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The Call by Mefiant ~*~Tasha~*~ 07/18/2006 05:10 am Chapter 7 - Origins Excellent update of this one. I always hunger to see a new snippet of this one. I'm glad that you felt the inspiration to update. I look forward to more whenever the muse strikes you. Robyn 07/03/2006 09:43 pm Chapter 7 - Origins I actually felt sorry for Xander and yet felt justice for his situation. He is now experiencing what he helped force Spike to experience. I am finding the origin of the slayer very interesting and I enjoyed the story of the two sisters. I am really enjoying this story and am looking forward to where you take it. Sneaky sneaky Spike and Dawn ^.^ vladt 07/01/2006 02:41 am Chapter 7 - Origins great update, great tale. thanks for the fine read. fascinating...very good chapter...explains a lot, great plot development here :) duke6665 06/30/2006 09:32 pm Chapter 7 - Origins great chapter. really glad to see more of this. loved xander standing under the tree tryinf to see on. hope you write more of this soon golddrake 06/30/2006 09:29 pm Chapter 7 - Origins Great chapter. I'm so happy to see more of this story. Thanks katakata 06/30/2006 12:49 pm Chapter 7 - Origins Thoroughly fascinating update - and somehow I'd missed the last couple of chappies so it's like Christmas x 3 yaaay! So heartening to see the gang being more considerate of each other and of their own actions too...oh and it looks like Xander might finally be ready to ride that wave LOL. Thanks for such an enjoyable read. More soon please. Robyn 07/03/2006 09:28 pm Chapter 6 – Confessions I loved Buffy's reaction to finding out the chip was gone. It shows how much she has changed and how much she cares for Spike. I also loved her response when Spike said he got his soul for himself and not for her. What she had learned is a very important lesson in life. Spikes Slayer2 06/30/2006 01:27 pm Chapter 6 – Confessions nice.. very nice.. cant wait to read more!!!i hope they dont die.. this story is so very excellent...love the interaction between giles and spike in this chapter....very good...can't wait for your next update! :) Next update is coming along, albeit slowly. Hopefully soon. Please you are enjoying the story. ~*~Tasha~*~ 03/23/2006 06:23 am Chapter 6 – Confessions Good chapter. I hope that Giles and Spike can really work out a more understanding and trusting relationship. I look forward to whenever youa re able to update again. Sara M. 02/22/2006 06:42 am Chapter 6 – Confessions WOW....This story is just WOW! I can't wait to see what happens next. :) Oh yeah bloody good chapter :P hmmm curiouser and curiouser! wonder what Spike will find out? Nice update, Mef- started it awhile ago, but just now finishing it.So, Giles and Spike aregoing to have a truce now? Like the idea that Spike wants Giles to recognize his goodness before he knows about the soul. vladt 02/18/2006 11:02 pm Chapter 6 – Confessions good update to a fascinating fic. thanks timeofchange 02/18/2006 09:20 pm Chapter 6 – Confessions Wonderful story. I look forward to finding out what happens next. Love it. More soon please. Nice chapter ^.^ Hmmm! What's in the book? Interesting that they're getting ready for the First so soon. What price does Dawn have to pay? More story please. very good...i love how Buffy's reaction to his chiplessness was so different than what he expected...she wasn't even worried about him hurting anyone, just about him...i love this update :) gaillee 02/18/2006 05:50 pm Chapter 6 – Confessions Good chapter! But, now I have to wait again. Thanks for the update. wow, this is a great story, i remember reading the first chapter a while back but then must have missed (or was out with crashed computer) the updates, but i love this 'new world' you set up and am anxious to see what 'payment' is going to have to be made! dihcar 02/18/2006 03:03 pm Chapter 6 – Confessions good chapter, it's nice to see spike having people who believe in him. seeya Robyn 07/03/2006 08:31 pm Chapter 5 – Gifts I like both the peace and the boon that Spike was gifted with because of his willingness to gain his soul again and his willingness to sacrifice for the world. And for Spike what a great gift, even more than his freedom, the forgiveness of one of his victims. wow!! not what i expected...i wonder...did he not get the soul? because i didn't ever think he really needed it...hmm...have to read on and see i suppose :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 03/23/2006 06:19 am Chapter 5 – Gifts {cringes and gingerly goes to the next chapter to see if Buffy totally freaked out on him. I love your touches with the Chinese Slayer and Nikki Wood. Excellent work. Rebelbaby 02/17/2006 06:50 pm Chapter 5 – Gifts I love the story and can't wate to see more of it so can you please keep up the good work. Michelle 02/03/2006 07:16 am Chapter 5 – Gifts Well that was an evil cliffhanger. I have realyy enjoyed this story, so much. I can't wait to find out Buffy's reaction. vladt 02/03/2006 03:18 am Chapter 5 – Gifts wonderful, now we will see who this buffy is. thanks for the update. Steph 02/02/2006 09:19 pm Chapter 5 – Gifts WOW! great chapter! So interested to see what buffy doesn't with that info... gaillee 02/02/2006 06:49 pm Chapter 5 – Gifts Wheeee! I love it! This is a great story. I am eagerly waiting for updates. Soon, please. Thank you. kim 02/02/2006 10:38 am Chapter 5 – Gifts Not nice to test her, Spike, but I guess he needs to know. Very interesting take on S6 and onward. Why does the First get to have power again? It originally did because Buffy was resurrected, making a weakness in the Slayer line that it could exploit. This is a different experience, with Buffy's death prevented in the first place. Or has it been building strength since Xander resuscitated Buffy in Season 1. It doesn't like souled vampires, though, as evidenced by it's playing with Angel. Is she going to get mad? I hope not Next chapter is written and waiting to be beta'd so you'll find out soon. Robyn 07/03/2006 08:19 pm Chapter 4 - Changes I like that not only did Buffy realize that Xander's actions were inappropriate but that she stood up for herself and told him so. I loved Buffy's response to finding out that Spike had paid taxes. Tara is so smart and caring, I like what a positive influence she is for Willow. awesome, again...i love this fic...love the advantage they have of knowing what's coming... love the kinder, gentler buffy...great story! :) vladt 02/03/2006 03:06 am Chapter 4 - Changes good chapter, thanks. spike is spike, but who is this buffy? love the story. bluebird 11/26/2005 03:56 pm Chapter 4 - Changes I love this story! Just found it tonight and I can't wait for an update! The picture is wonderful by the way did you do that yourself? Thanks bluebird, alas I have no talent when it comes to banners etc. The wonderful Selene made the banner for me. Isn't it gorgeous. romero 11/26/2005 03:31 pm Chapter 4 - Changes I'm so glad that Buffy is aware of the attempts to control her life by the Scoobies and has put her foot down (after using it to kick Xander out the door...metaphorically speaking.Yea!!) I'm looking forward to your updates. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/26/2005 03:03 pm Chapter 4 - Changes WAYyyyyyyy awesome update! {giggles with glee} Glad to see an update of this one. Love it completely. Adored the fact that Xander was put out on his ass. The nerve of him thinking that he could go into Buffy's house like that and rifle through her Mother's private things. That is just rude! Look forward to what else you have for us when RL time allows you to write more. What a great story!! I love Buffy throwing Xander out of her house and letting Spike in. I don't know how Spike and Dawn still know what might happen now that Buffy didn't die but so far they're doing fine. More story please. Thanks MarzBar, I always thought Xander needed to be tossed out on his ear. More story coming as soon as RL allows. Oooooo, very nice!! Looking forward to more! Thanks, hopefully more to come for christmas. Robyn 07/03/2006 08:08 pm Chapter 3 - New Beginnings I love that Buffy really heard Dawn and that she saw the truth to her words. Very smart move on Spike's part giving Buffy a little time to make sure that him moving in is what she really wants. yea!!! spike's moving in!! awesome!! except...he's gotta go for a month first...hope nothing bad happens .. great chappie by the way :) jl1980 02/02/2006 02:21 pm Chapter 3 - New Beginnings Yea! Spike's moving in!!! I love it!!! Love this whole story so much!!! Oooo very interesting! I likey and can't wait for more. And oh noes, Dawn isn't an annoying brat. Big plus! LoL Nice way of continuing after the jump backwards. I look forward to reading more. Sounds like Spike is going to go get his soul again. Hope it is a little easier for him. Good to see Buffy standing up to Giles already. I LOVED Dawn's speech to Xander. I was rooting her on the whole way. I love this fic! The premise, the plot, everything! Looking forward to the next chapter! Robyn 07/03/2006 07:57 pm Chapter 2 -Old Friends Dawn's story was heartbreaking as well as being filled with hope, their willingness to sacrifice and everything they have already gone through to save Buffy and the world shows their great capacity to love. awesome!! a much better solution than ripping the slayer out of heaven...can't wait to see how it works out :) vladt 02/03/2006 02:41 am Chapter 2 -Old Friends better and better, thanks. jl1980 02/02/2006 02:14 pm Chapter 2 -Old Friends I am so hooked on this story!!! Awesome, just awesome! Beautifully written and intriguing! I usually don't get into future fics much but this is just amazing! On to the next chappie!! jane 11/26/2005 06:45 am Chapter 2 -Old Friends I really like this one update soon. MarzBar 10/03/2005 08:09 am Chapter 2 -Old Friends WOW! What a great start to a story. Will new Dawn and Spike be able to convince Buffy that Spike is good for her? What sacrifices do the two have to make to get Buffy back and fix the world? Robyn 07/03/2006 07:43 pm Chapter 1 - Memories of the Past. What a frightening, horrible world you described and yet you also managed to show the human spirit by showing the friendship that still exists between Giles, Willow, and Xander. something a bit disturbing about the aging scoobies... :(... can't wait to see what happens now that spike and dawn are back :) vladt 02/03/2006 02:33 am Chapter 1 - Memories of the Past. great beginning. thanks. looking forward to watching the story grow. Robyn 07/03/2006 07:37 pm Prologue I love the premise of this, it sounds very interesting. I also like how well you showed Dawn's grief by being somewhat abstract. fascinating beginning...really drew me in immediately...off to read more :) katakata 12/05/2005 08:18 pm Prologue Gosh what a thoroughly original premise! Loving it - while certainly optimistic it's not completely fluffy and your set up in the opening chapters was fantastic. I'm particularly interested in what disasters Dawn and Spike may still want to try and avert and what the cost to them will be. Oh and if Buffy were to discover what they've done I wonder what her reaction would be...gratitude for all they've risked and sacrificed? Disappointment that they flipped the 'natural' order of things on its head? Awe that they would change the world for her? Anger at their seeming manipulation? Or maybe a combination of all these things...honestly it's gonna have me up thinking about it until you next update. Help me avoid the insomnia and update soon please :-D jane 10/07/2005 08:49 pm Prologue I really rate this story can't wait for the next update. Excellent! Just four chapters in and I'm hooked already! More, please?!? I really liked this. who knows what would have happened if buffy hadn't died, I'd like to think this is entirely probable maryperk 10/03/2005 09:53 am Prologue Looks like a great story!!!! | |||
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