Very nicely written romantic fic!

I usually find post-Angel fics too sad, but really liked this one, very well written

Beautiful story! But no matter how much I love happy endings I'll have to say I like the original Angel final more. I'm Spuffy person, romantic, and a happy-ends lover but Not Fade Away is the best thing I have EVER watched. Because they WILL lose, we can see that but they still fight. Why? Because they are champions, heroes. Sorry, I lost myself here. It's a great fic, effugent mating, too. Congrats! 

Awesome ending! :)
Really well written, keep up the good work.

awwwwwwwwwww very sweet. I loved this. Very nice mating. :)

I always like a story where B/S claim each other - well written and executed

the conversation with angel about whether or not she was happy -- very well done and sweet...you wrote angel well without bashing...loved this entire story, excellent chatper :)

Oh! I loved this ending! Everyone fighting together, it's inspiring! Thank you so much!

Wow this is such a wonderful; beautiful, story, i love it. If you haven't already though about it Ithink you should consider writting a sequel.

Lovely story about Spike and Buffy becoming mates. Thank you for sharing.

Very enjoyable....The characterizations were very well done and flowed well from the show. I agree this should have been how it ended up.
Thanks for a great read!

Wow, a really great story!! I loved how Buffy left everything behind to get her vampire back as soon as she found out!!
And nice to see that everyone (even Riley) came through for the big fight in the end! It would have been great if events had taken a similar turn in the show, definitely a fantastic ending!
Thanks for sharing

Perfect ending! You should have written for the show. :o)

OOOOOOOhhhh .... even Riley was there, and he was fighting on the right side this time. Awesome. I loved how you ended this fic. All four chapters were great to read, and it was a nice fic from start to finish.

I really loved how everyone showed up, Giles, Xander, Willow, and the other slayers, Riley and his men, and Connor, there are so many people who would fight for good, they just needed to know when and where. I really loved your ending, it is so much more preferable to the ending on the show. (And I still got teary over Wes's death.)

fun read, but i signed up for a long, long tale. really enjoyed what you did. if you wish to be kind your next tale will increase proportionaly, as this one did over the first. please! thanks for the enjoyment.

I liked Spike and Dawn making up. I also liked Buffy's speech about why she gave the cookie-dough analogy.

very nice!! loved this story, was great !!!!

Ohhhhhhh they win right???!!

i really enjoyed this story and really hate to see it end...look forward to more from you...N

great ending. great story. I quite enjoyed it :)

Great finish. nice story.

 

how very sexy and sweet and very powerful chapter ;)

Sorry, I fell behind! I loved this chapter so much, so many emotions. Not only was it hot, I loved the sweet claiming words!

Guh....guh.....guh

Bloody wonderful darling!

Beautiful ... poignant ... excellent chapter. The intimacy was written well and steamy. The mating bond was perfect. I loved this chapter.

aww.. they mated.. *giggles*

OH! Sweet claimy goodness!!

That was absolutly beautiful. wow I meen WOW. Great writing and so much feeling.

This chapter was so sweet. I loved her confessions, first when she told him that she wanted to marry him, and then when she told him about the cookie dough incident. :) And their claiming of each other was very beautiful, I loved their vows to each other. And you sex scenes were the perfect balance of detail and sweetness.

great update. wonderful mating scene. can't wait to read angel's reaction. thanks for the read

oh my god ! i so love your version of "the girl in question" ! why wasn't it like that in the show ? buffy and spike vows were so sweet...

I thought it was a great chapter.

love that reunion...so very sweet...now buffy and company need to save the day so everybody makes it through the big battle ok :)

Very nice! I like how you put all their emotions upfront without trying to hide anything.

wonderful story!! love it!

Excellent update. I liked the timing and place that you picked for their reunion. I look forward to where you take us next.

enjoying this buffy. calm, knows who she is and what she wants. enjoyable change. thanks for the fine read.

oh oh oh this is an amazing chapter. I just wow i love it. And Buffy telling Giles that he just has to trust her is perfect

Nice, quiet reunion. Buffy didn't even break his nose. More story please.

awesome.. cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)

Oooo is there going to be happy hot spuffy smut?? *looks at you pleadingly*

I love that Buffy got to the bar in time to hear her poem, and that she very clearly showed Spike how happy she was to see him, before she called him on making a decision for her. I really loved this update and can't wait for the next.

SQUEE!!! I loved it!! More, please!

Great chapter!! Love it.

love this chapter, excellent start...you wrote the Immortal sort of how i imagined him..can't wait for buffy to see spike again :)

Great first chapter! I'm thrilled that you're rewriting GiQ. It so needed a heaping helping of Spuffy! Yay, go Buffy (telling off the Immortal).

great beginning. when did buffy become civilized? thanks for the read.

Good beginning! I thought she should have punched the Immortal but maybe she's mellowed out.

arrghh!!! omg update please?!?! i love this!!!

lay the smack down on the butt! lol

great start..looking forward to more.

Good beginning.

Nice start to this one. I hope that she gets to LA in a hurry. I have faith that this will turn out to be a nice Spuffy fic. {Smiles}

This is a great start, and I love that you address the issue of how the men in Buffy's life keep things from her 'in her best interest', I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Good start.

Hot damn, great intro!!! Ooh, this is how it should've gone on the show!! MORE!!! Please?