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Losing Heaven by kimbclar

Araedhel

07/25/2006 10:31 pm

Nightmares and Notifications

I love the story so far! Please write more!

I'm glad you liked the story. I've finally updated all the chapters so far with the betaed version. I plan to work on the next chapter this week. Hopefully, my beta willing, I'll have it up next week.

Jeni

03/25/2006 11:51 pm

Nightmares and Notifications

KC
I'm loving this fic! Just wanted to let you know and encourage you to continue. Also, can you email me please? I need to talk to you!
spikesangel820@yahoo.com

I'm glad you liked the story and I dropped you an email.

maryperk

03/25/2006 02:22 pm

Nightmares and Notifications

cool chappy, KC!!

Thanks Mary! Loved your newest chappies as well.

Robyn

03/25/2006 08:59 am

Nightmares and Notifications

This is a great chapter and Giles's bloody hell was the perfect ending for the chapter. I love Anya how she stood up and pointed out the mistakes, and Tara for still being reasonable. Willow and Xander still have a problem accepting responsibility for their actions, and that too is perfect for their characters. You are doing a really great job of your characterization, along with a fantastic story. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Thanks! I really appreciate the compliments. I've tried to keep the characters true. Not so much with Season 6 & 7 but really who Buffy & Spike were becoming at the end of Season 5. I try not to think to much on the horror that was the last two seasons of my favorite show.

MarzBar

03/25/2006 07:43 am

Nightmares and Notifications

Bloody hell is such a good, all-round curse; it covers such a lot of situations. At least Buffy has Spike to help her through the resurrection this time. Poor Tara. More story please.

I know I love a good bloody hell. But I also like git, wanker and bint. Maybe I can work them all in on the next chapter. It'll be like a contest. How many British curses can I use?

Robyn

03/19/2006 09:54 pm

No Longer Afraid

This is a great chapter. I love how Buffy recognized where her fear of falling in love comes from, and how she even admitted to herself why she was with Riley. Her telling Spike how she feels about him and deciding that she was going to put her feeling before her fear of rejection was great. The rest of the chapter was hot and sweet, and felt right for them to connect in such a way. Thanks for the great update.

So glad you liked it. I actually think that Buffy was realizing alot of this before she died and of course she had several months in heaven to come to terms with her feelings. I never liked the way Joss wrote her after her return. He made her a two-demensional character which she never was before. Oh well, hopefully this story will make it all better.

Richard

03/16/2006 09:48 pm

No Longer Afraid

It just occured to me, they COULD have comfort sex. It's not like they don't need it. But that usually has far less lust in it.

Not always true.

Richard

03/16/2006 09:24 pm

No Longer Afraid

Poetic license only goes so far. It doesn't go far enough that someone in a state of shock, grief or depression retains their libido. Buffy humping Spike right out of heaven is a bit too much.

To each his own and my muse demanded sex. As you said in your second post it could be comfort sex. Sex happens in the unlikelyiest (sp?) of situations and lust/love overcomes the best of us despite circumstances or perhaps when we're at our lowest is when we most need to connect on the most basic of physical levels. And remember this is fiction so suspend your disbelief.

maryperk

03/16/2006 08:19 pm

No Longer Afraid

Great chappy, KC. Love it.

Glad you liked it because I definetly enjoyed writing it.

Lou

03/15/2006 02:07 pm

Forever Sounds Perfect

Hallelujah - Buffy sees the light!

Thank God! I couldn't stand how Spike and Buffy treated each other during Season 6. Hopefully this story will make it all better.

Robyn

03/14/2006 01:12 am

Forever Sounds Perfect

I like that Buffy seems much more aware of what she wants, and what she needs, and that she really sees Spike. ThatÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s something that always bothered me is that Joyce, Dawn, and Tara, to different extents, were the only ones that could ever see Spike for who he was and who he could be. Update soon please.

Me too! I was especially disapointed with Buffy's reaction to him in Season 6 after how she treated him at the end of Season 5. One of Joss's many inconsistencies.

PyroChilde

03/13/2006 05:57 pm

Forever Sounds Perfect

Such a wonderful end to the chapter. All these new powers, how interesting. So far, I like your season six much better ;-D

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

MarzBar

03/13/2006 04:52 pm

Forever Sounds Perfect

Spike may have the perfect therapy to get her body working again. More story please.

Oh yeah, Spike therapy. Just the thought gives me the tinglies.

lilmamaday

03/13/2006 02:36 pm

Forever Sounds Perfect

Hey no fair! You ended the chapter before the Spuffy loving! Nah, just kidding, the chapter was perfect and it is really nice to see Buffy putting herself first for once instead of being denial girl and worrying about what everyone else thinks!

Exactly. Buffy saves the world and then she has to kowtow to the Scoobies. I think not.

Spikes Slayer2

03/13/2006 01:50 pm

Forever Sounds Perfect

aww i like this story.. i think its great.. :)

Thanks!

maryperk

03/13/2006 07:23 am

Forever Sounds Perfect

sweet chappy, KC

Thank you.

Iceflame

03/13/2006 07:22 am

Forever Sounds Perfect

COOL! I like the thought of buffy being magically inclined as well as Slayer-powered! Though I'm dreadfully sorry she had to go through what she did to get it. I always enjoy seeing stories where the author shows that buffy has been seriously affected by her resurrection (and not just explain the change away as some kind of cosmic sunbrun!)

Glad you like it. I was never to found of the "cellular tan" either.

Robyn

03/14/2006 01:06 am

Thank You

I really liked the line Ã¢â‚¬ËœI got this huge welcome home gift but no one bothered to leave an instruction manual.Ã¢â‚¬â„¢ This is getting more interesting with what Buffy can sense. I like this Buffy that is standing up for herself against her two Ã¢â‚¬Ëœbest friendsÃ¢â‚¬â„¢. I also love that Anya and Tara still see and understand far more then the others, and realize that a mistake was made.

Thanks!

lilmamaday

03/13/2006 02:33 pm

Thank You

Great update! I love how Anya and Tara understood that maybe they hadn't done the right thing and were thinking about Buffy and what she needed instead of their own wants! Off to read the next chapter!

Tara and Anya are two of my favorite characters. Expect more of them in this fic.

Spikes_lizard

03/12/2006 03:31 am

Thank You

oh i love it you need to update please

Glad you liked it. I'm on Spring Break this week so hopefully I'll have more time to spend on my fics.

maryperk

03/07/2006 05:32 am

Thank You

I like it, KC. Lovely. More please.

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I've got some other WIPs to work on at Twisting the Hellmouth but as soon as I update at least one of those I'll be back to this. I love your fics by the way so I really appreciate you taking time to read mine. Especially love Broken Betrayal.

Robyn

03/14/2006 12:54 am