You Thank You Thank You!!
I loved reading both books and look forward to reading the next installment when you are ready. Excellent story telling, from the start it was tough to wait for the next chapter to be posted. :)

06/01/2007 01:01 am
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Okay I was so giddy this morning when I saw it over on Spuffy Realm but I was so apprehensive to read it. It was just because I know that it was the end of such a great story. So here I am, now writing you and tell you that I LOVED Jenner and Faith. Maybe she has finally found what she needs. Buffy and Connor's conversation was touching. I can't imagine how he feels being back as a teenager. And Buffy and Spike were just HOT.... And for him to find out that they were having twins... Awe.. I guess I will just have to wait until you have a break from writing and when you get the juices flowing for this great saga. But whatever you write just know that I will be there.

05/17/2007 11:16 pm
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another excellent chapter, love how they're all relating with each other, love your version of connor, and buffy and spike's reunion....excellent job, looking forward to more :)

Vinity
05/17/2007 03:41 pm
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Awesome :D not really ready for this story to end. I'm really loving Faith and Jenner.

05/17/2007 10:34 am
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Great chapter.

05/17/2007 06:45 am
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another great read, thank you.

Kate
05/17/2007 12:26 am
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Lovely family reunion. I usually get bored quickly with WIP that are this long or go on for this long, but you haven't lost me once. It's a great story and it always keeps me wanting more.

05/16/2007 04:18 pm
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I don't know who is more at sea, Faith or Jenner. I don't even want to think about how broken Willow is. I can't see the Summers household getting all chummy with her any time in the next century. Glad to see Cordy is starting to come out of it. "The Destroyer?" Now there's a name to live down. I'll miss this when it's gone. The quotes alone were worth the price of admission--and that's before adding in one juicy, delicious, supernatural being filled story.

Tina
05/16/2007 12:24 pm
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Awesome story. I love this series and can't wait to read the rest of it.

05/16/2007 11:35 am
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Wonderful -- don't stop. If you must, you can take a break!! This is too good to end.

kim
05/16/2007 04:29 am
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Oh, that last scene is hilarious!

And Connor's still with the abilities......

Poor Cordy....it's going to take a long time.

AthenaHahn
05/16/2007 04:06 am
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SQUEE!!!

ORIGINS!!! YAY!!!!

End? BOO, HISS!!! *pouts*

Great chapter as always... confused by one thing... you never said Spike was beginning to CRISP in the sun... just that he and Lawson were STANDING in the sun... soooo... did our Celtic gods and goddesses make him immune, I hope and pray? *keeps fingers crossed*

Update soonest, plz!

Judy
05/16/2007 01:19 am
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I'll be sorry to see this end. I've loved reading this. Thanks for making this such an enjoyable journey.

05/16/2007 12:56 am
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Goody! *claps* So glad Willow finally understands just what she did wrong. Was startng to worry she wasn't ever going to figure it out. It is going to be an adjustment for all of them but they're up to it. Happy about Cordy. Angelus really did a number on her, she deserves to pull through. Jenner's leaving, a perfect opportunity for Faith to start a new life away from the States. You're really bring this together, thanks Niamh.

pretty_in_fangs
05/16/2007 12:46 am
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::chuckle:: Go Spike.

Aonadharcach
05/16/2007 12:40 am
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Thanks for the excellent chapter!! I can't wait for the next one! :)

06/13/2007 11:27 pm
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That was an awesome twist there at the end of this chapter

Rapsody
05/13/2007 09:54 pm
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I have been ready this story for quite a few days and can not imagine a better way to pass the time than with your words. You have a wonderful talent and I eagerly await the next chapter. You see I read this while I'm at work so that I do not go insane and your story has lasted much longer than many others and I continue to think about the story long after I have closed the page. May you muses keep you well.

Dreylin
05/06/2007 03:04 am
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I love this story. I stayed clear for a while, mostly because of the sheer size of it, and of it's lengthy predecessor. I'd read the original some time back, but long enough ago that I felt the need to read it again. I eventually got impatient and picked up Revelations. Several sleep-deprived nights later, and I've managed to catch up. This has become one of my very favorite stories, and I hope to be reading your work for a long time to come. I especially liked the inclusion and roles of Faith and Lawson. Underused characters of the 'verse, in my opinion - at least the Spike centric part of it I read.

cj
05/01/2007 08:33 pm
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Please update soon. It is such a great fic. I am sad to see it end but I need to.

Weaver
04/26/2007 12:31 pm
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I love this story. Can't wait for the finale.

04/26/2007 04:17 am
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I see you stayed true to canon here. Darn, I was hoping they could raise the kids together. Now they have a warrior to fight by his parents side, guess Wesley's got competition. I have forgotten about Tara and Oz. I love this relationship and want to see where it goes. Wondering what Xander's finally going to do with his life. Can't wait for Willow to come back and see if she will try to get back at them anyway. It looks like she just might not believe them, and may give it a shot. She's still not taking responsibility for her actions. Sorry that this part is ending but still so much more to tell, thanks.

pretty_in_fangs
04/25/2007 03:06 pm
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Hee hee hee snickersnort.
What a fabulous chapter.

Anonymous
04/25/2007 05:30 am
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Amazing story...I still love how well you plot out your stories. Looking forward to more!

Alexandra
04/24/2007 05:29 am
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This story is amazing, well written and well thought-out. Awaiting the next chapter with bated breath!

04/22/2007 01:56 pm
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Nice to see how evrything was the morning after the battle. And I can't wait for Buffy's reaction to Connor.

04/21/2007 09:03 pm
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wow...what a shock for buffy...excellent chapter, love, glad willow's finally going to pay for what she's done...great job :)

04/21/2007 02:20 pm
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Ok what the heck happened to Connor that he came back as a ten, or perhaps even older? Not quite sure how Buffy is going to react to that, although it's interesting that Connor called her mom when he is clearly much bigger and wasn't raised with her.

Loved the scene between Anya and Giles. From his original uncomfort to her deliberate teasing, to them joining together. It was all a wonderful exploration of a new relationship.

Interesting to hear more of Oz's thoughts about his feelings for Tara. That his attraction to her is based primarily on how she makes him feel at home. I'd like to know what Tara knows about his feelings and how she feels in return. She seems very comfortable with him and protective towards him but I don't know how she would respond to the idea that he would like it to be more. It is good that he has no plans to try and get her to reciprocate what he feels.

Xander really is confused about the reality of things and his place in them. Actually confused may be too generous. A more accurate decision would be unhappy. It might be best if he stays away from the rest of them for awhile until he can get his head right about the other relationships. I think he should avoid Willow as well when she gets back because clearly she has a lot of penance to do if she doesn't want to suffer worse consequences.

Really nice moment between Buffy and Faith with them supporting each other and drawing some comfort from the honest words of compassions shared.

Kawaki
04/20/2007 10:21 pm
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Did I miss a scene where Xander and Anya actually broke up?

04/20/2007 08:48 pm
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a wonderful read, thank you. enjoyed oz' reflection on tara and what she means to him. faith has figured somethings out. great update to this fantastic work.

Aonadharcach
04/20/2007 06:13 pm
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Marvelous chapter!! Thank you so much for taking such good care of everyone! :) As always, I'll be waiting breathlessly for the next. :)

Judy
04/20/2007 03:16 pm
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Love this story. So glad that you are doing a third one.

04/20/2007 01:19 pm
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I like the way you're wrapping things up at a measured and logical pace. I have a problem both with the 'the action's over so my story's done' abrupt stop and the 'I have no idea how to finish so I'll meander all over just writing more stuff until I think of something good' conclusion. I can't wait to see how Willow reacts over time to her punishment; and how she tries to wriggle out of it.

04/20/2007 10:02 am
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Another amazing chapter. Xander's soul-searching was better late than never, but he's still a git! And I love all the progress elsewhere. I doubt Willow's contrition will last.

Myra
04/20/2007 08:21 am
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I really wasn't expecting this plot twist! Hope to see more soon.

Btw, I hope you add more to Destinies soon too! =D

Avalon
04/20/2007 07:10 am
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Tieing up loose ends is always my favourite part of the stories. I'm sad it's gonna be over soon, I just love it

04/20/2007 06:02 am
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WOWSERS GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! I am so curious how old Conner came back as,, and I have been reading your one on the kids and I am trying to match everything up. I can't wait for the next update! I know its coming to an end and I have loved the entire series and can't wait for the next! THANK YOU!

04/20/2007 05:18 am
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lol great twist. can't wait for more even though i hate that that means its that much closer to being done

Unholydragoon
04/20/2007 04:20 am
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Awesome. This chapter was made of pure win.

Leanne
04/20/2007 02:51 am
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I have got to say this has been one great read! I admire your ability to stick with it and keep me on the edge of my seat.

I have so many questions:
What happened to Cordy - last I remember she was alone in the hospital.

What about Dru - are you going to let her walk away scot free?

Are you going to introduce us to Spike and Buffy's kids in the next book?

AthenaHahn
04/20/2007 02:45 am
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OMG OMG OMG!! I LOVE how this story is turning out! You are, HANDS DOWN, one of the best fanfic writers I've ever read. I DEMANDZ MOAR! *chuckles* Okay, the rabid fanfic demanding part is over; now I can point out specific parts.

Is it horribly wrong of me that I really really hope Tara comes around to being in love with Oz? I know, I know; she's gay, she's never been attracted to guys... but Oz is the sweetest guy! I love how you've portrayed him in this story, I really do.

I also think your characterization of Faith is spot on; she had to have gained SOME maturity over the intervening years. And while I'm still annoyed with Xander, I do think I can understand what his motivations were.

Willow, on the other hand... call me vindictive, but I sincerely hope that the gang NEVER forgives her and she NEVER gets her powers back. It would serve her right. But then I can be a vindictive bitch; so I promise that whatever you end up writing about that situation I'll end up happy with, 'cause you're just that good. *chuckles* Keep up the good work!

Shadowhawke
03/22/2010 09:05 am
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Any interest in the third book? *Any*? Of course there's interest, and much of it! The more you write, the richer the story you have built. :D

nmcil
08/14/2007 08:30 am
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I would love to have a third book -

Devon
06/04/2007 06:23 pm
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Yeeeesssss!!!! Please write the third book! I really don't think I can get enough of this story!

04/26/2007 01:22 am
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What an exciting chapter. and of course we'd love a third book. Jenner has Faith number now doesn't he. He'll find her easily enough. Glad Buffy's home and can't wait for Willow to show up with her friends hating her. she deserves every bit of it too. Don't know how I missed this but happy to have another chapter to read, thanks Niamh.

kathleen
04/19/2007 03:58 pm
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hell yeah i would like a third book! you are such a great writer, i look foreward to every chapter. keep 'em coming!

tamrha
04/05/2007 08:09 am
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can you let me know where to go to read the rest of your fics please?
my email is tamrha80@hotmail.com

tam

tamrha
03/30/2007 08:31 pm
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definitely interested in a third book - one of the best series ive read so far - thx
tam

tamrha
03/30/2007 07:59 pm
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definitely interested in a third book - one of the best series ive read so far - thx
tam

03/29/2007 07:32 pm
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beautifully done, thanks for the fine read. would welcome the opportunity to read the third book of this tale.

Anonymous
03/29/2007 05:59 pm
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Oh no! Another cliffhanger! I can't take it anymore!!! Please, please, please, please, with a huge cherry on top and raspberries, blackberries, blueberries down the side, and chocolate fudge, and whatever else you can think of, please continue...this is such an amazing story and I'm literally drooling with anticipation for the next chapter. (And of course, I have tons of interest for the third book...) You are such a wonderful writer!

03/29/2007 05:53 pm
To protect someone precious         
what? where is he? is he gonna be all grown up like in the show? very much looking forward to seeing what happens next, very nice job with this chapter :)

MARGARET
03/29/2007 01:33 am
To protect someone precious         
AND YES TO ANOTHER BOOK PLEASE!!!

MARGARET
03/29/2007 01:32 am
To protect someone precious         
OH BOY, DO WE GET AN ALREADY GROWN CONNOR THIS TIME AROUND TOO? HOPEFULLY HIS CHILDHOOD IS HAPPIER THIS TIME AROUND! THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE GREAT STORY

Myra
03/29/2007 12:59 am
To protect someone precious         
That's a definite YES to more of Origins. In fact, I wouldn't mind a Book 4 or 5 either! I love this story. =D

Musse
03/28/2007 09:01 pm
To protect someone precious         
Oh my god - you mustn't abandon us here. I love your story and is anxiously waiting for more...

Dihcar
03/28/2007 08:55 pm
To protect someone precious         
Hey, i'm very much intrested in the third book. The next adventures of Buffy and Spike.

Seeya

Kawaki
03/28/2007 06:23 pm
To protect someone precious         
Yes I anxiously await all the chapters. I am actually in the process of rereading the first Origins because it was so good. Take all the time you need. The wait is always worth it.

03/28/2007 12:28 pm
To protect someone precious         
I'm interested in the third book. And in pretty much anything else you choose to write--in or out of genre.

03/28/2007 10:18 am
To protect someone precious         
Ooooh, third book please!!!

03/28/2007 07:04 am
To protect someone precious         
They're getting Connor back! But when Rianwyn said "He's here" did she mean the kid about Dawn's age?If she did, I'm betting that will surprise the others when they return.

murph
03/28/2007 04:45 am
To protect someone precious         
Awesome story. Love the Gaelic references (and of course the Spuffy)! Looking forward to more hopefully. Thanks for sharing your story.

LeeAnne
03/28/2007 04:44 am
To protect someone precious         
Definite interest here. I love all your stories. You are such a talented and amazing writer. There are so very few stories that have drawn me in as much as your Origins series has. I do hope you continue on with it though it seems as if you have a lot on your plate with the WIPs.

Kristen
03/28/2007 04:08 am
To protect someone precious         
Gah, cliffhangers are evil. Please please continue asap.

03/28/2007 03:15 am
To protect someone precious         
yes yes yes yes..please write a 3rd book. i would really hate to see this end :)

03/28/2007 03:00 am
To protect someone precious         
Interest? I'll say... COMPOUND INTEREST!

Aonadharcach
03/28/2007 02:10 am
To protect someone precious         
YES! I would absolutly love to see a third book! :) I loved this chapter and look forward to the next, as always. :) Take care!

Randi Giles
03/28/2007 02:04 am
To protect someone precious         
Nia! you tease! and of course theres interest in a third book.

AthenaHahn
03/28/2007 02:00 am
To protect someone precious         
Um, count me in for interest in a third book... a TON of interest.

Want me to beg? I'll beg; I have no issues with that.

pretty_in_fangs
03/28/2007 01:44 am
To protect someone precious         
P.S. Where can I find your fic Campfires? I've been Googling around and found it with varying numbers of chapters at different sites, but your reference to it here sounds like it's completed, which it wasn't on any of the sites I saw. I'd love to read it.
Thanks.
The epilogue to Campfires will be posted sometime in the next couple of days, at either of two sites. If you want to know which sites those are, email me. I will respond.

03/28/2007 01:37 am
To protect someone precious         
I'd say definitely interested in a third book!! :) I love your writing :) Excellent update, btw. Your fight scenes are so easy to read, I feel like I'm right there watching it! Sometimes I struggle reading fight scenes, and have no idea what's going on and have to read over it again (and again) but, yours were very well done. :) loved it

pretty_in_fangs
03/28/2007 01:27 am
To protect someone precious         
I will read anything you care to write. I would love to follow these tales further, but if you are tiring of it, I won't force you to write more. I do, however, love how you weave fun spuffy tale with celtic epic archetypes.

03/28/2007 01:01 am
To protect someone precious         
Hmmm... do I want a third book? Do I crave chocolate? Do I ship Spike/Buffy above all others? Do you see me sitting here, waiting? Of course!!

Excellent chapter. wonderful epic all around. I think my fave connection is Spike and Lawson. Family is the best!!

Hope you decide to continue.

Stephanie
03/28/2007 12:26 am
To protect someone precious         
Yes please give us more. I need to know what happens.

just sue
03/28/2007 12:22 am
To protect someone precious         
Lovely chapter! I think you have left enough loose threads of interest to warrant another book. I certainly would like to know more about Jenner and Faith, what happens to Lawson, as well as the continuing Spuffyness of it all. I'd like to admit to being curious as to what becomes of Willow...but I just like her being out of it for now and others are far more deserving of attention. Thank you for sharing such a huge fic, and I do hope you decide to continue.

BerMH
03/28/2007 12:13 am
To protect someone precious         
I am definitely interested in a continuation. I love what you've done with this story. It's so original! Keep up the good work!

03/28/2007 12:05 am
To protect someone precious         
Overjoyed to see a new update. Wonderful chapter - even loved the cliffie. As to your question regarding a sequel to this fic - that would be a resounding yes! Might even do a little shameless begging if that's what it takes to inspire you to give us a sequel. :)

03/27/2007 11:42 pm
To protect someone precious         
Thank you for the update it was GREAT as usual,,, very much interested in book 3!!!!

03/18/2007 02:16 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
I really liked the moment between faith and Dawn. Each of them were so guarded and not wanting to reveal their hurts, but they did to comfort one another, and that was beautiful. I think each of them needed to know someone cared about them just because it was them and not for familial or romantic reasons. Feeling concerned about the warning the women gave Buffy about those who would seek to split her family apart. It'd be nice if they got a few moments of peace and quiet without all the drama. Glad to know Spike and Sam are getting closer to finding Conner.

03/17/2007 06:23 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
What a beautiful way to end a chapter. Willow, defiant as ever, Spike and Lawson finishing their trials and Faith admission to having a heart that feels, was a wonderful experience. Looking forward to the last two chapters. Thank you for continuing to post this story here until it's finish. Wonderful story.

03/15/2007 02:51 pm
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Now I'm wondering if a Key and a former Watcher would make good parents for a magical child (all that glowing green energy has to go somewhere). I am really enjoying this and will hate to see the end (except for the part where I can sit down and read it all in one fell swoop).

03/15/2007 07:21 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Great update, loved the Faith/Dawn interaction. Where is Conner??!! lol, can't wait to see what other chalenges await Spike... hurry home Buffy and Spike so you two can be together!! :) lol j/k dont hurry, I like the way this is panning out, I'm very intrigued to find out more about Willow's punishment tho... in short: excellent work!! :D

03/15/2007 06:47 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Great chapter.

03/15/2007 06:16 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
lovely read, thank you. the tender ending of the chapter was a fine read.

03/15/2007 06:14 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
well i'm glad that willow wont be doing any more damage for a while...can't wait for them to be reunited again... great chapter :)

Cat
03/15/2007 04:21 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
I have followed this story from the start. All that I can say is THANK YOU. Thanks for letting us read and enjoy your hard work.

03/15/2007 01:53 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Well now I know where Annie got it from... And I just love how Buffy was given this blessing before she was sent back. Willow still never learned even after they gave their judgement. And GO Faith for being there for Dawn. She needed someone not 'close' to talk to and maybe Dawn and Faith can help each other.

pretty_in_fangs
03/15/2007 12:45 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Beautiful, beautiful chapter.

03/15/2007 12:36 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
I think I get it,,, I dont want to say to much but I am pretty sure what that whole heart thing means... I will wait and see...

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! Oh and what does that mean “Though you are bonded to your William, your union is not yet sanctioned by the gods" Does that mean they are not married tradiionally? Or does that means maybe they will get even a stronger bond soon???

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Thank you!

Lou
03/15/2007 12:19 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Just fabulous! You do great cryptic. The Dawn and Faith talk was sweet, snarky, and sad all at once. And dare I hope for a reunion in the not too distant future? Top chapter.

kim
03/15/2007 12:09 am
A courteous yet harrowing grace         
Loved the moment between Faith and Dawn.

06/13/2007 11:06 pm
Justice turns the scale         
Whoa ... heavy chapter, but well written.

Richard
03/01/2007 06:33 am
Justice turns the scale         
I'm pretty surprised Buffy spared her life. It's not where the story seemed to be leading with Buffy distancing herself from Willow and the Celtic gods being bloodthirsty. It's not the smart thing to do either since there's any number of ways Willow could become extremely dangerous. And you can bet she'd explore every one of them. Mind you, it is justice, but I wasn't expecting justice at this point.

02/28/2007 07:14 pm
Justice turns the scale         
wow, sounds like quite a hefty penalty for willow..i almost feel sorry for her...*almost*...and i'm glad spike's doing all right, and i hope buffy can handle seeing willow's penalty handed down...great chapter, very much enjoyed it :)

02/28/2007 04:01 pm
Justice turns the scale         
ohhh so good so good, I want to read the rest but I dont want it to finish!!

Emilee
02/28/2007 02:19 pm
Justice turns the scale         
Would it be a safe bet to figure Willow still has absolutely no concept of how she screwed up? Strip her powers and take her friends away, she'll just end up an evil human. Still dangerous even without the power. Buffy's too soft-hearted. I don't know if I'd have let her live, at least not without hearing her speak for herself. Excellent chap as always. Can't wait for more.

Lou
02/28/2007 12:04 pm
Justice turns the scale         
Retribution is on its way. I love this story!

02/28/2007 11:20 am
Justice turns the scale         
That is very powerful writing. I could feel it. I could feel Arianrhod as he made his wise decision. I'm hoping that they all out live her, she deserves nothing less. That was awesome, Niamh. Will wait for any update for this amazing story, thanks.

02/28/2007 06:54 am
Justice turns the scale         
*That* is an effective curse. I don't know that having her life spared is going to be Willow's desire when she discovers the actuality of those restrictions. The loss of control is really going to hurt. Looking forward to more (always).

02/28/2007 06:28 am
Justice turns the scale         
Great chapter.
"Release comes not, until the last of your betrayed is at peace." Wow, Willlow will have to wait a long time.

02/28/2007 06:17 am
Justice turns the scale         
death would have been mercy. loved it, thank you.

Pin
02/28/2007 04:17 am
Justice turns the scale         
I like the way you present the hall and the judging. I'll be interested to see what the judgement means and how Willow will react.

06/13/2007 10:57 pm
72 No Oceans between us         
Excellent update ... very riveting.

02/17/2007 06:04 am
72 No Oceans between us         
excellent chapter, thank you. congratulations on the awards, well deserved, luv.

02/17/2007 02:52 am
72 No Oceans between us         
so buffy's made her decision, and spike's okay for now...and poor faith...i thought it was sexy up until now, realizing how deeply it was affecting her...hope she's okay...excellent update ;)

02/16/2007 02:40 am
72 No Oceans between us         
Oh I'm so happy to see that you updated. Of course, I'm behind the times. I've enjoyed the last two chapters - the references to Celtic lore, especially - and the Sam/Spike bonding.

02/15/2007 03:38 pm
72 No Oceans between us         
Lovely chapter.

pretty-in-fangs
02/15/2007 01:49 pm
72 No Oceans between us         
Yay! Go Buffy!

I recently sat down and re-read this work from the beginning of Origins. Goodness, I love this story. It just keeps getting better.

02/15/2007 08:58 am
72 No Oceans between us         
Now I'm wondering if Jenner will pursue--and if Faith will let him. I hope the "not Slayer blood" doesn't count as food or drink--Spike stranded isn't a good thing. Thank you for the story fix--this junkie needed it.

02/15/2007 08:51 am
72 No Oceans between us         
Congratulations, Niamh. This fic deserves it. So glad that both Spike and Buffy are getting help to keep their connection open, while they're apart. Very interested in her decision. Thanks for posting, wonderful chapter. Glad Faith didn't kill him, thought she might have. She's not full of self restraint as a rule.

Pin
02/15/2007 01:20 am
72 No Oceans between us         
Thank you for the update. Once again I love the new characters and so appreciate the participation of Lawson in your story.

Aonadharcach
02/15/2007 12:54 am
72 No Oceans between us         
Congratulations on the awards! If any story deserves them, it's this one. Thanks for the wonderful chapter and I'll be breathlessly waiting for the next one. :) Blessed be :)

nmcil
08/14/2007 06:27 am
The pierless bridge         
totally loving this part of your story - I am so very glad that you did not abandoned this work like so many of the other buffyverse sagas were -

Jenner and Faith are a very interesting potential couple - see if the can get over their Shrew Phrase - and I like having Lawson as one of your characters -

margaret
03/29/2007 12:43 am
The pierless bridge         
thank you so much for continuing, the story just keeps on getting better

02/15/2007 03:24 pm
The pierless bridge         
Great chapter.

Dawn
02/11/2007 12:35 pm
The pierless bridge         
Fab Fic....plyz keep some mre coming....
p.s It's nice 2 kno ppl hve wide imaginations!

02/01/2007 12:14 pm
The pierless bridge         
So glad that you're continuing to update. Love this series. Sorry that it's soon over. Really love that Tara and Oz have this special bond. Bet she never thought that she'd be sleeping with a man! Thankful that Spike and Lawson have help along the way, they definately need it. Thanks Niamh, great chapter.

01/31/2007 09:59 pm
The pierless bridge         
Hi Niamh, just wanted to thank you for the excellent chapter. I am and am not looking forward to the conclusion of this story. I love it so much, I want to be able to keep reading it. At the same time, I want to know how it ends. :) Thank you!! :)

01/31/2007 07:10 am
The pierless bridge         
Woohoo! Niamh's updated. Is there a Celtic version of the Erinyes? Because that's sure what Spike and Lawson's attacker sounds like to me. Looking forward to more Giles/Anya interaction, and more on Jenner and Faith. Well, actually, more on everyone. Don't think that nobody noticed that Buffy wasn't in this chapter.

01/31/2007 03:37 am
The pierless bridge         
wonderful read, as usual. thank you. love the last line.

01/31/2007 02:58 am
The pierless bridge         
very interesting chapter...still enjoying the fic...i'd love to see faith get back at jenner in the next chapter :P...great job with this one :)

pretty_in_fangs
01/31/2007 01:07 am
The pierless bridge         
I agree with Tara; it is nice to see the family reforming, stronger, in a new shape. Though I fear that Xander may have permanently removed himself from it if he can't reevaluate his thinking.

Shadowhawke
03/22/2010 08:27 am
Into the Mystic         
I really, really love the celtic feel you have going on throughout this entire fic, and the way you balance out all the aspects of the story. Thanks!

clancy_s
01/28/2007 09:16 am
Into the Mystic         
Another great chapter. I've only a superficial aquaitance with the Celtic myths so I've no idea what waits for Spike next, I look forward to finding out.

It was also great to have Anya telling Xander a few truths about Willow, and himself. It'll be interesting to see if this 'verse Xander learns any sense.

sister cuervo
01/21/2007 12:07 am
Into the Mystic         
Fantastic blend of mythologies and an enthralling tale. I've enjoyed every chapter thusfar and await the next installment anxiously. You've done a wonderful job with this story. I love the complex blend of action and character progress, not to mention the look into Celtic myths. Facinating!

01/15/2007 08:44 pm
Into the Mystic         
thanks for the update to this excellent tale.

Kat
01/15/2007 02:30 pm
Into the Mystic         
I've gotta say, your take on the whole Season 6 fiasco is sooo much better than what the writers came up with; your rendition of Spike and Buffy's relationship sends chills up my spine; you've remained so true to the characters! And not just B & S, but the rest of the cast as well. You have a real gift, and I can't wait to read the rest of the story; I fell so in love with your style that I read all of Origins, and Origins: Revelations in about 2 days; my husband didn't think I was ever getting off the computer. I've read Baby Love now too, and I'm amazed at your talent; I can't wait til the next chapter!!!

01/13/2007 05:09 am
Into the Mystic         
Willow made her decision, Buffy's got her family, she'd already sacrificed herself for her family, when she jumped. It comes down to Willow or her baby, the baby is the only innocent here. It shouldn't be a hard choice. Fantastic chapter, Niamh, thanks for the update.

jo
01/12/2007 08:37 pm
Into the Mystic         
Great an update on Origins. Can't wait to see what happens next.

01/12/2007 12:46 pm
Into the Mystic         
I hadn't realized how much I had missed this until the excitement of a new chapter. Still not sure if Jenner is engaged in rough foreplay or just prefers the taste of blood after a hard struggle. I like that your characters are consistent within the story unless there is an actual reason for their change.

01/12/2007 07:43 am
Into the Mystic         
I first discovered your story when you updated in December, during the week of my finals at university. (Thanks for giving me something to avoid studying with!) I just have to say, "WOW!" You are an amazing writer, and Origins quickly became my favorite fanfic story ever. I didn't have a chance to say so at the time, but thank you very, very much for writing this story. I can't wait to see what happens next--I'm on pins and needles on all fronts of the story!

01/12/2007 06:35 am
Into the Mystic         
oh man...she better choose spike, with all he's doing to help her...an excellent chapter, love, very intriguing...how sad for poor anya though :(

01/12/2007 04:39 am
Into the Mystic         
Loved the chapter THANK YOU!

HOpe you dont forget about finishing the story! I gotta see how it ends at least!!!!!

Thank you!

Aonadharcach
01/12/2007 03:51 am
Into the Mystic         
Thanks so much for the new chapter! I adore this series and always wait with bated breath for the next installment. :) Thanks for making every chapter so terrific. :)

01/04/2008 06:29 am
A doubtful choice         
Doing a small reading again of this last parts - I really enjoyed having Lawson and all the different vampire as part of the story - great to have new characters and I always liked Lawson. In the series I thought his story, more developed would have been very interesting.

06/13/2007 10:40 pm
A doubtful choice         
Wow, what a choice to make.

01/13/2007 04:16 am
A doubtful choice         
There's no guarantee's that Willow will stop trying to control thing's, besides they have Conner now. So I'd choose Spike and my family. Heaven can wait. How wonderful for Lawson after sixty years of being alone, to have a feeling of family again. This rescue will give them a chance to bound. One more to go, great chapter, thanks.

meg
01/11/2007 05:45 pm
A doubtful choice         
also? i would totally choose spike.

meg
01/11/2007 05:44 pm
A doubtful choice         
i absolutely love this story. i got hooked with origins when i was lookin at spuffy award winners lookin for something to read. i've been obsessed ever since. i really really hope that you're still working on this. i always run into WIP's that are amazing but people have abandoned as they lose intrest in buffy. please please please tell me you're still into this.
i anxiously await your next chapter. hahaha. let me know if there's anything i can do to help you through your writers block.

Kawaki
01/04/2007 06:22 pm
A doubtful choice         
I'm back. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I had a baby in Oct. I love this story and I totally understand how real life can be utterly consuming..

miranda82
01/03/2007 03:16 am
A doubtful choice         
I just re-read this story again because I enjoyed it so much the first time! :D

Just a question...I didn't really get how Kirsten could have an older brother when she was born in 2002? (or did I get that mixed up?)

12/14/2006 12:27 am
A doubtful choice         
wonderful read, as always. thank you. not so evil a cliffie. you know she is going back to spike, else he will be there,dragging her and the baby back.

kathleen
12/13/2006 11:53 pm
A doubtful choice         
damn! you are good! talk about leaving us with a cliffhanger! as always, you never let me down when it comes to great storytelling. thanks and keep up the good work. i'll be waiting for the next chapter with baited breath!!!

sirc
12/11/2006 10:11 pm
A doubtful choice         
Loved it :D

Hannah
12/11/2006 06:24 am
A doubtful choice         
Ah! No! You can't stop there! I have become so addicted to this story; you're really an amazing writer. Here's to hoping your writer's block leaves soon!

Kimberly
12/09/2006 06:57 pm
A doubtful choice         
I can't wait till you update this some more. I have so enjoyed this story. I wonder what buffy will decide and that is a cliffhanger!

12/09/2006 06:43 am
A doubtful choice         
oh man...what a choice they're giving her!! how hard that has to be! hope spike can help connor in time..excellent chapter :)

ahigh
12/08/2006 10:05 pm
A doubtful choice         
Wonderful chapter with no sign of drek anywhere. I'm glad you seem to be pushing through your block because I love your stories and have never been anything but astounded by your writing. Can't wait to see more.

Weaver
12/08/2006 03:50 pm
A doubtful choice         
Oooh - just read the last 10 chapters and ended on this cliff hanger!!!!

More please - you write beautifully.

Lou
12/08/2006 02:01 pm
A doubtful choice         
Thank you for another excellent chapter. Decisions, decisions. Turn back time or not? Can't wait for more.

Dar
12/08/2006 11:17 am
A doubtful choice         
I liked the definition of betrayal. What a choice to lay down your burden and just wait for Spike to join you. Naw, Buffy's hands on kind of girl (Life and Spike). Nice Chapter

12/08/2006 08:56 am
A doubtful choice         
I'd choose waiting with Spike. The price was already paid. For what it's worth, this chapter was drek-free. That's the hardest part about a block--no matter how good someone tells you something is, all you see are the mistakes that you just can't seem to fix.

12/08/2006 07:45 am
A doubtful choice         
Heaven.

Or Spike. . . .


Okay, now that? Is one hell of a choice. Are you sure you're not like EVOL???

pretty_in_fangs
12/08/2006 05:57 am
A doubtful choice         
Of course, she hasn't asked what her choices would be if she does forgive Willow, I notice.

And, by the by, I don't believe that anything that you write could ever by drek. I've certainly never seen any signs of it.

Jamie
12/08/2006 05:39 am
A doubtful choice         
Great update, and of course the answer would be Spike every time

12/08/2006 05:26 am
A doubtful choice         
wow glad to know buffy/spike get to be together always, but buffy has a really hard choice to make now :)
can't wait for another update.

12/08/2006 05:05 am
A doubtful choice         
SPIKE! I'd choose Spike

LeeAnne
12/08/2006 04:41 am
A doubtful choice         
I think I would choose Heaven on earth which would be Spike of course! Knowing that I would be welcomed later might do much to ease my mind especially considering if I were Buffy and getting some of that "normal" she so coveted with having a family and getting to live long enough to enjoy that family. I was so excited to see you updated this story. I read each and every chapter and usually I tend to wait until the last chapter and review the whole story but I thought you might could use a note telling you how wonderful and amazing I think your writing talent is. I am so stunned sometimes at how good and well written your story is. I can say that there hasn't been anything in this story that I haven't enjoyed reading. I hope we get to see some more of it soon.

06/13/2007 10:33 pm
Wither into Truth         
Great scenes all around with all of the characters. You keep multiple plotlines all coherent for the timelines. Excellent written.

01/13/2007 02:17 am
Wither into Truth         
Wow, didn't know you'd updated while I was in the hospital. I love this fic and glad that you weren't persuaded in the least by the guy who'd suggested that you were finished. Spike's definately not going to take one drop of Bit's blood 'til he has all the fact's, that's for sure. Love your explination of where Buffy was after she died. People forget that Christianity's only been here for two thousand year's. Glad that Buffy's thinking about the question of Willow's fate. Not an easy question to answer, as it once was. Loved the chapter and Spike's restlessness. Great work, Niamh.

11/26/2006 07:02 am
Wither into Truth         
hmmm...wonder what she's going to find out...this has been a very interesting story, looking forward to your next update :)

Jenny
11/22/2006 01:00 am
Wither into Truth         
Update Update Please I love this have copied it to my computer so i can re read it when I can not be online

spikes_heart
11/18/2006 08:54 pm
Wither into Truth         
This saga is just phenomenal, and gets better and better as more is added.

Sits back and tries to remember patience is a virtue. *grins*

11/16/2006 05:54 am
Wither into Truth         
excellent read, as always, thank you. and when you get back to the fantastic tale, we will be waiting.

pretty_in_fangs
11/14/2006 12:00 am
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It so much harder when you can actually hear what the person's real motivations and thoughts are.

Lou
11/13/2006 11:45 pm
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Love the hubble bubble toil and trouble.

11/13/2006 06:55 pm
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Just giddy once again when I saw the new chapter. And however long you have t his installment, I will be reading. But love all of the intereactions between everyone. They are truly a unit with beating Angel and trying to get Connor back. I am sorry that all of this is falling on Buffy's shoulders. She is a better woman than I am for even thinking about this. Love Spike making sure not to just jump into things without finding out everything before they cut Dawn. And Jenner/Faith just awesome.

11/13/2006 02:49 pm
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I can hardly wait to see what will be decided to be appropriate action against Willow. The Summerlands makes way more sense than Valhalla for Buffy--especially when one considers how tired she was of fighting before she jumped. I'm also looking forward to the search for Connor and the taming of either Jenner or Faith--not sure how I hope that one will play out.

11/13/2006 01:21 am
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I eagerly await each new chapter of this story and do a happy dance each time one appears. Thanks for another lovely, beautifully written chapter. Faith and jenner are hot and perfect for each other. Spike and Dawn share the same blood, so I would imagine it's gonna take both of them to get Connor back again. Can't wait to see the how and why of it all. As for the somewhat evil cliffie, I can live with it, but I hope it won't be too before the next update. I know you have a real life that you have to get on with, I just can't help begging a little every now and again. :)

Pin
11/12/2006 03:23 pm
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Love the reinterpretation of Buffy's death experience, very nice idea. Looking forward to the Connor retrieval. Love the hotness of Faith & Jenner - great combination! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Kittenuno
11/12/2006 02:53 pm
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'Wither into Truth' is an amazing chapter. The characters are incredible especially after each endured their own agonizing trial with such determination. And kudos for creating a Willow who makes Snow White's evil stepmother look like an upset goldfish. Just brilliant!

just sue
11/12/2006 01:21 pm
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Scrummy new chapter! Having only devuored this a week or so ago it is still fast in my memory. Love the Jenner/Faith...um, interaction. *coughs*

Would not like to have Buffy's decision to make, not at all. Will she feel she has never really known Willow at all, or will she see something left there that is worth saving? A poser.

Thanks ever so and looking forward to more whenever it appears.

slinkyPK
11/12/2006 08:38 am
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Hot damn, update-y goodness from my girl! Woot-woot!

Looks like the gang is one step closer to bringing Connor home. Wonderful interaction between Dawn and the others. That she's willing to do what she must to help save Connor despite her own pain goes to show just how strong and courageous she really is.

It seems as though Buffy's choice is becoming harder by the minute. I still have no idea what I would do in her shoes. In my own mind, Willow should be punished for the things she's done and the pain she's caused. There's absolutely no way she could atone for taking one life and destroying others. Lies and manipulation, heartache and treachery in the pursuit of power for her own personal gain. From the very first, it's been all about what *she* wanted and nothing to do with how others felt. Whenever she didn't get her way, she used magic to change things to her liking. Now a boy, an innocent, has been murdered and his family left in devesation. Dawn's heart is broken moreso than her body. Connor has been snatched from the loving embrace of the only family he knows. How in the world is it even possible to make up for that kind of thing?

One thing is for certain, though. I don't even Buffy for the choice she has to make.

I do, however, envy Faith. Is it just me, or is Jenner HAWT?! Whoa, mamma! If those two aren't careful, they may accidentally burn the building down with the fire they're sparking! *fans self and swipes at drool*

More! More! More!

...um...pretty please with nekkid Spike and shiny manacles on top?

11/12/2006 08:20 am
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i loved this chapter. i am really looking forward to the next chapter and finding out what happens with willow and conner

Tamrha
11/12/2006 07:44 am
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I'm thoroughly enjoying this story - could wish for more updates - but as long as there are updates im happy..:)

I'm also happy to hear there's going to be another book..:)

Kepp it up!

Tam

06/13/2007 10:27 pm
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Another awesome chapter.

11/26/2006 06:57 am
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yeah, i'd feel about like that too..it's like you'd *want* to be able to forgive and move on, but after all the pain and trouble she's caused...great chapter, on to read the end :)

10/30/2006 01:40 am
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Lovely chapter. Poor Spike - gotta feel for him. He's kinda got his hands tied right now and you just know he needs to be doing something. Jenner and Faith - perfect. Poor Sam - so confused. And part of me really wants there to be a way to redeem Willow. Left us haning there, didn't you? Can't wait for the next update. :)

sirc
10/27/2006 12:57 pm
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Well done :D

missus_grace
10/27/2006 08:13 am
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Buffy's in kind of a tight spot, but I have a feeling I know what she'll choose to do.

The battle at Revello drive may be over, but this is still gripping and intense. As a mother, of course, I'm worried about little Connor and where he's currently at.

10/26/2006 05:01 am
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There goes Spike again being the one to take care of people and just the reminder of that Connor is gone... What a way for Lawson to find out about a possible reason why he is the way he is and thinks. Love Jenner and Faith..But as always, the weight is only on her shoulders.. I don't know what Buffy should do about Willow. She has just done so much to Buffy and her family. Can't wiat to find out what you have next for all of them.

10/26/2006 03:24 am
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excellent chapter, thank you. and buufy's response at the last, was so real.

Emilee
10/25/2006 07:49 pm
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That was a nice break after all that action and trauma. Can't wait for the next update.

10/25/2006 06:51 pm
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I have just spent a breathless couple of hours being swept along by the intensity of the latest 10 or so chapters of this story. thank you

10/25/2006 06:51 pm
A brief respite from fear         
I have just spent a breathless couple of hours being swept along by the intensity of the latest 10 or so chapters of this story. thank you

10/25/2006 05:36 pm
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excellant!

10/25/2006 03:45 pm
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Another wonderful chapter, thank you! I really like the Faith-Jenner combo and I love how you've developed Lawson, with clearly more to him than we ever thought. Love the description of the Seelie Court and I'm glad that Buffy didn't immediately grant absolution. It really is a tough question, given Willow's actions. Looking forward to whatever you write.

Eve
10/25/2006 03:32 pm
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Wow...hate to see this come to an end. I'm so glad that you're planning another sequel. I can't wait to read it! Take care!

pretty_in_fangs
10/25/2006 01:31 pm
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A very honest answer from Buffy. Something tells me that in those halls, that will serve her well.

Lou
10/25/2006 10:41 am
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There was a time when Buffy would have said an immediate yes -- but suffering so much at Willow's hands has taught her a valuable lesson.

kim
10/25/2006 09:39 am
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Just be honest here, Buffy. I don't think they'll settle for less.
Aww, poor Sam...that's a lot to assimilate, that's for sure.
Telling, for Tara to not notice the glass in her shoulder..
That's Spike..always gotta be doing.
And now Faith and Jenner get their time..How much will she trust him?
Nice description of the hall and the immortals. If Willow's to be redeemed, it's going to take some serious work on her internally...she doesn't see or feel the right things, yet.

10/25/2006 09:31 am
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As some things come together, others fall apart, wonder what's going on with Spike. Sam's role is a very interesting one, it's one I'm eager to learn more about. Now Faith understands a little better what Spike and Buffy have. Really glad you have Buffy exploring her true feelings for her best friend. It could have been very easy to have her simply say yes but I like how you've taken her down a diferent road, no matter how long it's for. Great work, thanks.

Tamara
10/25/2006 09:23 am
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That would be one hell of a hrd question to answer, wouldn't it?

nightshift
10/25/2006 07:04 am
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Your characterisation is spot-on. Especially Faith and Buffy's. Buffy's answer is sooo Buffy in full I-Don't-Have-Any-Clue-What-The-Answer-Should-Be mode.

Oracleholly
10/25/2006 06:47 am
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What a delightful treat to find when I came home! As hot as the foreplay between Jenner and Faith was and as nice as it was to have the Sam moment, I must take issue with your cliffhanger! Missy! GRRRRR To leave it like that...hanging on an "I don't really know"...you truly are a *wink* witch *wink*!

Love ya!

LeeAnne
10/25/2006 06:42 am
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Absolutely loved it! Can't wait for more! I loved the Faith/Jenner parts too! They were hot!

10/25/2006 06:26 am
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Faith and Jenner! YAY. lol.

Poor Buffy is in a terrible position. Willow has done so much that is unforgivable, and yet it is in Buffy's nature to forgive those she loves.

Wonderful chapter, as always, my dear.

DizzyB
10/25/2006 06:12 am
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Oooh! What will Buffy decide? Can't wait for that and to see what Spike has to do to get Connor back. Very naughty touch there with Faith. Kind of spicy and unexpected, but totally fits... just like everything else in this wonderful marvelous tale you've woven. Bravo!

slinkypsychokit
10/25/2006 06:12 am
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Would I give the Willow the chance to redeem herself? I think I'd go with Buffy's answer. After everything she's done, I wouldn't trust that it is possible. Damn that moral/ethical tightrope.

Poor whitehats. Poor Buffy and Spike. To lose Connor... And what of Sam? Whatever will he do now?

Love the Faith/Jenner hotness! Those two could seriously fog some windows!

Esther
10/25/2006 06:11 am
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Hot damn, that was fantastic!! Ooh, so many mixed emotions from all the characters and then you throw in some Faith/Jenner smuttiness---WHOA MAMA!!! Loved it!! Can't wait for more!

10/25/2006 06:01 am
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Brilliant...breathlessly witing for more :)

06/13/2007 10:06 pm
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Excellent chapter.

11/26/2006 06:51 am
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time for what exactly? hope he doesn't turn her...hope spike gets connor back without too much trouble..great chapter :)

Lou
10/25/2006 10:37 am
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A little respite after that stormin' battle. This is a superlative piece of work.

10/22/2006 02:41 am
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Such a wonderfully intense chapter. Couldn't ask for better, but I could and do ask for more, please?

BerMH
10/20/2006 09:49 pm
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I can't wait for more! I absolutely love this story!

MARGARET
10/20/2006 01:17 am
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THANKS FRO THE GREAT CHAPTER!

valdt
10/19/2006 05:41 am
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excellent chapter, but for you that is the norm. fantastic read, thank you.

10/19/2006 03:54 am
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okay with the note of a sequel I am giddy... but I can't wait to see how this one ends. Love that Spike was always looking out for his girls. Buffy wanting Willow so she can tell them what she did. Giles and Anya showing up together. Spike and Jenner were awesome and what does Jenner have in mind for Faith??? MAN so many questions

ahigh
10/18/2006 10:42 pm
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I haven't reviewed for several chapters so I can't list everything that I loved reading because it would be too long! I frequently go back and read Origins (both parts) over and over again because it is my favorite story in the whole fandom. I'm sad to see this tale ending but I'll try to be patient while waiting for the next story. Thanks Niamh for sharing this wonderful story with us.

sirc
10/18/2006 09:14 pm
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Loved this :D

10/18/2006 02:53 pm
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excellant story as always - this is one of my favorite stories - your writing is simply beutiful and excellant. The plot is so gripping. can i bribe you with chololete for more chapters?

10/18/2006 12:46 pm
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Another great chapter. I love the Faith/Jenner pairing and look forward to seeing what you do with them. I hope the price that Spike must pay for Connor is not too great. Lawson's and Aurelian too, isn't he? I hope Drusilla is out of the picture for a long while. Thanks again for a great story.

10/18/2006 11:04 am
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so much for her staying there for Spike! Brilliant as usual, but I still need more :)

Bloodplay
10/18/2006 10:35 am
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I loved that broadway, (WICKED)
I also cannot wait until the next installment, even if you say it'll be a long way off. Not very nice of you to end it there! but I'll wait. no choice. :) Update soon!

10/18/2006 10:10 am
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Too much going on for Spike to feel good about and now Buffy's gone again and he's got to find Conner. Wonder how this is going to go for Willow, this should be interesting. Surprised Jenner waited that long to grab her. Another slayer falling for a vamp. Makes you wonder just how many slayers throughout history did fall for a vamp. Glad that there's more to this fic, alot more. Will be waiting for whatever you write. Great read, thanks.

10/18/2006 07:59 am
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Wonderful chapter, as always!

Just when they're due their well-earned rest Buffy and Spike stiil have to go be heroes.

Looking forward to seeing the trial, and Spike rescuing Connor. Also very much looking forward to seeing what is in store for Faith and Jenner... and I am more than a little worried by the fact that Dru is still out there.

I'm sure like most of your readers I am looking forward to seeing how it all concludes, but definitely not looking forward to it ending...so I am glad to hear that there will be more Origins-verse down the track, and I am sure I will love whatever new project you have in mind, too.

nightshift
10/18/2006 07:30 am
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I'm looking forward to the conclusion, but not to the story being ended. It's been a wild ride. I suppose that happens when you include *those* hounds and their master. I'm looking forward to where the muse might take you once this one is finished. It's sure to be interesting and well written.

Esther
10/18/2006 06:54 am
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WOW!! Freaking WOW!! Absolutely loved this chapter!! The pain, the joy, the heartache---all of it. No words can describe how splendid this is. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

pretty_in_fangs
10/18/2006 05:44 am
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I cannot wait to see the trial.

10/18/2006 05:25 am
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OK, is it just me or was that last little bit with Faith and Jenner really hot? *fans self*

That aside, it's about time Wicked Willow was stopped and forced to face judgement. Mean though it may be, I'm kinda hoping there'll be torturing of the redhead. Slow, preferably painful. Though, how do you measure a punishment to fit her crimes? Death would be quick and final. She deserves to suffer as she made others suffer. The pain she caused...the lives she devestated in her pursuit of controlling the world around her. How is it even possible to determine what punishment is enough?

Guess we'll find out soon.

Looks, too, like Dru's scarpered. Whatever will the insane vampiress do without her precious 'Daddy' there to torture her or someone to watch after he?

Beautifully written, Nia. Can't wait to see how they manage to find Connor and what the Seelie court has to say about Willow.

DizzyB
10/18/2006 05:15 am
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This story - coupled with the original Origins - is my absolute favorite series out there. Thank you for continuing to share this with us.

Tina
10/18/2006 04:52 am
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You're quite the storyteller! I can't wait to read more.

Emilee
10/18/2006 01:40 am
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Niamh, I will happily read anything you wish to write. You are an incredibly talented wordsmith. That said, my true love, of all your works, is the Origins series. This last update was just awesome, and as always, you leave me anxious for more. Once Revelations is complete, I'll probably count the days until the third installment begins. Can't wait for the next update.

Tamara
10/18/2006 12:55 am
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Great chapter. I wonder what the judgement on Willow will be.

10/18/2006 12:52 am
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great chapter ..and as much as i would love to see the next part in this just as soon as your done this one,i would enjoy anything you write i love your writting. your really great at what you do. can't wait for more.

10/18/2006 12:42 am
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Oh yeah, now you're cooking with grease :P Damn good chappie. I love the twists in your plotline. Everytime I think I have it figured out you twist it juuuuust enough that I'm not right, but I'm not quite wrong eithr lol.

kim
10/18/2006 12:25 am
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Ho-ho...Jenner's feeling frisky.

Great chapter...winding down from the big climax of saving everybody and killing the bad guys, but still plenty of emotion to carry us to the next part, the next mission.

Looking forward to Willow's punishment. Really wanting the rest to hurry up after Connor. He's just an infant. I'm sure Tara did the best she could, but....

kimberly Adams
10/18/2006 12:11 am
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just finished the new chapter and can't wait for the next. I am not much of a reviewer, I know, I just want to let you know that I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

06/13/2007 10:00 pm
Wild Justice         
Wow. Just really ... wow.

03/09/2007 01:55 am
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Love this story - very well done!I started reading Origins a few days ago and now I'm all caught up & anxiously awaiting more!

11/26/2006 06:44 am
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glad angel and willow are both taken care of...wonder exactly what will happen to willow though...excellent chapter, all tied together very well :)

LeeAnne
10/20/2006 04:54 am
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How nasty what Spike did to Angel! I loved it!!! More, more, more please!

10/17/2006 08:27 am
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I don't know which was more satisfying, Spike dusting Angel, or the hounds capturing Willow?

Hmmm... nah... I loved them both equally!

Fabulous chap, my dear. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

Bloodplay
10/16/2006 03:22 pm
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Hello, Niamh,Took me a week but I sat down and finished your story. I am compltetly enthralled. I loved the way you portrayed the Neo-scoobs and can only hope you manage to intigrate the AI team as well (Fred, Gunn etc)I also hope there will be more interplay with the Englishmen in the future because its hilarious. those three really do have a lot in common and the way you portray it is seamless. Lawson, and the whole TARA/OZ thing was an unexpected but delightful twist. I Loved every second of it.
All in all the story is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I was completely blown off my feet, barely tore myself away from it ALL OF IT> I read from the begining in Origins all the way to this chapter in the last week. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I need to see what happens. And I can't help but hope that Angel survived just so Spike can rub it in his face that he has everything he has ever wanted.
You made me hate Willow and Xander AND managed to wheedle out pairings out of the most unexpected people. KUDOS to you! I wait on your next update on breath that is bated.

PS - I even like some of the songs. ;)

10/13/2006 03:05 pm
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oh god...soooo very very good. I just love this story, its very well written and it's full of many intrequing twists and turns all believable and spin tingling. but it doesn't finish, i hate cliffhangers! i can't wait to see what happens so please post some more

vladt
10/13/2006 04:19 am
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wonderful read. so many fascinating thing going on: oz defending tara from a hellhound; red watching her magic ineffectiveness against the hellhound; guessing whose magic removed connor. bonus points for slow, painful angel dusting. thanks for a great read.

10/13/2006 02:36 am
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!! What is the world. Can I just tell you that more in love with this story right now. I can't believe it. Connor, Angel, Dru the hounds... so much.

Aonadharcach
10/12/2006 10:17 pm
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Excellent couple of chapters, Niamh! I'm very much looking forward to the next. :)

margaret
10/12/2006 09:46 pm
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great fight scenes as usual! sure hope connor'e ok

ariadne
10/12/2006 04:30 pm
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i think my favorite part was when the alfa hound slapped willow on the roof. that was priceless and i can sooo see him doing that. i loved how he got up on roof and her magic could not be used against him. now that was a shock to little miss i think i'm all that witchy woman...

yeahhhh...angelus is dust!!! i do feel bad for dru tho. i imagine it will be hard for her to adjust. i hope someone can help her out.

what a chapter Nia. you totally rock and i can't wait for the next

Neart
10/11/2006 11:40 pm
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Mother of god but I can't wait for the next chapter. Great scenes.

pretty_in_Fangs
10/11/2006 06:48 pm
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Wow. I shoudl write a better review for such a great chapter but.. wow.

SpaceLord
10/11/2006 06:41 pm
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Ohh nasty end for Angelus I must say :)

Can't wait for the next chapter.

sirc
10/11/2006 05:40 pm
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Very gory, but still well done :D

10/11/2006 03:13 pm
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Wow incredaible fic sweetie. This was really good chapter - how many are left out of curiosity do you know? The justice indeed was wild! Where did Connor go? Ohhhh details details I am so intrigued. Great story!

kim
10/11/2006 10:47 am
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Intense!!!! Poor Connor! Where did he go???

Immensely well done. I was on the edge of my seat. Every emotion was so well conveyed - the terror, the anger, the grief, the madness...Tara's relief and renewed strength once Oz joined her side. Wes' brave knightly promise to do all he could for Dawn. Jenner rushing to catch Faith. All just...wow!

I knew you'd kill Angel, too. There was going to be no mercy in this fic after what he did to Dawn. Even if Willow had managed to do the soul spell, I think you still would have had a terrible fate waiting for Angel. Not sad to see Angelus gone, though I'm sad for Angel never getting to know his son. Life's a bitch.

Can't wait for what you've got for us next.

Bigbird
10/11/2006 09:08 am
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Fantastic, absolutely fan fucking tastic!

Oracleholly
10/11/2006 08:11 am
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Oh Goodie, goodie, gum drops and Angel dust!!! I've been a good little girl and lookee at what Auntie Niamh posted...WOW! *praying that Connor's okay* -- Ding dong Angel's dead! la la la la la

Sandyrah
10/11/2006 07:07 am
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YAY!! FInally got rid of Angel, and the hounds got Willow. Good riddance to bad rubbish. More soon though. I wanna know what happened to Connor darn it. I love your stories. I reread them frequently.

10/11/2006 06:47 am
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Oh, wow! Excellent! I finally got to see Spike actually take out Angelus. So often Angelus is protected because of the Angel factor. Thank you for finally killing him off. Great story and we still get to see the punishment of Willow. Looking forward to it. Thanks again.

Esther
10/11/2006 06:23 am
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Whoa, mama, that was well worth the wait. OMG!!!! That was....I'm speechless!! Fantastic! Talk about action, suspense, and what an end to Angelus. WOW!! I'm still reeling from all the emotions I'm going through---just freaking awesome!! Splendid, splendid job!

10/11/2006 06:22 am
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that was perhaps the best destruction of Angel that I've ever read....thank you

RandiGiles
10/11/2006 06:01 am
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Oh. Thats a vivid way to go. Not that Angel didn't deserve to go that way. I just didn't expect it. I love the "You hurt my daughter line"

10/11/2006 05:58 am
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Awesome fight scene's. Angelus dusted knowing that Spike would have more then one child, but what happened to Connor? Who sent him where? Willow or Tara? Hope Sam uses the opportunity of Dru's distration to finish her off. Nice that Giles and Anya had a romantic moment, hoping that Jenner was there to catch Faith. So exciting this was fabulous. Thanks for all your efforts, they are very much appreciated.

Seska
10/11/2006 05:41 am
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Graphic Angel death, Xander humiliation and dog meat Willow - it just gets better and better!

Tamara
10/11/2006 05:30 am
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Ganya kiss!

I really hope Tara is the one who sent the baby away.


Ding, dong! Angel's dead! Now for the wicked witch!

10/11/2006 04:52 am
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*bows before your greatness* Spike dusted Angel :D

Do it again, do it again :D

10/11/2006 04:44 am
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Wow!!!!! That was a GREAT chapter, I just don't know where to start. I hope Conner is okay. I am so glad that Angel is dust, and I can't wait to find out what The Huntsman has in store for Willow. Plus I liked the little Ganya scene

Emilee
10/11/2006 04:39 am
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Yay! Angelus is gone, and Willow's about to get her judgement. But the baby! Where did she send the baby? And which "dead man" will be going to get him back? Of course I could be wrong in assuming that this is what Joyce was refering to. I can't wait for more so we can see. Excellent chapter. As always, I am in awe.

Tahkaullus
11/07/2012 05:52 pm
Let slip the dogs of war         

 I know I've commented on this story before but I just can't help it! This is probably the best I've ever read! Every time I read it, I always get scared when we get to this bit, Willow is terrifying, Connor is in trouble, Angelus is everywhere...and then you leave it on a cliffhanger and I'm still scared out of my wits!

06/13/2007 09:53 pm
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Oh my ... each chapter is so riveting.

11/26/2006 06:37 am
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oh no!!! this is so intensely dramatic, very very well written...i hope someone can help faith in time to save her and connor...willow is truly out of control...

10/04/2006 09:19 pm
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excellent read, thank you. evil place to stop.

carole
10/04/2006 02:51 am
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great to see another chapter of this . i love this fic

10/02/2006 02:29 pm
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okay as always sitting on pins and needles. Love the story. Just so much action that I am going to have to read it again to make sure I got it.

nightshift
10/01/2006 04:19 am
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Your stories should come with warning labels. Here, I'll write the first one. "Warning. Viewer discretion is advised. Perusal of this story will cause the reader to ignore all else until every available chapter is consumed." Love the quotes. Characterization is excellent.
Well, thank you kindly. . . and I love the warning label. I'm really glad you are enjoying it. Thanks bunches.

10/01/2006 12:11 am
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Whew! And the excitement continues. You do this so well, sweetie! Juggling all those people and individual battles. *bows*

09/30/2006 05:06 pm
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Oh this is getting so intense sweetie - I adore this chapter very much!

RandiGiles
09/30/2006 02:56 pm
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Dang Niamh!!! you always know where to leave a cliffy!!!! everything is coming together and its awesome.

sirc
09/30/2006 02:38 pm
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great chapter :D

SpaceLord
09/30/2006 08:56 am
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Well now it's an all out war isn't it. Here are a few more quoutes that are good.

"Men grow tired of women, wine and singing before they grow tired of war" - Some greek I think.

"The object of war is not to die for your country but make the other guy die for his" - Patton (I think) :)

09/30/2006 07:56 am
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Wow, another really excellent chapter. Congratulations on the very effective descriptions of the action. I think you do a great job at pacing for these scenes. Looking forward to the big showdown with the hounds.

09/30/2006 07:09 am
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Intense! I hung on every word of this chapter. It looks as if Willow is about to reap what she has sown. I want to feel sorry for her, but finding it very difficult to summon up any sympathy for her. So many times the others tried to help her find her way, but she chose the path she is on now. Leaving us with yet another cliffie was kinda evil. Cos now I'm gonna be chewing my fingernails down to the quick waiting for your next update. Glad to hear that things are going a bit better for you. May things keep on more smoothly for you. Hope you get to update soon.

09/30/2006 06:35 am
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Tell offspring it worked. Giles didn't need to watch, Anya was right about that. Feeling so bad for Hawkins and Jenner, how will they be able to put this aside. So Willow's to be set in judgement? That's going to be interesting. Maybe they can take her powers away. Can't wait to see Spike take out Angelus. Will Jenner catch Faith and Connor? An exciting chappie. Thanks.

Esther
09/30/2006 05:44 am
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OMG!!!!!! Please, please, more!! I'm at the edge of my seat, freaking out---oh, please, I hope there's more soon!! This is fantastic!!

09/30/2006 03:36 am
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Oh yeah, Willow is about to go down, and not in a good way :P

Tamara
09/30/2006 03:31 am
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I hope whatever the Huntsman (right name?) and his hounds do to Willow will be painful as can be.

kim
09/30/2006 03:21 am
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Somebody catch!!

Tense chapter...I'm on the edge of my seat!

09/30/2006 03:15 am
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nooooooooo....you can't stop there...really really exciting, need more...please :)

Pretty_in_fangs
09/30/2006 01:58 am
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EEp! You can't leave it there! ... Well, Ok, you're the author, but really! ::grin::

And I should have known that title was on its way soon.

Emilee
09/30/2006 01:48 am
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As always an excellent chapter. Can't wait for more. Please don't let anything happen to Faith and the baby. Please?

06/13/2007 09:47 pm
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Glynnis shouldn't have gone against him. {Sighs} Poor Hawkins. He is going to grieve. Dang ... so much action all around in this one.

11/26/2006 06:29 am
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well things seem to be going in their favor at least...loved spike and buffy taking on angel together...and i have to say you've described this fight scene perfectly, i can picture it, no gaps or inconsistencies...very well done :)

09/30/2006 04:09 pm
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wow incrediable well done - wopnderful fight scene and absolutly incrediable ending scene - wonderul emotive - i love it

09/29/2006 06:59 am
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MORE MORE MORE...loving this soooo much!

sirc
09/26/2006 03:29 pm
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Loved it :D

pretty_in_fangs
09/25/2006 07:29 pm
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Wow. I swear, your chapters just keep getting better and better.

09/25/2006 03:12 pm
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Okay, can I just say that I love Jenner. Buffy and Spike are doing everything to help their family and to see Wes step up and help Dawn, Tara and Connor was awesome. Wonder what is going to happen with him and Dawn? And Go Giles for his handling of Dru. I am just glad that Spike and Buffy really have this support system in their fight with Angel. Just love the chapter.

aonadharcach
09/24/2006 07:25 am
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Thanks for the wonderful chapters! Your stories are my favorites and I'm looking forward to the next installment. :)

Sonja
09/23/2006 09:59 pm
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A great story, brilliant, just keep going! I don't normally read any stories unless they are complete but hay...there are exceptions and this is one of them. Congratulations on keeping all the threads & plots together. Magic!

vladt
09/23/2006 09:50 pm
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fantastic read, thank you.

Emilee
09/23/2006 06:54 pm
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You really know how to leave readers wanting more. Can't wait for the next update.

09/23/2006 04:09 pm
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GAH!!!!

CLIFFHANGER AGAIN, YOU EVIL, EVIL WOMAN!!!!

Okay, got that out of my system... *LOL* Can I just say how much I have been enjoying this series of yours? It is probably one of the best ones I've ever read, and I've read a lot of fanfiction! Please please update soon!!

Kathryn
09/23/2006 04:00 pm
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Fantastic!!! I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

kimberly adams
09/23/2006 11:15 am
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sorry its been awhile but I just finished all the new chapters and this story is the best!! I get so excited to see the updates posted!! Keep it coming and I will review faithfully. I promise you that!

Kim :)

09/23/2006 08:42 am
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I'm thrilled and delighted to find that you've given us another non-stop action packed chapter to enjoy. Thank you! I love how protective Spike and Buffy are of each other. And I'm absolutely delighted that Jenner has to decided to weigh in on Spike and Buffy's side. Looks like things are quickly coming to a climax, and I can hardly wait. By the way, hope you're feeling much better, and that autumn will find things going much easier for you.

margaret
09/23/2006 06:41 am
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awesome as usual. can't wait for the next installment

09/23/2006 06:15 am
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I love this story, and I'm so glad you're feeling well enough to write again. Cheers!

09/23/2006 05:38 am
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You know the suspense is killing me, right? You're doing it just to torture me. You can admit it. Between you and Sara...

Awesome as always, darling! Whoooo! Check out the sweetness of Wes and the quick, unconscious smoochies. Total 'awwwe' moment!

Go Spike and Buffy with the tagteam Angel ass kicking!Only those two would take the time to be all sweet and protective of their honey while beating the hell out of the great forehead.

And, ouch! Looks like Dru got a lucky bite in there. She's so gonna wish she'd sunk her fangs into somebody else...

Oh, man, Nia. I'm on pins and needles here, waiting for the next installment.

Adriana
09/23/2006 05:36 am
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Nia, I am on the edge of my seat!!

Amy
09/23/2006 05:24 am
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I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Just thought I'd tell ya... :) Can't wait for more.

09/23/2006 05:11 am
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I feel sorry for Hawkins but he what was going to happen. Great fight scenes. How sweet Wes is to Dawn. They're an awesome team. Now waiting for the hounds to arrive. Just so happy that you've updated, thank you for this amazing fic.

kim
09/23/2006 04:04 am
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That, was intense! You're so good at these kinds of scenes...I've winced in sympathy, and gasped, and cheered...

More, please. Great stuff.

Esther
09/23/2006 03:03 am
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OMG!!!!! More, please!!!

09/23/2006 02:41 am
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Fabulous fight descriptions - I really can picture the action. Normally I zoom over these parts in stories, but you are doing such a great job that I don't want to miss anything.

DizzyB
09/23/2006 01:55 am
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Awesome, absolutely awesome as always. (Talk about alliteration!)

09/23/2006 01:18 am
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I think that this is my favorite story that I'm reading right now. I hope you'll update soon and that real life won't be too harsh.

09/23/2006 01:12 am
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*hugs* is beautiful, great plot, great execution, everything is perfect :(

Tamara
09/23/2006 01:08 am
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Great descriptions of all the action . I could really see it all. I can't wait to see what happens next.

09/23/2006 12:55 am
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amazing chapter. can't wait for the next one.

SpaceLord
09/23/2006 12:53 am
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Oh Glynnis got it.....now how long until the dogs get there? I hope they do some massive damage.....feral dogs from hell should be nice.

Pam S
09/23/2006 12:44 am
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Action packed.. the fight is on.

11/26/2006 02:38 am
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oh no...wonder if it's anybody they know...but even if it's not, it'll be hard for oz to kill her probably...you're writing this battle very well...on to the next chapter :)

Stephanie
09/22/2006 01:51 am
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I ran across this fic while looking through the top tens on the site. I don't think I've gotten a good night's sleep since. I only read at night and have to almost physically tear myself away from the computer and the story so that I can get enough sleep to be able to function at work the next day. Please give us more. I need the end if not more and am not above begging or pleading to get it. Please!!!???!!! More!!!!

sister cuervo
09/21/2006 09:10 pm
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Wow, what a stunning story. I've loved every chapter of this epic and can't wait for the next installment. You've done a teriffic job with plot & characterization, moving seamlessly to weave the intricate threads together. Dialogue is great, very true to form. Love your quotes & lyrics. "Evermore" is an old favourite.
Thanks for writing and hope you're feeling better.

09/19/2006 03:17 am
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I've been working on this story and the first one for a little over a week now. I can't sop reading them. I've finally caught up though to the most recent chapters and I can't wait for more. I love them, and I don't think you should stop until you've finished all of your thoughts on the story! Oh, and I hope you're feeling better!

margaret
09/17/2006 02:37 am
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fab fight scene, can't wait for more. thanks

09/15/2006 08:31 pm
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WOW and the fight continues. I just love how Spike is continually protecting his family with taking the blows meant for Buffy's mid section. And I just feel so bad for all involved. They are trying to do the best they can and Willow just had to show up along with Angel and company. And go for Jenner and Hawkins to join the party... SO MUCH going on.

09/15/2006 07:02 pm
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Ooh, this chapter kept me riveted!  Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Sirc
09/15/2006 06:05 pm
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Well done :)

Kristen
09/15/2006 04:10 pm
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Gah, updates from you are love. I cant wait to see how they fair with all the vampires, and I just know Jenner is going to pick Spike's side right? Update soon!

pretty_in_fangs
09/15/2006 03:07 pm
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Oh, you've done this wonderfully well. I can actually see them all arrayed over the lawn and porch. Wonderful.

Esther
09/15/2006 08:33 am
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Ooh, this was fantab!! I'm literally sitting at the edge of my seat! Oh, mama, I hope Jenner and Hawkins join the fight against Angel. And I'm still freaking out over Joyce's message for Buffy. All in all, wonderful chapter with loads of finger-biting action. Heh, I sound like a movie reviewer. Can't wait for more!!

slinkyPK
09/15/2006 08:21 am
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Whoa! Talk about action-packed thrill rides! Excellent job, Nia! Loved the cool calm of Giles, Oz and Wesley. Giles may be getting on in years, but he's not yet ready for beanbags in the Dayroom or a wheelchair with a seatbelt. Old man's still got quite a bit of fight left in him!

I'm glad it was Wes that dealt with Willow (somewhat). It's fair though. She was endangering his crush and attacking Tara and Anya. The uber-witch shoulda realized she was overdue for a smackdown, even if she is/was outta the game for a few minutes.

As for Oz- nice work on the archery exhibition. Now who's the mini-vamp?

As for all the others- nothing short of beautiful writing and exciting choreography with Spike and Buffy vs. Angel. Hope ya don't mind, but I seriously gotta happy from Xander getting his ass kicked. He's been begging for it for a while.

Man, I'm sooo looking forward to the next chapter, Sweets! This one just flew by so fast!

09/15/2006 08:14 am
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incredable story! I loved the fight scene, the vamp trying to convince himself he didn't love, the actions all mapped out; Icredable scene =- played beutifully in my head@

09/15/2006 07:57 am
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OMG! that was AWESOME! Don't know where to begin. Can't wait to see Spike kick Angelus' ass. Hope it's him and not Buffy. Her man's looking out for her and their baby. Besides he's got alot to get Angelus back for and when is someone going to take out that psycho bitch Dru? Everyone had a role to play and you allowed us to sit back and enjoy watching it all play out. Kudo's to you Niamh. It was kick ass amazing.

DizzyB
09/15/2006 07:44 am
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Ooh! Super as always. Love the suspense you keep building.

09/15/2006 06:38 am
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Hey, sweet. Playing catch up here after falling miles behind.

Things really are heating up, aren't they!? Willow has completely lost the plot now, I hope Tara and Wesley are able to keep Dawn and Connor safe from her.

Eeek...Oz!!

I'm crossing my fingers that Jenner does decide to help, if only for Faith's sake.

Fabulous as always, my dear!

Emilee
09/15/2006 04:37 am
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God That was a well done fight scene. Lots of action. I can't wait for the next update.

vladt
09/15/2006 04:34 am
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powerful read,or for you just the norm. thank you.

09/15/2006 04:07 am
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wow great fight scene. excellent job. felt like i was right there watching it happen. can't wait to see what happens next.

09/15/2006 03:51 am
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Whew! Non-stop action and drama combined. What a rollercoaster of a chapter. Can't help but feel for Hawkins. Kinda hoping that Glynnis will change sides during the battle. I realy, really hope that you will decide to write a sequel to this story. Not only do I want to see the birth of Spike and Buffy's baby (not to mention any other children they may have), I also really want to see what happens with all these other characters. You've brought these characters to life in such a wonderful way that it would be like losing touch with a bunch of dear friends not to see them again. I realize that since I'm not a writer I probably have no idea of just how much blood, sweat and tears go into the creation of a story like this. All I can tell you is that as a reader, I do truly appreciate your labor of love.

kim
09/15/2006 02:03 am
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Intense, fast paced, and still carrying enough depth of emotion to make certain characters sympathetic....the danger feeling is right there. Great job plotting out the fight moves, I know enough about it to tell that you're right on with your combos and responses.

Can't wait for more.

Badia
09/15/2006 01:54 am
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It's always great to see an update on this story. Just please tell me ypu'll be getting rid of angel or willow real soon, the fact that their both still alive is driving me nuts! Plz keep up the great updates!

-+
09/15/2006 01:51 am
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Seska
09/15/2006 01:17 am
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From the first paragraph of Origins, through the Bridge and right up to now this story has enthralled me. I read and re-read, still cry at the sad parts and updates have me bouncing in my seat. I don't want the story to end, so I beg on bended knees for another sequel. Also, found Kirsten's Story on your LJ and did a little happy dance. Please say you'll give us more of that too???? You're the Best, Lady....

RandiGiles
09/15/2006 12:49 am
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THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!

06/13/2007 09:36 pm
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I so hope that Willow is going to pay

11/26/2006 02:29 am
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i have to say it's probably what she deserves at this point,and will certainly simplify matters a lot...good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next :)

sirc
09/14/2006 08:58 pm
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Well done :D

All4Spike
09/13/2006 11:23 pm
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Over the past few days I've read right through 'Origins' and 'Revelations', and I'm sitting here panting for more.
Pure genius, that's the only word for it all.
A sequel? Absolutely Imperative. We have to find out about how Buffy & Spike raise their children and Connor and follow their magical exploits.
Poor Willow, but she always did have that touch of arrogance about her abilities, and the control thing.
I'm delighted to see Xander finally beginning to question his irrational jealous hatred for Spike.
You've ket everyone so much in character it's as if I'm reading about an actual season of programmes... bl**dy brilliant!
Keep up the good work, I'll be checking in daily impatiently waiting for updates...

lilmamaday
09/12/2006 11:55 pm
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I just caught up on the updated chapters and I am still loving this story! I for one would love to read a sequel to this! You are one of my favorite authors and I can't wait to see how this one ends!

Bigbird
09/10/2006 07:21 pm
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I'd forgotten about this one lovely to finally catch up with it...keep them coming I love this, it keeps getting better.

DizzyB
09/10/2006 05:49 am
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Loved it, as usual. I'd be thrilled to see a sequel and would gladly follow it as I have the others.

vladt
09/10/2006 05:15 am
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what a great chapter, thank you. love where you have brought us. a wee bit of tension? great tale.

kathy
09/10/2006 12:29 am
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oh, how i have enjoyed the revelations stories! thank you! I've said it before, but i hope you continue with the story/trilogy. i'm not a writer, so i can't imagine how hard it can be to write sometimes. All i know is i've read fanfiction for a while now and you are the author i have enjoyed THE MOST. Thank you again.

09/09/2006 09:17 pm
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Love this fic. Thanks for giving us another wonderfully intense chapter. So glad that you have Xander doing a little self-examination and starting to see the light. Wish Willow wasn't so lost, but I don't think anyone can reach her now. You are a unbelievably talented writer. I would absolutely love to see a sequel to this fic, but even if the muse never moves you to write one, I hope that you will continue to write. I would be more than happy to read anything you'd care to write about Spike and Buffy. :)

pretty_in_fangs
09/09/2006 02:16 pm
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Oh, this is getting so good. Everyone's converging and I can't wait to see what happens.

09/09/2006 02:03 pm
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Strewth, the climax is really building, you really have me on tenterhooks - still waiting to find out what temporary thing is going to happen to Spike???

I'm really enjoying this, I check for updates most days and am eager for more. I generally try not to be too pushy in asking for more chapters / stories since I know you have a life to lead,but you can count me as interested in another story in this series if you have the time and interest to write one.

09/09/2006 01:32 pm
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Yay for Xander - getting a grip at the last minute. Things are really getting exciting now! Love the way you have all these things going on simultaneously all building towards the final battle.

09/09/2006 01:22 pm
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Another excellent chapter. I'd almost forgotten about the Huntsman - great to see him back and hunting for Willow. Looking forward to more.

Schehrezade
09/09/2006 12:29 pm
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WOW!! Am itching for more sweets! And it's about time those hounds were unleashed on you know who cos it's time to pay the piper *g*

Looks like Xander's lame ass I saved the world cos of a crayong line won't be happening anytime soon ;)

And may I add I will read the sequel and still beg for more

*hugs*
XXXX

Martha Biggs
09/09/2006 11:17 am
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I really hope you do continue with the story. It is very well written and I am enjoying it. Please don't stop

09/09/2006 09:50 am
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Wonderful chapter! Non stop action! I will be sorry when this work is finished, so please, please write another when this is done.

09/09/2006 09:04 am
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Ooh, I hope they get her, this time.

09/09/2006 08:50 am
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Wow sweetie that was in incrediable story! I loved it - I can't wait to see what happens next - your evil willow is just so evil. I loves it!

Emilee
09/09/2006 07:01 am
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Also I'd really like to see the interest between Jenner and Faith play out, and I know that would definately need another installment. So...'Please sir, may I have some more?'

Emilee
09/09/2006 06:58 am
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First let me say that you really do like those evil cliffhangers don't you? Arghh, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. I can't tell you enough how excellent this story is. As for a sequel to this, I would be happy and eager to read any new installment to the Origins Saga. I don't have much of an attention span, and I don't usually like WIP's for that very reason, but yours is just too good to resist. Besides, I admit it, I'd really like to see Buffy and Spike's baby born and it doesn't look like it's gonna happen in this story. Whether you decide to continue on or not, the Series is absolutely awesome, and I can't believe that you'd have trouble finding interested readers if you decide to go on with it.

RandiGiles
09/09/2006 06:02 am
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Belive me theres still interest!

09/09/2006 05:49 am
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All I can say is "oh I for one would love a sequel"... I got caught up with Origins and then Revelations right on the heels. So much happening for all of them.

KristenA
09/09/2006 05:31 am
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Deff. interest in reading a sequal here!

This chapter...god I could really feel things falling apart. An injured Dawn hiding as best she could with Connor was a really powerful image, as well as the tears that Buffy had on her cheeks.

Cant wait for more!

Esther
09/09/2006 05:16 am
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Oh mama, I'm at the edge of my seat right now, freaking out with all that action. Splendid job!!

Ooh, and there's tons of interest from me---please, continue with the story. This is too good to leave without having the story told completely. You're doing a splendid job and I'll be sticking around for however long you write it.

09/09/2006 03:57 am
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I've been reading this from the beginning, and **bows head in shame** rather stingy with the commenting, for which I apologize. Just love it to pieces, and if you have any doubts that a sequel is wanted, put them to rest. There seems like plenty of story left to come, and I'll be here reading until you dot your last I and cross your last T and add the final period. Brava!

Jess
09/09/2006 03:48 am
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Definitely go for the sequel if you've got the ideas. I think this story is awesome!

ariadne
09/09/2006 02:44 am
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miss i wanna be voldermort is classic!!!! i laughed so hard.

wonderful chapter as always Nia. can't wait to read the next one. i would LOVE LOVE LOVE a third instalment!!!

09/09/2006 01:27 am
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WOW another awesome chapter.. And i would love to see another sequel to these. In this came more is better :)

Kiliana
09/09/2006 01:25 am
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Yay! I've been waiting with bated breath for your updates, I love this story! Thank you.

As for a sequel, you write it, and I'll read it as fast as I can. Your story telling is fantastic, and you really have explored a lot of ideas that the show's writers never got to. Keep up the good work!

09/09/2006 01:15 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
You're kidding right? of course we want a sequel. I'd love nothing better than to see this through all of Spike and Buffy's life including their children. I want to see Spike be a father to both Conner and his amazing abilites and their own children. Hope this doesn't mean that Xander's going down as well as Willow since the hounds have been let loose. Jenner had better get there before Glynnis is dust. Gosh! this such an exciting, nail biting conclusion. So much is at stake, to much to lose, everything to win. Just love it. Hope you can update soon, amazing chapter, thanks for the incredible read.

Cat
09/09/2006 01:13 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
Holy Sh*t!! This is gettin' good. PLEASE continue!! Thank You.

kim
09/09/2006 12:58 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
Oooo, more Huntsman!

Yay, for Xander, except he's going to get himself killed, now.

The tension is really mounting.

SpaceLord
09/09/2006 12:38 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
Cry havoc and lets slip the dogs of war!!!!
I damn near used that quote. . . .

09/09/2006 12:34 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
Oh yeah Willow is sooooo going down :P

Anne
09/09/2006 12:19 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
Wonderful chapter as always !!!!
yes please continue I never get tired of reading what you write.

Tamara
09/09/2006 12:01 am
Comes a rattle and hum         
Oh, there is definitely in a sequel, right here! Great chapter. I love how well coordinated you have everything. I thought Xander might end up being the distraction for Willow not Angel , Dru , harmony and Glynnis. Looks like everybody's headed to the showdown at Revello Drive. I hope the good guys win.

Seska
09/08/2006 11:49 pm
Comes a rattle and hum         
You have me on the edge of my seat! I've followed this story from the beginning and I absolutely vote for a sequel. We MUST know what happens with Buffy and Spike's children.....

Janet
03/06/2011 09:39 pm
Unto the breach         
I'm re-reading the origins series again, for the millionth time, and thinking once more how not only is it the very best spuffy story/series i've read, but how it is an amazing standalone excellent series.
Even if someone were not a Buffy fan, this story would capture and amaze them.
You are a supremely gifted writer Nia...and I hope you realize that.
Please continue writing spuffy, or anything else you feel like writing...lol
But your writing??????
Never gets old, never palls and always makes me want to come back for MORE MORE MORE
lOVE YOU GIRL
Janet

06/13/2007 09:29 pm
Unto the breach         
Oh .... Willow makes me so mad that I just want to spit fire and kill her myself.

11/26/2006 01:48 am
Unto the breach         
oh man...and the house has no protection...buffy and spike need to hurry up and get back there..i love how taras standing up to willow...on to more :)

DizzyB
09/05/2006 07:40 am
Unto the breach         
Awesome update, as always. Love this story!

MARGARET
09/04/2006 02:28 am
Unto the breach         
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE. WILLOW DOESN'T SEEM TO GET IT, I HOPE ALL THE CRYP6TIC WARNINGS HELP THE GOOD GUYS. GREAT STORY

09/02/2006 01:32 am
Unto the breach         
Willow just will never listen. I am just glad that Joyce was there to try and help Anya and Tara. They needed the little help with confidence. And I love the fighting scene. Qlynnis is going to get herself killed. Spike is going to hunt her down completely. And what does Angel have planned since he is going to Revello Drive?

Catrine
09/01/2006 09:36 am
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Keep the chapters coming:) I wonder what sacrifice that is needed to be done

09/01/2006 08:48 am
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OH my sweetie - what an icredable chapter - this is simply an absoltly amazing story! I am truly in awe at your talent. The evil Willow takes my breath away and the angel and dru scenes are incredable. Wonderful woderful fic sweetie~

pretty_in_fangs
09/01/2006 06:02 am
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Oh my. I can't wait to see the next update. This one was fabulous, as always.

09/01/2006 05:46 am
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Thanks for giving us another wonderful chapter. That was intense. I have a feeling that Joyce's somewhat cryptic warning involves a sacrfice on Spike's part. Can't wait to see what happens next. Really, really love this fic. :)

Emilee
09/01/2006 04:23 am
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Oh can't wait for more! This just keeps getting better and more intense. Excellent work!

kim
09/01/2006 04:21 am
Unto the breach         
Intense chapter!

Love Joyce being the emissary, too.

vladt
09/01/2006 03:19 am
Unto the breach         
exciting chapter, excellent read, thank you. there was somethingelse... let's see, exciting, excellent and extremely evil. a good kind of evil. thanks again.

Esther
09/01/2006 02:03 am
Unto the breach         
Awesome update!! Oooh, now I'm really wondering about Joyce's message. And boy howdy, those fight scenes (the four against the vamps and Willow/Tara) were fantastic!! Can't wait for more!!

09/01/2006 12:44 am
Unto the breach         
Awesome update! Loved the fight scene. Spuffy are poetry in motion. I was so hoping that Glynnis would come around, oh well, if she get's dusted Hawkins tried. Not again! Spike has to sacrifice himself again! Too bad they can't get Angelus to do it. Great chappie, thanks for this awesome fic.

09/01/2006 12:03 am
Unto the breach         
oh shit, talk about bouncing from one cliffie to the next. Eagerly awaiting the next chappie while biting off all my nails :D

06/13/2007 09:22 pm
More dangerous to lose         
Uh oh ... Man Willow is just ... grrrr ... I really hate it when she is such a bitch. She is so arrogant. Yeah about the surprise there at the end.

11/26/2006 01:11 am
More dangerous to lose         
oh yea, joyce!! :) willow's making me nervous, though...hope the kids stay safe...on to more :)

sirc
08/31/2006 06:16 pm
More dangerous to lose         
great chapter :D

08/28/2006 02:46 pm
More dangerous to lose         
Another great chapter! Interesting background on Jenner and the relationships in the order. Like the way you write your crazy witch Willow. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thaks again for giving us this story.

08/28/2006 04:01 am
More dangerous to lose         
Boy, this is one powerful chapter. Talk about action-packed. I absolutely love it. And Joyce suddenly appearing - that was completely unexpected and just inspired. What a humdinger of a cliffie. Can't wait for the next update. :)

Kimberly Adams
08/27/2006 11:18 am
More dangerous to lose         
Great chapter and update! I love this story and you are a fantastic author. I had to print most of the story a while ago but have read them thru several times so I plan on reviewing all your new updates, I promise that. Just please, respond once and let me know you got this. My email is linnea2sweet@yahoo.com
thanks!

Kristen
08/27/2006 07:43 am
More dangerous to lose         
Gah...I LOVE when you update but I really hate cliffhangers!

This was a great chapter and I cant wait for more.

I hope you can update soon!

vladt
08/27/2006 06:54 am
More dangerous to lose         
wonderful read. wonderful tale. thank you.

clancy_s
08/26/2006 03:02 am
More dangerous to lose         
Wow, what a great chapter. Interesting plot twists and character interactions, Joyce's arrival at the end was a real surprise, and very welcome. I get the feeling we're heading towards a climax on several fronts, I eagerly await developments.

JO
08/26/2006 01:11 am
More dangerous to lose         
I love this story, can't wait for more. Hope things go better for you. Thank you for sharing it.

08/25/2006 05:14 pm
More dangerous to lose         
Go Joyce!!!!!!! I am just glad that she is there to help back up Tara and Anya. And Xander is really getting on my ever loving last nerve. I never understood how he could have so many blinders on and still be friends with them.

Jenner is going to kill her or Spike one if they get their hands on her. That was not a really smart move.

And Angel is far game. Go Buffy for making that clear.

Willow has really overstepped her bounds. She has no idea what she is doing. Or maybe she does. It is all about ME ME ME... Never taking anyone else into consideration.

Love the Dawn and Connor sleep scene.

08/25/2006 10:13 am
More dangerous to lose         
You have my deepest sympathy for your loses and so sorry for what life's been dealing you of late but I'm happy to know that you're coping with everything and things have settled down. Just another amazing chapter, it was so worth the wait. I'm still hoping that Glynnis cares enough about Jenner and Hawkins that she'll fight from within. So thankful that Buffy's resolved herself to Angelus' dusting. Can't wait to see how much damage Lawson's little bomb did and Willow's so out of control and she dosen't have clue. If Xander's in the way during this battle, I hope that Spike saves his ass and Xander know's it. As always fantasic job. Just love this series, great to know that there will be more. Great read. *hugs* Thanks.

Tina
08/25/2006 07:29 am
More dangerous to lose         
Yippee! Updates make me happy. Hmm, what will Joyce do?

08/25/2006 06:48 am
More dangerous to lose         
...both girls turned around to see the shimmering image of Joyce Summers standing behind them

Now that was unexpected! And very welcome, indeed! You've been holding out on me, Missy!

So delighted with this chapter! All the craziness coing on. Feels like we're down to the wire and I can't help but live on the edge of my seat to see what happens next!

08/25/2006 06:16 am
More dangerous to lose         
Great chapter, can't wait 'til Joyce kicks Willows skanky butt

Esther
08/25/2006 05:45 am
More dangerous to lose         
OMG!!!!!! JOYCE!!!! Truly, a wonderful chapter!! WOW!! Can't wait for the next one!! I'd write more, but my mind is still all hyper cause of JOYCE!!!!

Emilee
08/25/2006 04:52 am
More dangerous to lose         
Wow. Definitely a lot happening in this chapter. I can't wait til the next update. How many cliffhangers is this? 2...3...4? Excellent work as always.

kim
08/25/2006 03:32 am
More dangerous to lose         
Joyce? Whoa....

08/25/2006 02:57 am
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08/25/2006 02:56 am
More dangerous to lose         
I'm glad things are settling down for you, sweetie. Exciting chapter - lots of stuff going down now, huh? And where the hell did Joyce come from? lol Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Tamara
08/25/2006 02:01 am
More dangerous to lose         
Love the comparison between Jenner and Angel.I especially love how he tried to blame everything on Dru and Spike. Not taking responsibility is in his character.

And Joyce shows up to kick Willow's ass. Bring it on!Yer gonna lose, Willow!

pretty_in_fangs
08/25/2006 01:59 am
More dangerous to lose         
Woah.

08/25/2006 01:06 am
More dangerous to lose         
Okay, that? Was evil. And fantastic. I bow before your fantastic evilness. ;-)

MARGARET
08/25/2006 12:46 am
More dangerous to lose         
GREAT UPDATE, THANKS SO MUCH. WOW, JOYCE IS HERE!

08/24/2006 11:55 pm
More dangerous to lose         
OMG OMG you rock you rock bows at your feet then kisses em .... I love you great chapter - beutifully written - love joyce and the evil willow ! You are so fab!

08/24/2006 11:30 pm
More dangerous to lose         
Great chapter. Love it. Things are happening really fast now.

06/13/2007 09:15 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Uh oh Glynnis is really bad news.

DreamsofSpike
11/24/2006 09:29 pm
Planning is indispensible         
oh no...now there's a traitor, filling angel in on all the secrets they've been talking about...that's just great *sigh* great chapter, though, in a non-sarcastic way :)

sirc
08/31/2006 05:57 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Not really surprised about Glynnis jumping ships. There's been plenty of hints, at least for me.

Great chapter :)

Lou
08/21/2006 11:11 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Great chapter. Dawn's turmoil was particularly good.

08/21/2006 12:15 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Nooooooooooooooo... Okay the bad thing about catching up is now i have no more of your ficcie to read! This is so freaking good! I love it - i knew that vamp was going to betray them. Evil evil - how dare she side with angelus - evil!

kathy
08/08/2006 08:33 pm
Planning is indispensible         
i am still really enjoying this story. I'm so excited when i see a new chapter! i've been reading since the first Origins story and have even gone back and read it again. i hope things get better for you and you keep going with this story. no pressure, just when you're ready. thank you for all your hard work, you are a really talanted writer. Best wishes and good luck!

08/05/2006 11:04 am
Planning is indispensible         
Ooh, a traitor.  Can't wait to see what this brings.

08/04/2006 10:17 pm
Planning is indispensible         
uh oh. . . glynnis is going to be a problem. . . yikes this could be very bad

pretty_in_fangs
08/03/2006 11:28 pm
Planning is indispensible         
I'm so happy to see an update. I love this story, and I'm happy for more whenever it becomes available. I can't wait to see how this battle turns out.

SpaceLord
08/03/2006 08:17 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Ohhh Glynnis is turning traitor is she....well well this should be interesting.

Hope u feel better soon and can get back to writing and doing what ever else u like to do.

08/03/2006 05:41 pm
Planning is indispensible         
First of all this is me, smiling from ear to ear about the new chapter.

HOT DOG!!!!! Glynnis is so going to get it. I just hope that they can stop her before she makes a mess of all of this.

Glad that Dawn was having a breakthrough in her thinking about herself. I am happy that she had that interaction with Connor.

Love Lawson thinking about Anya and Giles.

Buffy and Spike taking more of a parental standpoint on the kids and the making sure they can take care of themselves. Spike making sure that Anya could take care of Dawn and Connor.

Finding out about Jenner's past. What does Angel have planned. Just an overall GREAT CHAPTER...

Hope the RL issues are now okay. And hope your move goes smooth.

vladt
08/03/2006 07:55 am
Planning is indispensible         
hope you're starting to feel better. post when you want, this is one of those tales, that when you see a chapter posted, you are elated. thanks for the fine read.

kim
08/03/2006 07:49 am
Planning is indispensible         
Hey, stuff happens. RL has to come first.

Excellent chapter. I'm just waiting for the mansion to go BOOM!

08/03/2006 05:41 am
Planning is indispensible         
Thanks for the this chapter. There are so many players now and knowing who's playing for whom and why is mind boggling. I will wait for more story.

08/03/2006 03:57 am
Planning is indispensible         
No need to apologize for the delay in updating. Just totally love this story and am happy to see a new chapter whenever one appears. Anticipation just makes reading a new chapter that much sweeter. And that was especially true of this one. The scene with Dawn and Connor was really touching. Now the cliffie with Glynnis and Angel - that was kinda evil. lol But I love it anyway!

08/03/2006 03:55 am
Planning is indispensible         
Sorry that you've been ill, hope all that heat isn't making your recovery harder. I live in central Florida and we've barely hit 95. Anything that you write is worth waiting for, so take your time. Another great chapter, Spuffy are really parents now and I'm glad that Dawn's not taking her pain out on little Conner. I hope that Glynnis is working from within and not against them. Update when you can and take care.

Judy
08/03/2006 01:13 am
Planning is indispensible         
As usual, another great chapter. Hope you feel better soon.

Judy
08/03/2006 01:12 am
Planning is indispensible         

08/03/2006 12:33 am
Planning is indispensible         
I love this, I can wait for more, the quality of your work ensures it :) Thanks for sharing.

Esther
08/02/2006 11:52 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Oh, hon, I'm sorry about everything that's happening to you. No rush on my part, sweetie, because I know how RL takes precedence over everything. Take care!!

This update is awesome!! Gosh, I don't know where to begin, except to say---WOW!! Love the Dawn/Connor scene--caused me to cry for her pain, but also for her to possibly heal. The rest was just as fantab--and I knew Glynnis would betray them. Argh! Ooh, can't wait for another!!

08/02/2006 11:49 pm
Planning is indispensible         
Oh yeah the plot deepens :d

11/24/2006 08:02 pm
Hymn Before Action         
lol...so they're using the bomb idea...pretty cool...i love buffy's teasing spike about being a pretty boy...lol great chapter, loved it :)

08/21/2006 12:07 pm
Hymn Before Action         
oh my - Sam rigged a bomb! This rocks - I wonder what is going to happen - to harmony to the vampires there - this is such a good story! i love it!

chris j
07/30/2006 06:27 pm
Hymn Before Action         
Please stop apologizing for not updating fast enough. You don't owe us readers anything; it's a privilege just to read the remarkable story you've written. Thank you for writing one of the most believable and heartfelt spuffy relationships I have ever read. Sorry for not posting reviews for the previous chapters, but I just read Orgins and Revelations in two days, and wanted to wait until i got to the end. Now, please update quickly, because I'm desperate for more.

07/21/2006 02:03 pm
Hymn Before Action         
Right. I've just spent a few days (well, sleepless nights, mostly) catching up on this story. I can't go through and review every piece, nor can I tell you everything I *love* about this. So I'll babble about my favorites.

-Where *did* Dawn come from? It makes so much sense that it'd be Spike, since the monks chose Buffy because she could protect her. Plus, if you're going to hide energy in a person, they'd better be damn strong...
-Tara's alive! (so far) Yay, because killing her was much of the bad. And I always felt robbed of time with her. And her and Oz ('she's pack') fit so well together, whatever their relationship.
-Giles isn't a judgemental bastard (as I seem to being seeing a lot lately).
-And Wesley! That's all I can say really, as I'm starting to drool on the keyboard...
-Anya. She's still annoying (but in a makes-you-smile sort of way), still funny, still ever so human.
-Faith. Yay! And to see her *thinking* about her decisions, tempering her instincts with her experience, well, you do it beautifully. And now that she gets the whole Slayer-Vamp thing (which makes total sense if you buy the whole 'knocked up by demon dust' Creation of the Slayer Theory - they are two sides of the same coin, to use a much over-used phrase), who knows what's in store...
-I'm still holding out hope for Xander to get his head out of his arse before he loses it, but obviously that's not my call!

And Spike and Buffy. I love that the angst isn't *from* them, but around them. And I like seeing Buffy accepting love, returning it and being open and honest about it. I would've liked to see that revelation play on screen. (And may I please have points for not mentioning, in detail, how much I dislike the cookie speech?)

Generally, you've gotten me into each and every character's head, which I appreciate immensly, as you've got quite a cast you're juggling.

I also like the Celtic mythology and characters, so that's really exciting for me.

It seems like this has been a real struggle for you, but I just wanted to say that, for my part, it was worth it. I'm just really awed and so completely in love with this story, you've no idea. So, please, take your time and keep it up!

Thanks again for the great entertainment (and lots of new ideas in my own head...),
Christina

~*~Tasha~*~
07/18/2006 03:00 am
Hymn Before Action         
EXCELLENT update ... I look forward to the next chapter to see what happens. I've always said this is an awesome story, and I always look forward to more.

Need to see what happened to Willow when she went all emotional magic wonky, etc.

sirc
07/16/2006 10:30 am
Hymn Before Action         
great chapter :D

Lou
07/13/2006 08:54 pm
Hymn Before Action         
I've only caught up with this mammoth over the last week or so and have to say it is superb. Brilliant plotting and sharp characters have carried it from quiet beginnings to masterly excitement now. Kudos to you!

07/10/2006 02:54 am
Hymn Before Action         
Gah, I love your writing! I cant wait to see what happens next and how they will deal with Willow. She really deserves a good punch to the face to knock some sense back into her. Update soon!

Emilee
07/06/2006 05:23 pm
Hymn Before Action         
Glad you got that writer's block under control. *knock wood* Excellent chapter. I love the character development with Lawson. He was an intriguing character on ATS and I felt cheated that his time was so short. I also like the sparks (and I'm not imagining them right?) between Faith and Jenner. I would love to see that play out. Nice Spuffiness in theis chapter. It was needed. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

07/06/2006 02:36 pm
Hymn Before Action         
awesome chapter. I am glad that at least for a little while Buffy and Spike are having this time. Love Lawson, and hope he can get to "enjoy" his unlife to the fullest. Spike should be a great teacher. Faith really wanting to follow some rules and work with the group. Just so much..... What do they all have in store next???

07/06/2006 08:58 am
Hymn Before Action         
Go Sam!! Just got caught up with this fab tale. And so it begins . . . ??

Emily
07/06/2006 08:39 am
Hymn Before Action         
As you can tell, it is very late for me to be writing a review, but i just want to say that these past few chapters have been really great. I want to commend you on working through your writer's block, and doing so well. We (your fans) support you everystep of the way:)

vladt
07/06/2006 07:30 am
Hymn Before Action         
excellent update, thank you. this is an exceptional read. layers, within layers. fun . love it.

07/06/2006 06:56 am
Hymn Before Action         
Great Chapter. I'm so glad that you brought back Lawson. I really like the way you are using all of the characters to build up the tension. It's tricky handling so many plot threads, but you are doing a great job. Thanks!

fanxstitch
07/06/2006 06:45 am
Hymn Before Action         
This story keeps getting better and better. can't wait to see what happens next. Wonderfully written, every word.

Verda
07/06/2006 06:03 am
Hymn Before Action         
So glad for the update, it was great. Good thing I had neither ice cream nor waffles in my freezer as I had a very late dinner. Loved the way you described Spike's fearlessness, just like a vampiric James Dean. Who was Lawson thinking about...Spike or Buffy? How'd Harmony get into the mix? Tell your muse how much your fans love this story, maybe it will help? Update when you can, we'll be waiting.

07/06/2006 05:10 am
Hymn Before Action         
And so it begins, indeed! Looking forward to a lot of excitement coming up soon!

Oracleholly
07/06/2006 05:09 am
Hymn Before Action         
ooohhh Sam is so freaking cool. I've really liked how you've expanded his role. Interesting confusion on Faith's part about Willow. Still wondering about that scene in the last chapter with the Huntsman's master.

07/06/2006 05:09 am
Hymn Before Action         
ooo here it comes, yay! another great chapter as usual

Adriana
07/06/2006 04:18 am
Hymn Before Action         
I can't wait for the big confrontation. You've been building up to it for quite a while now.
Oh, and I'd love to see a Faith and Jenner fic sometime in the future. :)

07/06/2006 04:06 am
Hymn Before Action         
So glad to see an update of this story as it happens to be a favorite of mine. I love what you've done with Lawson. You've taken a character that made a brief appearance in one episode and have made him into a very real personality. And you always give us such warm, touching scenes between Spike and Buffy. And now you have Harmony making an appearance. That's kinda neat. Knowing Harmony, she won't take kindly to any punishment Angelus decides to dish out. Might even go over the the Slayer's team. Looking forward to the next installment. :)

Tamara
07/06/2006 03:38 am
Hymn Before Action         
I'm starting to feel sorry for Harmony. I don't think she realizes how seriously fubar Angel is. Maybe she'll get lucky and go up with Lawson's bomb before he has time to do any serious damage.

Esther
07/06/2006 02:58 am
Hymn Before Action         
Ooh, that was beyond fantastic...it was splendid!! I loved every word of it! And that Spuffy scene was too adorable. Oooh, can't wait for more!!

pretty_in_fangs
07/06/2006 02:36 am
Hymn Before Action         
Ooooh... I sense an impending final showdown.

jeanie
07/06/2006 02:00 am
Hymn Before Action         
alright, who has the baby? i hope it was tara or dawn, but i do not thinkg so (opem window), although no alarm going off. great update as always.

Sarah
07/06/2006 01:49 am
Hymn Before Action         
I love this story, it makes me very happy when you update! Keep working through the writers block, it's worth it!

07/06/2006 01:29 am
Hymn Before Action         
wow awesome chapter. can't wait for the next one

07/06/2006 01:07 am
Hymn Before Action         
*snorts* I am begining to like Sam :P

Bigbird
07/06/2006 12:46 am
Hymn Before Action         
So glad to see this story taking off again, have been reading it from the beginning and really like it!

DizzyB
07/06/2006 12:44 am
Hymn Before Action         
YESS! Too cool of Sam. Love the interactions you've created. Love your original characters. Love this story. Love you. Anything else? Oh, yes. Would love another update! :)

07/06/2006 12:41 am
Hymn Before Action         
OH brilliant as usual...I wait with great anticipation.

11/24/2006 07:23 pm
The enemy of my enemy         
two more allys firmly on their side...things should go better now..we'll see soon, won't we? :) great chapter

08/21/2006 12:02 pm
The enemy of my enemy         
wow i love the siring bits of this chapter * excellant story sweetie!

~*~Tasha~*~
07/18/2006 02:51 am
The enemy of my enemy         
Ohhhhh ... go Lawson. I like seeing his character in this as an ally. Very nice. I wonder what is going to happen with Jenner next. Glynnis is a bit bitchy, and I'm worried she will sell out to Angelus.

Good update.

sirc
07/04/2006 12:48 pm
The enemy of my enemy         
great chapter

Verda
07/03/2006 07:19 am
The enemy of my enemy         
Have a feeling that if Jenner sees something happen to Faith, he'll enter the fight. Lawson won't be alone anymore, now that he's got Spike and his family, hope he survives. Can't wait to see what you do about Willow and Angelus. Will the hounds get what they want and will Angelus be ensouled again or dusted. As a side note, do you have any say in who will play Dr. Donovan when they cast the role? You know James does great accents? Just somthing to think about. Eagerly awaiting your next up date.

07/01/2006 04:08 am
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Okay. So happy to see the chapter. I am so glad that at least Jenner will stand down.. Don't know if his side will stand down or just give Angel and Dru a heads up.. What a way for Faith to find out about the new itit bity Buffy.. And knew Lawson was special. Just glad that Buffy was there when they perform the ritual.

Oracleholly
06/30/2006 07:35 am
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Great chapter!!! Love it, more in the family. I'm so glad Lawson is coming in the fold.

06/30/2006 06:05 am
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So happy to see a new chapter. Love this story and am always anxious to see what's coming next in this saga. Love the way you're expanding the vampire mythos in the Buffy universe. looking forward to the next update.

06/29/2006 11:30 pm
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Still loving this story! :) ~ Jenner agreed; and now he'll be neutral at last. Like Spike uses to say: Magic has always consequences yet I thought being protected sounds good. But on the hellmouth? Who knows what can happen there. ~ And Faith knows now that Buffy is pregnant; almost the last one to know, huh? And very unexpected for her. ~ But it seems the hounds have the task to protect Buffy. ~ And I'm sure Buffy prefers this ritual above the other *gg* (SR is down so you'll get your review here)

MARAGET
06/29/2006 07:50 pm
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GREAT UPDATE, I'M HAPPY LAWSON HAS SOME FAMILY NOW, I ALWAYS FELT SORRY FOR HIM

Bigbird
06/29/2006 06:07 pm
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Glad to see this again - went back and read from the beginning last week so this was just in time ;-) as you can tell I love this fic!

kathy
06/29/2006 05:31 pm
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yeah for new chapters! i'm still lovin' this story so much! i know it's slow going for you, but i hope things get better and the words start flowing again. great job and keep up the good work.

ahigh
06/29/2006 02:20 pm
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I'm so sorry you are having a rough time writing this story but I can tell you that it is worth the wait every time. I love the opening sequence where you see what is going on through Giles' point of view and I love the contrast in characters of Oz and Xander. I always love when Spike bites someone so I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully it comes easier than the last.

SpaceLord
06/29/2006 01:40 pm
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Weee bloodletting this is so cool. I just love this story and all the characters in it.

06/29/2006 09:23 am
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Nice chapter.  And, go Lawson.  I couldn't help but like him.  Nice to see he's got a place here.  :)

Richard
06/29/2006 08:19 am
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A very good chapter. You're at your best when things are unfolding, one after another. This is more difficult as the story reaches a climax and gains focus since focus is anti-epic. Probably because the pacing synchronizes with the main "action", which isn't always that interesting, and desynchronizes from everything else. Yet despite the difficulties you still manage to retain the expansiveness and even add new details.

Having said all that, this chapter could have been better. 5 out of 6 scenes are strong and 1 is weak. The problem is that the weak scene is both the last, which leaves a definite impression, and the longest. That's actually why it's weak; it's too long for the amount of new meaningful things (ideas, events, thoughts OR emotions) in it. Quite a bit of that scene is just reiterating known things (Sam has no loyalty to Angelus) or justifying an obvious decision (Sam retaining so much humanity).

06/29/2006 06:21 am
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another good chapter. i'm just waitin for the huntsman to get willow so the story can move onto the angelus killing!

Tina
06/29/2006 04:13 am
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I'm practically doing a Snoopy dance every time that I see you've updated. No worries about the time, they're worth the wait.

06/29/2006 03:10 am
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Great update - lots of explanations - and it sounds like the Scoobies have some help coming in the form of the Huntsman - his boss didn't sound pleased...Faith and Jenner, huh? Could almost be a whole other story, couldn't it? *plants plot bunny and runs* *hugs*

Esther
06/29/2006 03:04 am
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Oooh, this is def. worth the wait. Great chapter!! Oh man, so much I could talk about, but I'm keeping it short. Just...WOW!

Seska
06/29/2006 02:13 am
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While anyone can write fanfic, there are a gifted few who can tell a story and bring it to life. Sadly, Nan will write no more but I eagerly await updates from you and Barb. You give me something to look forward to....

pretty_in_fangs
06/29/2006 02:03 am
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Yay! So nice to see Lawson joining the family.
And to see an update, of course. Wonderful.

Tamara
06/29/2006 01:04 am
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Excellent chapter. Great job pointing out that Willow is dangerous not only because of her level of power but because of her mental state .

06/29/2006 12:53 am
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Brlliant as usual and as usual I just have to ask for MORE :)

Emilee
06/29/2006 12:40 am
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Excellent addition. You do such great work. Believe me your updates are worth the wait, and I'll be patiently, well, not really :), waiting for the next chapter when you do get it written.

Pam S
06/28/2006 11:25 pm
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Enjoyed the update.. ohhhh.. its always about the blood.

04/20/2008 08:20 am
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This story is great. I am soo caught up in the interaction between Spike and Buffy. It's just fabulous. Keep up the great work.

11/24/2006 05:31 pm
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i have a feeling i know what his decision's gonna be, and in the end he just might end up helping them...great chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:55 am
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CH 55 - excellant story - i love your faith - she is very well done- i hope that jenner falls for her hard ! This is so excellant i love it!

~*~Tasha~*~
07/18/2006 02:41 am
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Whoa ... cliffie there. I'm glad the next chapter is up. I would have been climbing the walls. Excellent update.

vladt
07/06/2006 06:49 am
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congratulations for the 5 new ones. well deserved. and thanks for the excellent update.

sirc
07/04/2006 12:31 pm
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great chapter

Verda
07/03/2006 06:41 am
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Congrats on your awards, you so deserve them. This is a incredible story, and isn't it fun to have immediate responses to your story, even though there's no advance or residual check to come. Kudos to you Niamh.

nmcil
06/26/2006 04:35 pm
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Great Read - thanks ever for bringing us this terrific adventure. Wish there was something I could do to make you feel better, appreciate all your efforts at working through your pain and keeping with your writing projects.

Hope you keep Willow as a strong adversary for a while - If not on this story, maybe in some future tale a Willow Angelus pairing up as Super Duo of Evil might interest you. Look forward to your next updates.

06/25/2006 05:55 am
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So glad to see a new chapter. Jenner and his group are all such intriguing characters. And Willow - that girl is just plain scary. Pity that a good, hard slap wouldn't be enough to bring back the sweet, shy nerd that she used to be. Enjoying this story more than I can say. Hope you can update again soon.

oracleholly
06/23/2006 05:23 am
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hey look - my first review now that I'm sort of back! Excellent last two chapters, Nia. I'm really enjoying where this is headed.

Neart
06/21/2006 10:45 pm
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fab chapter, loved the interaction and moving between all the different players, Wes being all watchery and Angelus being his usual 'patient' self.

Tina
06/21/2006 08:30 pm
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Thanks so much for all your hard work. I constantly look forward to your updates! I know this is a bit late be saying this, but I love having Oz back, especially how you write him.

Sarah
06/21/2006 03:36 pm
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I love this story. It gives me a happy every time I read it.

06/21/2006 02:49 pm
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LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!! Glad that Anya/Tara and Oz are working as a team and Xander as always leaves things to be desired. And I hope Jenner makes the right decision. And now Buffy and Spike could have the "future" they want. Master Spike had to make an appearance during the meeting. Just so much I could say but LOVE IT is at the top of the list.

margaret
06/21/2006 05:50 am
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thanks for keeping this going it just gets better and better

06/21/2006 02:51 am
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Love this chapter and I think Jenner is a great character. You write a scarily crazy Willow. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

06/21/2006 02:48 am
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Five new well-deserved ones! Way to leave a cliff-hanger, evil woman!

Esther
06/21/2006 01:37 am
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Aww, congrats!! Oh mama, this is just awesome!!! I love all the new details and further exploration of each character's situation/feelings. And I'm uber curious as to who/what broke through the wards at the house. Can't wait for more!!!

Emily
06/21/2006 01:26 am
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We only rock because we see how much you rock more! Looking great, and the plot is really progressing quite smoothly. But i want some Dawn/Wesley things... im interested in that little combo ;) Good job, can't wait to see the next one:D

pretty_in_fangs
06/21/2006 12:35 am
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Your writing remains superb. The imagery on Willow is great, and I love the tension within the Magic Box.

06/21/2006 12:32 am
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Great chapter. Loved it.

06/21/2006 12:31 am
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well, i've read both origins and revelations in the past week and let me tell you they're incredible! i've been reading of spuffyrealm and therefore couldn't comment since i'm not a member but enough of that. these stories are fantastic! your plotlines are so complete, its incredible. you're definetly not a willow fan, :). I have to admit, you had me nearly to tears when casey died. he was so brave in defending dawn and, wow, it was so sad. i cannot wait for the angelus ass-whooping. i like the interaction between jenner and faith too, very interesting. anyway, keep up the outstanding work!

Tamara
06/21/2006 12:26 am
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It looks like Angel and Willow aren't thinking too clearly. Angel's ignoring a valuable info source and Willow is blaming Spike for the things she messed up.

I wonder what Jenner's going to do.

06/21/2006 12:25 am
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LOL, ok that ending is deffinantly from cliffies are us

Beautriful chappie I love the way you weave. :P

nmcil
08/13/2007 04:43 pm
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Great story development and connection - excited to have all this new material - last I read the story was just after Willow vanished -

11/24/2006 05:15 pm
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hmmm....this gets more interesting all the time...seems they're going to have a bit more in the way of allies than they had thought, though...tha's good...good chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:48 am
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Oh my what a lovely twist - Bryn lived to be alnost 200 - wow just amzing! I love this story! It is absoltly fab - great twists and can't wait to read the rest!

~*~Tasha~*~
07/18/2006 02:33 am
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Catching up on my BSV fics that I read. I am VERY HAPPY to see several updates of this one in the time that I was gone. I can't wait to read the other chapters.

I really like the chemistry between Jenner and Faith. His information about Bryn is awesome too. I love how you weave your story's plots.

Verda
07/03/2006 06:11 am
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So Bryn lived almost 150 years after her resurrection before being killed? Cool. Happy that Dawn had Tara since her parents couldn't be there. Now to see what Jenner's going to do? Another great chapter.

Samara
06/19/2006 04:44 pm
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I am so glad you are continuing this story! I love all your work and I can't wait to see where this goes!

Esther
06/19/2006 06:45 am
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SQUEE!!! Great chapter!! I love the details you've given with each character, especially the connection between Jenner and Faith. Oooh, and then ending it with the intro to a re-born potential. I can't wait for more!!! Take care!!

Lizzziegrl
06/15/2006 12:16 am
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OK, you got me good with this story -- the whole thing, not just this chapter.

I mean, I'm not a Spuffy fan for the most part, but you make the relationship work and work well. The only complaint I have is that Xander seems a bit more stupid and opionionated than in canon. A couple of times you seemed almost ready to make him recognize that life wasn't black and white, but you haven't done it yet.

I love the original characters you've created and how well they blend into your version of this 'verse.

I hope you write more soon, because you've got me addicted!

Thanks!

sirc
06/14/2006 07:50 pm
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great chapter

vladt
06/13/2006 05:38 am
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wonderful update, as always. thanks for the great read.

Kristen
06/11/2006 02:48 am
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As always, I loved the chapter! The meeting seemed pretty slow but I love your writing so much I dont really mind. Update soon!

Emily
06/09/2006 12:41 am
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Normally, I would write more, but now all I have to say is WOW!

Cant wait for more!

06/08/2006 09:48 pm
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Ooh, Cool!  Great update!

ariadne
06/08/2006 06:55 pm
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didn't think of agelus' minions. boy its gonna be tough. good thoughts they both had tog et rid of the threat.
LOL loved the "they won't bite" hhhmmm...something different about LAwson. can't wait to see how that convo goes. :)
Faith was sooooo funny. shes got it back for the vamp. tho cna't blame her he is HOT!!! Jenner is one of the best characters that i have seen in fanfic. i can't wait for you to reveal more about him and his minions. you make the most interesting characters Nia.
i'm glad to see that dawn has someone to talk to. i knew tara would be it but i'm glad that dawn opened up. can't keep it all inside.
i would have loved to ahve been a fly on the table for that meeting. loved the laughing to clear the tension and the way faith and jenner are drawn to each other.
more info on the slayer/vamp mates. least they know they lived for a long time. i was worried about what was gonna happen for a while. i still am but hope they will be ok and the counsil doesn't decide to do something. altho if they did buffy and spike can soooo kick their butts. it was interesting what jenner said about them tho...."they were a sight to behold." i bet they were. thank-you so much for posting. i love tis story so much. I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

06/08/2006 06:21 pm
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Thank you for the wonderful chapter Niamh! :-)

Judy
06/08/2006 12:41 pm
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As always, fantastic chapter.

06/08/2006 11:32 am
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Wonderful update, sweets! I'm loving the tension between Jenner and Faith. And Spike and Buffy are so sweet, as always. Thank you.

Emilee
06/08/2006 06:28 am
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Excellent as always. Eagerly awaiting more. I love the additions of Lawson and Jenner. It's nice to see someone take the idea that Spike may not be the only vamp capable of more than just being a vamp. If that wasn't too vague.

DizzyB
06/08/2006 05:03 am
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So excited to see this update, and it was well worth waiting for! Love how you're weaving this tale together. Awesome.

patricia
06/08/2006 04:31 am
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Thank you. beautiful chapter.

06/08/2006 04:30 am
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Thanks so much for the wonderful new chapter. I love your additions to the Slayer/vampire mythos. They're well thought out and quite logical - makes for interesting reading. I gotta say that I find it very intriguing that you've got Dawn being Spike and Buffy's biological child. In light of what we learned about the key from the series, it makes quite a bit of sense (not to mention a wonderful plot point). You're such a talented writer. I can't wait to see where this story is going to go next. More, p-l-e-a-s-e. :)

fanxstitch
06/08/2006 02:58 am
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Great to see another wonderful chapter of this series. Hope the next will be sooner.

SpaceLord
06/08/2006 01:46 am
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Glad to see an update to this story. Gotta love it that's for sure.

06/08/2006 01:46 am
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Yeah... More back story and you have Jenner with the info. Love the attraction btwn Faith and Jenner. And what is up with Lawson?? I am glad that now Dawn is open to talking to someone. I hope they can all come to some middle ground here. Great update and I just absolutely love this story. I just wanted you to know.

06/08/2006 01:03 am
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The plot thickens....Great update, Nia. It's nice to know you're writing again and feeling better.

pretty_in_fangs
06/08/2006 12:59 am
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Sweet. That should be all sorts of fun.

I'm sorry that you're having such trouble with this story. All I can say is that that trouble isn't visible in the story itself. It still flows beautifully.

nickycole
06/08/2006 12:48 am
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I love this story. You're a phenomenal writer.

06/08/2006 12:41 am
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Oh yeah I loved this chappie :D

Bigbird
06/08/2006 12:38 am
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So glad you're continuing this I really like it

Pin
06/08/2006 12:31 am
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Very interesting! I can't wait to see where this new line of action takes us. THanks!

06/07/2006 11:19 pm
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great chapter.well worth the wait

Badia
06/07/2006 11:17 pm
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So glad to see another update. I really love this story.

06/07/2006 10:39 pm
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Wow. That was Wow. I sure hope the groove is back cuz I need more. LOL

11/24/2006 05:06 pm
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that last bit brought me to tears...hope all turns out okay...great chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:42 am
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i love this chapter - ahhh the first hints of a possible dawn/wes? I know she needs to grow up first but i adore that pairing! i love this story and the other couple's i cant wait to see what happens next

Kimberly Adams
08/05/2006 02:48 am
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I have enjoyed this story and because I couldn't spend a lot of time on the computer reading I printed it out and read that way. You are a remarkable author and I am sorry for whatever you have gone through getting this out. I will read through to the last updated chapter and reveiw some more. Fantastic story!!!!!
linnea2sweet@yahoo.com is my email address. Would love to hear from you!

Verda
07/03/2006 05:36 am
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Have I told you how much I love that Dawn was made from both of them, because I do. From the beginning, when it was revealed that Dawn was made from Buffy, it was obvious that she wasn't a clone and since she was human there needed to be both X&Y chromosones, glad it was Spike's in your story. Very surprised that you had Wesley show up at the hospital. Nice for Dawn to hear from another source that none of it was her fault. Yay for you!

sirc
06/03/2006 04:38 pm
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great chapter

05/30/2006 12:21 am
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First of all, hope you're feeling better. Secondly, I gotta tell you that you've tied up most of my free time for the past 4 days. Yep, I started reading Origins: Book One, got hooked(grabbed me and wouldn't let go), then I moved on to Origins:Revelations and was completely gobsmacked. You are one heck of a writer! Wish Joss Whedon had had some fanfic writers around while both Buffy and Angel were still on the air. Maybe then some of the characters (even those I wasn't crazy about) would have been treated with more kindness and consistency. Have heard a rumor that there's a Spike tv series in the works. Don't have a clue as to how true it is, but if it does come into being, hope the writers have half of your talent. Can't wait for the next installment of this fic. You've got me on pins and needles here, so please, don't torture me for too long!:)

05/25/2006 11:11 am
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Good chapter.  Ol' Wesley is walking a fine line, morally.  He'd best be careful.  Can't wait till the next update.

vladt
05/25/2006 04:03 am
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actually enjoy any delay in updates. gives me an excuse to reread the entire wonderful, again and again. thanks for the fantastic read.

Neart
05/24/2006 06:58 pm
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Very glad to see the updates on this fic, excellent story, pls keep it coming.

Tina
05/24/2006 04:12 pm
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Thanks so much for this, I don't care how long I have to wait for the next one as long as comes. I just have to know how this all works out.

05/24/2006 01:02 pm
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Thanks for the updates, Nia. I had two chapters to catch up on,so obviously missed one somewhere. I hope you are able wrestle the block into submission and continue soon with this wonderful story. *hugs Nia* (carefully, so as not to hurt your shoulder)

Judy
05/24/2006 12:32 pm
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Great update.

SpaceLord
05/24/2006 09:52 am
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Damn this is like 24 :)

Still with you although there are a lot of players to keep in mind in this story.

fanxstitch
05/24/2006 07:46 am
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Excellent story. Please write more on this.

Oracleholly
05/24/2006 06:17 am
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I've been gone from online for a bit, so I was so happy to come back and see this update. This is the very first thing I've read! Wonderful update. I love how so much has happened in the 2-3 days - over several chapters. Such complexity, such detail. I love this fic.

Esther
05/24/2006 05:15 am
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Oooh, another splendid chapter!! How you and others write Dru so well, I'll never know, but goodness that was great!! Loved the whole thing, especially the Wes/Dawn scene. I never pictured the pair until this story. Can't wait for more!!

05/24/2006 04:55 am
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you don't have to remind me of the timeframe. I am so into this story that I was so excited to see the chapter. Well finally Wes makes some tyep of move. Even though he know better than to say anything or make a move. Great to see the small family together when they were letting Dawn go home. I hope Spike gets some real help with Angelus.

margaret
05/24/2006 03:58 am
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thanks for the update..maybe spike can understand dru's babbling in time to help them!?!

cindy
05/24/2006 03:23 am
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I am so pleased to see an update of this story it is my absolute favorite. Will wait for your muse always. I am just happy when a update comes around. your fan

05/24/2006 03:21 am
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PIn
05/24/2006 02:57 am
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Thanks for the recap. Another excellent and intriguing chapter. Write when you can - I'll always be there to read it.

Emily
05/24/2006 02:41 am
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I have really enjoyed reading this chapter. I really hope that your health improves soon, and everything is looking up. I am sure I speak on behalf of all of your readers when I say we greatly appreciate all the work you have done to put all of this to words.

~*~Tasha~*~
05/24/2006 02:29 am
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Excellent chapter update. You cover a lot of detail in your chapters to move us all along in various places. Thanks for the timeline reminder too.

jeanie
05/24/2006 02:04 am
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great update as always. wes and dawn-interesting. also interesting is faith and jenner, did not see that coming. can't wait for more, it is such a joy to see an "origins" update.

Cat
05/24/2006 12:38 am
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Excellent work!! Thank You for letting us enjoy your hard work.
I'm really lousy at writing reviews (as you can probably tell)
Again Thank you, and please continue. ;)

Tamara
05/24/2006 12:18 am
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Technically speaking , Dawn's age is hard to pin down. There's her age from the date her human body was created, the age she appears to be , and the age of the key. So Wes dating her wouldn't be too wierd to her family but he'd have to watch out for the cops.

Great chapter. Too bad you can't hire a secretary by paying them with chapters before everyone else.

05/24/2006 12:00 am
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Excellent chappie

05/23/2006 11:26 pm
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Excellent update!

Devon
06/04/2007 02:17 pm
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I forgot to say I love the Oz/Tara thing too. Very different from anything I've read so far but it feels right. You are such a good writer!

11/24/2006 04:51 pm
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domestic spike...so cute...hope jenner can be trusted not to try to hurt faith, or anyone else...though i'm not sure yet...great chapter

08/21/2006 11:36 am
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CH 52 - lovely chapter - I hope giles and anya end up together - but you know me I want everyone i like to be paired off and happy. Great chapter!

Verda
07/03/2006 04:45 am
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Sorry that your muse hadn't been cooperating I'm just so thankful that you're still plugging away at it. I've had a few stories that were left abandoned, some have been waiting 8 months for an updated and all I can do is every few months go to the website and let them know that they're not forgotten and have someone waiting for them to continue they're work. I salute your tenacity.

Bigbird
05/10/2006 02:10 am
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Glad you're back! love this story cant wait to see what goodies you have in store for Angel and Willow!!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/07/2006 12:21 am
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Always happy to see an update of this one. No matter how long it is inbetween, I'll always be here to read the next chapter!

Casta Spella
05/06/2006 09:56 pm
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I just wanted to say, I absolutely love this story. I just found Orgins on Monday through the Fang Fetish Awards site and I've been reading it every spare minute I could find. :) I love everything you've done, the twists and turns and surprises in the story. Please keep up the wonderful work and I'm looking forward to the next posting. Thank you for a truly terrific story. :)

sirc
05/04/2006 05:03 pm
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great chapter

Sarah
05/04/2006 03:12 pm
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I was sooo happy to see an update! You are still doing such a great job with this story, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

fanxstitch
05/04/2006 08:14 am
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Excellent story all the way from beginning to current chapter--please keep this up. Very well done and great original plot.

Esther
05/04/2006 07:52 am
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This was fantastic and you won't be getting rid of me anytime soon. I love this story too much to not see it end. WOW! Great stuff!! Can't wait till the next one!!

05/04/2006 12:12 am
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Still with you, and still loving this story.  Trust me when I say that I *completely* understand fluctuations between updates.  Take your time, hon.  You're chapters are always worth waiting for.  Best to you!

Tamara
05/03/2006 08:46 pm
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Definitely still with you. Great update.

Jo
05/03/2006 05:35 pm
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Well worth the wait. I love this story. I especially enjoy the family moments with Spike, Buffy, Dawn and Connor...write it in your time.

Pin
05/03/2006 02:33 pm
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Excellent chapter and I appreciate anything that you can write, whenever you get around to writing it. I really like Jenner and Lawson and am so glad that you brought Lawson back. The idea of another Slayer/Vampire pair is great fun, and should get Giles thinking that perhaps that's the way it's supposed to be! Thanks again.

05/03/2006 12:53 pm
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Dont worry we are all still with you! Even with the break between the updates, we understand that the authors of our favorite stories actually have lives and such to conduct, lol.

Can I just say that I love Faith is attracted to Jenner? Loved the irony of that as well as the fact that not all the vampires are on Angelus side, cause that would be bad news.

Cant wait for more!

Judy
05/03/2006 11:27 am
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Love this story. Always happy to see an update. Thank you.

pramen
05/03/2006 10:15 am
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Your story his fantastic and you really don't need to apologize because the updates are worth waiting for! Love the dialog between Faith and Jenner!

vladt
05/03/2006 08:44 am
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excellent update, and the time between updates is a lovely excuse to reread every fascinating word. love the fic, love the effort. thank you the the fine read.

DizzyB
05/03/2006 06:51 am
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Thrilled to see an update from you!! Origins is without a doubt one of my all-time favorite tales out there. I really appreciate an author who takes the time to craft a storyline rather than relying on smut. Origins is an epic tale in my book. Go you!

05/03/2006 04:51 am
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so sorry for the writer's block but I am so glad you are back!!! I am so in love with this story and I am at least glad that they are now on full alert with Willow and Angelous. And how about Faith making the conscious decision to go with the flow and help. Loving the interaction between Faith and Jenner. OZ IS BACK!!!! Anya as always great. And Spike is back to being full family man... so much in this chapter.

me
05/03/2006 04:47 am
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i have no problem waiting for updates for this story...i love every chapter!

Cat
05/03/2006 04:42 am
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I've been following this since you started writing it. The only things I can say are "Thank You" for letting us read and enjoy your hard work and PLEASE continue!!!

05/03/2006 02:51 am
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Very glad to see more of this fic.
Great work. Can't wait for more.

Emily
05/03/2006 02:28 am
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Great chapter! I love having Faith here, and the story is moving along really well. Good work:)

Oracleholly
05/03/2006 01:53 am
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Wonderful chapter, Nia. I completely understand and can sympathize with you on the difficulty in writing - it's how Spike's Way is for me at the moment. I know where it needs to go, but getting it there is a battle.

RE: this chapter -- I'm amused by Faith & Jenner. Although he was only given a brief mention, I LOVE LAWSON! Drusilla's fit and how she fought madly against Angelus was beautifully written. I *heart* Oz & Tara's bond - and love how despite having his jaw wired shut, he's very much an active presence in the house. Wesley's so thoughtful about getting cleaning up the bathroom. That is something that neither Buffy nor Dawn (or really Spike for that matter) need to see upon returning home. Really brilliant.

*hugs*

Badia
05/03/2006 01:11 am
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I love this story. I've reread it twice waiting for updates, so I'm very glad that inspiration has struck you once again.

05/03/2006 12:51 am
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LOL, this fic is perfect.

Shadowhawke
03/21/2010 12:40 pm
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Just a quick one, I've been following this for a while and it's amazing. Sorry, more detail when I don't have to go to sleep!

nmcil
08/13/2007 02:43 pm
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totally enjoyed reading this a second time - one of the best buffyverse ff ever - Hope that this long series is complete or will soon be completed -

Devon
06/04/2007 01:57 pm
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I haven't been so intrigued with a story for a long time-- all the twists and turns are wonderful. I love this new Faith/Jenner thing and the Dawn as Spike and Buffy's daughter. And Spuffy w/o angst is refreshing. Thanks for the story-- I'm really enjoying it.

11/24/2006 04:37 pm
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well that's a relief...so angelus has several in his court that aren't really on his side...that's a good thing...but you've got my nerves all on edge, wondering if someone's gonna get captured or hurt...great chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:32 am
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CH 51 - excellant excellant excellant story sweets - love how this is unravelling and how everything is coming to fruitation. Adore this story! i love jenner/faith and sam rocks! The charatcers are so intense and emotive. greqt fic!

Verda
07/03/2006 04:12 am
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Thanks for the laughs it was a much needed release. Giles understanding what Spike meant about Faith and Jenner and then again about the pacifier and the grocery list. Damn Willow she'll never learn will she. and I do trust you to make it right. Looks like Cordy's going to make it as well. Thanks for this story and doing what you need to to get it done, the professional that you are.

Karen
05/01/2006 06:45 pm
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All I can say is - can you write faster? This story has got me hooked. I love all the twists and turns you are making and how you are bringing all the pieces back together. I am really curious about the future story line with Robbie and Kirsten. I hope you are planning on doing something with that in another sequel.

Tina
04/29/2006 08:41 am
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Sorry about the pain you've been having, but I wanted to get to end of what you have written so far before commenting. I'm absolutely addicted to your writing. Besides work and sleep, nothing has kept me from your story the last few days. Now that I've caught up, I can finally go to the gym. I'm looking forward to what's coming next. Thanks so much for the escapism your work provides!

Emily
04/28/2006 08:14 am
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I have been trying a long time to find you to send a comment as I came your story in an archive. This chapter was yet to be posted there, and it was fabulous. I love having Faith in it, she has been one of my favourite characters. I cannot wait to read the next one, and i hope that all of the evil writers block will stay away.

Love, Em

04/21/2006 06:27 pm
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I love this story and please continue when ever you are ready. Take all the time you need, this fic is worth the wait. (My gramma and spelling suck, I hope you get the gits of it though-Take your time...we will be waitning...)

Felix
04/17/2006 09:30 am
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Amazing story and well thought out plots. Hope you keep it up!

April
04/07/2006 11:40 pm
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I am so glad to see this story posted again, I aparantly got into it right after you stopped posting. I am enjoying the story so far, evil Willow was a fun twist as well. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

~*~Tasha~*~
04/05/2006 08:17 am
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I think that you will always have readers waiting and willing to wait for this piece of fic. I hope that you find inspiration, but I will always be willing to wait as well. It is worth it every time. Every chapter is pretty amazing. This one is no less awesome than the others.

I liked your touching symbolism with Buffy putting Connor on the bed with Dawn. The whole Jenner/Faith combination is pretty cool too. Giles was funny with his reaction to it.

Willow thinking that soulless is good? That's further proof that the witch has totally lost it.

Rachel
04/03/2006 05:22 pm
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Love this epic story!! Love your writing. Hope you feel well soon :)

Jamie
04/03/2006 11:48 am
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Loved your new chapter, Im waiting on the edge of my seat for each new one.

btvsfreak@yahoo.com
04/03/2006 04:10 am
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Great chapter!

vladt
04/02/2006 10:07 pm
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your tale becomes better and better with each update. you may "struggle", but the words read smoothly and create a flow of images that are devoured quickly. thanks for the great read.

Judy
04/02/2006 01:51 pm
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Great update. Love this story.

04/02/2006 11:49 am
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I love this story...when I saw there was an update I did a happy dance! It was worth the wait...thank you :)

Dihcar
04/02/2006 11:08 am
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Very nice chapter. Poor Tara, i really feel sorry for her. Well atleast she has a familly that loves her(spike,oz,...).
I dont believe in the faith/jenner thing since i think that spike and buffy are unique in that way. Hope that Willow gets her comeupns´.

ps: all great writers get a period of writer's block.

seeya

04/02/2006 06:18 am
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I loved the update! I was catching the chemistry between Jenner and Faith and can't wait to see where that goes!

Esther
04/02/2006 05:57 am
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Ooh, def. worth that wait!! Great chapter! Glad to know that the attraction between Jenner and Faith is so strong...another vamp/slayer..... Can't wait for the next one!!

Oracleholly
04/02/2006 05:39 am
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oh Nia... it doesn't matter how long you go away, you always come back with a kick-ass chapter. I loved it. Poor Giles with the whole Faith/Jenner thing... lol @ Wesley for not catching on as quickly. I feel horrible for Tara. Willow is completely delusional... and how does she not know about the dogs... did she in her delusions of grandeur forget about the Hell Hounds first appearences in Sunny-D? And oh lordy is she going to try to re-re-ensoul Angelus? Somehow I don't think that's going to take.

04/02/2006 05:23 am
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I am sorry to hear about your writer's block but if this chapter is any indication, you have so moved past it. I am so inlove with this story. And as always, Spike is the one to reach and take care of his family. And loving the sparks between Faith and Jenner. Love the update. Wonder waht could possibly happen in the next 24 hours. And hope that Oz finds his "family" soon.

Randi Giles
04/02/2006 04:42 am
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I've missed this sooooo much...thanks for the update..I really like seeing more of the aurillius line

04/02/2006 03:46 am
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It's great, Nia. The plot is moving towards a conclusion/climax of some sort. The atmosphere is tense, but much more bearable now that the spell is gone. Still Angelus and Willow to worry about, but it seems as though there is more help also. Will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

04/02/2006 12:48 am
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I am in awe of this story. Ok, I must admit that the depressed Dawn plot is not my favorite, but everything else has hooked me.
Keep up the good work. By the way, I love Baby love too;)

04/01/2006 11:55 pm
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This is getting more complicated now with two new master vamps in the mix. Will Oz be alright? He doesn't deserve to be hurt any more. I love this story and am willing to supply any explosives you and your muse may need to break that writer's block.

Catrine
04/01/2006 11:40 pm
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Excellent story!!!Even though it`s not updated frequently,I have to continue reading it. Keep up the good work:) You`ve got a great plot here and you tell it brilliantly.

SpaceLord
04/01/2006 11:40 pm
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Sorry to hear about your writers block cause it affects me too, I don't get the updates as quickly as I would like :)

this is a fav story of mine with lots of new and fresh characters that bring a lot to the story.

Bigbird
04/01/2006 11:15 pm
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I missed you!! glad to finally see an update keep them coming

04/01/2006 11:03 pm
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Oh yeah bloody awesome chappie, just hope the next update is quicker :P

Tamara
04/01/2006 10:52 pm
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Great chapter.

It doesn't sound good that Willow thinks an unsouled Angel is the answer to "fixing" things.

Great Giles reaction.

Nice touch having Spike gor for cigs and find a pacifier and a grocery list. It shows how much his life has changed.



11/23/2006 08:55 pm
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oh man...i was actually so ready for willow to get torn apart by wild dogs...is that bad? *innocent look* :P

08/21/2006 11:25 am
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CH 50 - OMG i finally got to the new chapters(rereading both books took a while) and OMG sweetie this is incredable. I can't wait to see what happens next I love this!

Verda
07/03/2006 03:39 am
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That was so amazing. Can't wait to see what's happening next especially between Spike, Jenner and Lawson. 6 more and I''l have to suffer like the rest of you readers and wait for updates.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 01:33 am
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Oh boy oh boy oh boy ...... Evil evil evil cliffie. Yep, meant it so much I repeated it three times. {Chuckles} Awesome chapter. Way awesome! Look forward to more.

Yzba
03/03/2006 01:10 am
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I have to say that I adore this story, I am completly hooked. Can't wait for the end of the story, even if I don't want it to be over either. Good work , and I hope I get to read more of your stuff

lauren
02/23/2006 02:03 am
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keep going, great fic!

02/15/2006 03:40 am
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trusted easily given. excellent update to a fascinating tale. thanks for the adventure.

outforawalk
02/14/2006 11:07 pm
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I am going to trust you. I have loved the story this far, but man... Willow needs a grand smackdown. I am excited to see how it all comes together, even though I am going to hate it when this story is over. I know you are going against doctors orders to post updates. So while I am on pins and needles for the next part, I am also all good with the wait, if it means you actually feel better. (Wow. Look at that sentence run.) Anyway, thanks for the AMA updates!

jacquie
02/14/2006 05:17 pm
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I love this story, I keep going back to Origins and reading from the start, hoping that by the time I get to the end of Revelations there'll be another update. Please update again soon, and thank you.

Judy
02/14/2006 01:50 pm
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We trust you, we really do. Just really want to see Willow get what she deserves, soon!

02/14/2006 04:20 am
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I trust you, Nia! It's so nice to see everything coming together and at least one of the bad guys on her way to being punished. Looking forward to the next update - *hugs*

02/14/2006 03:51 am
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ACK!!! Did the hounds get Red?? How long before we find out? After Willow, who will dust Angelus?

02/14/2006 03:43 am
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Great update! I am dying to find out what happened to Willow and what the hounds are doing in good ole Sunnydale! Please update soon!

02/14/2006 02:43 am
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All the players are coming together, situations are coming to a head and wow is this already exciting and gripping tale becoming even more so!! Fabulous work, my dear.

dramaqueen
02/14/2006 01:16 am
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Love this saga! I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment. Thanks!

02/13/2006 09:00 pm
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LMAO, do we have a choice but to trust you?? this fic had me at hello :P

02/13/2006 08:31 pm
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EEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals* Updatey goodness... ooooohh... can I smack Willow? Please? Pretty please with sugar on top? My GOD, the DENSENESS of that chick! I wanna hit some sense into her!! Gah; update soon, I'm begging you!! I want to see her finally realize what the hell she's done!!

02/13/2006 07:15 pm
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excellant update! Me love it! *huggles*

jamie
02/13/2006 07:15 pm
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oh that was neat, cant wait for the next chapter, and for her to get hers

11/23/2006 08:18 pm
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i like lawson, though buffy's reactions are fully understandable...and i actually feel kind of bad for willow now...but she deserves it...this is gonna be so hard on tara, though :(

08/21/2006 11:19 am
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CH 49 - Oh yes you are evil for leaving it like that - luckily i have more *grin* this is a fantastic story sweetie - i adore it! can't wait to see what happenes now that everyone has thier memories back!

Verda
07/03/2006 03:04 am
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Oops! forgot one more thing. Itrully hope that whatever happens to Red, that she fully understands the consequences of her actions,RE: Casey and Dawn. Thanks.

Verda
07/03/2006 02:57 am
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So evil, you are, but lucky for me I don't have to wait for your next chappie He! He! Before I start with the review I would like to first comment on the the statements that Judy Garland made about illusions, and how the insight of her tortured soul can be astounding. Remembering how much pain her personal life had been, her grasp of the reality of it was remarkable. Now to the story at hand, so Jenner and Faith huh? that puts an interesting twist on things. So in to the fray! You know I love it.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 01:24 am
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Okay, yeah that was an evil cliffie. Though I am VERY glad they have all of their memories back. Interesting interaction with Faith and Jenner. I think I like that.

Weaver
02/06/2006 11:18 am
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Yes you are evil for leaving it like that - Willow needs to be eaten!

Judy
02/04/2006 12:58 pm
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Great update. Think Willow's in big trouble.

Unholydragoon
02/04/2006 01:45 am
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Yes, ye are evil. The good kind of evil though. Well played, and please. Iffin yer writing is like this when ye taker yer comfortable time, by all means continue.

02/04/2006 01:13 am
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OH yers you are bloody evil, but damn gorl I loved these chappies

02/03/2006 11:53 pm
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Oh, yes. Definitely evil! But it seems as thought things might be getting a bit straightened out? At least the spell is gone and they won't be flying blind anymore.

Dee
02/03/2006 11:25 pm
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yes you are evil for leaving it like that and to top it off I think you like it!!! waiting for the update

02/03/2006 10:56 pm
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Yes... but that's what makes it so damn good. :)

02/03/2006 10:26 pm
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YES! You are evil for leaving it there!! Will the hounds rip Red apart! What are the PTB going to permit in this AU? Willow has behaved unforgiveably and Angelus needs to be dusted. More soon please.

Richard
02/03/2006 10:01 pm
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And did I mention that I love the Jenner / Faith thing? The only shame is that Darla isn't around to screw everything up. This was an awesome chapter throughout.

Richard
02/03/2006 10:00 pm
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Oh yes, very evil. :P But it's a great place to end it.

02/03/2006 09:59 pm
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vladt
02/03/2006 09:57 pm
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evil, yes. very, very evil. loved the update. thanks

margaret
02/03/2006 09:19 pm
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thanks for keeping this fic going, i'm on the edge of my seat. i like how you brought in sam i always felt sorry for him, can't wait to see how it all ends. will we get to see kristen again? thanks

02/03/2006 05:54 pm
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Ahh....Willow is finally about to get what's coming to her (I hope) hehe. Love how you're using Lawson, too. He seemed like an ok vamp (at first)...wouldn't have minded him sticking around on the show :)

02/03/2006 05:39 pm
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excellant update and yes very evil!

AthenaHahn
02/03/2006 05:29 pm
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Umm... yes. Yes, you are EVIL for leaving it like that! But I must say WHEW! Now everyone remembers and Willow gets her comeuppance! Yay!! *happy dance* Please update soon!

11/23/2006 07:47 pm
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i already like lawson...lol...great chapter...i think he's gonna prove to be a good ally against angelus, yeah? and i feel bad for tara, being so deceived by willow..great chapter :)

08/21/2006 11:12 am
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CH 48 - I love Lawson - already love em - he rocks!

Loving this chapter - I hope everyhing works out well for everyone - I am so emotionlly involved with all these characters you wrote - they are great at pulling out my emotions and twisting me in suspense - gret job!

Verda
07/03/2006 01:19 am
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My bad. Was a might confused about Sam...as in Sam Lawson. Sorry, was really tired when I read it. Feelin' the walls closing in on Willow. So eager to continue reading this wonderful story.

Ka-ris
05/06/2006 09:35 pm
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your story has inspirted the poet in me, a single line gave me the base of a poem.
not sure it si any good, and so I would give you words far better than mine.

The sages say,
Happyness and sorrow are one,
Is this because in finding the first,
We also discover the second?
--Suzume-No-Kumo (1861)

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 01:16 am
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Ooo ... loved this chapter. Kristen went back to her own time ... the spell will hopefully be broken ... Willow will be in big doo doo ... Everyone will remember ... Oh yes ... I am getting happier by the sentence.

vladt
02/03/2006 09:42 pm
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good update to very entertaining fic. thanks

Richard
01/30/2006 01:21 am
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'good word' :p

A few typos left but I can't bemoan this when you use such wonderful words.

I like the progression. Nice and slow and natural.

I wonder what's happening to Tara. I'd think Willow's aura would grate on her nerves.

Judy
01/29/2006 01:08 pm
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Just keeps getting better and better. Love this fic.

Unholydragoon
01/27/2006 10:33 pm
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How's this for a good word: I am liking this story more than I thought I could. Keep it up!

Eve
01/26/2006 05:50 pm
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WOW...I just finished reading the whole story up to this point and I am blown away by the amazing story you've woven and the way you so lovingly portray the characters. I will be keeping up with new updates from now on! THank you so much for sharing your writing talents with us!!
EveTavitha -at- earthlink -dot- net

Sarah
01/26/2006 04:33 pm
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Yay Lawson! I don't see enough of him in fanfic; and I thought the idea of a vampire with half a soul was really neat. I'm glad he's decided to join up with Spike. Keep the updates coming!

01/26/2006 04:18 pm
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Great update! I love how you have the characters true to form and I can't wait to see what happens when the spell is broken! Please update soon!

Pin
01/26/2006 03:52 pm
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Great chapter. I really love that you've brought back Lawson and I am totally intrigued by Kristen. I hope that she has achieved what her time travel set out to do. Thanks for the great story. Looking forward to more.

01/26/2006 01:39 pm
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Very interesting stuff with Kirsten! I hope Dawn is going to be ok now! Oh, I can't wait for the spell to be broken... Willow is going to be in deep shit!!!

dramaqueen
01/26/2006 01:39 pm
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More please. Yours is one of the best stories and I eagerly anticipate the next installment!

LeeAnne
01/26/2006 05:34 am
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Hi...just wanted to say how much i absolutely love this story...i am very much in awe of your writing talent...i find myself entranced by every word, deed, action, character that is in this story...i anxiously look forward to another chapter....keep it coming!

01/26/2006 04:58 am
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Are the Watchers and Faith going to break the spell now? Will Lawson offer to help Spike fight Angelus? So much in this wonderful story. Thank you so much for the new chapter.

11/23/2006 07:17 pm
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but will dawnie be safe in the hospital? and i'm worried for tara, if the hounds are about to take willow, will she be hurt if she's with her? good chapter, on to more :)

08/21/2006 11:04 am
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ch 47- excellant story - very intrigued by lawson and jenner - adore the plot and characters - running off to read the next chapter!

Verda
07/03/2006 12:42 am
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Last chapter I forgot about Sam. If this is going where I think it is, then Angelus is going to be very surprised when Sam, Lawson and Jenner all side with Spike. Even though he's their Sire, they are all family and with all families you're never quite sure where loyality lies until the feud has begun. One small thing before I continue, with a house full of humans, how is it that no one, all 6 people, no one had to use the bathroom? No one had to at least...pee? No washing their face or brush their teeth? Like anything I see on the screen, big or small that doesn't make much sense, I always say,"It's Not In The Script". Anyway, still love the story.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 01:05 am
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Up, down and all around. WOW, Nia. Another excellent chapter. Jenner wants to reveal himself to Spike (because he respects him). Lawson wants to reveal himself to Spike (also out of respect). Dang, did Angel really think that all of his childer would be on his side? I truly do hope that Lawson ends up on Spike's side. Don't know Jenner, but I did kind of like Lawson on the Angel episode.

Sarah
01/22/2006 04:19 am
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I love, love, love this story. Was SO excited to see the new Chapter. Keep it up, I'm waiting eagerly for more.

AthenaHahn
01/18/2006 03:33 am
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Yay! Another wonderful chapter! Man am I starting to get pissed at how self-absorbed Willow is; it's seriously ticking me off! Doesn't she know that it's not always her way or the highway? She's as bad as... as Angel!! For making decisions for other people! Gah, I'm not making any sense, am I? *chuckles* I have a question... and feel free not to answer if it gives up a plot point too early, but... something you said in an earlier chapter just recently caught my attention when I was re-reading the story... Kirsten's Spike and Buffy's daughter... and Spike and Buffy think that she's who Buffy's pregnant with right now... soo... who the heck is her older brother Robbie she kept thinking about? I'm guessing older TWIN brother, in that he came out first, but that's just a guess on my part that falls in with the way the story's current plotline is going. Like I said, if that gives up a plot point, feel free not to answer; it's just something I noticed and wanted to ask about. Update soon, and I'm glad you're feeling better!
Drop me an email if you really want an answer -- for obvious reasons I don't want to give a nay or a yea openly.

01/16/2006 12:21 pm
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great update to a wonderful story. thank you

outforawalk
01/16/2006 07:32 am
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Man I love this story. Not that I am not all freaked out by the events of the last couple of chapters, but this has been a great ride so far. It feels like it is really starting to come together. Which, in a way I hate. Because this is one of the stories that make me do a little wiggle of joy (it's hard to dance with a laptop in your lap) when I see it has been updated. Glad to hear you are feeling better as well.

stephanie
01/16/2006 12:22 am
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excellant story - I love evil willow and love this story. Greta plot lines w/ Kirstian. Hope willow dies a horrible horrible death

01/15/2006 01:09 pm
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Cripes! I wish somebody would actually talk with and listen to Faith about what she saw in the trance. The watchers are working on winning the stupid prize now. Kirsten is cool; she has it together better than most around her. More story please.

murph
01/15/2006 12:57 pm
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Just makes my day when this story is updated! Loves the Kirsten plot line. Poor Dawnie, man Willow needs that ass kicked badly. Maybe a little Angelus torture, hmmm???

Richard
01/15/2006 11:23 am
Grief's best music         
I wonder who the Dark Seer is. I also wonder how they managed to survive Angelus had Dawn not survived. I love Jenner and Lawson. I wonder also how they're going to arrange bodyguard duties. I wonder that I wonder so much. :p
The dark seer is Cordelia -- and Angel was planning on turning her, but that option was taken away from him when they rescued her.

01/15/2006 10:04 am
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Another fab chap! Interesting how you've made Lawson's actions more like Spike's than Angelus's. And I have a theory about the Huntsman's master.....just gonna keep hanging on and see if i'm right! lol.

slaymesoftly
01/15/2006 09:02 am
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Had two chapters to catch up on (have no idea how that happened - this is one of the fics I look for) so lot's of Niamh goodness tonight. I'm glad you're rested and ready to keep feeding us chapters!

MARGARET
01/15/2006 08:47 am
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THANKS FOR CONTINUING, I AGREE LETS GET RID OF THIS WILLOW SOON EVENTHOUGH I USUALLY LOVE WILLOW. GREAT SCENE BETWEEN KIRSTIN AND SPIKE ALSO LOVE HOW SPIKE IS THERE FOR BUFFY EVEN WITHOUT MEMORY KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

01/15/2006 08:16 am
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Oh yeah rockin assed chappies damn can we kill Willow soon :P

11/23/2006 06:54 pm
An untimely frost         
oh man...poor little dawnie...i wish wes and faith would both just say what they're thinking, they'd solve this a lot faster...willow makes me so mad!

08/21/2006 10:57 am
An untimely frost         
oh my- the sheer amount of pain that had to exist for dawn to do this - great chapter sweetie i hope dawn willbe okay!

Verda
07/02/2006 11:42 pm
An untimely frost         
Damn girl, that really hurt. *sniff* The vision of them finding Dawn like that *sniff* really hit me hard. *blowing nose and wiping tears away* Kristen came back to prevent Dawn's death, wonder who exactly it was, who taught her the magic to do that anyway. So many new questions, no wonder this continues to grow. One light among the darkness is Giles and Anya. You wrote his assessment as he awoke, feeling a woman beside him, in true Giles dialogue, "having overnight company" made me giggle, and now he knows that he loves her, always liked them together since "Tabula Rasa". Sad but amazing chapter.

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 12:55 am
An untimely frost         
Crap!! Oh my gosh ... oh my gosh!! Dawn tried to kill herself. Willow is still around, stupid bitch. Ihope that they get it all figured out that Willow is the cause and get their memories back. This is getting worse and worse. I'm afraid of what will happen before it is all done.

Richard
01/15/2006 11:29 am
An untimely frost         
Heartrending. And good. How many vamps influenced by Spike are coming out of the woodwork? It almost seems like Angel managed to call all his enemies to him.

Richard
01/15/2006 11:29 am
An untimely frost         
Heartrending. And good. How many vamps influenced by Spike are coming out of the woodwork? It almost seems like Angel managed to call all his enemies to him.

11/23/2006 06:23 pm
Mingled yarn         
poor dawnie...this is gonna be so hard for her...can't wait for willow's crimes to come out, and angelus to pay for what he's done...

08/21/2006 10:53 am
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CH 45- harsh and lovely chapter - willow believes that she is right no matter what - I hope she dies, to cause all this pain with no thought of consequences no desire to help just to have everything her way - shakes head... excellant story my dear!

Verda
07/02/2006 10:54 pm
Mingled yarn         
I get so caught up in the story that when it stops, there's a sudden sadness that I have to deal with for a few moments and collect my thoughts. Feeling so bad for Dawn. Another great chappie. Thank you.

Nikkole
01/07/2006 02:44 am
Mingled yarn         
Heres some sugar for you! I am still really enjoying this story. It has enough going on that you are not bored, and yet not so much that you get confused! Great work,a nd I hope your pain starts to go away soon!

~*~Tasha~*~
01/03/2006 11:53 am
Mingled yarn         
Awesome that SPike and Buffy are still together. Thank you for updating even when it is hard for you to do physically. I hope that you are able to get enough release from the pain to continue. Thoroughly enjoy this one. Can't wait to see what Faith does to spill the beans on all of it.

01/01/2006 02:39 pm
Mingled yarn         
Just got caught up on the last 2 chapters. Lovely, hon. Hope you start to feel better soon! -Lisa

AthenaHahn
12/31/2005 11:34 pm
Mingled yarn         
Oh my gosh I loved this update!! I'm hoping from Faith's reaction when she woke up that she realized Willow was the cause of everything. Please? *hopeful look* At any rate, very good update; loved the Spuffy 'specially, soooooo yummy! Keep up the good work, and Happy Solstice to you!

Richard
12/31/2005 04:36 pm
Mingled yarn         
"Used wisely, a Slayer’s presence was a benefit to a prudent master vampire." I laughed out loud! He's so well characterized later, the way that he makes his decision; always cautious cautious. Wonderful.

12/31/2005 09:02 am
Mingled yarn         
Nice updates Nia! Very interesting developements... I look forward to seeing what Faith has to say. The Spuffyness was sweet and hot... yummy as ever! Have a wonderful New Year, my sweet! *hugs*

MARGARET
12/31/2005 08:22 am
Mingled yarn         
THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING THIS STORY LOVE THE TANGLED WEBS OF PLOT, GLAD BUFFY & SPIKE STILL ARE TOGETHER

11/23/2006 06:16 pm
Shadows of the world appear         
well, at least they've found the source of it all...what can they do to stop her though? can't wait to read more! :)

08/21/2006 10:49 am
Shadows of the world appear         
Ch 44 - I hope they understand that Willow was the cause of all this and not tara! What a horrible lash of magics if faith passed out. This is a great chapter and amazing story!

Verda
07/02/2006 10:05 pm
Shadows of the world appear         
You hit another one out of the ballpark. Really great chapter,
the emotional turmoil that you gave to Spike was intense. Knowing him the way that we do, he needed a release that only sex or violence can give him. Glad you showed how strong the magics were by making Faith pass out, makes it more believeable, dramatic.

Richard
12/31/2005 04:23 pm
Shadows of the world appear         
Lawson defecting, oh that's delicious. The hounds are getting close, I thought they were off-track before....

11/23/2006 06:04 pm
Persistence of memory         
yes, he does need to calm down...dawn would be dead right now if not for her..i really hope he realizes that right away...and maybe they're that much closer to figuring out what's going on...

08/21/2006 10:45 am
Persistence of memory         
Ch 43- Oh my amazing! The truth is starting to come out and nothing is going to stop it. The truth can't be denied! *evil cackle* i love this story!

Verda
07/02/2006 12:52 pm
Persistence of memory         
Freaking fabulous, girl, definately! So glad I got the clues you were leaving. Man Willow screwed up everywhere. All the possibilities are mind-blowing. What to read more but must try to get a few hours before I must get up. Planning my youngest's 21st birthday, and I keep forgetting to order the cake.

12/27/2005 01:01 pm
Persistence of memory         
Origins and Origins: Revelations are two of the best pieces I've ever read. Every time I log on and see an update from Niamh, it makes my evening a little bit sweeter to know I have some quality writing to read and enjoy. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to what comes next. Oh, yeah, wanted to mention that you do a great job with tying in little details that seem insignificant but make all the difference.

vicki ohgodspike@pacbell.net
12/24/2005 04:08 am
Persistence of memory         
oh my! i loved origins so very much. i had not intended to start this second part until it was done, as i have been hurt by WIPS before. but i loved origina so much that i printed this part up (336 pages so far) and read it. and now - well i'm on the edge of my seat all over the place. This story is just so freaking wonderful, fantastic and every other hyperbole you can think of. i am so sorry for all the shoulder problems you have been having - selfishly i need this story to be finished. now i am on edge and will just have to wait like all of us. and as for your author's note saying that somebody had criticized you, let he who has not written gorgeous fanfic not cast any stone. how dare they feel the right to criticize? let's see their work?? bastards! and god i know you are going to have willow get it BIG TIME and i just can't wait for that - you are right? plus xander, the asshole - him too, right? and of course, angel too? woman - you are a phenominal writer - this story and the original Origins are works of art, plain and simple. so let's all send healing vibes to nia so we can selfishly indulge ourselves in reading it. i'm in awe of you. thank you for writing this beautiful, beautiful work.

Amy
12/19/2005 03:19 am
Persistence of memory         
I have put all of my life on hold to read this story. I don't do that sort of thing for just anyone, so believe me when I say this is the most awesome story I've ever read and am dying to see the next submission!

12/09/2005 01:31 pm
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It’s excellent, outstanding, brilliant, superb, first-rate, dazzling, luminous, skillful, wonderful, stupendous, marvelous, and all around good. Can't wait for another update. :-D

Catrine
12/07/2005 03:17 am
Persistence of memory         
Can`t wait to read what happens next. Excellent story!!!Keep up the good work!

Judy
12/03/2005 07:32 pm
Persistence of memory         
Great update. This story is fanastic.

Stephanie
12/03/2005 07:09 pm
Persistence of memory         
Incrediable story - I really loved this and love all the twists and turns it takes. I cannot wait to find out how they react to the knowledge of what WIllow has done. This was an incrediable update and a fab story!

Stephanie
12/03/2005 07:06 pm
Persistence of memory         
Incrediable story - I really loved this and love all the twists and turns it takes. I cannot wait to find out how they react to the knowledge of what WIllow has done. This was an incrediable update and a fab story!

Kawaki
12/03/2005 02:09 am
Persistence of memory         
Wow! It never occurred to me about Dawn. So what about Zander and Cordelia? They obviously don't remember she was hurt and is in the hospital. This story is one of my favorites and you're doing an excellent job keeping me engrossed.

Oracleholly
12/02/2005 03:22 pm
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...is it any freaking good? YES you silly bint!!! It's great!!! Loved that Faith is doing the 'reveal' spell. Tara's stuttering is back (such an important detail) but she's getting hints and feelings that something's not right. Take your time honey -- you're health and your shoulder come first.

~*~Tasha~*~
12/02/2005 03:04 pm
Persistence of memory         
Loved the update. Pappa Spike is so protective that he's getting ticked off at Kristen for taking the chance. I love the story, and I look forward to more.

Nikkole
12/02/2005 12:18 pm
Persistence of memory         
Don't ever worry about this story not being good! I Don't think you could write it badly even if you tried! I am so hooked on this story I check back at least twice day to see if you have updated! GRAET chapter!!

12/02/2005 10:50 am
Persistence of memory         
It's freaking great! She is who I thought but I can't imagine how hard it must be to write this and the ramifications of her coming back. Thanks so much for this chapter and we'll be waiting for more of Kirsten and the outing of Willow and punishing her severely.

fitz
12/02/2005 10:45 am
Persistence of memory         
It seems like I've been waiting for the 'big reveal' since forever. Great job. I am so into this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Just a fabulousn story

12/02/2005 09:53 am
Persistence of memory         
Wonderful update! And I kinda feel bad for Kirsten. She gets to get chewed out by her Dad here and again when she gets back to her own time. Looking forward to the next update. -Lisa

Sarah
10/24/2012 08:36 am
Our memory is our coherence         
Hi! Several years post publication, but had to tell you how very much I'm enjoying origins. Thank you for writing such a wonderful, layered and thoughtful story.

11/23/2006 05:43 pm
Our memory is our coherence         
they're gonna have to figure this out from tara, aren't they? and i have a new theory about kirsten...is she buffy's baby, somehow brought back in time? hmmm...interesting chapter :)

08/21/2006 10:38 am
Our memory is our coherence         
CH 42- brilliant as usual my dear! I adore this story - you write the grief and aftermath of angel's attack very well - everyones confusion at the memory spell - although since they are starting to figure it out hopefully it will be broken soon - great story!

Verda
07/02/2006 12:24 pm
Our memory is our coherence         
Still goin' with the story's great. I know that Kristen is Buffy's and Spike's, my intuition's going bonkers, hope I'm right. Nothing to do for Dawn, nothing but time and support from her family. How's Cordy doin'? Your doing an awesome job. Yup, can tell that this is going to alot longer than you had anticapated, you've brought alot more to this story than when you first started it.

MARGARET
11/30/2005 09:34 am
Our memory is our coherence         
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE. I LOVE HOW SPIKE IS COMFORTING DAWN AND BUFFY, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHO KRISTIN IS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATES MARGARET

Kawaki
11/29/2005 01:24 am
Our memory is our coherence         
I thought that Kristen was Spike and Buffy's daughter at first. Now I think she may be Dawn's daughter. I can't wait to find out who she is. Once again the update 40-42 was great. I want to knock Willow upside her head. Her spell resulted in Casey's death. I'm going to have to reread Origins because I can't remeber when Dawn started dating Casey. Shouldn't they have forgotten that they were a couple?

Judy
11/26/2005 09:23 pm
Our memory is our coherence         
Wonderful story. Excellent chapter. This one is so good that you don't mind waiting for updates!

Jenna
11/26/2005 03:32 pm
Our memory is our coherence         
Another wonderful chapter. I loved the moments of comfort between Spike & Dawn. Also liked the "eureka" conversation in the kitchen; they're so close to figuring out the spell. You're tantalising us with hints about Kristen story. Can't wait to see how you sort it all out. Love this fic!

~*~Tasha~*~
11/26/2005 02:50 pm
Our memory is our coherence         
I think it is a wonderful story, and this was a great chapter. I like seeing how each chapter develops. They are starting to piece things together. When they figure out that it is Willow, and what all happened because of it ... oh boy. The crap is going to hit the fan. Look forward to more

Richard
11/26/2005 06:47 am
Our memory is our coherence         
Poor Dawn. I wish someone had sat her down and explained that if she had not existed, both Buffy and Spike would be permanently dead by now. By suicide, one right after the other. So it is all her fault ... her fault they're alive at all.

Nikkole
11/26/2005 05:57 am
Our memory is our coherence         
I know you are feeling insecure about this story, but you shouldn't! It is a wonderful story. It has plenty of action, love, and new characters. The plot is great, and the writing is even better! I can't wait for Willow to get what's coming to her.

11/26/2005 05:54 am
Our memory is our coherence         
I think it works well. The "brains"are starting to figure some things out about the spell - or at least they know where to look. Spike, the perceptive one, is zeroing in on Kristen - that should be a fun conversation! Looking forward to Willow's being busted soon so they can get back to fighting Angelus.

AthenaHahn
11/26/2005 04:18 am
Our memory is our coherence         
Oh my gosh, this story is getting SO GOOD!! Please tell me that Willow gets her comeuppance sometime soon; even if it's the hellhounds taking her somewhere nasty to beat some sense into her... sheesh, I thought XANDER was bad in some of the stories I read... Please update soon!

Stephanie
11/26/2005 03:28 am
Our memory is our coherence         
Wonderful Story - I really enjoyed it! Cannot wait to see what happens!

11/26/2005 03:23 am
Our memory is our coherence         
Evil cliffie! I hope you're feeling better because this story is so good and makes me so worried about the good guys here and leaves me with frustration about the bad guys going free to do more damage.

11/26/2005 02:57 am
Our memory is our coherence         
I think it's wonderful! Looking forward to the next chapter! -Lisa

11/23/2006 05:11 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
i was just thinking...previous mentions of other samples taken from spike and buffy by the initiative, and the work the monks did...is kirsten also spike's and buffy's child somehow? maybe a first attempt that was abandoned, or...? hmm...just a thought :)

08/21/2006 10:33 am
Savage and serene in one hour         
CH 41 - Good that they are trying to figure out the memory thing. They need to know and stat! I cannot believe the audacity of willow. Having sex with Tara under the influcnes of a mind alterating spell that she did on purpose is rape. It is her fault about casy everything is her fault - i so hope the huntmen drag her butt away!

Verda
07/02/2006 11:59 am
Savage and serene in one hour         
OK Ms. encyclopedia, aren't you just a wealth of knowledge. First you gave an explanation as to who and what Miss Edith was, now you've explained why Spike had his scar. Now for the matter of Jenner, always thought it was a little strange that for several hundred years, Darla didn't have another Childe, before Angelus, or several. And Lawson saying it's us against the English again, that was funny. Another thing that's been driving me crazy is Kristen. Is she Buffy and Spike's child? from the future? The way she answered Spike by saying "Yes sir" it had a ring of familiarity to it, like an obedient child. Are Toussaint and Rebecca a mated potential/vamp pair? So many questions. So eager to find out.

11/18/2005 06:29 am
Savage and serene in one hour         
Oh, nice chapter, Nia. Pretty much figured out who Kristen is, although I was leaning that way earlier anyway. I feel so sorry for Dawn. You've done an excellent job of capturing her anguish. I'll be looking forward to the next update.

Jenna
11/17/2005 11:46 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
Wonderful chapter, touched on a lot of plot points and characters. Poor Dawn! Really looking forward to everyone figuring out what's going on and that Willow is responsible. Thanks for the quick update.

Richard
11/17/2005 09:25 pm
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Lawson, Jenner, and Liam vs the English. Oh, that was quite funny. Keep up the OCs please. Especially when they're in the "Duh, well that makes sense." category. As in "Duh, it makes sense the Aurelian Order isn't on its last legs given how widely it's still respected." and "Duh, it makes sense that Angelus isn't the eldest in the Order." I mean, going from the Master (1000s) to Darla (800) to Angelus (200), come on!

11/17/2005 07:26 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
Awesome Update! Loved the interaction with Faith and Spike. Looking forward to more. -Lisa

Judy
11/17/2005 07:02 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
Great chapter. Hope you arm keeps getting better.

11/17/2005 03:12 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
Faith can help if Buffy doesn't pummel her first. I want more about Kirsten. I think lots of us have suspicions but we need you to 'splain please.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/17/2005 01:00 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
Lots of potential for mayhem with Lawson. I look forward to what happens there. Good moving along with Kristen present as well. I hope they get their memories back soon or there is going to be more bloodshed. I wonder what Willow is going to do when Spike show up at the house and she finds out Spike and Buffy are mated. Stupid Wilow and her spells. Look forward to more.

desertrose
11/17/2005 12:13 pm
Savage and serene in one hour         
I liked it. Really think Lawson will be the best kind of wild card. His animosity of Angel (as he really does not know Angelus) and his "half-soul", as he guessed it was, makes him one heck of a great character to use in fic I think. SOOO much potential.

11/23/2006 05:27 am
Grief fades in and out         
wow this is getting intense...looking forward to more :)

08/21/2006 10:26 am
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CH 40 - great chapter as always sweetie - I loved the interaction with Faith - i can;t wait to see how the spell affects or does not affect her. Great story!

Verda
07/02/2006 11:03 am
Grief fades in and out         
Nope, reread the whole chapter again and Yes everything works, from Faith coming back to SunnyD to Dawn's ordeal in the ER. All's good.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/16/2005 12:15 pm
Grief fades in and out         
Loved the line about Oz and lesbians. Loved the comforting of Buffy and Spike for Dawn. Willow is in DEEP trouble. If she hadn't messed with the memories, Casey would still be alive. When they get their memories back, Willow is in for it big time. I wonder if Willow will even live, if the hounds get her. Look forward to more.

11/15/2005 10:52 pm
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Great story! I really enjoyed reading it and can't wait to find out what the outcome of the spell will be. I cannot believe that Willow caused Caseu's death - because if Dawn had remembered then she would never have been walking after dark with him. i feel so so sorry for Dawnie. Willow has got to pay!

11/14/2005 11:11 am
Grief fades in and out         
AAAaaaaaaaa! Ok, Ok calming. Shhhh shhhh. I’m good, I’m Good. Ok, So Last week I started reading “Origins” and I read threw to “Origins Revelations”. So Basically been reading every moment I wasn’t working or tenden my youngens. So the screaming was my shock at coming to a dead-end. My nerves are on end. The withdraws will be grate. Please, O Please do update soon.

Kristen
11/14/2005 10:18 am
Grief fades in and out         
You could kind of tell you had a hard time writing this because it just jumped all around but you do have so much stuff going on. I really loved how you portrayed Dawn's grief and how she instinctively wanted her parents. You got me to tear up! Loved how Faith arrived, you really do such a great job keeping everyone in character.

Kristen
11/14/2005 09:40 am
Grief fades in and out         
You could kind of tell you had a hard time writing this because it just jumped all around but you do have so much stuff going on. I really loved how you portrayed Dawn's grief and how she instinctively wanted her parents. You got me to tear up! Loved how Faith arrived, you really do such a great job keeping everyone in character.

desertrose
11/14/2005 06:47 am
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You know it works wonderfully. Loved it as always. So I guess the Mommy and Daddy thing is Dawn's drugged and grieved subconsious ripping through the spell. Love to see how Faith works into this revamped crew.

ComedyofErrors
11/14/2005 12:51 am
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It works perfectly. I love the scene with Spike, Buffy and Dawn, acting as the family unit they are. Very moving. I'm curious to see what happens when Kristen starts answering questions. Once again, I like the way you're bringing Faith into this. She is both determined and resourceful; she'll be a needed ally. Oz communing with the wolf was humorous and touching. Very Oz.

Judy
11/13/2005 09:51 pm
Grief fades in and out         
It works. Really loving this story.

Jenna
11/13/2005 04:51 pm
Grief fades in and out         
Great update. Really glad that Kristen has come back into the fic; hope we learn more about her soon. Dawn was so heartbreaking; really nice moment with Spike and Buffy trying to comfort her and at the same time not knowing what she's talking about with all the "Daddy"ing. You touched on so many of the ongoing threads of the story, like the Huntsmen and Faith, Oz & Tara. Really looking forward to what happens next with the plot and the character interations.

Richard
11/13/2005 09:22 am
Grief fades in and out         
It works. I just hope the Huntsman breaks the spell before Kirsten undergoes too much questioning (spell broken > Spike remembers her saving Dawn > Spike grateful > Spike doesn't question her). It'd be interesting to keep the suspense up on her origins (although of course I have my own theory). I also wonder whether Tara and the others will try to protect Willow from the Huntsman. I can think of several scenarios, and I'm eager to find out. I doubt Angelus will be dealt with for a while though. I vaguely wonder who'll get to stake him (not the Huntsman, that's the only thing I'm sure of).

11/13/2005 09:10 am
Grief fades in and out         
I enjoyed this chap. Poor Dawn wanting her dad... that was so sweet. And Faith made it there... hopefully they can begin to unravel the mystery of what has happened to them.

11/13/2005 06:21 am
Grief fades in and out         
It all works, Nia! Poor Dawn. I hope Faith can answer some questions and that they can find a way to break the spell. They are all at such a disadvantage until they know what's really going on. More when you can, please?

11/13/2005 05:03 am
Grief fades in and out         
I think it works quite well. I'm anxious to see how badly Dawn tortures Willow when the spell is revealed. And how Faith will work into the group dynamic. I love this story, and think it's a great update! Hope your arm's feeling better. -Lisa

11/13/2005 02:55 am
Grief fades in and out         
OMG!! That's terrible about Casey. Are the Huntsmen after Willow? Maybe they could take out Angelus as well. I hope Faith can help break Willow's evil spell. Tara could help if somebody could get her away from Willow. This is such a good story. More soon please.

11/13/2005 02:44 am
Grief fades in and out         
"Staring down at his crotch for a long minute, Oz wondered idly what was it about him and lesbians. . . ." LOVED that line! Can't wait to find out more about Kirsten :)

11/23/2006 05:16 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
oh how sad...casey's dead...and it's willow's fault...how terrible...hope they get dawnie to the hospital and she's okay, and break willow's spell right away...

08/21/2006 10:21 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
CH 39 - OMG that was so powerful. I am sitting here stunned and amazed. It evoked such strong emotion - I am just sitting here unbelieveng that casey is dead. heartbroken for dawn. This is so sad!

Verda
07/02/2006 10:19 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
Sorry about that last comment and Casey. Willow is so going to get hers, I've no doubt. You really made Angelus sound like the sick *thing* that he is. Another great read.

Nikkole
11/26/2005 05:07 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
Love the story! I was so sad to see Casey die, but at the same time, I knew it was going to happen. Maybe when Willow's spell is broken, something will be returned, I don't know, just an idea. Now, about the Huntsman, I think that his hounds are after Willow. You wrote that they picked up the sent of old magick, used by one with no cares, or something along those lines, that would be Willow. Poor Tara! She will be so betrayed (not that the rest of them aren't, but I feel most for her). I hope your shoulder is feeling better soon! I will send some good thoughts your way!

~*~Tasha~*~
11/11/2005 05:16 pm
Lambs for the slaughter         
Wow, what a way for Casey to go. Him fighting for Dawn like that was amazing and excellent! It gave him a really strong way to go out as a good and loving character. Glad to see Kirsten pop back in. Hope Faith gets to Sunnydale soon. Look forward to more.

jackson
11/10/2005 11:25 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
please......please.......more soon.....l will be hanging on the edqe of my seat waiting.....you have an amazing qift for writing......thanks for sharlng......

jackson
11/10/2005 11:23 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
please......please.......more soon.....l will be hanging on the edqe of my seat waiting.....you have an amazing qift for writing......thanks for sharlng......

outforawalk
11/10/2005 07:10 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
I have an email of "what I love in your fic" that I keep meaning to send, but I am a slacker. So I am just dropping in to say "AHHH!" Poor Casey. Not to mention poor Tara. I am really feeling for her at this point. WIllow needs a boot to the head at this point, or anything else that will knock some sense into her. I am so looking forward to the next chapter! Hope your arm isn't acting up. (Man, I am so selfish. ;))

Jenna
11/07/2005 07:26 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
Grrr...bad Angel...can't wait for him to get what he deserves. I'm glad to see the Huntsman and Kristen again. Poor Dawn! Things are happening so fast; can't wait to see what happens with Willow, Faith, Angel, Kristen, with everything! Thanks for the update and hope your shoulder and muse are nice to you; can't wait to find out what happens next! Break up the story however you want, I'll read it in whatever format.

desertrose
11/07/2005 06:19 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
Wow, you killed Dawn's first boyfriend. You kid killer you. Great chapter and Really I don't quite understand the A/N on the feedback and breaking it up but if that means you stop here I would be very sad. So much great action in this chapter with Angelus, Casey's last stand, the hounds, Kristen and Ohmigawd you're having Faith Drive in to town drunk?? (or buzzed)

SpaceLord
11/07/2005 04:21 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
The hounds are out hunting, can't wait until they find their prey :) Good chapter.

11/07/2005 03:35 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
OMG! I was just learning to like Casey! Been taking lessons from Joss, have you? LOL Excellent chapter. If you're going to split the story again, though, I think you'll need to end on some sort of hopeful note, won't you? Perhaps when Willow's botched spell is completely broken? Whatever you need to do, sweets. You're the boss.

11/07/2005 03:18 am
Lambs for the slaughter         
Gah! Noooo! Poor Casey :( Glad to see Krirsten and the hounds again, though.

11/23/2006 05:09 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
oh man...i hope they can get there in time...and i dont really get why willow's spell made them forget that angel was bad, but didn't make angel forget...hmm...

08/21/2006 10:17 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
Ch 38 - Nooo.... Angelus leave em alone! Bites nails and runs to the new chappie - to good to stop reading long enough to type this. I bow to your writing!

Verda
07/02/2006 09:57 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
Wow! you brought in Faith, great idea, it'll be like old home's week. Thinking about it,oh no that's never good, Willow knew about Angel and didn't change his memories. Wondering why? Hey Casey! Welcome to the Hellmouth. Lovin'it!

07/02/2006 09:45 am
The Monsters of our childhood         

~*~Tasha~*~
11/11/2005 05:07 pm
The Monsters of our childhood         
I actually love that Faith is on the way. Are the Huntsmen coming for Willow? Oh no about Dawn and Casey! I hope the others get there in time. Look forward to more.

Jenna
11/07/2005 07:13 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
wow, somehow I'd completely forgotten about the Huntman. I'm really looking forward to what happens with that. I really like your take on Faith and loved her escape...it'll be neat to see her in the mix in Sunnydale. The gang's attempts to figure out what's wrong and really interesting; what escaped the spell and what didn't. Really looking forward to seeing Willow have to face up to what she did and the damage she's caused. Regarding breaking up the story: I'm glad you have a lot more to tell and it doesn't matter to me if you tell it in a contiunuation of Origins: Revelations or in another Origin's fic. I'm just greatful for the wonderful plot, characteriztions and ideas and think it should continue in whatever format is best for you. Thanks for all the recent updates; they're so exciting...now off to read the next chapter.

Judy
11/06/2005 08:36 pm
The Monsters of our childhood         
Didn't think it was possible, but this just keeps getting better and better.

Richard
11/06/2005 08:50 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
Elevated heartrate? Check. Tense muscles? Check. Anxiety? Check. *whimper* I don't think I like cliffhangers. :) And I'm eagerly awaiting Willow getting dragged off to hell.

11/06/2005 08:21 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
Your goddamm cliffies are starting to give me heart trouble! Why is Buffy sleeping? More story soon please.

MARGARET
11/06/2005 06:38 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
LOVE THIS STORY, PLEASE CAN WE BE DONE WITH THE MIND GAMES AND CAN WILLOW STOP BEING EVIL? THANKS FOR THE UPDATES

11/06/2005 06:00 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
Great chapter- I hope they figure it out soon.

11/06/2005 05:43 am
The Monsters of our childhood         
I'm loving Casey, all mouthy to Angel. :)

10/15/2017 10:41 pm
What love can do         
i know this comes very late, I started rereading this after a few years and i can't seem to stop. 

Nilyra Blackthorne
08/29/2011 12:59 pm
What love can do         
Dear Niamh, 
  
  Poor you! It seems like every time I turn about something's gone wonky with your shoulder. What in the worlds happened to it that it should cause so much pain? Did you get hit by a car? [ I really hope you didn't because then that wouldn't be a funny joke at all! *crosses fingers*]
  Whatever the cause of your suffering, it definitely isn't affecting your writing skills. I've heard rumors about this series for awhile and your [pen]name is known to be connected to beautifully written, well researched and completely believable fanfiction. The fact that you can make a fictional world seem entirely plausible is an amazing tribute to the power of the pen you wield.
  I've been unable to tear myself away from my computer screen except to go to work and to sleep. I'm tired, my back aches, and I have a migraine from reading so much. I don't think I've ever been happier. Thank you for giving the world the gift of hard earned skill and Gods given talent. May you continue to write in good health.

  Happily Mired In Admiration,
    Nilyra B.

nmcil
08/13/2007 03:37 am
What love can do         
like how you are working Willow's spell and the strong bonds, not only the mating of Buffy & Spike, but all the good feelings and relationships of the rest of the immediate characters -

Devon
06/03/2007 10:00 pm
What love can do         
I'm enjoying this story so much. I feel so bad about your shoulder though. I hope it's better now. It's amazing you can still write, and such a wonderful tale at that. Thank you.

12/09/2006 06:39 am
What love can do         
I only discovered your story today, and I've spent HOURS reading it. My god, but this is magnificent, riveting, like watching not merely an episode of the show, it's like watching an entire SEASON. You are a master storyteller - plot, pacing, description, characterization. I haven't read so intricate a plot in a long time. And so well executed. I'd write more, but I want to go back to reading!

11/23/2006 04:48 am
What love can do         
as usual, willow's spell has messed things up even without her intended results...i hope they figure it out in time to save dawn and casey, but i'm not sure they will...

08/21/2006 10:12 am
What love can do         
Chapter 37 - Excellant chapter as always sweetie - I cannot believe how selfish Willow is being - she has no conception of right and wrong - is that not part of the definition of a pychopath - shrugs if not it should be. She is messing with everyone's minds and I know this is going to end badky (not just because i have read it before either *grin*) Come on I have only read the story about 4 times that is not that bad...

Verda
07/02/2006 09:24 am
What love can do         
Your a marvelous writer, Niamh O'Conner.Your words excite me and I feel just like I'm watching the show only better 'cause I know that Spike isn't coming up with the short end of the straw. Everything that I had expected from you(it's a trust thing, and I do)even though it's hard with Angel still stalking it makes the story better, more suspenseful. Great work.

01/06/2006 09:48 am
What love can do         
Full of twists and turns, this one. I like it. Although, I wonder what's going to happen to reveal everything for what it is, again? Hmmmm....Got me curious. Luckily for me, I can keep on reading to find out. :)

~*~Tasha~*~
11/11/2005 04:59 pm
What love can do         
Angel had better not hurt Dawn. {Growls} Well written chapter. I hope Willow gets what is coming to her, and if Angel harms one hair on Dawn's head ... Grrrrrr

jackson
11/10/2005 08:00 am
What love can do         
loving this story......feel better soon.....we all need you to keep writing.......

Judy
11/06/2005 08:17 pm
What love can do         
Love this story. Always happy to see updates.

11/05/2005 03:48 pm
What love can do         
I love this story... I really, really do. You do such a good job with Spike and Buffy and I love how you've changed the whole Conner thing.

11/05/2005 12:51 pm
What love can do         
Grr! Willow's messing everthing up again! I'm just glad that nobody, particularly Spike and Buffy, are being completely affected by the spell.

11/05/2005 12:25 pm
What love can do         
Hey Nia - Damn! I'm sorry that shoulder is still bothering you. I thought it might be all healed by now. Great new chapter - love that the claim is stronger than the spell, and the Willow appears to be having the beginning of second thoughts. Scary Angel still around, though...not good.

murph
11/05/2005 11:49 am
What love can do         
Great chapter. Seeing a new chapter literally made my day, so thanks! When checking to see if the WIPs I'm reading have been updated, this is always the first one I look for. I was wondering how the whole Willow "twist" was going to affect Angel...oooh this could get ugly. I'm really liking Dawn in this story too, sigh. Man, I hope she escapes Cordy's fate? Hope your shoulder is feeling better.

desertrose
11/05/2005 11:27 am
What love can do         
Well hopefully you know how much I love this story. Really pleased to see this new chapter too. Poor Faith having to peddle the flesh for her calling and Buffy. And oh boy the rest is great!

11/05/2005 09:50 am
What love can do         
ACK!! Willow has so much to answer for. Will Spike and Buffy or the Watchers or Oz figure out anything soon enough to help Dawn and Casey? Angelus is so bad and Willow is helping him and hurting everybody else. More soon please.

Richard
11/05/2005 09:12 am
What love can do         
I had to skip to the end right away to see what would happen to Dawn and GODDAMN IT WILLOW!

Mary
11/05/2005 09:05 am
What love can do         
I am loving this story and your other one as well. I hope your shoulder feels better soon!

Jenna
11/05/2005 08:59 am
What love can do         
Wonderful update, and so soon! What a pleasant treat. What a cliffhanger...on the edge of my seat with Angel lurking around Dawn. Can't wait to hear what everyone else thinks of Spike & Buffy's revelation. Hope your shoulder get's better; what's wrong with it? An old injury or chronic disorder? Good luck with and thank you for the continuation of a great story!

11/23/2006 04:39 am
Missing         
wow...how are they gonna figure out what she did? can't believe willow's doing this, when the truth comes out she'll have burned her bridges i'm sure :(

08/20/2006 03:47 pm
Missing         
Chapter 36-

Willow is evil - EVIL i say! I can't believe what she did. EVIL EVIL!!!! Shakes head - I adore this story sweetie, it keeps getting better - I adore it!

Verda
07/02/2006 08:48 am
Missing         
I realize that it's been awhile since you started writing this but I have to say something to you about your injuries, that I'm sorry that you've been in so much pain due to it. Very gratful you had support from your friends, teenage sons aren't equipped to give much assistance when their mom's aren't up to snuff. With that said must let you know the way you've planned out Willow's scheme is so perfect, very very believeable. You did not disappoint.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/11/2005 04:46 pm
Missing         
Excellent chapter. Really want to throttle Willow big time, but at least people are still feeling that something is off. Stupid Willow. I hope they get it all figured out or this is going to get really bad really quick.

murph
11/05/2005 11:41 am
Missing         
Great new chapter. Damn that Willow! The really cool thing is, I just reread the whole Origins saga yesterday, so excellent timing on the new chappie. Nice addition of Faith, can't wait to see where that goes. I REALLY love this story. Thanks.

11/03/2005 03:59 pm
Missing         
I'm still loving this! Never a dull moment, and I'm always on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what the "villains of the piece" are going to do next. Plus.....it's hot as hell!

11/03/2005 03:42 am
Missing         
OMG! WTF are they going to do with Willow? Can she be stripped of her powers? What she has done before is bad but this is horrible. Maybe she can be given to Angelus, although a vampire witch sounds pretty bad. I will be looking for more of your wonderful story.

Jenna
11/02/2005 10:44 am
Missing         
Sqeee! An update! I love where you're going with the story and how Spike, Buffy and Connor all knew something was wrong. Can't wait to see what they do next. Sorry to hear about your arm; I know how dibilitating and frustrating and depressing injuries can be. :(

11/02/2005 10:24 am
Missing         
This was a lovely update - and, unlike many stories, I didn't have to go back and reread to remember where we were and what was going on. I'm sorry your mood is dark, but you've written a lovely, hopeful chapter. I hope RL permits an update soon. *hugs*

Kawaki
11/02/2005 08:41 am
Missing         
Origins Revelations 36-This is the lastest chapter right? I would hate to miss one. Just wanted to let you know how much I love this story. It's one of my favorites. Can't wait for the next update.

11/23/2006 04:32 am
Patient for a moment         
i'm worried about what willow's doing and what effects it will have...can't wait to see what happens next :)

08/20/2006 03:30 pm
Patient for a moment         
great chappie - this is a really great story -i know i say that a lot but that is because it is one of my favorties, I adore it! Everything seems to be going so well- i am just waiting for willow to screw it up - bad willow! Great chappie!

Verda
07/02/2006 08:19 am
Patient for a moment         
You really know how to turn a good tale. The Buffybot noticing the monitors fluctuate in response to Xanders voice...priceless. Loved the scene with Spike and Dawn on the porch. It was definately warranted and Giles and Buffy's kitchen scene was as I would have expected between the two. Now to see what damage Willow's going to do. Love this so much.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/11/2005 04:37 pm
Patient for a moment         
So love the bitty bitty bit and lil bad lines. LOL.

11/23/2006 04:24 am
Two hearts beat as one         
nice little respite they got there...but i have a feeling things are about to get bad again, eh? :(

08/20/2006 03:26 pm
Two hearts beat as one         
Excellant - i love everyone's reaction - this is really great and a good story! Now preparing for the agnst ahead! Great chappie!

Verda
07/02/2006 07:33 am
Two hearts beat as one         
What a happy Christmas for them, the cat's out of the bag. Can't wait for Anya to tell Xander about it, put that in his pipe and smoke it. Don't know if you have your own website for you new fics or post somewhere else but please let me know. What to read Baby Love as soon as I finish this fic. Are you planning a series of Dr.Jim Donovan's cases or is it a one shot book? Is there an email address in which we can contact you, most of the authors here do. If not, will you please contact me: vakay54@yahoo.com. Thank you for this fanastic story.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/11/2005 04:23 pm
Two hearts beat as one         
Excellent chapter.

11/23/2006 04:17 am
Part 8         
awww...that was so incredibly sweet...i'm so happy for them, they're gonna have a baby!! :)

11/23/2006 03:27 am
Part 8         
32 -- awww...Christmas preparations :) very sweet chapter, can't wait to see spike's reaction to buffy's news :)

08/20/2006 03:23 pm
Part 8         
Chapter 33 - What a great chapter - Buffy announced her pregnancy perfectly I think, SPikes reaction was perfect - I am a bit scared of Willow at the moment - Yikes! You rock as always sweetie!

08/20/2006 12:54 pm
Part 8         
CHapter 32 - I can't believe that Buffy is nervous or scared (well i can it is BUffy after all she is silly sometimes) she should know spike is going to be happy and probably already knows with his sniffer. But of course she wouldn't be Buffy if she wasn't nervous or scared. This is really good so far - I adore this story! adore adore adore - great writing and wonderful characterization!

Verda
07/01/2006 11:32 am
Part 8         
Another great chapter. Now that Willows going to do Jonathan's spell does that mean that Spike is going to loose his chip? Angel get his soul back again or that Buffy's not pregnant any more? Want so much to read on but must get some sleep, between RL and your wonderful stories, haven't gotten much sleep in the last few day's since I first read the first chapter of "Origins". *hugs*

10/05/2005 11:58 pm
Part 8         
Love your story. Such excellent work.

11/23/2006 03:18 am
Part 7         
maybe there's hope for xander yet :) but i have a feeling now things are going to get very ugly with angelus, aren't they? :(

11/23/2006 02:45 am
Part 7         
30 -- i hope wes is okay at the hospital...and i hope angelus and dru dont hurt spike or buffy...and buffy's pregnant, isn't she? :) great chapter :)

11/23/2006 02:35 am
Part 7         
29 -- oh poor cordy...you captured her reaction very well, very realistic, heart-breakingly so...now i just hope spike will be okay... :( great chapter :)

11/23/2006 01:43 am
Part 7         
28 -- oh no...i have a bad feeling about this plan...hope spike's okay..poor cordy, hope they can save her soon...excellent chapter, looking forward to more :)

08/18/2006 11:44 pm
Part 7         
ch 31

can't wait to see who showed up - great story - i truly love this fic go team spuffy with the rescues!

08/18/2006 11:37 pm
Part 7         
ch 30 - thank goodness they rescued cordy - i am glad wes is staying there with her. great writing - very emotional scenes

08/18/2006 11:29 pm
Part 7         
Ch 29 - great chappie - i feel so sorry for cordy you write the scene perfectly. such pain and emotion = great job!!!

08/18/2006 11:14 pm
Part 7         
Chapter 28 = wow powerful chapter = i feel so sorry for cordy = i hope everythings turns out ok and they can rescue her. just wow great chapter

Verda
07/01/2006 10:37 am
Part 7         
That was so raw and powerful and sweet and tender, you put just about every emotion available between those chapters. At least Xander's helping, better than just running his mouth. Oh! what happened to the girl that they rescued besides Cordy? Your poem was beautiful, dark, but beautiful. Thanking you ever so, for writing it.

11/23/2006 01:29 am
Part 6         
now what makes me think that xander's not gonna stick with that plan? great chapter, by the way...on to more :)

11/23/2006 12:44 am
Part 6         
26 -- lol..that last scene was funny, poor little connor scarred for life...i'm getting worried about what willow's up to...and where's xander been during all this? great chapter, pet :)

11/23/2006 12:25 am
Part 6         
25 -- awww..that last bit was so sweet, with the baby and all...caught me off guard, though, with who angelus' prisoner is...poor cordy! good chapter :)

11/23/2006 12:04 am
Part 6         
24 -- oh poor oz :( i hope he's okay...i have a bad feeling about them going to the initiative...great chapter, though :)

08/17/2006 09:39 pm
Part 6         
CHapter 27 - excellant story - I hope they can get Cordy out - I think Giles suspects... it would be rather funny if everyone else figured it out first. Great story sweetie - I can't wait to read the rest of it. I was hoping to finish all of the rereading today because I know there are new chapters taunting me, teasing me... but alas I may have to go to bed before I get there. But This is an EXCELLANT story and I am absolutly in love with it.

08/17/2006 09:30 pm
Part 6         
chapter 26 - great chapter - I can't wait for Buffy to discover why she is sick and throwing up. I know SPike knows. *evil grin* They need to rescue cordy stat! and of course - last but not least - willow is scary!

08/17/2006 09:20 pm
Part 6         
Chapter 25 - excallant chapter - I feel sorry for Oz - but glad that Angel underestimated him. Perhaps that will make him think twice - and OMG he has Cordy - poor Cordy - I really love this story and am looking forward to reading and rereading more. (I mean I have only read it like 4 times - giggles)

08/17/2006 09:05 pm
Part 6         
Chapter 24 - Excellant story - I hope someone comes to help Oz out. Poor wolf has been hurt! *Tries to pet injured warewolf* Excellant story - like the surprise of Giles and Wes finding out about the mating. Wonder when Buffy will figure out the rest...

Verda
07/01/2006 08:35 am
Part 6         
Don't understand the fuss, so the story's a little dark, there were dark subjects on BtVS all the time. That was part of what made it great, at least @ BSV your readers shouldn't have a problem. Wanted you to know how much I love the way you write Spike's dialogue. Sound's perfect. The words a want to use I can't remember them, to many years since I needed them, too many cobwebs to clarify them. Sorry. Just know how much I'm enjoying your exciting tale.

nmcil
08/12/2007 02:37 pm
Part 5         
love the last line - been watching season 6 again and seeing all the anger and self-hatred and lost souls that were Buffy and Spike - having your story to read is a really nice contrast -

11/22/2006 11:52 pm
Part 5         
wonder what sorts of effects the claim will have on them...love the whole ganya twist...love it...hope she dumps xander fast...great chapter :)

11/22/2006 11:43 pm
Part 5         
22 -- awww...i love claimy fics...is spike gonna claim her now?? lovely chapter, looking forward to more :)

11/22/2006 11:27 pm
Part 5         
21 -- oh no...this could get really bad really fast....hope drusilla's not enough of a distraction to allow angelus to get an upper hand...great chapter :)

11/22/2006 11:12 pm
Part 5         
20 -- i'm glad that angel didn't manage to intimidate wes with that phone call...though i wonder if that might just make him angry, and more determined to get to him and the others...we'll see i guess..on to more :)

08/17/2006 06:51 pm
Part 5         
Chapter 23 - wow with the whole powerful sex scene there. It was quite amazing. Fanning self - i would write more but the next chappie is sitting there taunting me with more story!

08/17/2006 06:48 pm
Part 5         
Chapter 22 - I love the Anya/Giles pairing - it is such a great pairing. Xander never deserved someone like her. Her emotions were great. I loved the chapter! You rock sweetie!

08/17/2006 06:39 pm
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Chapter 21- oh no Dru has entered Sunnydale. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a great story off to the next chapter to see what happens!

08/17/2006 06:22 pm
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Chapter 20 - I love the chapter - the Giles thinking he will have to convince Buffy and Buffy's thoughts they they had to convince giles was very funny. Good chapter - I am wondering who Dru has and win angelus will find his pressie! I can't wait to read more chapters!

Verda
07/01/2006 05:55 am
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Yes! Yes! Yes! Their mated at last! Thanks so much. Giles and Anya... love it. Angelus...creepy. Dru...wack job. Willow...scary. It was great.

01/05/2006 03:38 pm
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Cool chapter. Good Spike thoughts here.  :-)

11/22/2006 10:59 pm
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19 -- okay, so willow's gonna end up on angel's side, isn't she? he's either gonna turn her, or talk down buffy and the others enough to get her on his side with some scheme...sigh...great chapter, but i'm getting worried for them all...

11/22/2006 10:27 pm
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18 -- oh i'm really nervous about what's gonna happen when angelus goes after willow...poor buffy, how shaken up she must be, poor girl...hope they all stay safe :)

11/22/2006 10:12 pm
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17 -- love how spike and buffy took the revelation about dawn...they're a family...and i have a feeling that's something spike, more than any of them, is going to need right now...i have a feeling that being angelus' target is going to be pretty hard on him... :( great chapter :)

11/22/2006 09:55 pm
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16 -- i think buffy's right about giles, isn't she? and you totally chilled me with angel outside the window...man, how scary...i'm startin to get worried for all of them...great chapter :)

11/22/2006 09:21 pm
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15 -- that last bit with wes and spike had me a bit confused...is something wrong besides his injuries from the fight? is something wrong with his chip, maybe? they need to get that thing out, right away! great chapter :)

08/17/2006 06:14 pm
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Chapter 19 - Oh lovely story I loved the Angel and Willow meeting 0 I wonder if he is going to try and turn her - of course there are also the Huntsmen who want her as well I assume - I wonder who will end up attacking her first. great chapter - very excellant well done - oh and the part about Darla being a potential - brilliant!

08/17/2006 06:13 pm
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Chapter 19 - Oh lovely story I loved the Angel and Willow meeting 0 I wonder if he is going to try and turn her - of course there are also the Huntsmen who want her as well I assume - I wonder who will end up attacking her first. great chapter - very excellant well done - oh and the part about Darla being a potential - brilliant!

08/17/2006 05:57 pm
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Chapter 18 - lovely chapter - I love Willow's confidence that she can take care of herself, her continued alienation that she is inflicted on herself and Buffy's reaction to tara's news. great chapter!

08/17/2006 05:49 pm
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Chapter 17 - Wonderful chapter - I am in your thrall! This was very great. I loved how Dawn blurted out the truth to them - wonderfully emotional. Sigh - happy thought! I love it and can't wait to finish more!

08/17/2006 02:45 pm
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Chapter 16 - lovely chapter - Angelus has now entered the play! I loved it - great story! *grin* I hope they take care of the chip soon - it would be to easy for angel to round up some humans to do the dirty work for him. Great!

08/17/2006 02:36 pm
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Chapter 15 - I feel so sorry for Anya - you have written her beutifully - her confusion, her inabililty to understand what she is doing is wrong (well nothing your boyfriend is an A**) great chapter!

Verda
06/30/2006 10:53 am
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No worries about chapter 16, it was very exciting with Angelus stalking them, making poor Spike take a defensive stand against him, holding Conner no less. Thank you so much for Dawn spilling the beans about her parents. These are awesome chapters to an awesome story. Glad Buffy's open to the fact that she can have a child with Spike. Hope she does after a big wedding.

07/24/2018 04:51 am
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I'm enjoying reading your great series yet again - I think it's wonderful.

Catherine Nielsen
01/27/2007 05:18 am
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I just want to say that this is an AMAZING story! I think your characterizations are better than spot-on; you write what *should* have been, without losing anything essential.
Thank you for the gift of this story.
Catherine N.
Oh, and I SO jumped when Angel appeared, dripping blood in their room.

11/22/2006 07:04 pm
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oh xander really needs to get his butt kicked, evil boy...pushing anya around and being just so generally hateful about everyone...excellent story, love, very much enjoyed it :)

11/22/2006 06:38 pm
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13 -- i really despise xander in this...anya needs to leave him and find someone better...a watcher, perhaps?? :) great chapter, loving the fic...on to more :)

11/22/2006 06:20 pm
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12 -- i just had a thought... willow and angel on the same side...that could be a scary villain...don't know if you have that in mind or not...wonder what exactly tara saw, reading on to find out :)

11/22/2006 05:44 pm
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11 - oh this could get ugly fast, if willow gets the wrong idea....love the dynamic between oz and tara though...and as for my previous wes/dawn comment, now knowing she's fifteen? um....*no*. lol...*sigh* too bad, could have been cute...and now if willow's back, and angel's coming after her first..that could be a very bad thing...

08/17/2006 02:10 pm
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Chapter Fourteen - omg - xander is so loosing it! I love this chapter - very very good! Xander is being a complete prick. Anya needs to leave him and pronto - what he is doing to her is wrong. He is quickly on the road to becoming an abusive boyfriend, if he is not already mentally abusing her with all his put downs and actions. Great chapter I love it sweetie!

08/17/2006 02:02 pm
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Chapter Thirteen - Lovely chapter as always - I loved the fact that casey brought Dawn ballons, I really loved the part though where Buffy was trying to figure out Oz and Tara - they would make such an adroable couple. Great chapter!

08/17/2006 01:54 pm
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Chapter Twelve - I adored this chapter. I desperetly want Anya to leave Xander - he has never treated her right and you are show casing this perfectly. His comment to her was completly mean. Poor Anya! I would have felt sorry for Willow but she is scaring me. The changes in her physcial appearence or just the tip of the iceberg. Scary witch! Great chapter!

08/17/2006 01:28 pm
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Onto Day three of rereading LOL:

Chapter Eleven - Wonderful chapter sweetie - I am very curious about what the physcial changes you hinted at are in Willow? VERY CURIOUS! can't wait to find out how Oz and Tara are going to react to seeing Willow in the store, and Dawn is flirting with Wes - how adorable! Glad that Buffy realizes on her own that Spike's chip is a hinderence and needs to come out. Great story!

Verda
06/30/2006 09:19 am
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Thank you for not scraping anything, these as well as all of your other chapters, are fantasic.Love it that Xander and Willow are so bummed. Hope that Anya dumps his ass for Giles. Would be great if Dawn was older for Wes. Thank you for letting Buffy say that she loved him. If you have't already dusted Angelus, Please feel free to do so. Just love this amazing story.

04/20/2006 11:00 pm
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It´s wonderful, it´s great, I can´t belive that you don´t know that....
I like that Oz is there, and that Anya finally is comming to her sences about Xander...

Tahkaullus
11/08/2012 06:45 am
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And I once again find myself loving what is written here. And by loving, I mean I hate Willow's guts, she deserves every painfilled trauma you can think of!

nmcil
08/09/2007 11:05 am
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Nice scene with Wes and Dawn - just added my "Great Story" to the list - very much enjoying this wonderful story.

11/22/2006 06:54 am
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10 -- how old is dawn supposed to be in this fic? because provided she's legal, i wouldn't be opposed to a wes/dawn pairing, actually...it could work...loved this chapter, looking forward to reading more :)

11/22/2006 06:48 am
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9 -- that was a very hot spuffy scene you just wrote there, love :) even if they couldn't actually do much at the time...can't wait to see what happens next :)

11/22/2006 06:35 am
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8 -- i jumped at that bit, pet...lol...very scary and intense...good job with the dream sequence, can't wait to see what happens next :)

11/22/2006 12:22 am
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7 -- wow, what chaos and turmoil, but you make it so real and believable...hope spike heals up fast, and they can protect everyone from angelus...poor spike :(

11/22/2006 12:12 am
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6 -- oh poor spike!! so glad they got him out of there!! hope he's gonna be okay...glad wes is heading to sunnydale...i'm on a wes-lovin' kick, can ya tell? ;) great chapter, love, looking forward to more :)

08/16/2006 11:34 pm
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Chapter ten - Oh that was quite a touching moment between Wes and Dawn. She really needed to hear that it was not her fault and the anaology between her and Connor was excellant. He didn't ask to be born of a prophecy any more then she asked to be created of the key. great writing and brilliant scene!

08/16/2006 11:25 pm
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Chapter Nine - Excellant chapter sweetie - I like Buffy's reaction to the baby. Just huh thought I was dreaming and calm acceptance - understandable - she has a lot to work on at the moment - must get Spike better - thought the not biting dawn and craving a vamp's touch was a nice part. Don't want her to get addicted. GREAT CHAPTER!

08/16/2006 10:57 pm
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Chapter Eight - wonderful chapter - I thought the spuffy was sweet and very well done. Buffy cares so much about spike - you have done a great job with this chappie and showing the emotion and fear behind them!

08/16/2006 10:38 pm
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Chapter Seven - I love Kirstin this is a great and fab story! She rocks!

I do hope Cordy is fine -I have this strange feeling she isn't going to be.... she is right Angel is coming after her.

Oh i hope spike heals quickly! Great story and chapter!

08/16/2006 10:29 pm
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Chapter Six - Wow that was an amazingly intense chapter. The fight between the Knights, Buffy and Spike was emotionally driven and gripped me. I loved the reemergence of Kirstin. This is a great chapter and fab story. Very gripping!

Verda
06/30/2006 08:01 am
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Really sucks that Dawn had a crappy first date, you wicked woman. How many times is Spike going to be totally thrashed? Good idea having Tara and Oz become friends and Wes and Dawn...tsk tsk, but very interesting because you know what Spike would do! Yes, your are quite correct in the that all 3 Englishmen were similar. All bookish, good looking,each rising to challenges, each rebeling abet at different times of their lives. Giles as a teen, Spike when he was turned and Wesley when he became a "rouge" demon hunter. My mom owned at least one of Edgar Cayce's books, I remember reading it as a young teen, he was quite impressive. Love this series.

murph
11/02/2005 10:24 am
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Great new chapter. Damn that Willow! The really cool thing is, I just reread the whole Origins saga yesterday, so excellent timing on the new chappie. Nice addition of Faith, can't wait to see where that goes. I REALLY love this story. Thanks.

03/24/2013 11:42 pm
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I never understood why in the show angel never lost his soul when Conner was born, should have his happy moment. Very bad of the writers

Tahkaullus
11/08/2012 06:43 am
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I'm a bad rude man for not reviewing this sooner. And by sooner I mean the first time I read this. Allow me to rectify that.
This. Is. Fucking. AWESOME!
The friendship between Tara and Oz is great, something that I always get hooked on as much as everything else that happens in Origins. I love how Dawn is portrayed, and best of all, you brought back Angelus! Any time he gets a smack down by Spike is a golden day in all our lives.

Devon
06/02/2007 10:15 pm
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Oooohhhh I love it I love it I love it!!! Just wonderful! I can't wait to read more!

11/21/2006 06:06 am
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wow...you write the characters from angel's group flawlessly...i've just been watching the show a lot and could totally picture that last scene as it could have happened...and can i just say again i *adore* wesley? especially as "cool, collected leader"? :) great chapter, love :)

11/21/2006 05:57 am
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4 -- wow that was hot...and dawn having her perfect night...very well written, love, very much enjoyed it :)

11/21/2006 05:49 am
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3 -- i love the scene with casey and spike...very well done...interested in seeing how buffy and spike react to the new about dawn's origins :) great chapter :)

11/16/2006 05:49 am
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2 -- if you do oz/tara, i believe that'll be a pairing that i've never seen before...but i can soo see you making it work :) great chapter :)

11/16/2006 12:28 am
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One -- i love that you brought oz into it, i love oz...him and tara co-existing in the same house should be interesting...looking forward to the chance to read more :)

08/16/2006 10:10 pm
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Chapter Five - Oh this was such an awesome chapter! I absolutly cannot believe Angel lost his soul (actually I always thought that it was rather pathetic he didn't - I much prefer the way you wrote this sweetie to how the show portrayed it) So now Angel is soulless and Wes must protect Connor. Excellant excellant! I love this chapter and this story so much!

08/16/2006 09:44 pm
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Chapter Four - I love how you written Darla - very powerful and moving. The parts with Casey and Dawn were very sweet. Great chapter!

08/16/2006 09:40 pm
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Chapter Three - I loved that Dawn found out she is Spike and Buffy's daughter - I hope those are happy tears and not sad ones for some reason. Brilliant chapter and excellant writing. I am looking foward to seeing what Willow is up to. She is truly to devious for her - and anyone else's own good!

08/16/2006 09:25 pm
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Chapter Two - onward with the quest of rereading and reviewing of this great fiction!

This was a really great chapter - I really enjoyed the Spike and Dawn interaction about her date and the developing Oz and Tara friendship. I feel a bit sorry for Xander - he seems so confused, but he won't let himself accept the truth. Shakes head. Great chapter and beutifully written!

08/09/2006 02:48 am
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Chapter One - I loved the beginning to the new chapter (I saw that you had some new chapters so I decided to reread this wonderful story.) Chapter one is excellant. I love how Dawn is excited about her new guy, the introduction of Oz, and Darla's pregnancy. Great first chapter sweetie!

Verda
06/30/2006 06:11 am
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Did I read that right? Willow took Angels soul trying put a spell on Spike? That is wicked cool. Hope that Dawn shares her parents 411 with them soon. And who's after the key? This is so good. Can't wait to get caught up.

Ka-ris
05/06/2006 08:59 pm
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juyst finished reading the first part of this tale (Origens) all 300+ pages of it(estamated size)

now moved on to the next part.
wishiung this was in book form so I could read it while traveling not just when I am at my desk

01/02/2006 03:55 pm
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Good chapter. Wonder what's going on at the school? Guess I better read on and find out! :)