I've just found your version of season 7 and thought I'd let you know how much I'm loving it. A slightly more receptive Buffy and a slightly less doormatty Spike is all it takes for it all to be much happier. Except for Giles of course who needs to be seriously slapped silly. More please.

sweet, sexy read (with the exception of giles not being drawn and quartered.) thanks for the fine read.

ooooo, a nice blowjob. Glad Spike didn't let her get away with being all bitchy, either. Almost hope that all the scoobies hear what they're up to.
Kinda surprised that Spike admitted he died as a virgin. It is very sweet, though. Awwwww.

I liked you story and I can't wait to read more. I have found very few errors. Just nit-picky stuff like Dawn wouldn't say queue but line or Buffy wouldn't say snog unless she was saying it in a bad English accent. Other than that your story is SPECTACULAR!

Keep up the great work,
Jace

awww, that was such a sweet chapter, very romantic and sexy and touching all at once...though i'm wanting buffy to feed giles to a turok-han right about now :P great chapter, love :)

a little calm before the storm . le sigh. can't wait for more :D

ok...hmmm...

nope - its a good stor and very well done

:)

Ha ha, Dawn didn't get her way. Glad that the two of them could have at least a bit of happiness in all that. This is a very sweet story. Nice and hot, too. No more denial!

OMG how come it's the first time I see this fic and why didn't i before?? This is perfection made spuffy.

Sorry, no mmean comments from me. Nothing major i see that needs fixin' , but I do REALLY love this story & want to see more! :)

great close to that little fic, though i'd love to see the rest...great job :)

I am really enjoying this story. The interaction between Spike and Buffy seems perfect given their past history and the way they have been communicating of late. I really enjoyed Anya's and Dawn's interaction in the bar and what Dawn said to Spike and Buffy out on the terrace.

fun read, thank you. don't worry about the lack of negative reviews. there are a couple of reviewers on this site who point out, in great detail,what is wrong with stories. i have yet to find any of their tales to review. thanks for the fine read.

I like your way of getting Buffy and Spike to transition from "the bathroom scene" to having an intimate relationship again. I completely believe that no means no. However, Buffy told Spike "No," a million times and then had sex with him once for each emphatic "No."
Calling Buffy a necropheliac is hillarious. She's a nymphomaniac necropheliac.
And lastly, since you want criticism, you may want to Americanize the American characters' speach. For example, we Americans don't say "snog." We'd say "making out" or "hooking up."
All in all, a nice read so far.

I love the believable way you wrote the characters. I wish Spike and Buffy would have had that kind of epiphany. Please continue.

Looking forward to reading more,

Apocalypses have such a bad way of killing a good mood.

I have to say, if the show had gone in the direction you're taking this story, I do believe that Buffy and Spike would act very much like your portrayals. I'm liking this story very much.

And, if you want meaner reviews, start writing worse, it's your own fault!

Gotta give Spike points for trying...how can he be sure of his footing, where Buffy's concerned...but she's making efforts, so...

So much for more romance in bed...more apocalypse talk to deal with. The mood might be ruined, but they can still cuddle.

Love that conversation. Especially the 'Better music, less vomitting'.

This is fun. Time Spike got his balls back though.

lol...this spike totally cracks me up...great job :)

I read your note at the end and honestly couldn't think of anything mean to say. The characterization feels good and if there is anything else off, well I am so into the story I am not noticing it. I truly love the conversations between Spike and Buffy and how they are each helping the other work through issues.

I sent you an e mail. Enjoying the story, BTW

Poor Spike, Dawn's being very cruel. That had to hurt.
Still, love the signs of mischevious Spike, with the ass pinching and whatnot. Love it.

lol...i love this...he's starting to come back around..great chapter :)

I hope things are going to get better between Spike and Dawn although I do like that they talked and that there seemed to be a bit of a thaw.

It was power of the non-erotic kind, far too loaded with responsibility. - loved this line and the thought behind it. Very observant. Oh, and "I missed you too, bitch." Very Spike! :)

And more sweetness, love it. Playful and adorable and hot.

her reactions are very real for the situation....she's moved on, he hasn't...but she's helping him to :) good chatper :)

The interaction between Spike and Buffy as well as the air being cleared a bit was just gorgeous.

I've read this fic before but I'm loving the trip down memory lane. Hopefully you have much more of it in hiding?

Very sweet moment between them. Loved this chapter.

so very sweet...and very in character for both of them ... excellent chapter :)

I really enjoyed the sweetness of this fic. You did a great job of showing the closeness that they had started to achieve by this time.

Very sweet and typical of them.

I really liked this. quite a nice thought actually