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Before I Take That Walk by pfeifferpack One of my favorite first time discovery stories... lovely... Blue Thanks! I had fun with this one. I think it's not stretching things too far that this might have happened under the circumstances. k BuffyConvert 05/17/2009 12:04 am Chapter 4 Beautiful! Thank you! K wonderful read, thank you. alým 03/09/2008 05:49 pm Chapter 4 This was incredibly beautiful and intense and innocent! You know,I've read this before and this time I wasn't aware of the fact that this fic was the fic that I couldn't forget!You are amazing! Thank you *blushes brightly*. So happy you enjoy my writing. Thank you for the wonderful comments. You make me smile. k awwwwwwwwwww very sweet. :) vicki 03/06/2006 07:58 pm Chapter 4 wow what a great sexy sweet beautiful little story. and yeah - steak before hamburger and it would have been a whole 'nother ball of wax. stupid writers and joss - spike is soooooooo all that! i'm still looking for a teacher like that - hope i find one before i dry up and blow away. lovely story - thanks so much for writing this one. Thank you for the wonderful feedback! I really think Spike would have been a shoe in if he had met Buffy first before the angst and pain of Angel/Angelus. Even if they had begun to see each other soon after Angel left it might have been in time as her heart hadn't gone into hiding yet. Thanks again. K gaillee 01/23/2006 01:36 pm Chapter 4 *Deep breath...* That story just pulled me in...the feelings and sensuality...I can only say, "whoa!" Thanks for such a well written piece. Thank you. I enjoyed writing it too. K A beautiful exploration of their thoughts and feelings in this lovely, touching, sweet and steamy story! I loved it. Thank you! Yup...if Buffy had the steak before the hamburger she would have been a different girl! Okay, that one taste of hamburger, but still LOL Thanks. K That was so great! I really loved it. Thank you! Nothing like a good teacher to make a student love a subject. *G*
K ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/04/2006 11:41 am Chapter 4 Sweet, loving, passionate, and a wonderful and happy Spuffy ending. I loved this one completely. Thank you! I love angst but only with a happy ending. I want my Spike a happy boy.
k Excellent! Hot and sweet all rolled into one. Thank you, exactly what I was aiming for.
K vladt 12/30/2005 11:51 am Chapter 4 excellent. the discover and rapid understanding of true feelings made the scene read even hotter. thanks Thanks so much. Buffy wasn't quite as damaged at that point in time yet and hadn't blocked off her heart totally. And who wouldn't want Spike as a teacher, hum? K jeanie 12/30/2005 10:42 am Chapter 4 very good story! more please. Thank you! K Nice story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. K Nicely done. Very sweet - much more feeling than the average pwp. Thank you! I just can't do "no plot" and with Spike the feeling just goes with the territory. K Very nice - I like Spike who isn't pissed off. Yes, pissed Spike is cute...pissed off can be a bore. k Loved Spike's thoughts on Angel and Buffy's love affair, LOL, although he'd probably be talking out loud to himself. Liked the way you have Angel guilt trip Buffy, what a jerk. The Spike and Buffy conversation is very nice, too. Glad you found Spike's little monologue funny. I could just see him talking to himself as he did on the rooftop on Angel. k LMFAO!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE spike's internal monologue, reminds me so much of when spike was on that ep of Angel in season One and was standing on the top of the building, mocking him. lol. Hehe I know i've read this one before now, can't remember how it turned out though or if i reviewed, but I love this. I love that Buffy's mom was afraid she hurt spike's feelings and all this conversation between them. Spike's set most like it should compared to the other two. You definitely have an ear! Hi Pfeiffer - this story came up on random. Excellent Spike - as usual, his plans make no sense - unless you want to get into deep trouble. Interesting bits with Buffy and Angel, they could be improved with more action and dialog. Thanks. Yes Spike and plans have a strange relationship. This was also the impaired Spike of Lovers Walk and that didn't help him much. K | |||
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