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Innocence Found by spikes_heart I love this story - your treatment of Buffy and Spike as children was terrific. Like how your handled all of the characters. Ooh yay sequel. Actually loved this. :-) 07/21/2010 03:37 am Future Imperfect Great story overall! Only part I didn't quite get was the end where Bufy freaked out and then they were suddenly playfighting..didn't understand what her prob was and nothing was explained so it kinda lacked something for me. Other than that I really loved the whole thing. Jags 03/08/2010 10:52 pm Future Imperfect That was soooo awesome! And cute! Niori 05/07/2009 06:09 am Future Imperfect This was an amazing story! Little Spike and Buffy was totally adorable, had me awwing all the time. Oh that was good. Great fic. Little Buffy and Spike were so cute! Lovely story. Both Spike and Buffy were uber-cute as kids, and fit so good together, both as grown ups and as kids. Stella 08/22/2006 11:09 pm Future Imperfect This has to be one of the best stories I've read period. I was reading this on my lunch break outside at work. When I came in, a co-worker asked me if I had found a funny story because she could hear me laughing inside. There were just so many scenes in this story that just made me crack up. You did a great job of taking Buffy's & Spike's personalities and molding them into 5 year olds. I can just see Buffy as she tells Spike that he's a "bampire." GREAT!!! :) very sweet story I enjoyed it immensely verda 07/13/2006 08:12 am Future Imperfect If I hadn't said it enough, I love this story and I'm so glad I looked at the sequel and was interested enough in it to read this first. Thank you once again for this amazingly entertaining story. I've enjoyed your kind words for every chapter, hon. Seems I've done my job well in entertaining you. *smiles* tg1982 07/11/2006 09:50 pm Future Imperfect Wow! What a fic! It was a riot. Thanx for the read. You're very welcome - it was a lot of fun to write, too. I love this story! I'm so glad you posted it here. It was so fun to read it again. I love little Buffy and Spike, and "bampire". :) You've made me smile! alexpallex 07/09/2006 10:03 pm Future Imperfect Wow! I love this fic! I'm so going to read the sequel! The only thing is, where the hell was Dawn when all of this happen? How did she disappear? I'm assuming she exists in this fic since Buffy jumped of the tower and everything. So yeah, that's the only thing I didn't like about this fic other than that it was awesome! Nope - sorry, love. No Dawn. Not at all in this fic. Why did Buffy jump? don't have a clue, but not because of Dawn. My reasoning behind it is simply just because. I do have her in other fics, though. And I'm glad you liked the story inspite of the Dawn lackage. Robyn 07/09/2006 03:38 am Future Imperfect Oh so good, I loved the Angel/Spike interaction and Angel's sad acceptance of Buffy and Spike as well as his realization that he now had a family again. I love how you portray Buffy and Spike’s relationship and the fun that is in it. I have really enjoyed this story and I am looking forward to the sequel. :) I think Angel's isolation caused a lot of his problems and issues. A sense of family can insulate you against the worst that life has to offer. I hope you like what's in store for them all. golddrake 07/09/2006 12:20 am Future Imperfect great story Many thanks. ewwww... Angel kissed Spike! Looking forward to the sequel. They've got a long history together... I doubt it's the first time they kissed each other. *grins* Hope you like what's coming up. Lou 07/08/2006 09:17 pm Future Imperfect That's a briliant chapter - the whole scene in the Hyperion particularly. Thanks, Lou. It was difficult, in that it was a long time coming. An actual convo between Spike and Angel that didn't involve beating each other up. wow! that story, the whole thing, was just incredible, hon...excellent job! i love how you portray spike's relationship with angel...very well done...and angel's reluctant acceptance of the situation...can't wait to read more! :) **beams happily** Hope you enjoy the sequel as much. :-) 07/21/2010 02:47 am Revelations Oh I wonder if they will be able to help Willow. lovely chapter - i really enjoyed the story and can't wait to read the ending Verda 07/13/2006 07:47 am Revelations Hallelujah! at last! Now lets see what can mess it up. This is a great story. Thank you for the read. What can mess it up? Would I do that? *grins* LOU 07/07/2006 12:29 pm Revelations Such eloquence from our Buffy! *smiles* Thanks, hon. Robyn 07/07/2006 08:02 am Revelations I really like that Xander realized some truths and has promised to stop going off like he usually does. I'm really glad that Buffy spoke up for herself and told Giles exactly how she felt about him leaving and that she told them that she wants to try to change her attitude around Spike. I really enjoyed this update, thanks. :) If Buffy had spoken up once or twice in canon, it would have been a whole different show, right? Glad you're enjoying, Robyn. Mandy_the_musician 07/07/2006 07:55 am Revelations More please? I love this story so much. More is coming. Thanks for your kind words. golddrake 07/07/2006 07:04 am Revelations great chapter Danke Go Buffy! Interesting she had to be five years old to get grown up. Is there more? There is more, I promise. Children sometimes have great insight. kim 07/07/2006 03:34 am Revelations Ah, finally, Buffy speaks some truths... Xander did his best at trying to be mature here... Tara will become more in the group now, if they'll let her. She's not just "Willow's girlfriend" anymore. About time for Buffy to get that hurt out for Giles to see. That festered and festered all the way to the end of the show, because he only showed up again for saving the world purposes. He was a coward for not respecting the father/daughter relationship that they had forged. And Spike definitely has his crumb...what's she gonna do with him back in the bedroom, hmmm? Finish the convo, or... And I'm also glad they realize how psycho Willow's become. Deal with her now before she kills someone. The stuff that goes on inside of us... it can destroy if it's not addressed. Sometimes all you need is a kind word to change your life around. So pleased that you're enjoying the travails of the characters. i love buffy's decision...very good idea...i love the way you portrayed xander too...still enough of a jerk to be xander, but not bashing his character and not making him into an unrecognizable hateful stranger like i've seen some do...very good chapter :) It's hard for me - but I try to find a line with characters I'm not fond of and work with it - bashing just for the sake of it doesn't do the story justice. :-) 07/21/2010 02:37 am Blast from the Past oh maybe Xander is finally getting it. excellant chapter - very lovely and cute - looking forward to reading the rest Verda 07/13/2006 07:24 am Blast from the Past Hope Tara can get through to Willow, looks like Harris might be starting to resign himself to Buffy's fondness for the living dead. Nice irony that now she would ask him to sleep with her. Love it. Great read. Believe it or not, Xander was meant to be the villain of the piece - the outcast at the end. Things change. Silly muse. Spikes Slayer2 07/05/2006 06:35 pm Blast from the Past silly silly willow.. Indeed. I have a feeling that she'll get hers. Lou 07/05/2006 03:01 pm Blast from the Past Hot damn I hate those two interfering know-alls! *nodsnodsnods* I completely agree with you, Lou. that last line was the smartest thought xander's had in the whole fic...well, *duh*, xander!...hate him and will, messing things up with their "I know best" attitudes..can't wait to see what happens next :) Can you tell I have canon characterization issues? Hence why I make with the writing. *smiles* kim 07/05/2006 12:13 pm Blast from the Past Very odd that being hit with Willow's fire ball turned Buffy back into a little girl. Very odd, indeed. Xander really is an asshole in this one. 5-year-old Buffy picked up where she'd left off, having all those memories...if the fire ball had glanced off Spike, would he be a kid, too? Big cuddly vamp-bear...the perfect pillow. :) T'was a combo of the pain, and the lingering magicks. It's a good thing it didn't hit Spike... he'd have gone up like a piece of paper. **looks around for my Spike pillow, and can't find it** Robyn 07/05/2006 11:52 am Blast from the Past I love how protective Buffy and Spike are of each other I just wish that Willow and Xander would get a clue and realize that Spike won't hurt Buffy. Little Buffy wanting her Spike and not wanting to be away from him is so cute. Thanks for the update, I am really enjoying this story. :) Their protectiveness of each other is just about my favorite part. Makes me all sniffly in a good way. And you make me smile! :-) 07/21/2010 02:22 am Rise and Shine Oh he doesn't know the chip is gone yet. very sweet chapter - i can't wait to find out everyone's reaction! Verda 07/13/2006 07:05 am Rise and Shine Boy! what a wake up call! Naked Spike, yum! Love how you're bringing them together, and that they all want to give him a chance, especially Buffy. Love the friendship that they've started. Great story. This is how I wanted season 6 to go - and it could have. Friendship would have been preferable to the abuse that happened. Robyn 07/04/2006 07:23 pm Rise and Shine Spike really has a way to go to be able to trust that the feelings of Giles and Buffy have changed towards him and that Tara also cares for him. They have already made positive steps and I hope that it continues. I am really enjoying this story and hope you update soon. With Buffy, he wants to, with Giles I think it's much harder. Lots more to come. wow..he still doesnt know...a wonderful update, your dialogue was flawless....love how buffy and giles and tara are trying to make him see that things will be different now...but it's gonna take a bit for him to be able to trust that...thanx for this excellent update,can't wait for more :) First off, an apology for calling you Robyn last review. As you might be able to tell, I'm doing a whole bunch in one go, and got a teensy bit mixed up! For a change, I thought Spike deserved to be reassured. He's never been given the courtesy in canon... and it drove me insane. Lou 07/04/2006 10:11 am Rise and Shine I love the last line. Thanks, Lou. Gives you the warm fuzzies, yes? Spikes Slayer2 07/04/2006 06:11 am Rise and Shine he still thinks hes got the chip?! oooohhhh getting very interesting!! Oh yeah - he was out cold when Angel removed it. Not that Will/Spike would remember. golddrake 07/04/2006 05:51 am Rise and Shine great chapter **is pleased** :-) 07/21/2010 02:10 am Avenging Angels Oh I love how Angel went all Angelus on WIllow and Xander, I hope it works. Xander is such a bigot - I hope that he gets a smackdown and soon - good chapter! Verda 07/13/2006 06:06 am Avenging Angels I rarely like Angel but you've managed for me to be glad that he's there for a change. Was hoping that Xander might of pissed his pants after Angel grabbed him. Another great chapter. Gotta admit that Angel is not my favorite character... but I've learned to write him in many different ways. Sometimes sympathetic... and sometimes not. (Notice how I'm ignoring commenting on Xander?) Robyn 07/04/2006 06:49 pm Avenging Angels I love how protective Tara, Giles, and Angel are of Spike. I think it is so cute what Buffy calls Angel and that she knows that he will keep her and Spike safe. Hee! Mr. Grandpa Angel. Little finger meet wrap around. Just stumbled across this fic and was absolutely blown away. This is one of the most original and well executed ideas for a story that I have ever seen. Neat way of addressing the question of a demon without a soul who feels and wants to do better. Just fantastic. And the cute, awww factor doesn't hurt either. Please hurry and update 'cos I'm already seriously addicted to this story and will need a fix soon. :) Pssst. Don't tell anyone... but there's a sequel coming right on the heels of this one. I'm pleased as all get out that you like the whole idea and of course, the cute factor. Who could resist the little pouty lips? i am so loving angel in this fic...great characterization...xander is pissing me off, but willow's the one who really needs dressing down...she just *assumes* spike must have hurt someone...cause her spells *never* go wrong...grr...anyways, great chapter :) can't wait for the next:) Ah, Robyn... you certainly know the way to a writer's heart. I'm so pleased the characterizations are working for you. Lou 07/03/2006 09:49 pm Avenging Angels Sanctimonious gits! Indeed!!! :-) 07/21/2010 01:59 am Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog Oh I wonder if Tara can undo the spell or if Willow will have to. Buffy if she decided to get pushy and bossy? - LOL - and that could never happen. Blood and vanilla ice cream ew. I can not believe Willow - she is so *growls* I hope they get this fixed soon! Verda 07/13/2006 05:44 am Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog Poor little Spike can't cut a break anywhere. Can't they just see how sweet he is, he may not have a soul but he's got something. Just love this story. Thank you for the great read. Spike has heart... good or bad he can be counted on to 'feel'. Robyn 07/04/2006 06:28 pm Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog Poor Spike, because of Willow he got horribly hurt trying to protect his friend. I really hope that she is taught that there are consequences to her actions, and not just her girlfriend leaving. Let me say she does learn... eventually. And it does cost her dearly. how cruel...i know she didn't mean it to be but poor little baby spike....i wanna cry...another excellent chapter, though...can't wait for more :) She never means anything, does she? Giles was so sweet to him. **wibbles** Spikes Slayer2 07/03/2006 03:08 am Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog awww.. they're so supportive of each other.. they're so cute!!! lol im still loving this!!! I loved having them turn to each other for comfort. Glad you do, too. Lou 07/03/2006 02:32 am Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog Willow and Xander - what a gruesome twosome! Lovely description of the two of 'em. *smiles* golddrake 07/03/2006 12:10 am Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog great chapter Thanks, again. Bloody Willow ;-) 07/21/2010 01:51 am Power Play oh no Angel should not have told her. Uh oh - I don't like the sound of that Willow thinking she knows best again. Shakes head... she'll never get it will she. great chapter! Verda 07/13/2006 04:20 am Power Play Not again! will she ever stop meddling, never mind, that's a stupid question. Another great chapter. Some people never, ever learn... until it's too late. Robyn 07/04/2006 06:17 pm Power Play Grr Willow, will she never learn. For someone so bright she in not very observant. I did enjoy Angel's description of what the worst thing that had happened that day. Pleased that you're enjoying Angel's reactions. And yeah, Willow's at it again, silly thing. oh wow...willow and xander both are gonna do something awful!! but it seems like somehow its not in xanders control...willow and her magic...*sigh* great update, love it :) Those two are the most likely to go off in a bad way on their own. Totally different directions, but not good for anyone involved. Lou 07/02/2006 04:43 pm Power Play Grrr - pesky Scoobies! Super Angel. If it weren't for those pesky kids...! Spikes Slayer2 07/02/2006 02:15 pm Power Play *gasp* she'll bollocks things up wont she?!? *yet another gasp* Willow? Can you think she'd actually get something right? Especially trying to hide it? kim 07/02/2006 08:38 am Power Play Oh, no! Willow's going to magic him now?? Angel and Giles are getting pretty good at this...quite funny, too. Make the mean people go away! Ah Willow. Can't ever leave well enough alone, can she? Mean people, beware! Kim is annoyed at you. *snickers* golddrake 07/02/2006 07:12 am Power Play great chapter Thank you! :-) 07/21/2010 01:42 am Let the Chips Fall Where They May Oh that was good, Angel in a bathroom with Both Buffy and Spike trying to give them a bath. "elbows deep in bubbles and water with two wet, squirmy naked children… both of whom he’d slept with once upon a time. Unlife just couldn’t get any weirder than this." Okay this is not a classic line - OMG that was to funny Verda 07/13/2006 03:44 am Let the Chips Fall Where They May OMG! that was hilarious!!! As a mom I've seen that same thing happen more than once. Angel's such a wuss, the Scourge of Europe...Right! Such an enjoyable & entertaining chapter. Thank you. It was a lot of fun to write. I could just see this once terror of the known world cowed by a teeny willy and a curious little girl. Robyn 07/04/2006 06:08 pm Let the Chips Fall Where They May The bath time really had me laughing. The girls’ heartlessness towards Angel having to give the kids a bath, Buffy insisting on having a bath also, and the messy playtime they had. You also managed to capture perfectly the curiosity of kids when realizing that they were different. Thanks, Robyn. I didn't wanna let Angel squiggle out of it - after all, it was only a bath. What could go wrong? *grins* OMG - Almost had me peeing in my pants at this one. Great chapter. I'm still laughing. Then you'd have to let Angel wash you. Do you think he's up for the task? lol...i feel bad for angel, darn it! i dont want to but i do! lol...it would be a bit on the freaksome side...lol...another excellent chapter :) Now we know what it takes to scare the bejesus out of the head of the Scourge of Europe - nekkid five year old tushies in a tub! Glad you're enjoying. kim 07/01/2006 11:24 am Let the Chips Fall Where They May ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!! People are sleeping so I have to be quiet...but omg, that was funny. And so realistic! Kids are so innocently insanely curious. Imagine when they're back to themselves and remembering all this! And poor Angel...a truly boggling, awkward moment. He's been very sweet and helpful, though. Good ol' Anya and Tara - they don't have those old prejudices, so the old arguments don't apply. Nice that somebody sees the possibilities. I take it you liked the bath scene? Can you tell I've had children? *grins* I laughed when I wrote it - poor Angel. I so don't think he could handle that. Coward. *grins* So sweet. :-) 07/21/2010 01:31 am When the Chips are Down OH the chip and gone and Angel could see that Spike is not really a threat to them. ahhh nice of angel to finally admit what everyone knew - that spike really wasn't that much of a danger - very cute story so far I am enjoying it! Verda 07/13/2006 03:11 am When the Chips are Down God, I love this story. Love hoe Buffy 's so protective of Spike, of how much Giles has changed in his opinion of him, even Angel's being decent. Wonderfully touching story. Thank you for it. **beams happily** Nobody can resist the power of the double pouts!! Robyn 07/04/2006 05:57 pm When the Chips are Down I'm glad that Angel figured out why Spike wasn't waking up and that he was able to remove the chip. I'm glad that both Angel and Giles finally realized how much Spike has changed. This was to be a happy, fluffy-type story. Of course they were gonna realize Spike's value. Lou 07/01/2006 10:22 pm When the Chips are Down Gosh - a nice Angel. Makes a pleasnat change. Glad you like Angel's characterization. I'm not always so kind to him. Mostly, I do try not to bash. Mostly... not always successful. *grins* Spikes Slayer2 07/01/2006 06:51 am When the Chips are Down awww.. i wish she called angel a poopey-head.. that would have been funny! LOL sorry bout the 3 X reviews last chap.. dont know what happened there.. :S *grins* I'm glad you like our little Buffster's use of foul language. And don't worry about the triple-play. I'm just learning the ins and outs of this, meself. duke6665 07/01/2006 05:42 am When the Chips are Down wow great chapter. loved angel actually defending spike. can't wait for the next chapter See? Pigs actually do fly, and Angel comes to Spike's defence. duke6665 07/01/2006 05:41 am When the Chips are Down wow great chapter. loved angel actually defending spike. can't wait for the next chapter Angel really couldn't help himself. Such a little cutie, our William. All Angel needed was to take that stick out of his butt, and viola! oh goodie! no more chip! yea!! i love this fic...i love how angel responded to the situation, in the end...his line about wanting to do right by spike this time...beautiful...excellent chapter :) can't wait for more :) Angel came around for a change. It felt good to write it that way. He should be protective of his family. Ask and ye shall receive. Oh I wonder if they will have to call Angel. I don't believe for a minute that Buffy behaved in the Walmart. LOL oh i can't wait to see angel's reaction to their transformation - it should be very interesting. Cute story so far! Verda 07/13/2006 02:36 am Calling All Angels What a wonderful, imaginative story. Buffy in the buff was fun and she has slayer knowledge as well. Wonder what kinds of memories Spike has. They are so cute and I love how they take care of each other. Stupid Xander, always with his foot in his mouth. Great chapter. My favorite part was showing the affection between little Spike and Buffy. No calling on Angels! It'd be embarassing for Spike but if Buffy were to insult Angel.... Oh come on... you know Angel doesn't stand a chance. *snickers* Robyn 07/04/2006 05:47 pm Calling All Angels Slayer and Vampire strength five year olds who can't go out because of the sun, I can totally understand Tara's reaction when Xander and Willow showed up. I love the care and concern that Buffy and Spike have for each other and how protective they are of each other. Tara really didn't stand a chance that first time, did she? It all worked out nicely in the end. *smiles* Spikes Slayer2 06/30/2006 10:25 am Calling All Angels LOL this is awesome! i love how you've made spike and buffy little bampires and slayers.. its so adorable!! please update soon :) Glad you're enjoying. I couldn't resist regressing them both. Spikes Slayer2 06/30/2006 10:25 am Calling All Angels LOL this is awesome! i love how you've made spike and buffy little bampires and slayers.. its so adorable!! please update soon :) Glad you like the kiddies. More coming soon, I promise. Spikes Slayer2 06/30/2006 10:25 am Calling All Angels LOL this is awesome! i love how you've made spike and buffy little bampires and slayers.. its so adorable!! please update soon :) Thanks for your kind words, hon. More is coming. wow...angel getting involved should be interesting...lol...and leave it to buffy to get naked.. :P.. and they are so just like grown-up spike and buffy...i love this! :) I'm glad you find the characterizations true - I tried very hard to keep them in their younger counterparts. cheryl 06/29/2006 07:59 pm Calling All Angels Oh, my, gosh - this is wonderful!! More, more, more please - and soon - I can't wait to see where you are going with this. Thank you, Cheryl Glad to hear you're enjoying, Cheryl. More is coming, I promise! *smiles* Lou 06/29/2006 04:57 pm Calling All Angels Look out - Willow's on the magic! Willow certainly does have her issues. Both in canon and in fanfic. *grins* Oh now they are both children what ever will Giles do. Spikes heart - very cute story. The Buffy and Giles cruelty contest is too bad to stand. I'm betting Spike will be better to Bitty Buffy than she was to his younger self. how adorably cute! now they are both children! I wonder why the affect was slowed on Buffy. very cute! Verda 07/13/2006 01:38 am Sugar and Spike Oh man, poor Giles. Now he's got the both of them and he probably has no idea what to do with them, guess it's time to call Willow or Joyce? Started reading this because I wanted to read "Reclamation".Very interesting. Thanks for the read. No Joyce, unfortunately. She'd have known how to cope with the wee ones, but this is placed after her demise. Glad you're enjoying. so what are little girls made of? I love this fic Apparently the same demon guts as little boys. **smiles** Robyn 07/04/2006 05:32 pm Sugar and Spike It's a good thing that Spike wanted Buffy to stay with him. Poor Giles, now he has two little kids to take care of. :) **laughs** I thought he'd get a kick out of really being papa to Buffy, with Spike as an added bonus. wow...this should be loads of fun!! lol .. excellent chapter, i love little william, he's adorable...i love this! more please ! :) It's one of my biggest kinks - little kid fic. William is a charmer, isn't he? Lou 06/28/2006 09:14 pm Sugar and Spike What a cutie. Even Giles is hooked. Nobody can resist the power of the tykes, Lou. Giles never stood a chance. OH no Spike has been turned into a child. how cute - spike a child - i like the premise and am interested in what happens next - lovely! Verda 07/13/2006 01:15 am What Are Little Boys Made Of? Very cute. Little Spikey in his birthday suit. This is going to be interesting. Thanks for the read. Thanks, Verda. He's such a little cutie you just wanna pinch his little cheeks. All 4 of 'em! *grins* Haven't yet read all of it - but love it so far - the rest is to be read tonight!! Also - really LOVE the banner - did you do it yourself - if so, would you consider doing one for my story? (Thanks for a good read - of other stories in the past) Glad you like the fic and the banner. It was done for me on LJ by the community banner_grab. They do marvelous work. **blushes at your kind words** Robyn 07/04/2006 05:20 pm What Are Little Boys Made Of? Fantastic and extremely interesting beginning. I am so glad that I don't have to wait for an update. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Had lots of fun writing it. Lou 06/28/2006 08:57 pm What Are Little Boys Made Of? So pleased to see this posted here - it's one of my keepers. A brilliant story. Thanks for your kind words, Lou. You made my day. *smiles* Maggie 06/28/2006 05:03 pm What Are Little Boys Made Of? I've read this story over on The Crypt -- it's one of my very favorites. I'm glad you are posting it here, too - cause I find it easier to read the formatting here, and this is one of my favorites. I re-read it every couple of months or so. Thanks! Hi, Maggie. Wanna laugh? I didn't even remember my fic was archived on the Crypt. *grins* Glad to hear it's giving you enjoyment. oh wow...this should prove to be very interesting...neat idea...can't wait to read more :) Hey, hon! So pleased that you're enjoying Innocence Found. It was one of my more favorite fics to write. **smiles** | |||
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