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Demon Seed by BuffyMeetsSpike Very sweet. Dark, and it moved very quickly. But worth a read. Jags 11/04/2013 07:31 am New growth Really good Thanks so much! It was an early story, but I'm glad it satisfied. Jags 03/21/2012 08:51 pm New growth really good if a little oc Thanks so much! It was the second fic I ever wrote, so I was still getting the feel of things. A beautiful Buffy and Spike story - Thank you ever so much! Glad you liked it. That was really, utterly beautiful. Thank you. Blue http://www.tthfanfic.org/authors.php?no=12717&list=profile You are so welcome! Thanks so much for taking the time to read my work. Text Nice resolution. Too much aftermath to just wrap it all up in a pretty bow and make them walk off into the sunset, so the fact that you just give us the glimmer of hope, that someday, when she's feeling better, they will be together. I liked this. Good job. Thank you so much for reading! Great story! And what a clever ending to turn around the title. Thank you so much! Joan 03/22/2011 03:06 pm New growth What a wonderful story!! Creative all the way through with a very satisfying finale, especially Buffy finally putting the Scoobies in their place and demanding they accept Spike or leave. (Always thought Willow and Xander both needed a good slap upside the head:) Thank you so much! I love to see Buffy sticking up for Spike, she really gave it to the Scoobies bit time. Thank you. The Scoobies got on my nerves in season 6. Glad you don't mind me slapping them around a bit. :-) Behind Blue Eyes 03/20/2011 10:21 pm New growth Absolutely brilliant! I loved the entire story! The way you weaved this tale was done is such a way that even though it was only nine chapters, it held the intensity of dozens more. Thank you for sharing this. You are quite welcome! Thank you so much for the blizzard of reviews! Bridget 03/20/2011 07:12 pm New growth Text This was a great story. I am glad Buffy had the backbone to tell her friends what she wanted. I look forward to reading more of your stories.I Thanks so much! mazza 03/20/2011 07:01 pm New growth
Perfect ending. I liked the way you handled Tara and Anya, I always felt that Anya with her experience as a demon should have had more input and her insight respected more by the Scoobies, so you hit the button with that aspect of the story. Tara too, should have been more the voice of reason with her background and family - Willow and Xander of course as always, it's all about them! Terrific read. Thanks so much mazza! Another story is in progress, so hope to have the first chapter up soon. SeaPea 03/20/2011 05:59 am New growth I really enjoyed this. I look forward to more Spuffy from you (here's hoping). Thank you so much! Ava 03/20/2011 12:02 am New growth I enjoyed your story it had some of everything even though I wish Spike would have just knocked Zander out. But I'm glad Buffy spoke up for herself for once.
Poor Spike got enough of a headache just roughing him up a bit. But yeah, I'm on the hating Xander bandwagon for the most part.
anna 03/19/2011 09:16 pm New growth Great story! I'm glad the Scooby gang accepted Spike, even if it was only for Buffy's benefit. I'm going to miss this story. :( Well, accepted is a strong word in terms of the Scoobie's acceptance. But at least they'll stay out of their way.. Glad you liked it! I thought about making it longer, but I think we'll leave the rest to the reader's imagination... Text Xander is an ass. I really don't like him. Most of the time I wanna bitch slam him. Not slap, slam. But you kept him in character, so good on you. Seems like this is wrapping up, which is sad. I like the way you write and I like the pace. Good job. Thanks so much for the complements. And I too find it really hard not to go over the top with Xander, because I totally can't stand him. I find it hard to rewatch some of the Xander heavy episodes because he pisses me off so very much. You just reminded me again of how much I hate Xander. Too, too selfish and jealous... I hope someone other than Dawn and Tara can see how Spike is suffering from his perceived almost failure. Even in rewatching some of the early episodes of Buffy, I find myself wanting to pound Xander on a fairly regular basis. I haven't figured out a believable way to kill him yet... Behind Blue Eyes 03/20/2011 09:03 pm Return I'm glad they, well except for Xander who I felt was always very thickheaded, were supportive to Spike. Loved how Tara spoke her peace. Onto the next chapter. ascii27 03/17/2011 12:54 am Return glad they got back. i'm thinking they'll be surprised at how buffy reacts to spike when she wakes up. Hopefully you'll be pleasantly surprised! mazza 03/16/2011 11:58 pm Return Have I mentioned before that I think you are a wonderful writer and really know how to spin a damn fine yarn! I truly read each chapter with bated breath. I love your characterisations, they are so true and I can actually picture the scenes. Fantastic again. And have I mentioned that you are an awesome reviewer? Thanks so much for the encouragement! Wonderful description of the return with Giles being pragmatic and Xander being his usual self. Hopefully his trils and tribulations when rescuing Buffy will finally earn him a bit of respect with the Scoobies. Waiting to find out Buffy's reaction when she wakes up... Hopefully she will wake up soon (if I get all this stupid work done so I can write...) Eyghon 03/16/2011 10:09 am Return Superb update. Love the way you portrayed the characters: Spike, Xander, willow...can't wait for Buffy to awake. I'm enjoying the (is it daily?) frequent updates. I had a lot of it written before I started posting, hence the frequent updates. The next chapter may take a little longer, as I am a)not happy with it yet and b) swamped at work. But I will try to get it up soon! Thanks for the review! Text Just in the nick of time. Grossly graphic depiction of childbirth. Nice, in a yuck sort of way. Hope that it worked. My kids are adopted, so I never experienced that joy first hand. And I suppose demon children are a whole different ballgame... Behind Blue Eyes 03/20/2011 08:54 pm Arrivals and Departures Even after everything she's been through, she's still selfless. Thinking of others instead of herself. She is a true hero. I'm so glad the PTB decided to give them a break. mazza 03/16/2011 11:45 pm Arrivals and Departures I love the way you have written this chapter - the understanding that Buffy shows of Spike's feelings and character is wonderful. Superb ending. Thanks again! nojiri23 03/16/2011 02:38 am Arrivals and Departures Wow! Just home this story and read what there is. Please update soon!!! Thank goodness the baby didn't do an 'Alien' on Buffy! Well done, Spike! Now to get her to hospital.... Yikes! That would have been rather scary... (jots that down for future fic ideas...) Whew! What a trip! So glad the transport issue was resolved and a very nice plot device BTW. Hopefully our heroes are both OK next chapter... Thank you so much! Text Nice interplay between them, even though the situation is dire. She's realizing he's not just your typical vampire (and what is a typical vampire?) or that he's not Angel (which is very much a good thing). But the situation is going from bad to dire, isn't it? I guess the typical vampire is one who hunts, feeds, and doesn't otherwise interact a whole lot with the human population. The main character vampires on the show seem to be unusual in the amount of contact they have with the normal human world. (Or as normal as the Slayer gets) behind blue eyes 03/20/2011 08:46 pm Discussions It's sad that sometimes it takes something major for someone to appreciate what they have. I'm glad she finally did. Onto the next chapter. Jess 03/13/2011 07:46 pm Discussions Oh this is getting really good I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work! Thank you so much! Working as fast as I can! What a horrible ordeal for Buffy! Sincerely hope that Willow is impatient and interferes sooner given the time differential. Love the spooning! Amazing what can happen when the Scoobies stay out of things... mazza 03/13/2011 12:46 am Discussions another great read! Just read all six chapters and am enjoying your writing yet again, so well written and fluid. Will Spike find the amulet (or should I say bus token) or will Willow and the gang realise they need to help, will the demon spawn arrive soon - yes you have me hooked, bring on the next chapter.
Glad to have your reviews again! Next chapter should be up soon. Just have a few details to iron out.
Text Wasn't a kiss that woke sleeping beauty. . . okay, so it's hardly the same, but the premise still works. She's awake and aware, but what happens now? Kiss, bite - probably all the same to a vampire. ;-) Behind Blue Eyes 03/20/2011 08:17 pm Awake I may be in the minority, but I agree with Spike biting Buffy. It was a necessity for him to heal and gain back some of his strength. He wouldn't be any good in the state he was in. Glad you liked it! Not like Buffy hasn't been nibbled before anyhow. Ah, something familiar instead of something incomprehensible as a stimulus. Time is wasting. I hope they make it! Jess 03/10/2011 10:38 pm Awake Wow another great update I so can't wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the great work please...!! I Thanks so much! Just posted another chapter, so hope you enjoy! Ascii27 03/10/2011 01:28 pm Awake Breast chapter. Glad Buffy has finally snapped out of it.
Can't wait to read more.
Another chapter just posted! Thanks for the review.
Excellent trigger to get Buffy out of her dazed state. Perhaps now she'll be able to help witht he hunting/search for the amulet. I love stories when Buffy & Spike have to work as a team to get themselves out of trouble without the interference of the Scoobies so that Buffy has time to come to a new appreciation of Spike and he earns her respect and affection.... More please!!! Have you been hacking into my computer... :-) Well, the next chapter isn't precisely that, but it's close! Hope you enjoy. Tamara 03/10/2011 07:11 am Awake Great update. What to do about the pregnancy is definitely one heck of a question to answer. Indeed. I'm sure demons haven't even heard of epidurals... Text And so he goes into protector mode. Love this particular aspect of William the Bloody. . nice job. I always liked that streak too. Behind Blue Eyes 03/20/2011 08:09 pm Survival Amazing chapter. Onto the next! Jess 03/09/2011 04:19 am Survival Another great update... I sure hope they can get back home sometime simi-soon,keep up the great work! <3 Well, not quite yet. Still have to find that bus token! Sspike seems to be doing well so far... Can't help wondering how close to term Buffy is and whether she'd be able to survive the birth of the demon spawn... You'll have to wonder until I get some paid employment out of the way. Alas. Text The description of her condition is vivid. Spike's actions are in character, though his decision to leave the axe appears to be a mistake. Good chapter. Yeah, I thought about the axe thing. But I couldn't conceive of a way to carry a battle axe, as they were depicted on the show, and a catatonic Slayer. Anyhow, don't want to make it too easy for him... behind blue eyes 03/20/2011 08:03 pm Found and Lost Poor, poor Buffy. Due to her being heavy with child, I would assume time moves differently there. I hope Spike is able to find the amulet soon. Love the action. Seems you purposely placed the amulet in an easily removeable place. Great plot device! Looking forward to some quick resolution of the problem. Well, if Spike had kept his duster on, it would have been shielded from all those branches. Alas, he had to go and be a gentleman about the whole thing. Tamara 03/08/2011 11:44 pm Found and Lost You went and gave us an almost literal cliffhanger. Naughty , Naughty. Looks like Spike is gonn have a lot of work to do in escaping and helping her heal. Yeah, I got an evil streak. But will post more shortly! Oh! Poor Buffy! Tsk - I just knew it wasn't going to be that simple. That amulet should have been more securely attached to him! Can't wait... Well if he had kept his duster on, probably would have been fine. But then we couldn't see his arms, which would be a crying shame ;-) Yikes, even though I pretty much had a feeling that was going to happen my heart still sank for them when he noticed it was gone. Great update. Glad he found Buffy so early, I was afraid it would take a lot longer than that for any Spuffy interaction. So far so good. Thumbs up from me! :) Muchas gracias! Jess 03/08/2011 05:44 am Found and Lost Wow this is a great fic I can't wait to see more of it!! Keep up the great work! Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. Text Spike's agitation is palpable, as is Dawn's. Everyone's nicely in character, though Giles is beginning to see the light. Again, nicely written. Muchas gracias! Behind Blue Eyes 03/20/2011 07:56 pm Through the Doorway This chapter held you on the edge of anticipation, but at the same time moved along beautifully. Great pacing of events in this chapter. My only complaint is the placement of the amulet. A forearm can easily be cut off in battle. Why not the tried and true around the neck hidden beneath clothes method? Mundane but practical. ascii27 03/07/2011 03:30 am Through the Doorway More! More! must have more. What a terrible place to stop. Please write more soon. And thank you. <insert evil author laughter here, buahahaha> Don't worry, more coming soon! Great update. These demons sound like pretty nasty buggers. Hope Spike finds her in time. I wonder how time compares between the two dimensions? How long has it been for poor Buffy? Hope Spike finds her withut losing his bus token... Can't wait... Yuck. I hope Spike gets there in time. Text I really like this beginning. It's taut and well paced, with enough tension all around. I'm enjoying your writing style as well. Easy, flowing and descriptive. Good job. Thanks ever so! behind blue eyes 03/20/2011 07:50 pm Taken Really enjoying this start. Onto the next chapter. Very impressive beginning! Not betaed you say? Yeah, right:) Alas, I am my own beta. But then I am my own worst critic as well, so that works out. SMOKEY56 03/06/2011 06:54 pm Taken Really looking forward to the next chapter... can't wait. Please give us more of this story soon. Your wish is my command! ascii27 03/05/2011 11:36 pm Taken Awesome start! Can't wait to read more very, very soon. Thanks so much for the kind review! Intriguing start. Time for Spike to ride to the rescue! I guess it's just my way of voicing my wish that Spike would come to MY rescue. (hope the husband isn't reading these...) Great start so far. I eagerly await the next chapter! :) I eagerly await a free moment, and I will finish the next chapter :) SeaPea 03/05/2011 05:28 am Taken Good start. Let's see where you take this. Thanks! Working! Yikes!! Once again Buffy is in trouble and only Spike can rescue her. I am so happy to see you gave us another tale. More please. Glad to have you tuned in again, MarzBar! I will try to keep you in chapters in short order! At some point though, I guess I'll have to have Buffy rescue Spike, just to be fair. | |||
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