Well done on both chapters :D

Love it more please.

very good read, thank you. egomania must run in the travers family.

Thanks so much for the update. You did a really great job of showing the disparity between who Angelus was in both the demon world and for his daughter. I like that she knows exactly who her parents are and also realizes how important she is to them.

I don't think I've ever seen a story quite like this. I find it refreshing that we keep getting new authors with new ideas to our ship. Love the story so far. Can't wait to see where you are going to take it.

oooh...very interesting turn of events...looking forward to reading more, love :)

very happy to see the update. best wishes on the engagement and congratulation to your intended (tell him to go away, until you finish this fine tale. joking, mmm half joking?) thanks for the read.

I was thinking about this story earlier today so it was quite lovely to see the update. I am really looking forward to where you go from here with the story. (And congratulations on the engagement.)

hmmm...very intriguing update, looking forward to hearing her explanation :) excellent work :)

love this story, can't wait to see how william becomes spike and how the reunion goes.thanks

great update, thank you.

lol...i love the end...love elizabeth's thoughts...but i have this nervous feeling that angelus and dru are gonna take her away... :(

I loved Dru's thought about Angelus fixing his hair. It's nice to have confirmation that Elizabeth is still her parents’ child. Thank you for the updates, I have really enjoyed them.

I'm waiting for the next chapter.

Randy Giles? OMG classic, well give a kid a name like that ofcourse he is going to grow up with something not quite right in the head.

Gotta have some dig at Angelus and his hair fettish, otherwise wouldn't be Buffy fic without it.

Ok so Giles bill be his great X many nephew, should mean when he gets out of line Spike shold spank him fr being a naghtly boy.

hmmm...so maybe she does get called as a slayer...or her vamp powers become activated or something. and she dies in the line of duty, Dru goes crazy, turns William...don't think they meet before that though....now the two parts that have me worried is the relationship between Dru and Spike and also Angel and Buffy.

Still loving it
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In some places I'm having a hard time figuring out who you are talking about when using 'he's and 'she's . It seems like you have used both for William.

The writing needs some polishing, but I like the idea :)

I really do enjoy the sweetness that is a part of Elizabeth's and William's romance.

very easy read. and enjoyable. but now the unpleasantness, i would guess. thanks for the fine read. now on with the tale.

Hmmm....interesting idea, everythings the same yet different. So Angelous and Dru had a baby girl, named Elizabeth, who sounds amazingly like Buffy, down to her, hazel/green eyes, some say hazel some say green.

She grown old and gets married to William, then something happens I take, killed by the Council of Wankers my guess...it's never good when Travers name is mentioned, and from the prologue sounds like she might have been pregnent at the time.

So then Dru turn William, because she either is crazy, is mourning or had a vision of Buffy coming back...I don't really know.

Well certainly got my braincells working, can't wait to read what actually happens....though I seriously hope Angel and Buffy does not happen...*shudder*

Wait William Giles? Wait don't tell me she actually gives birth to a boy who is taken by the council, and Spike turns out to be Giles' Great time many grandfather? That would be Brilliant.

Well great start so far.
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wow..excellent chapter, so glad they're engaged...curious to see wht will happen when angelus and dru come back into the picture..

The interaction between William and Elizabeth is so very sweet.

excellent read, thank you. william is going to be turn for a different reason this time.

This story is amazing. I'm still trying to work out the plot but I'm very, very impressed. You mentioned that this was your first fic and its a GREAT first. Other than the fact that you mispelled 'social' in 'social circle' I didn't see any problems.
Also, it seemed from the beginning that you're going to bring this story into the actual timeline of the 'slayer-verse'... Are you going to do that?
I repeat again this story is Excellent and I can't wait for the next installment.

this is excellent....but i have a feeling that mummy and daddy wont be too happy about things when they come back...great chapter :)

It’s really nice to see this updated again, I totally understand the RL issues. I liked the look at her life in this chapter and the information on where she got her dress.

lovely read, thank you.

lovely job...created a well-done picture of the time period covered...great job ;0

awww...is he gonna take her forward in time then? very interesting so far....please tell me you havent abandoned this fic...i'd love to see more :)

great chapter

This didn't feel awkward to me, and perhaps what awkwardness there is aids with the feel of the chapter. The sorrow of Angelus came through so clearly at the knowledge that his daughter can’t stay with him. You have done such a great job of bringing depth and some humanity to him while still keeping him clearly a demon. Thanks for the update.

love the update. really hope you feel better soon. thanks for the fine read.

wow...how awful...poor little baby...he was defending her, this time...though that doesn't make up for all the other atrocities he'd committed...great chapter :)

well done.

yes! yes, i read every lovely word. yes, i enjoy the way you are moving the story along. yes, i like the mini chapters. yes, i would enjoy longer chapter. yes, just yes! thanks for the fine read.

Even mini chapters are good. :D I like the progression you make in each chapter with their little girl as she ages and learns more about her parents. I am really enjoying the story, and yes I read the introductory part, I read everything you put on the page. :)

wow...that's chilling...yet so well written and very well done...great chapter :)

great chapter

Thanks for another great chapter. You really did a great job of showing Angelus's care for his daughter while still being an evil demon.

loved the update. thanks for the read.

Hmmm. Are the gypsys going to curse Angelus soon?

So they have Darla, what chained somewhere? She'd kill Lizzie that's for sure. Wondering about Angelus and his soul? Does he have it now or not? That should have happen after William but this is not canon at all, so I don't know anything. Thanks for sharing this very different story.

loved the baby wrapping angelus around her finger! would love to read castaway, where is it archived? thanks for a great story

loved the baby wrapping angelus around her finger! would love to read castaway, where is it archived? thanks for a great story

loved the baby wrapping angelus around her finger! would love to read castaway, where is it archived? thanks for a great story

i love darla getting ignored...lol...excellent chapter..so...i just wanna be sure i get it...is the seer dru, only he just didn't drive her insane? or another seer? or am i not supposed to know yet? :) lol

great chapter

Lizzie's one tough little cookie! It seems she will be able to take whatever the planet can dish out to her. More story please.

loved the update. thanks for the enjoyable read.

I absolutely love this scene and how well Angelus's little girl manipulated him right back to where she wanted him. You are adding a whole lot of dimensions to him, and to his family.

Now I'm getting it. Angelus has his soul and somehow fathered a child that William will marry one day. His soul won't let him act like the demon he is. So that's why he cares about her and trying to keep the Council from finding out about her. Can't wait for Dru to find William. Very good fic, thanks.

great chapter

excellent read, and that was difficult to write because i so hate angel/angelus. love the tale, more please. thanks for the read.

Interesting that Angelus managed to impregnate this girl (Dru?). How will Spike come into the family and how will they get even with the Wankers' Council? More story please.

So far i am loving the direction of the story. At the moment i don't think lack of dialog is holding it back at all. Can't wait for more.

very very good so far...can't wait for more...you portray angelus well, evil and scary but still with emotions...good job :)

Thanks for the update I am still really enjoying this fic. And as for Angelus you are doing a good job with him.

Is this Drus POV and Angelus'? Who's the father? Angelus killed everyone else he knew, and he's going to keep Lizzie? OK, for the sake of the story, I'll buy it. Continuing to read this unusal fic, thanks.

great chapter

im starting to be quite intrigued by this...off to the next chapter :)

I really like this fic. I like how you give us the thoughts of the characters as a way of us getting to know them. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

very good read, thanks

What a puzzle? William was married a hundred years ago to someone who looked like Buffy? Thrilled to know that they are going to be parents. I've got quite a few chapters to go before I get caught up. Can't wait to see how this all came about. Very interesting idea.

very interesting beginning to this tale...looking forward to reading more of it...its an interesting twist on the backstory :) good job :)

intriguing start...i very much like this, can't wait to see where you take it :)

ok, good plot, very good start

good hook, good beginning. now, we patiently(not) await more. thanks for the fine read.

Good start with a big mystery so we must continue to read if we want to find out about the wife and child of the vampire(s). More story soon please.

I liked it :)

What a fantastic start, I am glad that you decided to post. I am really looking forward to where you go with this.