Thanks for a great story! You did a great job with the characters, and the writing was really good!

That is probably some of the best dialogue I have read in stories on here so far. I could actually imagine it being scripted and the actors faces and voices saying them in parts! I hope that's not too weird but a credit to how accurate you got them. Love how Spike wasn't a push over either.

Well done and thank you very much.

Brit Girl
bezziemate@gmail.com (If you still have an account on here and get to read this and want to let me know you read this)
:-)

awww... the story really get me.. love it hun.. thanx for the great one.. i love happy ending..

I liked it. Very nice story. Ben is great. :)

Great story =]

cute story

loved it!

man oh man if this wasnt the most perfect spuffy story someone shoot me it was totally in cannon really believable no potentials dawn not being annoying for once no peaches to spoil things great action great comedy xander at least trying to be nice buffy and spike starting out as friends helps a lot to im so tired of stories where the first 8 chapters are all about buffy denying what she feels or saying oh spike lacks a soul so he cant love it was so fun i hated to see it end and even better perk no one dies it took me 5 hours to read boy am i glad i did man that was good keep up the good work.!!!!!!

Wow,
here we are...I had followed this story like what 4 years? on at least 4 different websites..

Congratulations for completing this.. I enjoyed the ride..

it is always sad to come the final chapter of  a fine tale. thanks for the read.

I'm sad to see this story end, but I enjoyed each and every part of it! It was a great ride indeed!

xxx

Noooooooo, I don't want it to end *pouts*

If I ask very prettyprettypleasewithchocolateandSpikeontop for a sequel? Visiting all those places? Maybe?

Loved this!!!

Thank you for this story, I have enjoyed every chapter!

I've really enjoyed this story, been a riot from start to finish. Excellently done.

Hot, funny and adorable. When do you start your next one?

Hee hee, aw, good ending.

Lovely chapter - Buffy facing down Travers was a real treat.

Yay that was great, really really enjoyed it.

Read through chapter 27 all at once after your last update. Love how original this fic is and happy to see such a strong Buffy. The showdown finally occurred and it didn't disappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Well, they've certainly come a long way, haven't they!

YAY for a slick tie up of Quentin Travers. LOVE the memory wipe planned.....HE deserves it and it is the only safe thing to do.

Glad Bernard didn't kill his Slayer and happy a man like him is in charge. He knows the mission and its importance but isn't stuck in retoric.

Nice confrontation....great story. I've loved reading it from the start!

Kathleen

It's 02:25 am here, and I'm ecstatic I didn't go to bed sooner and got to read this chapter*grins*

Still loving this story, wish Joss would have chosen something along these lines to develop Spuffy:(

Well, a girl can't have everything, but there are stories that make it all better *winks*

Thank you!
XXX

very good read, thank you. enjoyed using magic to wipe travers memory, but my sadistic side would have loved him to remember everything and be powerless to do anything about it.

I started reading this two days ago and I have to say i relly enjoy it. Looking foward for the next chapter.

More soon please!!!

Now that's a really ebol cliffhanger :P

Can't wait to see more!!!!!

Nice!!

Great chapter, I'm all ' want more, now'.

no need to beg. the quality of the update merits good comments. fine read, thank you.

Pleased to see your still updating this fic.
Loved the big entrance, can't wait to read more.

I love this story, hope you update soon!!!

Truly enjoy this story and so glad for an update. I understand RL and muse issues though. It was worth waiting for BTW.

Still loving Ben and Spike being accepted is always a treat.

Looking forward to more.

Kathleen

OH HELL YEAH! The US Invasion.
Can't wait to see how this ends!

I love this story, so pleased to see it updated. Now for the Travers face-off! He deserves shameful retribution.

Still here!

Ooo, showdown! Xander and Spike playing video games...perfect. Anya complaining about space, Giles stuck on the couch, Buffy's typical nervous energy...
Benji better not lose his nerve...he hasn't stuttered, yet, so I think he's doing pretty well! If Quentin doesn't kill him... ;)

Great update, loved it

delightful read, thank you. loved xander getting it from both red and buffy. maybe, maybe it will sink in.

Alleluia! Xander heard a few home truths that were long overduw. Buffy has never been more eloquent, and the testimonial from Richard didn't hurt. Lovely chapter.

No beating up of Xander? Maaaan, I've been gipped! lol

Ah, a good turn. And a neat parallel to the rich nerd that helped the Angel gang in LA. Everybody should have an eccentric rich friend. :D

Great chapter.

good read, thank you. could they take xander with and just toss him out over the atlantic?

Hmmmm....Spike has a rich aquaintance? Close to SD? How'd that happen - and wow, a Spike that doesn't want to collect on a debt - he really is changing.

Anya should really dump Xander.

Yay so the gangs all back together. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation with Travers. Maybe Spike can show them a bit of Londons night life. Looking forward to more.

Xander seems to be regressing to a spiteful 12-year-old. I'm not sure I'd be trusting him.

Great chapter.

I vote for Spike eating Travers *raises hand*

More plans!! I'm glad Xander stopped being a jerk for about five minutes :)

well giles appears to be in her camp. good read, thank you.

Wow! I just picked up your story for the first time. Kept thinking I would read a little more then go to bed, but what can I say I had to read as far as I could. I love it. Can't wait for then next chapter.

Quentin's gonna get his ass kicked... which is always of the good! :)

I hope this fic goes on for a loooong time. I'm gonna be so sad when it ends :P

I love this story so much. Great update!

Oh, like Spike doesn't like to read.....but the Big Bad has to protect his image...LOL.

Giles is lucky she wasn't really aiming to hurt him.

I am so happy that this chapter was available. And what a way for Giles to find out about Buffy and Spike. Goo team for the united front that they are going to show towards Quentin.

So, Buffy's gonna take on the Council. 'Bout time somebody did. Ca't wait to read more. Loved it.

Go, Buffy! She really is on the brainy bandwagon now! Great chapter.

Poor Spike, death by research!

Great chapter. I love it when you update.

wow so Buffy and Spike aren't unique. I wonder if Giles knew anything about the other Slayers? If so you'd think he'd realise they were meant to be.Can't wait for more

Wow, the plot thickens. I loved all the Slayer stories and I can't wait to see what Giles will do.

Ooooh

hey! i love this story! can't wait to see what giles will say. why nobody ever came up with a portuguese slayer? :s

Lafond seems like someone buffy could trust. but is giles? will she? very good read, thank you.

Very interesting turn of events -- I love it.

Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Buffy will say to Giles.

please keep writing. I was frantic for a second there when it stopped abruptly, but then i saw it was updated yesterday. I can't quite explain my relief.

And now for the big question--is Giles Buffy's or the Council's Watcher?

And?!

Well....comes as no surprise.

Bernard sounds like an interesting fellow. At least someone at the Council has a heart.

That's a very scary trend.

More, quickly, please?!

Uh oh! Run!

Great chapter.

Phew - nice reunion. Looks like troubles ahead though. Some friends, huh?

Two quick updates, love it

Pfft. Don't wait... just go jump on that plane now. Go!

I was so glad to see this update. I really love this story and I'm curious to see what the Scoobies will do about Buffy and Spike.

very good chapter, thank you.

You updated at long last, and it's a wonderful new chapter! I'm so excited! Thank you :-)

what a wonderful group of "friends." very good chapter, thank you.

I just love your story. Keep on writing. I can't wait until they make up! Great job.

Dump them, you don't need them, Buffy! *nods*

Well, the whole gang appears to be in character. Judgemental jerks, with the possible exception of Tara and Anya.

I hate the Scoobies. Such hypocritical jerks. Glad Buffy told them though, now it's time for some Spuffy make-up lovin'.

Enjoyed catching up. I’ve always liked this story so much. Good chapter. Dying to know what happens next.

the reaction of the gang was in character. Wondering what Xander is up to... Nicely done. Can't wait for more!

See, Buff....are these really the people you want around you?

LOVED Dawn's work here....I hope Buffy goes to Spike. He won't be able to resist her tears, and then she can get her foot in the door to apologize.

How can Buffy put the Scoobie`s happiness before hers and Spike`s? She is crackers!

Excellent chapter and well worth the wait. Yes, Dawn was right...a grand gesture is just the ticket....but just where is Xander headed? I have a feeling Buffy needs to get to Spike's crypt muy pronto!

So glad this one is being updated again.

Kathleen

Ah - stupid Scoobies! Poor Spike.

Poor Buffy. She finally confessed everything, only to get her heart broken.

I'm very excited to see another chapter of this story. I adore it. Its very sweet.

Poor Buffy!! Why is it that it's always her love life on the front page for everyone to discuss. She'd better get to Spike quick, I have half an idea of where Xander has gone...

I certainly hope Dawn only uses her powers for the forces of good. Or possibly to annoy the forces of evil into self-immolation. Wow, I actually like the bratty kid sister in your story.

Uh oh. I'm glad Dawn is willing to play matchmaker. Loving the story.

lol I knew those pictures would come back to haunt them! :) I would've thought with Dawn and her crush on Spike she would've been more interested to see them.... lol!! hehe. yay! I was so excited when I saw a new chapter for this story! I love it btw! looking forward to the next update :D

“That just won’t do.” go dawn. fun read, thank you.

Okay, you're not sposed to almost make me like Dawn...

Hee hee heee.....Go, Dawn!!!!! Someone has to get around their stupidity.

And I athought Dawn was the immature one!! Great chapter!

Yay The Dawnster to the rescue. I hope she's gonna knock some sense into them both.

Chill, Spike, snd give the girl a chance!

you definitely have buffy down pat. it is really hard for her to understand how much spike loves and how easily he is hurt. very good read, thank you.

I see Idiot Buffy is on the loose again.

NO!

Great update missed this fic. On the edge of my seat waiting for more.

No, Spike, NOOOOOO

Stupid Buffy.....if you don't want to tell them at the airport, then talk to Spike! He'd be understanding that you just want to do it in private and at an appropriate time.

But now she's hurt his feelings....

Cool...Watcher's Journals...

*head desk* Soooo typical Buffy *bangs head on desk* I hope there'll be a lot of groveling in the next chapter. Great work. :D

your story is excellent! you need to update soon so i know what happens when the blonde duo get back to sunnyhell, please

excellent chapter, thank you. very glad your back.

Enjoyed the chapter. Moremoremore XD

just giddy when I saw the chapter and I finally got a chance to read. Loved it. Ben was too funny turning on this uncle and Carlita. And now they have to find the woman. Awesome story and I was so happy to see it continue.

Damn, she got away. Couldn't Buffy slap around Ben to work out her frustrations?

Hi! Loving your story! Please update soon! Glad too see your writer's block is over.

I alway enjoy your writing and it's good to have you back. So who said: "Son of a bitch!” ?

DAMMIT! STUPID DEGO BITCH!

Yay! They found them...then let her go. Well, at least the cards are out in the open.

Very funny - Spike pouting because he didn't get to fight - getting lost - arguing about nothing. Total Spuffy.

I loved Buffy teasing Spike about not being able to find his way out of the jungle and his embarrassment at being rescued. Thanks for the updates, I really enjoyed them.

Cards on the table and we're all happy. Lovely!!

roflmao!

I am just so happy to see this story continue. I did miss it. Love how they were found. And it is too funny that normal ppl had to come and find the "chosen" one along with her vampire companion.. can't wait until she gets back to the resort.

So happy you starting updating this fic again. Love it. And now for that shower....**WEG**

So happy you starting updating this fic again. Love it. And now for that shower....**WEG**

ROFLMAO!

That was TOO funny! Great chapter. I loved Spike being all moody when she gets back to him. I am also very happy that he finally asked her what they were.

Ha ha ha! I'd expect better from Spike...navigate by the stars, or something.

Thank goodness for park rangers.

great update!! :heartfic:


I totally love the new chappie, just the right amount of fun, seriousness and smut. Buffy and Spike are too cute, totally lost!! :)
Can't wait for more!! :soon:

lol that was funnny.. i cant wait until they get back to the hotel ;) lol

That was wonderfully gross. Still, I think you missed out not having her toss the demon in the volcano.

A big ouch on the part of Buffy getting bit but it might just turn out fortunate that Carlita thinks that she and Spike are dead.

tsk tsk spike just cause you cant go out and play doesnt mean you get to be all huffy.. lol great update!!

Now to murder the dego bitch

great chapter

Huh...what's up with Spike?

Aaah -- Spike missed the action. Nice and yucky.

good read, thank you. looking forward to carlita getting hers and "Hot scented oil, candles ... could be fun."

Yucky demon killing. The Italian b____ is going to be surprised when Buffy shows up on her doorstep to kick her butt. More story please.

there's an Indian proverb which translates to "The fruit of patience is sweet" and boy this chapter was sweet! Demon deadage and promise of upcomming smut, you rock!

Reader bounces. Throw the demon in the volcano. Yes!

Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more exciting chapters soon.

Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more exciting chapters soon.

LOL good way of gaining some time!! cannot wait for the next chapter!!! :D

Wow! What if they just go kill the Italian slut? Will that stop the big bull dog? Nice to have this fun story back again.

Toss it into a volcano!!!

wonderful update to a fine tale. thanks for the read.

Thanks for great chapter. i do like your Buffy and Spike dialogue.

Thank you for the excellent update. You did a great job of showing Buffy's stubbornness as well as Spike's ability to egg her on. I really enjoyed the humor mixed with action that you had in this chapter.

Ha! Nothing our guys can't handle! Super Spike.

Goody, I had been waiting on this! You didn't dissapoint me either, great chappie! You have a great sense of humor, can't wait for the next one.

wow1 I didn't know anyone could making something action-packed and humourous at the same time. Grat chapter.

Ben is a big a weasel as his father. Buffy driving is too too scary.

Buffy driving? Spike really was taking his life in his hands. :) I loved all of Buffy's snide comments about men and driving, they were funny and true. I am really looking forward to how the situation with the monster turns out, and how they are going to survive. Thanks for a great story.

Surely our dynamic duo will see off the clunky monster - please.

As much as I enjoy Ben tormenting Carlita, I don't think angering is going to end too well for him. And poor Spike all cooped up in the backseat with Buffy driving. That is a trying time. And now... well, cant wait for an update so see what happens next. Great chapter. And, please, update soon.

omg!!! please no!!

Oooo irritating dego bitch! *attacks with claws*

Interesting! You know they will be ok, they are Buffy and Spike, they will always be ok!

What is that big demon? Is it a hell hound? Loved the Buffy driving adventure. I am always amazed that a California girl of that age cannot drive. More story please.

good update. evil place to stop. thanks for the fun read.

goood chapterr

alright they are lost, their jeep's not working and a monster is chasing them! i think Buffy should ask the council to refund their vacation once this is over.

Well Ben did try to tell them, of course he completely messed up by not clarifying who he was. I really like that Buffy came clean to Spike about her wanting him to bite her. And the hot tub stuff, very nice. :)

Ben calls that trying? and what's his problem with vampires?

God they're so sweet together!!!!

awww loved that update!!!

lol, banging against the door to embarrass Ben, that was funny

Oh dear! Maybe they should have listened to Ben. I guess it wouldn't be the Buffyverse if there wasn't an unexpected enemy attack or two. Lovely bubble bath.

good update. this is a very good read. thank you.

cool fic...i never thought id say this in a million years but spike in maui...bloody perfect hehe...keep it up

Great update, as usual. I love the dialogue between them.

Very hot Spuffy - but in a bathroom stall - that's just ick.

This was a whole lot of hot sexy fun. Loved when he came in and she commented that she hadn't had dessert. :)

oh poor server*snigger*

was not going to comment 'til i caught up on this wonderful fic, but this was delightful. thanks for the read.

What a wonderful V-Day present!! Loved it-- and I was so thrilled to see you had updated. More soon, please!

nice smut..:) *gasp* horrible woman.. tsk tsk GREAT chappie!!!

Dammit dego woman, go away! LoL

LMAO!! Go Spike! I love the tipping for the tupping! Thanks for the Valentine's Day prezzie.

20 questions always an interesting game for a date. :) I love how Buffy reassured-explained to Spike that she didn't have a problem with his demon side.

to be forever hungry? horrible curse!now if only we could cast it on Riley*dreamy look* I hope monster eats Carlita

Ummm...Scrumptious looking, and slightly nervous-- Just how I like my Spike! Thanks for the update-- I had been following this story on another site, so I'm really greatful for the new chapter. Can't wait for Buffy to spill her "confused" feelings over wanting Spike to snack on her neck. Maybe she'll be brave enough after the big smack-down. Please update again soon!

Great update can't wait to see how Buffy and spike deal with the new threat.

Look it up *sticks out tongue* They're like the pixies, trolls, or leprechauns of Hawaii. I know there are several sites because I had to look up the spelling to make sure. Most of the Hawaiian words I know, I learned orally so I usually have to look up spelling. Hehe, Spike has one sexy okole *swoons* Too find out what an okole is, go here (and no it's not perverted, just funny if you know what an okole is) http://www.brown.edu/Departments/AmCiv/Studentprojects/GISP10/week11/okole

Well, can't help you with Maui, I only lived on Oahu and never visited the other islands. Ooo ooo, they should run into some Menehune!! Heehee

Eeeeek! WTF is Carlita summoning? It's nice that Spike and Buffy had a nice day but I guess nothing that good could last long for them. More story please.

Well that's cheating - summoning a demon to do the dirty work.

well that sounded ominous. can't wiat for more. poor buffy is going to have to do some slaying on her vacation. happy to see they got together. more soon please

 Ohh, I was so happy when Buffy stood up to Xander! I love how this fic is progressing! It's a great pace, not too fast, and not too slow, it's just right.  

OK, I'll tell you how I feel... I feel its friggin' brilliant. What a nice, spiffy shiny reality you've crafted here. Bravo!

Does this mean that Buffy is going to - gasp - tell her friends about Spike when she gets home? And, looking forward to Buffy doing something wicked to Quentin Travers, the big jerk. he makes and excellent bad guy.

This story is very addictive, I haven't been able to stop reading. Love the naked wrestling with the camera.

The phone call from Xander and Buffy's slip about Spike's win was quite funny. I love the whole Buffy-Spike fun. And Carlita is right, Travers is a rat. :)

argh I hate this Carlita!!!arrogant, hateful, hearless.. i'm rambling sorry it's just nice to hate someone once in a while

How very confusing! I'm sure i've read this chapter already....! Oh well! I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to seeing what happens with Carlita and Travers plotting against our faveourite couple. Looking forward to more soon!

I am reading, actually. But may not have reviewed because I read the first several chapters all at the same time and then went directly to bed. Sorry1

Great update, I'm really liking this story.

Eee!! I want those photos!!! And I can't wait to see Xander's face!! lmao!!

You've made them so sweet together - delicious! Beware volcanoes...

OMG! This bit of nastiness has to be completely unexpected by Buffy. Spike could probably tell her a thing or two about the Council of Wankers but it looks like she is going to get a good idea on her own. More story please.

Loved the squabble. These two deserve each other.

What a great ending to their games. :) Very, very glad that she told him the truth of what she wanted. Things will definitely never be boring with those two.

His meaty @%#! O my! Yes! they did it, they did it (place scoobie dance here). This is a grate story very original. Cant wait for another update.

Love...Love...Love it! Are the games done now? Thanks, super chapter.

Eeeeeeee!! YAAAY!

Whew - I was worried about Buffy's shoes there for a minute. Glad to see she's still procrastinating.

I like that Buffy finally figured things out and is willing to make the first move, but to wait not always a good thing.

It doesn't seem that Buffy will be able to magically make things right with Spike tomorrow since there seems to be a hit out on her. More story please.

You know that's pure torment, don't you???

I hope she isn't setting herself up for a fall by waiting...she always waits. Thanks for the update

Well that wasn't much *pouts* pounce him!! ^.^

 T_T Buffy is driving me crazy! Why does she have to be so COMPLETELY IMPOSSIBLE?! But...amazing story!

Buffy is a nitwit - surely she knows that sitting alone in a bar wearing a trampy outfit is going to attract attention. Spike ought to kick her butt.

If anyone ever thought that Buffy was a bitch they need to meet Carlita. Too bad that Spike trying to help Buffy out at the bar backfired in a way neither could ever expect. This story just got interesting in a very unexpected way, hopefully Ben will grow a pair and warn Buffy and Spike.

Thanks for the intriguing beginning. I love the interaction between Spike and Buffy (except for the continual misunderstanding). I will be watching for updates. (Yah, I suspect Quentin, too!)

Oooh, this has Quentin Travers written all over it. Excellent update.

I hate the stupid dego bitch.... is she going to die a painful death?? *grins hopefully*

ACK! Who are the murderers? What exactly did Buffy do or who did she kill? I thought we were going to get a lovely tropical PWP with this story but it appears to be turning into danger and adventure.

Spike always makes life interesting. Loved both of their choice in song. Great chapter.

LOL. Not so sure about Buffy's singing - I'm still cringing from SMG's (1st season?) rendition of Macho Man.

Spike singing in Hawaii! Can't imagine a better vacation than the one Buffy is having. Fun story.

Hilarious and sweet. I'm curious to see what the deal with the Italtian woman is.

Spike asking the room service guy his blood type, so funny. I love how easy it is for them to get into a fight. Fun chapter. :)

Whats wrong with the Princess Diaries?? *bops Spike* Besides the fact it had little to do with the book and the sequel had NOTHING to do with the books.... I still loved them *waves arms and bops him again* LoL And poor Spike.... *whimpers* but he was being an ass *tsk tsk*

I absolutely love the freedom they have, and the good natured bickering. Peeping tom is right!

What a lovely dream and then to come back to her room to see her dream in the flesh. Lucky girl. Loved the ending of this chapter, very fun. :)

Asshole? Thats a game?? Painful..

Droool! She got back to the room before I could get him. I am hoping to get lots more good visuals coming up (pun intended).

I'm catching up with this fic and giggling like mad. I love your non-bitchy Buffy! Sex on legs. *nods* Yeppers, i agree with that one!

I envy Buffy that view. Whew.

I read the first three chaps last night, what a great start! And this one, hot! Sex on legs indeed.

 "Sssslaayer!"  <- that was REALLY funny!

If you're wondering why I'm spamming you with reviews, it's because I just like to make it a point to reply to almost every chapter.  That way I can encourage you to write some more!

I am very intrigued by the lady that Buffy kept bumping into. I loved Spike's explanation and examples of his use of Slayer and how the one word can mean different things. Great chapter.

Muahahaha, I got an idea of what he might do by himself.... I wish I could watch *sighs*

If MarzBar isn't available, I'll take care of Spikey. Hmm. Interesting reaction to Buffy. Could it be this holiday will have more than simple romance? Eagerly waiting to find out.

Nice beach. I hope it's safe for Buffy to sleep alone on the beach. I volunteer to keep Spike comany in the room while she sun bathes.

The insight into both their minds is really a nice touch.  I'm happy that Buffy is really welcoming to the idea of her and Spike.  It's so nice to have some nice romance when normally all the longer stories are full of angst.  

Ok never mind I got it, It Kinda goes AU after 6th

This chapter is really good. I love that Spike went to the wrong door, that was so fun.

YUM! Two weeks in Hawaii with Spike! She better get going or the vacation will be over before she knows it. More story please.

Interrrrresting...

 I'm addicted already! It's just so funny and cute.  ^^

Just one question it seem's to be summer but what time periode in Buffy is it? So far though I love the idea. I actually used to live on Kauai and for about 3 months I lived on Oahu, God I miss hawaii so much!!!!!!!

Very, very cute story. It promises to be great fun already. It is an interesting idea, Buffy being aloud a vacation...

Cool story so far.  Just one suggestion though...  You have different speakers in the same paragraphs in many places, which makes it a little hard to read, because you have to back up and be sure you know who is speaking.  It's much easier to read if you always separate the speakers.  Please don't take offense though, cause, I'm not knocking you.  I made the exact same mistake, when I first started writing and someone had to point that out to me, too.  Otherwise, nice story so far.  I'm off to read the next chapter.  :)

canada not so much a bad place if u move south to toronto*my home town*, but for spuffy romance it's gotta be maui! so gonna see spike in a hawaiin shirt?or maybe swim gear? or...*puts on devlish smile and goes to check fic rating*

This chapter is really cute. I love the exchange so far between Buffy and Spike. :)

THis is a great begining. Can't wait to see more.