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The Kindred Series by DizzyB Fab. Thanks. :-) 05/07/2010 02:13 pm Ch 13 - Now I See Clearly wow...so..what just happened here? :) gonna begin the next book right away and find out! :) excellent story all the way through :) That kind of enthusiasm is what we're striving for in our writing, aren't we? I've thoroughly enjoyed your stories so far, and I really appreciate your responses to mine. Thanks again. :) vladt 05/06/2006 07:13 am Ch 13 - Now I See Clearly sorry i missed this fantastic tale, it deserved to be praised chapter by chapter. thanks for the great read. i saw book two and knew i couldn't start that until i caught up on the first. and i enjoyed the read immensely, thank you Thank you so much for the kind review. I'm glad you've enjoyed Book One. Hope Book Two keeps you guessing what's going to happen next. :) I don't know how I missed the end of this story but I saw Book Two and realized I needed to finish this first. Very interesting premise and I look forward to Book Two. Thank You! Hope Book Two is everything you're expecting. It was actually the original story until I got halfway through it and realized that the backstory was needed. :) wonderful! i loved this story! i especially loved the line ... "And she was suddenly struck by the realization that things could be viewed differently without one perspective being “wrong or right†and that was like a major insight for her." ugh! why couldn't she have learned that on the show...sigh Know what you mean. Kept waiting for emotional growth that sadly never occurred. Unfortunately, too many of us in real life are the same way. Thanks for your kind review. Hope you enjoy Book Two as much as this one. :) Oh yeah damn good chappie and the cliffie.... perfect :P Thank you. Thank you. DizzyB does the Snoopy glance with glee. :) oh wow...so very powerful...loving this story :) I really appreciate that particular comment. If you don't evoke some kind of emotion in your writing, what's the point? Thanks again for reviewing. :) Carol 03/24/2006 12:51 am Ch 12 - Through the Glass Darkly Nice to see this story back. Glad to have new chapters. I'm really enjoying it. Thanks for the compliment. I'm working on more frequent updates. Chapter 13 will be the final chapter in Book One and I plan to post that late next week when I get back in town. Book Two is already about half complete, so look for the pace to pick up! Thanks again for reviewing. :) oh no!!! but he has to come back!! well, it just said he cant come back *with Dawn*...so... :) excellent chapter :) I agree...How can you possibly have a story without Spike in it? Read on to find out! :) ANGI 03/21/2006 10:06 pm Ch 11 - Angel’s “Tale Spin†The long wait was worth it. What a fabulous chapter! Thanks! How very sad and dramatic, I hope so much that there will be a way for Spike to return anyway. I can´t wait for your next update. Thank You! Hope you enjoy what comes next as much. Book One wraps up in 2 more chapters and then on to Book Two. Thanks again for taking the time to review. i love these journal entries...very fascinating and insightful stuff :) I'm glad you're enjoying them. Keep reading! :) This is a fabulous tale. I am looking forward to more about the Warrior and what is expected of William now. Interesting what Angelus might have to say, also. More story please. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Sorry it's been so long since the last update. My life has been in crisis mode for some time now due to external family events and it just sucks not to have the time I want to write. This story is composed of several books and I actually wrote most of the 2nd book and then realized that it wasn't the starting point for this story and had to back up a bit. There are only 3 more chapters to the first book and I've gotten them completely outlined. I'll try to find time to get them written and posted as soon as I can. I greatly appreciate your interest in my story. Thanks! Carol 12/26/2005 02:49 pm Ch 10 - Hindsight is 20/20 Thank you for updating. I've missed this story. Thanks for the interest. It's been a rough year, and I've really missed being able to work on this story. It was the first idea I ever had for a fanfic piece and it holds a special spot, ya know? Happy to say that things have calmed down some and I hope to have this one updated on a more or less regular basis from here on out. another excellent chapter.... :) Thank you, thank you. DizzyB is doing the Snoopy Dance. :P love the little historic interludes in this story...very relaxing in a way, and yet fascinating...loving this story You are an awesome reviewer. Thanks for taking the time to comment so frequently. :) Unreal. :-) 05/07/2010 11:22 am Ch 7 - Initial Reactions nice insight into each of their reactions...and can i just say to anya's bit ... *YES!!!!* ... i love this story :) Isn't Anya a hoot? I love writing her. :) vladt 05/02/2006 07:47 am Ch 7 - Initial Reactions not only another extremely well written chapter, but you words make me want to like angel. i hate him, god your good! thanks for the fine read. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Although I prefer Spike greatly, I do like Angel myself - just not with Buffy. The two of them suck together, always bringing out the worst in each other. On his own, Angel is such a flawed hero, that you almost can't help but root for him to find his way and become a better person. Thanks for the kudos on my writing ability also...Made my day! :) very well done description of spike's thoughts and feelings during the events you recounted...excellent chapter in a thoroughly engrossing story :) Thank you for those kind words. I really enjoyed writing the journal entries. At one point I just had to say 'Enough' as it wasn't necessary to progress the story any longer. :P vladt 05/02/2006 06:59 am Ch 6 - First Glance when i noticed book two i had to find time to read book one. i thought that i would skim through and catch up . wrong. Damn, why didn't you post this one chapter at a time. i could have found it sooner. this a fantastic fic. the way you express what some of saw, as to what spike and buffy were thinking. the tough scenes whether in the physical world (buffy-giles)or meta(spike 's thoughts),extremely well done. thanks for the fine read, but it is going to take some time to get up to date. but i will enjoy getting therre. thank you. Sorry you didn't see this work sooner, but very glad that you've found it and are enjoying my work. Thank you for taking the time to review. Really do appreciate the kind compliments! Other than the initial 9 chapters which had already been posted on a few other sites prior to discovering The Bloodshedverse and which I did choose to post en masse here...everything else has gone up gradually as it's completed. And as my life has been crazy for some time now, I imagine you'll catch up with us long before I'm done with Book Two. Hope you continue to think it's a "fantastic" piece. :) :-) 05/07/2010 08:54 am Ch 5 - The Tale (as told by Giles) fascinating...can't wait to see how this all comes about :) Hopefully I won't disappoint! :P wow...so very exciting...can't wait to hear this story :) Thank you. Thank you. Love those reviews! :) A fantastic recounting of events! love that chapter...very nice interaction between spike and giles...can't wait to see what happens next...and is it just me, or did you hint at the beginning at perhaps a giles/anya relationship?? because as odd as it seems to some, i love that pairing! always pictured her better off with someone more mature and intelligent than xander, considering the fact that she *was* more than a thousand years old :) just wondering...off to read more :) I agree that Giles and Anya make more sense than Xander and Anya, and that will become apparent as the story progresses. However, I'm not going to throw them together overnight as I want their relationship to develop naturally. And I always thought that Spike and Giles had too much in common not to become friends on some level. :P Great chapter! Spike is truly selflessly loves Buffy to lift her burdens and not look for any type of reward. :-) 05/07/2010 08:23 am Ch 2 - The Fairy Godfather awww...that's just heartwarming, very very sweet...can't wait for him to make his presence known :) That was a fun chapter to write. I didn't want him to drop a pile of money in her lap, so I had to decide what she needed most...no mortgage and a good job! Thanks for taking the time to review again. :) oh wow....i love the way you write this spike...i need to know what happens next!! how sweet that he paid off her house for her!! love this story! Thank you for taking the time to comment multiple times. From one author to another, the reviews make such a difference to your motivation to stay focused and finish when life is pulling you in every other direction. I have thoroughly enjoyed several of your pieces, by the way. The Right Thing and Lying Eyes kept me on edge. Saving Grace kept me in tears. And I really like Blood Bound so far. Mischievous Buffy is an appealing character. This piece is my first fanfic and it actually started with the Book Two, which we'll get to soon... In the course of writing that , I realized the back story was needed. Hence Book One and the Kindred Series. I've actually got most of Book Two done, and there are only 2 chapters left in Book One. Will try to get those last 2 chapters up soon. Thanks again for the reviews! Love 'em! :) I love Buffy's admissions..so true, so poignant and... finally!! Cool :-) 05/07/2010 08:12 am Ch 1 - Emotions Unveiled great chapter. If only this could be canon. Thank You. I guess we all have things we would have done differently if writing for the show. This was one of my versions. Appreciate the compliment. :) so...spike's human now? what happened to bring that about? very deep, insightful retelling of buffy's emotions during their painful relationship...you've drawn me in...off to read more :) Hopefully you'll enjoy the the revelations to come as well. Thanks for reviewing. :) Richard 03/23/2006 12:10 pm Ch 1 - Emotions Unveiled Ugh, speeches! It's like one of Ayn Rand's books. Worse actually since I never read any of Rand's books. The Path Less Traveled works much, much better. Thanks for taking the time to comment even if you don't like the "speechifying" in this chapter. I promise the entire story isn't like that if you want to take a chance and keep reading. If not, I don't take it personally. There are several authors I really enjoy, but an aspect of one story or other will totally rub me the wrong way. Glad to hear you enjoy my other story so much though. :) whoa....sunlight?? what has happened to our spike?? need the next chapter now!! Read & see indeed! :) very dark and gloomy but intriguing start :) Yeah, it is pretty grim to begin with, but it does get a little more upbeat in the very next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Hope you enjoy this story. :) very good...you evoke a melancholy feeling talking about what happened to willow...and the appearance of spike at the end was great...love it :) Thanks. I felt very melancholy when writing that particular chapter, so good to know it translated well. Appreciate the review. :) | |||
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