Dawn of Destruction by Morrigan_Blacknblue2

Kat
11/08/2006 01:06 am
Cacoethes         
Nice amazing great story.

sirc
07/04/2006 12:11 pm
Cacoethes         
great chapter
Thanks!

Robyn
06/28/2006 07:33 pm
Cacoethes         
I loved this chapter and the ending made me laugh. Great update, thanks. :)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the ending. More soon, we hope.

vladt
06/28/2006 03:05 am
Cacoethes         
very good update. dawn did well. thanks for the fun read.
Thank you! She sure did. She's a tricky one, that Dawn.

golddrake
06/27/2006 07:27 pm
Cacoethes         
great chapter
Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it!

DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/27/2006 02:41 pm
Cacoethes         
Good chapter.Poor Buffy.I wish it would stop raining.We've had our pool open since May,and I haven't been able to swim in it once. Update soon.
Thanks!  Yeah, our poor girl kept finding herself all flustered.  Hee!  I wash I had your problem...  It's hot as blazes, where I am.  I've spent the last two days swimming till late in the evening, just to beat the heat!  Thanks for reviewing! :)

sirc
07/04/2006 12:03 pm
In Medias Res         
great chapter
Thank you!

Spikes Slayer2
06/21/2006 01:02 pm
In Medias Res         
LOL devious dawn should be her new name.. hehe :)
Ooh!  I like that!  It suits her, perfectly!  *Contemplates snagging the idea...*  *L*  Thank you for the review!

Robyn
06/21/2006 12:32 pm
In Medias Res         
I love Dawnie she's such a smart girl. :) I really enjoyed this chapter and the humor, thanks for the update.
Thanks for the review! Our Dawnie has quite the hidden facets. Glad you enjoyed our humor, as well.

Tamara
06/20/2006 07:44 am
In Medias Res         
Smart girl, that Dawn.
She really is. She's gonna grow up to be quite the dangerous vixen. (in the best way, of course)

kim
06/20/2006 05:15 am
In Medias Res         
Bad Dawnie...bad, bad Dawnie...hee hee hee
:D Our little Dawnie. All grown up and a little bit evil. I think it must have been Spike's influence. ;)

vladt
06/20/2006 04:33 am
In Medias Res         
very enjoyable update. well done, dawn. thanks for the read.
You're welcome, and thank you, also, for reviewing!  :)  That Dawn is a sneaky one, isn't she? *L*

06/20/2006 04:15 am
In Medias Res         
lol, Baddd Dawnie! rofl :D
I know!  Shame on her!  Man, she needs a grounding!  heee!  Glad we could give you a giggle!  Thanks for the review!

golddrake
06/20/2006 04:13 am
In Medias Res         
great chapter.
Thanks so much!

DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/20/2006 03:42 am
In Medias Res         
Good chapter.Update soon.Good Dawn,with her evil plans and making Spike say funny names of places.I still love the Xander/ Spike friendship.
Glad you are still with us, and sorry for the belated response.  I gotta tell you, Blacknblue found those names... they are actual places, can you believe that?  Thanks for the review! :)

06/20/2006 03:07 am
In Medias Res         
that sneaky dawnie
Heh, yea. She really is quite devious when she puts her mind to it. Thanks for the review!

sirc
06/12/2006 09:35 pm
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
great chapter
Thanks so much!

vladt
06/05/2006 01:05 am
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
that chapter was a fun read. spike might not have fun explaining. thanks for the enjoyment.
Thanks so much! Well, that's our Spike - always getting himself into uncomfortable situations.

06/04/2006 05:59 am
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
I just cant understand how the scoobies could not know Spike has money. I mean hello traveling all over the world for the last 100 years, so not cheap. And Dru? I so know shes the type that has to travel in stile. there's only so much money you can get off of a corps. Certanly not the funds needed to live the high life.

Cant wait for the nest chapter.
Thanks for the review! (also, sorry we took so long to reply)

Yea, I think the Scoobies had a bit of the Sunnydale denile syndrome, too.

Thanks for the review!

Robyn
06/04/2006 02:46 am
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
Dawn really did a great job of getting the information from Riley. I love how she started out threatening to kick his but until Willow reminded her to think blueberry pancakes and how she did such a great job of switching tactics. I also love how blueberry pancakes have seemed to turn into a code phrase for Dawn charming someone to do her bidding. Spike’s confession at the end was great, I am really looking forward to everyone’s reaction. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.
I'm so sorry we haven't replied to your review sooner.  We have been terribly lazy.  Forgive us, please?  So glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Dawn has turned from her ways as a petty thief, to accept her crown as master manipulator.  *L*  Thanks for the wonderl review!  :D

mystasmom
06/03/2006 06:39 pm
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
I really enjoyed your update. Buffy and Spike's scene was very sweet, and Dawn and Riley - what a hoot!
Thanks!  Dawn is quite the little actress, huh? heehee!  So glad you liked it. :)

golddrake
06/03/2006 06:00 pm
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
Great chapter. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Thank you. :)  Really glad you enjoyed it.  Lots and twists and turns ahead.  Hope you will stick around for the ride.  :D

DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/03/2006 02:27 pm
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
Good chapter.I love Dawn,Tara,and Willow secretly manipulating Riley.I can picture them doing that.School is officially out for summer!Plus,I get to go on a shopping spree tomorrow.It's going to be fun.Update soon.
Man! I'm so jealous! I still have two weeks of school.

Thanks for the comment! Yea, those guys can be pretty tricky when it suits their needs.

kim
06/03/2006 01:34 pm
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
Yep, treasure of Amara, for one thing. Not to mention what he could save from his human days.
Indeed. :D
Thanks for sticking with us!

06/03/2006 01:17 pm
Praemonitus Pramunitus         
good chapter
Thank you! Glad you're still reading.

05/29/2006 02:32 am
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
hee hee erin this is merceds. OMG I LOVE YOUR GUYS STORIES!!! THEY SHOULD MAKE YOUR STORIES INTO AN EPISODE FOR THE SHOW!!!! YES YES INDEED!!!! I HAVE DIBS ON THE FIRST SIGNED BOOK!!!! DDDIIIIBBBSSS!!!! YOU WRITE SO GOOD!!!! I ENJOY EL MUCHO!!! I DONT WANT TO END!!! NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER EVER!!!! KEEP UP ALL THE SUPER DUPER FANTASTIC WORK. Thank you.
Hehe. Thanks so much! *hugs*

sirc
05/17/2006 04:45 pm
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
great chapter
Thank you!

05/11/2006 06:58 am
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
Will they have time for some lovely smut before the jealous Willow gets back? More story please.
Hmmm...  I'm not sure.  It might be a little bit early for the lovely smut...  But then again, you'll have to read on to find out. *giggle*  Thanks for the review!

Robyn
05/11/2006 03:28 am
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
I really enjoyed the closeness between Spike and Buffy and that at the end of the chapter instead of running away from it she went with it. I really hope that she will be able to listen to her heart instead of her friends about what is best for her.
Me too.  Part of the fun about being co-writers in this fic, is that we never really know what twist the other person is going to put into effect.  You just go with it when you get it back, so we get to be surprised too!  I'm liking the fluffy Spuffy, right about now!  Thanks for the wonderful review!

vladt
05/11/2006 02:22 am
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
fine update, thanks. now, about the EVIL place you stopped... ok, i am better now. thanks for the very good read.
Hehehe!  Evil huh?  Well, thanks!  We do try. :evil: Hehe  Glad you liked it!

05/10/2006 01:41 pm
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
awww.. great i love it.. cant wait for more!!!
Thank you! Hopefully we'll be quicker with the next chapter.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
05/10/2006 12:58 pm
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
Good chapter.I love that Buffy is letting Spike close to her.Only sixteen and a half more days until school's out for the summer.
I can't wait until June 2nd.(I wasn't including weekends and days off,but that'd take it up to twenty-some days.)Update soon.
Thank you! ooh! Almost summer!

I like it when Buffy's not stubborn, and she'll accept a little comfort.

05/10/2006 12:14 pm
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
Nice lead into a kiss. Hope she doesn't freak out.
Me, too. I hate it when she does that. Guess we'll have to see what the muse comes up with.

kim
05/10/2006 11:39 am
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
Wayne Brady is hilarious. His songs, on the fly, are works of art.

And awwwwwwwww.....romantic moment....
Yeah, have to give Wayne his props.  We both love him!  Blacknblue2 wrote in the first lines about Who's line, and Wayne Brady, and I wanted to dance for joy!  The part about Spike hanging off of the couch in stitches was something that I wrote, because that's what I look like, when watching him.  The man is wickedly funny!  And, as for the romantic stuff...  We're glad you liked that too! *EG*  Thanks!

Lou
05/10/2006 10:19 am
Ecce Quomodo Moritur         
Aaaaah - romance!
Bwahaha! Don't worry, knowing us, there'll be more angst soon.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
05/02/2006 11:39 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
Good chapter.I loved Spike and Dawn's talk,especially Xander covering them up.That's so sweet.
Xander's usually mean in stories when it concerns Spike,and I'm glad he's not.Update soon.Sorry I didn't review yesterday,but I was on day three of computer grounding.I just got off of it today,and I'm glad.I was going through computer withdrawal.
Thank you! We're just big suckers for the Dawn/Spike dynamic.

Yea, we wanted to show that Xander has more depth than is typically shown.

Glad you're off grounding now. I don't know if I could handle not being on the computer. *g*

Robyn
05/02/2006 01:36 am
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
Thanks for the update. I loved the Spike/Dawn moment on the couch, and Buffy falling asleep on the other side, and Xander covering them all with a blanket. Dawn is a master, she can work almost anyone. As for the ending, I’m going to miss those boys.
Thank you! Yea, just a little peaceful moment before we rocked the boat some more. While writing this, we were talking about how Xander has so many levels we never get to see, so we just *had* to put him in here.

Yea, Dawn's just sneaky, but no one ever suspects her, 'cause she looks so innocent. :D

I know what you mean about the boys. I became emotionally attached myself, and then we just went and killed them off! Darn us!

05/02/2006 12:05 am
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
Oh Jason...and Richard, we hardly knew ya. *sniff* Adored the Spike & Dawn boy talk on the couch, and Xander's covering them with a blanket. Really, really liking this story.
Thanks for the great review!  Yep.  Those poor boys didn't even get a fair chance, did they?  But, they will live on, fondly, in our hearts.  *sigh*  Erin got me good, with her part about Xander and the blanket.  I could totally picture the look that he gave Spike.  I was all *LOL*  We hope to have more out soon.  Thanks again!

vladt
05/01/2006 10:02 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
good read. love dawn being so aware of the protective spike. thanks for the fine read.
Blacknblue2 says:  Yeah, Spike tries so hard to be subtle, but fails miserably, because Dawn can just see right through him.

Morrigan says:  Yup...  Dawn can read Spike like a book.  A very Big Bad heavy book filled with nothing more than fluffy sentiments. Hehehe

Both:  Thanks for the cool review!

sirc
05/01/2006 08:08 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
great chapter
Thanks!  Really glad you enjoyed.  More to come soon!

05/01/2006 05:57 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
oh you two are a bunch of meanie heads. that was just cruel. Hope there is more coming soon!
I'm sorry you think that we are meanies...  It's my muses fault.  He's ornery.  And, since Blacknblue2 said that we should share mine for the duration of this fic, she was helpless to stop him!
 *EG*

Next chapter should be out soon, and I'm glad you are still along for the ride!  Thanks!

05/01/2006 03:44 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
Huh? How did Richard and his friend get dead? More story please.
They were snooping around the wrong place at the wrong time.  Unfortunately, that's all I can give away for now, or Blacknblue2 will have me flogged!  *giggle*

Thanks for the review!

kim
05/01/2006 02:21 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
Whoa! Ouch, with the gloom...

This is one nasty set of portals.
Yea, morrigan even got me with that ending there.

Darn portals! I'd kick 'em if I were in the story.

05/01/2006 02:01 pm
Sic Transit Gloria Mundi         
Good chapter.
Thank you! We're glad you're still reading!

05/01/2006 05:53 pm
Ultra Vires         
ha! Pregnant. Great stuff. This is highly entertaining.
Thanks! So glad you're enjoying reading it. We're having a blast writing it.

sirc
05/01/2006 10:43 am
Ultra Vires         
great chapter
Thank you! We hope you continue to enjoy!

The Good Jason
04/30/2006 07:58 am
Ultra Vires         
Two darn days, this has been up, and nobody called me. (*grumble*) You two are really cranking this out, and it's awesome! Keep it coming, I beg you!

((Hey, that boring fellow seemed a wee lil' bit familiar ... such a good-looking chap, and so ... b-b-boring? Huh. Somebody has me pegged.))
I'm sorry we didn't let you know about our update.  I also apologize for not responding to your review sooner.  Blacknblue2 and I got sucked into one of the portals.  It's true!  Here we were, minding our own business and writing our tale, when *whoosh!*  It took us a couple of days and some handy latin phrases to find our way back out!

Also...  Jason isn't really boring.  He's just written that way!  He's really quite the stud!  *hehe*

Thanks, so much for your continued, wonderful reviews!  We'll get more out as soon as we can! :wave:

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/29/2006 02:59 pm
Ultra Vires         
Good chapter.It's creepy that they're getting closer.Update soon.
This story feels a bit like it is kind of evolving on it's own, in some ways.  We never know what's gonna happen next.  Glad that you are enjoying this and are still with us.  We hope to get the next chapter out soon.  Thanks, again, for the review!

04/29/2006 12:45 am
Ultra Vires         
Thanks for the update. I love the flirtation between Richard and Dawn, and I love how Xander prefaced telling Kevin that he has some magical abilities. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
We're really glad you're enjoying the story. Xander's such a quirky guy, 'can't just straight out tell someone they have magical abilities.

Thank you for reviewing! We'll hopefully have more soon.

vladt
04/28/2006 07:48 pm
Ultra Vires         
good update. thanks for the fine read.
Thanks bunches, vladt! :) We hope to have more coming soon!

04/28/2006 07:17 pm
Ultra Vires         
Are these Initiative guys actually good guys? More story please.
We can't tell you, it's a secret!  But you'll see *winks*

Thanks for the review.

04/28/2006 01:35 pm
Ultra Vires         
Nice chapter.
Thanks, girl!

Oracleholly
04/28/2006 12:47 pm
Ultra Vires         
*sorry bout the the blank rev* stupid enter key *kicks it* bad enter bad.

Okay... first off LMAO @ "Well, congratulations, Kevin. You're pregnant." from Xander. Truly funny.

Seems like the action is heating up. can't wait to find out about the portals.
It just seemed like such a Xander thing to say.  Hehe, poor Kevin.  I bet he was panicked for a second there.

I think we'll find out more about the portals in the next chapter.  It all depends on the muse, of course.  And definitely more action soon!

Oracleholly
04/28/2006 12:45 pm
Ultra Vires         
Wow!  Thanks for the wonderful review!  Also, that was a very astute observation you have there.  You were exactly right!

*giggle* Just kidding.  *kicks your enter key for you*

05/01/2006 05:49 pm
Si Fecisti Nega         
oooh awesome chapter! And I didn't help you! sheesh! But now I get to go read more chapters of this fic so sometimes there is a bright side to falling behind in your reading *nods*
Morrigan says:  Uh huh!  You were our official liason to Dia and were therefore, quite beneficial to our successful migration!  *L*

Blacknblue2 says: And you leave us wonderful reviews! What's gonna be wrong with that?

sirc
05/01/2006 10:40 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
great chapter
Thanks!  So happy you are enjoying this.   :)

04/26/2006 04:04 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
That was a fun little stopover. However, I'm too blonde to get WTF Dawn was signalling to Spike. More story please.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying the story.

It's not so much a signal, as Dawn has a crush on Richard, and Spike just has to give her hell for it.

And we'll have the next chapter up really soon.

Oracleholly
04/26/2006 01:49 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
I'm liking it, but thoroughly perplexed by Dawn at the end there. But then again I don't have that Spike/Dawn bond-thing going on.

Looking forward to your next update.
Thanks for reviewing. We'll have the next chapter up post haste.

*psst...Dawn's got a crush on Richard. That's why Spike called her a hussy. 'Cause he's so darn intuitive, he picked up on it right away.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/25/2006 12:21 pm
Si Fecisti Nega         
I loved the pizza place story. Good chapter.Update soon.You can use the idea.
Xander, king of secret pizza code!  *L*  Hope you keep enjoying our little story.  Thanks for reviewing!

04/25/2006 11:05 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
Funny chapter. Love Spike.
Glad you liked it.  I had fun writing his part in this chapter.  He got to be silly and ornery!  Thanks for the review!

Robyn
04/25/2006 08:13 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
I loved the humor in this chapter, Dawn's disappointment that it wasn't actually pizza, Spike going all Southern, and Dawn's crush. Thanks for the great update.
So glad you liked it!  Most of the funny Dawn stuff was Blacknblue2's doing.  She says that she's just a sucker and felt bad about leaving Dawn with no pizza!  But, Spike's antics in this chapter were mine!  Thanks for the great review!

The Good Jason
04/25/2006 08:05 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
Whee! Moreness and still more moreness! Can I say that? Oh, methinks I can! I clap and wiggle with glee, and wait eagerly for the next lil' bit.

((yeah, that -was- a joke in there, sorry))

But ... h-how come *I'm* not in the story someplace?

Keep up the good work, and we'll all keep scarfin' it down!
Blacknblue2:  Uh oh, Morrigan stole the last one, so I get this one!  Ummm, review, that is.  Thanks Jason!  I'm glad we can make you gleeful, as well as wiggly.  Also, you don't get to be in the story!  Bwahahaha!  Thanks again for the review.  Now hopefully Morrigan and I can stop fighting over who gets to reply.

:fight :fight:

vladt
04/25/2006 07:56 am
Si Fecisti Nega         
good read, thanks. story starting to unfold and dawn's flirting . fun read, thanks again.
Morrigan:  You're welcome, and thank you for another wonderful review! *hugs*

sirc
05/01/2006 10:35 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
loved it so far
Thank you! Thanks for reviewing. We always love getting new readers.

Oracleholly
04/26/2006 01:43 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
Way to go Morrigan for getting Erin to write!!!! Hurrah!! Excellent first chapter. It really does catch your attention right off the bat.
Yay me!  I'm pretty proud of myself.  Hehe!  She's a blast to write with.  I'm so glad you are liking what we have so far.  Thanks for the review! :)

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/25/2006 06:24 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
Good story so far.I thought this was going to be a crossover with Day After Tomorrow(which would be cool),but it's still good.Update soon.
Blacknblue2:  Hey, that's not a bad idea. *looks around to see if anyone is watching her steal your idea*

Morrigan:  Thanks for the review!

redwulf50
04/25/2006 06:21 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
very nie chappie, lookin foward to the next

Thanks! Since we took so darn long to reply, (sorry about that) it's up now!

Robyn
04/25/2006 06:19 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
What a fantastic start to a fic. I am looking forward to following this. And the inclusion of Riley and Spike's and Dawn's comments, so fun.
Blacknblue2 says: "Thanks a lot! This is my writing debut, and I'm really loving all the great reviews!"

Morrigan says: "Thank you, so much! Writing with Blacknblue2 is a blast! I'm glad you are enjoying it, so far!"

The Good Jason
04/25/2006 06:17 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
Nice job, both of ye! But the time for sweets and songs ain't here just yet ... I think ye'd better be 'ard at work, bringing us more o' the tale as soon as ye can.

((very, very nice! keep going, please!))
Blacknblue2 says: "SHHH! Don't talk like that, or Morrigan will make me work through dinner again. And, I'm *SO* tired... And hungry."

Morrigan says: "Stop yer blubberin' and get back to work, wench!"  :getwriting:

Both: "We thank thee, sir, for thine interest!" *Curtsey*

vladt
04/25/2006 06:16 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
very interesting start. please keep it coming. thanks for the read.
Thanks!

04/25/2006 06:14 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
great start. love dawn's last line!
Thanks!  More soon... (We hope!)

jl1980
04/25/2006 06:13 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
fascinating start, very interesting....i can't wait to see where you go with this...glad the scoobies aren't being hateful to spike...
Morrigan says: "I think it's nice when they manage to keep their mean sides to themselves!"

Blacknblue2 says: "Yea, the scoobies can be stupid sometimes. That's what I like about writing...  We get to make them not stupid!"

Both: "Thanks for the review!"

MarzBar
04/25/2006 06:12 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
Wow! Dynamite opening for this tale. Is it aliens? Do creatures from other dimensions count as aliens? I love Dawn's final observation. More story soon please.
Blacknblue2 says: "It is! It is aliens! Oh wait, no... no it's not."

Morrigan: *giggle* "I'm not teeeelling!"

Both: "Thanks for the review!"

Bloodshedbaby
04/25/2006 06:06 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
Ohh! Wildly intriguing start! Sorry about the joint account thing, I'm working on it. Yeah for getting Erin writing! Can't have enough good writers, as far as I'm concerned!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Morrigan says: "I'm glad she decided to write with me too! I am honored to be working with the benevolent ruler of all things wordy!"

Blacknblue2 says: "Yay! Thanks! We'll start working on the next chapter right now!"

Both: *Bows* "We're not worthy! We're not worthy!"

maryperk
04/25/2006 06:03 am
Fronte Praecipitium         
Cool start, Morrigan and Erin.
Hey, thanks!  :)