Softer World by Constance
09/21/2007 06:40 pm
I've just found your version of season 7 and thought I'd let you know how much I'm loving it. A slightly more receptive Buffy and a slightly less doormatty Spike is all it takes for it all to be much happier. Except for Giles of course who needs to be seriously slapped silly. More please.
05/02/2007 04:48 am
ooooo, a nice blowjob. Glad Spike didn't let her get away with being all bitchy, either. Almost hope that all the scoobies hear what they're up to.
Kinda surprised that Spike admitted he died as a virgin. It is very sweet, though. Awwwww.
05/01/2007 10:22 pm
I liked you story and I can't wait to read more. I have found very few errors. Just nit-picky stuff like Dawn wouldn't say queue but line or Buffy wouldn't say snog unless she was saying it in a bad English accent. Other than that your story is SPECTACULAR!
Keep up the great work,
05/01/2007 09:35 pm
awww, that was such a sweet chapter, very romantic and sexy and touching all at once...though i'm wanting buffy to feed giles to a turok-han right about now great chapter, love
05/01/2007 07:24 pm
a little calm before the storm . le sigh. can't wait for more
09/23/2007 06:53 pm
nope - its a good stor and very well done
05/02/2007 03:22 am
Ha ha, Dawn didn't get her way. Glad that the two of them could have at least a bit of happiness in all that. This is a very sweet story. Nice and hot, too. No more denial!
05/01/2007 07:03 pm
OMG how come it's the first time I see this fic and why didn't i before?? This is perfection made spuffy.
07/24/2006 10:32 pm
I am really enjoying this story. The interaction between Spike and Buffy seems perfect given their past history and the way they have been communicating of late. I really enjoyed Anya's and Dawn's interaction in the bar and what Dawn said to Spike and Buffy out on the terrace.
07/19/2006 04:55 am
fun read, thank you. don't worry about the lack of negative reviews. there are a couple of reviewers on this site who point out, in great detail,what is wrong with stories. i have yet to find any of their tales to review. thanks for the fine read.
07/19/2006 03:31 am
I like your way of getting Buffy and Spike to transition from "the bathroom scene" to having an intimate relationship again. I completely believe that no means no. However, Buffy told Spike "No," a million times and then had sex with him once for each emphatic "No."
Calling Buffy a necropheliac is hillarious. She's a nymphomaniac necropheliac.
And lastly, since you want criticism, you may want to Americanize the American characters' speach. For example, we Americans don't say "snog." We'd say "making out" or "hooking up."
All in all, a nice read so far.
07/19/2006 03:08 am
I love the believable way you wrote the characters. I wish Spike and Buffy would have had that kind of epiphany. Please continue.
07/18/2006 03:56 pm
Apocalypses have such a bad way of killing a good mood.
07/18/2006 03:48 pm
I have to say, if the show had gone in the direction you're taking this story, I do believe that Buffy and Spike would act very much like your portrayals. I'm liking this story very much.
And, if you want meaner reviews, start writing worse, it's your own fault!
07/18/2006 12:50 pm
Gotta give Spike points for trying...how can he be sure of his footing, where Buffy's concerned...but she's making efforts, so...
So much for more romance in bed...more apocalypse talk to deal with. The mood might be ruined, but they can still cuddle.
07/24/2006 10:11 pm
I read your note at the end and honestly couldn't think of anything mean to say. The characterization feels good and if there is anything else off, well I am so into the story I am not noticing it. I truly love the conversations between Spike and Buffy and how they are each helping the other work through issues.
07/24/2006 09:59 pm
I hope things are going to get better between Spike and Dawn although I do like that they talked and that there seemed to be a bit of a thaw.
05/03/2007 12:57 pm
It was power of the non-erotic kind, far too loaded with responsibility. - loved this line and the thought behind it. Very observant. Oh, and "I missed you too, bitch." Very Spike!
07/24/2006 09:46 pm
The interaction between Spike and Buffy as well as the air being cleared a bit was just gorgeous.
06/01/2006 05:02 am
I really enjoyed the sweetness of this fic. You did a great job of showing the closeness that they had started to achieve by this time.
06/01/2006 02:21 am
I really liked this. quite a nice thought actually
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