Still Bluer by slaymesoftly

Jags
01/20/2012 11:19 pm
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
lovely as always. love the angst!
Angst is the staff of life...

alým
04/07/2008 10:52 pm
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Now,that's better,but doesn't change the fact that this is still bloody beautiful. You're a great author with a great talent. Love it.
Thank you. *blushes*

alým
04/07/2008 01:14 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
She also said "My love"...
Loved this so much,although I noticed that the part which Buffy bit Spike and Spike bit her back was not included to the fic. It jumped from:
"For her part, Buffy was left stupefied at Spike’s abrupt exit. She wasn’t sure if she was grateful that he wasn’t pushing the issue, or angry that he was able to walk away. She knew he was as aroused as she was, if not more so."

to

"He turned eyes that glimmered with barely controlled tears towards her and she flinched at the anguish on his face.
“Don’t I want you? How can you ask that? I want you so much my demon tried to claim you!” "

Did I miss the whole event,or is it actually not there? Please enlighten me here.
I have absolutely no idea where the middle of that chapter went!  I've added it back in and will have to take a hard look at the rest of it tomorrow to be sure nothing else is missing.  I'm sorry! These older fics were copied from the old Bloodshedverse onto this one and sometimes things went wrong on the way.
Thanks so much for telling me about it!

02/21/2007 03:06 pm
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Loved it! So glad that she told him "someday". Much better then never! I'll pick another story tomorrow. You have so many! Thanks for sharing your beautiful stories with us Patti.
I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I do have a lot...too much time on my hands? LOL

08/30/2006 05:46 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Epilogue -- i would so love to see a sequel to this...this whole fic was so sweet and tender and well-done, while being incredibly sexy at the same time..loved it... great job, pet
Thank you. I'm glad you would like a sequel, but I seem to be incapable of continuing a story once I finally get them together more or less happily. No imagination at all. lol

08/30/2006 05:42 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Ten -- i like the giles/spike interaction...always gotta love ripper... great chapter as usual pet on to the end
Thanks - the end is in sight. lol

08/30/2006 05:39 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Nine -- i think he should have stayed...if she returned his claim, then it wouldn't be like he owned her...they'd be equals, right? so why not fix it that way? because spike would never think that she would want that, i guess... *sigh*...another lovely chapter
Pretty big jump from mortal enemy to mutual claim...just didn't seem like the time for it yet.

08/30/2006 05:36 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Eight -- wow...she's so lost to him already, she just doesn't know it yet...and he knows it even less than she does, poor spike...so convinced that he's unworthy and that she could never actually *want* to be his....on to more, pet, excellent chapter
well, it's not like either one of them was expecting to fall in love...

08/30/2006 05:31 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Seven -- oh wow...this...could be bad... : ... i just hope that buffy's as understanding about the claim as she was about the rest of the stuff that went on that night...can't wait to read more
We'll see....

08/30/2006 05:15 am
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
Six -- oh no!!! there's so much heartbreak and anguish in this chapter, so well written...poor spike..poor buffy...one misunderstanding after another...oh well, can't stop now...on to more
Hee, they are their own worst enemies, aren't they?

Palli
10/10/2005 03:10 pm
Chapters 6 - Epilogue         
I'd love to read about that someday... Wonderful story!
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it, but - "love to read about.." what?

alým
04/06/2008 09:40 pm
Chapters 1 - 5         
Incredible story,really enjoyin' it and lovin' it
I'm glad.

02/21/2007 01:45 pm
Chapters 1 - 5         
I love this! He's beening everything she needs. Surprised that she didn't say anything about Harmony to him. Love his apartment. Glad she feels safe there. Going to finish this, thanks sweetie, it's fantastic!
Hope you continue to like it. Thanks for reading. AO

All4Spike
11/01/2006 02:53 am
Chapters 1 - 5         
Hey! Where's chapters 4 & 5?
Sorry - have no idea where they were, but they're up now. Thanks for letting me know.

08/30/2006 05:03 am
Chapters 1 - 5         
Five -- what a gentleman he is... ... great chapter, pet...can't wait to see what happens next
I love to bring out Spike's inner William - I just can't resist. lol

08/30/2006 04:42 am
Chapters 1 - 5         
Four -- lol...poor spike...somehow it always ends the same way for him...this chapter was very good, loving the ust...on to more now
ust can be more fun than sex sometimes (well, maybe not for Spike...)hee!

08/30/2006 02:31 am
Chapters 1 - 5         
THREE -- that was amazingly sensual and sexy, yet subtle...loved the imagery, very hot and tender at the same time..buffy will be getting to know spike better throughout this, i'm beginning to think another excellent chapter
Thanks - your reviews are so thoughtful and clearly show that you are reading carefully. They are such a joy to read.

08/29/2006 03:01 pm
Chapters 1 - 5         
TWO -- i'm glad he got away, too...riley scares me...hope nothing bad happens...buffy, i think, may be starting to come around to face up to her own feelings...great chapter, pet
Thanks - I hope you continue to enjoy it!

08/29/2006 02:59 pm
Chapters 1 - 5         
ONE -- something tells me she'll be changing her mind.. lol...poor spike though, she's always so cold to him...pushing him away, like he said, after she gets what she wants...*sigh*...well, i'll just have to read on and find out what happens
Oh, I think we can be pretty sure she'll change her mind...eventually.