this is really good! update soon!

This is really good so far. Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading.

I like this so far, Wes as a big bad is a good idea. I can't wait for more.

Woo hoo! LIC update and tension goes up! Can't wait for next chapter....

Ramping up the action....good job. And Doyle had a vision...yay!!

Wes struck out at the Council? Whoa....that's one vamp with serious anger issues. Seriously, an evil Wes is a scary thing to contemplate. He's way too smart, with way too many axes to grind.

good read. they all ignore anya and she is usually the most knowledgeable of them all. enjoying the tale. thanks for the read

Lots to juggle with here.

good story. Not sure I believe that Anya would ever keep her mouth shut when there was something on her mind. LOL

Wesley seems afully strong for a fledgling. I wonder who his sire is.

hope you'll be updating soon. realy enjoying this story.

Hmmm. With Joyce in a state of hysteria and threatening to call the police, Angelus is now thrown into the pot. More story please.

Well things are certanly moving along here. Now when will Spike show up? I want some Spike action.

Someone gag Joyce...... and stake Angel while you're at it....

very interesting...can't wait to see how spike comes into this, where you take the story from here...this is one of my new favorites :)

Oh my yes, bring this one on!!! I don't think I've ever read a fic that had a smart vampire think about this option regarding the Slayer. Strange because now that I've read this it all seems so rational, logical and just plain smart. Hum, Wes as a vamp....interesting (did Angelus do the deed?). REALLY looking forward to reading this one as you put it out here. Excellent, compelling start. Utterly believable too.

Kathleen

Great new chapter, Temp! I hope you are writing busily, what with all that vacation at the beach time. lol. And that your cold is gone....

Wow, how is she going to get out of this mess? I'm looking forward to Spike, the hero, showing up (at least I hope he's the hero!). Very good story so far.

Great story concept. More more more, evil writer.

Cant wait to see where you go with it.

Heh. I look forward to seeing how Spike enters into this story!

Hmm so who turned Wesley, I take it this is happened before he began to work for Angel in the Angel show.

Wesley is a vampire, Faith is in a coma and Buffy is in college. What else is AU here? Will Spike find her? More story please.

ooo pooor buffyy...when is spike comin into play i miss him alreadyyyy...........good chapters keep it up

Very, very nice! Can't wait to see where you go with this! (hopefully it'll lead to a very dusty Wes)

Very, very nice! Can't wait to see where you go with this! (hopefully it'll lead to a very dusty Wes)

congratulation...you have managed to make wimpy wesley truly terrifying!! excellent villain! i feel so bad for buffy i want to cry, and i am hopelessly addicted to this story already, can't wait for more! :)

Muahahaha, apparently you didn't know I was psychic *wiggles fingers* And no worries *zips lips and won't tell all your dirty secrets* lmao

Hmmm let's see.... he'd kill Wesley and his minions so he could kidnap Buffy for himself, cause the slayer thing is his gig... then he'd shag her eight ways to sunday! ^.^

Poor Buffy... is Spike going to come save her?

very good start, wes evil and using the council's knowledge. thanks for the read.

Arrrgggh Not the needle. Who's the big shot vampire? Could it be??

oh awesome start! Soooo glad you are back with the writing goodness! *rushes to read next chap*

awesome chapter!!! have a feeling i'm gonna love this:)

Oh NOES!!! What're they going to do with her?