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Prodigal by Confused Muse Yingxs 12/18/2008 12:35 am Chapter Eleven Please,go on with it :-) I enjoy reading your story every moment. Thanks a lot for it. Mrs X 02/20/2007 09:28 pm Chapter Eleven Just found it, just read it. And - just love it! You need to finish this story! It seems to me you've barely gotten started and what a fantastic beginning it is. There are so many promises of great chapters to come. Please, write fast! 12/08/2006 12:31 pm Chapter Eleven hmmmm? it's ........ good no scratch that it's .... GREAT. i like it. good concept the whole bad buffy thing ...nice job :) somehow i get the feeling that spike's making a mistake...granted, a really hot irresistible mistake....but she's got some sort of an agenda here and i have this uneasy feeling it's not in his favor...please please update this soon, this story is so good! :) gaillee 01/09/2006 12:34 pm Chapter Eleven THAT was just hot! This story is so well written. Love the cliff hanger end to this chapter. Wow! Fabulous chapter, nice hot spuffy action followed by the wonderfully intriguing phone call at the end! Can't wait to see what that was all about... and to see Buffy's post-coital reaction and her treatment of Spike. ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/07/2006 01:26 pm Chapter Eleven Awesome chapter!! This was a good one. Those two are playing a dangerous game with each other. I wonder who will win. megs 01/07/2006 11:40 am Chapter Eleven wow-ie!
I'm just now catching up(I had to ask Daisy tha name of this story!) on all the fics I was reading befor school started getting heavy.
Fantastic story!!! Is Buffy/Bethmara some type of vengence demon now?!?!?
and was that phone call telling Giles that a slayer died?
Keep it up!!!! can't wait for more!!!
on another note...ch 7 - 2nd paragraph...is 'Miss Lucy' supposed to be Miss Edith? or did I miss something along the way...?
Thank you Megs :) And I'm afraid I'm not letting anyone know the plot till the characters are ready to reveal it - I know I'm bad! And no, it was supposed to be Miss Lucy - if you recall, Dru has lots and lots of dolls, all of whom speak to her, but she doesn't always like what they say ;) Mmmmm yummy smut *purrs* Esther 01/07/2006 09:07 am Chapter Eleven Boy howdy, that was....yummy!!! Spike in all his sexy, primalness....Buffy being all aggresso-girl.....hot damn!!!! And now that little cliffy in the end...I can't wait for more!!! Lou 01/07/2006 03:58 am Chapter Eleven Bethmara's a right little raver, isn't she? sue 01/07/2006 03:19 am Chapter Eleven OMG! Off to have soothing shower - that was so bloody hot! Has the wench no shame (I'm hoping not 'cos it don't 'alf make for good reading!). The chappie? OK *grins my head off* Loving it and so looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. neo_trinityknot 01/07/2006 03:14 am Chapter Eleven Great story, cant wait to read more of it! Pin 01/07/2006 02:22 am Chapter Eleven Another great chapter. I really like this story and look forward to finding out how things got to be where they are. Thanks! Nikkole 01/07/2006 12:04 am Chapter Eleven Now that was hot! You and your evil cliffhangers, I swear, get a person all worked up to get some information, and then leave us hanging again! Bad bad bad! And yet still so good!LOL! Keep it up! how, that was a hot chapter. wonder what the phone call was about though...looking forward to the next chapter! Very good chp and I can't wait to see what happens next! welll....this could be very bad...or very good... Nikkole 01/06/2006 11:54 pm Chapter Ten Interesting! I can't wait to go on to the next chapter and see just how bad they want to scratch those itches they have!!LOL! Just got caught up with Chapters 9 and 10. Awesome updates! Can't wait to read more.
-Lisa ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/29/2005 01:23 am Chapter Ten Oooo ... looks like the prelude to another yummy chapter for Ch. 11. {grins} I do enjoy this one. I keep wondering what will happen next, and why Buffy has changed or what she's changed exactly into. I'm not quite sure of that. Maybe I'm just dense though. {Smiles} I enjoy the mystery. Esther 12/28/2005 04:02 pm Chapter Ten Oh my...yum!! That was delish and I hope there's more soon. The sparks between these two are too hot, want more....please? oooh! I'm all excited for what's coming next! All caught up! Loved the chaps. You gave us some nice interesting little disclosures to contemplate. The Spike/Bethmara banter is fabulous and the ust is just delicious! Very much looking forward to the next chap *wink*. More spuffy smut??? *bounces hopefully* sue 12/28/2005 06:15 am Chapter Ten I have missed this so much! Great update. They are both hiding so much from the other and I keep wondering about Buffy's demon side. Looing forward to more. Thank you, oh boy...buffy is seriously scary now... ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/22/2005 09:19 am Chapter Nine She's really made him mad now. Can't wait to see what happens next. wow, great chappie, love the interaction with these two! Sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for next Tuesday! Love it! Have caught up with this one and damn this is good stuff CM. Keep those updates coming! jane 12/21/2005 06:27 am Chapter Nine Wow I just love it. LMAO, damn Beth neds a good Spanking, then a good shagging :P great chappie :P Damn, I have to wait another week? *sighs* Great chapter! Hopefully Buffy isn't completely lost... Nikkole 12/21/2005 01:17 am Chapter Nine Evil update! Leave us haning like that! Its ok, we forgive you. Thsi was a good chapter, I'm glad that we are getting some insight on what they are both feeling inside. Can't wait for the next chapter. sue 12/20/2005 08:55 pm Chapter Nine You are so bad! Just enough to tease and then you leave us hanging! Love the oodles of attitude our twosome have going for them. And Bu - oops, Beth realising she has a thing for certain vampires is just further evidence of the difference in your version of the person she's become. Yummy. Looking forward to more when it comes. Thanks ever so. nice... the tension is building....want another buffy/spike confrontation :) the plot thickens... *runs off to the next chap* Lou 12/18/2005 11:37 pm Chapter Eight Great to see this updated - a very original Buffy and what a cool Dru! Nikkole 12/15/2005 04:18 am Chapter Eight HMMMMMM.....Twists and turns, twists and turns, where will it all lead to??? I really like this story! I can't wait to find out just what kind of demon Buffy really has become! Thank you - I'm glad you're finding it interesting. I promise all will eventually be revealed... sue 12/14/2005 04:23 pm Chapter Eight Brills update. Love the way you're moving the plot along and longing to see what happens next. Thanks. Thank you, Sue :) I'm trying for the strip teas approach to plot development, as well as putting in smut where I can ;) Just got caught up on this story, since I somehow managed to miss the last chapter. Wonderful update, dear. I'm interested to see exactly where you are taking this one.
-Lisa Lisa - thank you for your kind comments. It's gonna be a long road, not just plot wise but personally, but I *am* planning to update weekly now, and writing ahead when I get the chance. YES! *jumps up adn down* I absolutely love this fic! Am so glad you are working on it again. Thank you! I'm glad to see my distraction hasn't dimmed someone's enthusiasm, and it's motivating me to write yet more (when I get some free time....) Nooooo, not Dru *faints* Run Spike Run Oh come on, she's a softie really... Oh, wait, she's not *cackles evilly* Oh, I love the update! It's good to see Spike getting Giles involved. I loved Spike's moment of revelation... *pets poor Spike!* Hmmm... Dru could make things very interesting... can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you C, it's good to know people still care about this poor, half-forgotten ficcie of mine. I'm not sure, but after ten, chapters may get a tad longer simply to move the plot along. ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/14/2005 08:15 am Chapter Eight Glad to see an update of this one. Look forward to more. Yeah, sorry it's been a while - I oversubscribed to some LJ communities and was busy trying to meet deadlines there! Never again, say I... LOL, damn good chappie, I love the plot line, it sucks you in and leaves you on the edge of your seat. Thank you Wulfie! I promise to try and live up to that expectation... :) wow...is she a vengeance demon? Henke 10/23/2005 05:39 am Chapter Seven Keep it up Oh shit, where was I when you posted this chappie, grrrrrrrr and now you have seven and eight at the beta?? Oh yeah I like you :P ComedyofErrors 10/13/2005 11:00 pm Chapter Seven Spicy. Cna't wait for more. Esther 10/12/2005 12:52 pm Chapter Seven Hot damn, that was a great update!! Wow, there's tons more to learn about Buffy....and man, love how dark she is. Hehe...also love how much she wants Spike...can't wait for his convo w/Giles!!! I loved the update! This story just gets more and more interesting with each chap. The conversation with Giles certainly will be interesting... I wonder if Giles can manage to push aside his vampire-issues long enough to hear Spike out? Had to catch up on a few chapters, but I'm still loving this fic. Can't wait for the explanation of what's going on with Buffy - lost her soul? On purpose? What's with the ring? Is it an amulet like the vengeance demons wear? Spike is sooo hot in this fic. Can I lick lime juice off his chest ? Or some other body part? Eeep, good update. Can't wait for more. And oh noes, Dru! wow, this buffy seems dangerous...but intriguing :) ooooh... nice :P Another fab Chapter! megs 10/05/2005 05:36 am Chapter Six I like this take on the story!
Please write more :> All caught up! *yay* I really like this fic... looking forward to more. Oh, CM, you are so BAD! Love the whole idea, but then you know that. Looking forward to more more more! Nice story. Good update. Looking forward to more. I wonder what it will take to get through to Buffy. i wonder what it is that she's lost exactly? and spike's in for trouble, i think... :( Tasha 09/24/2005 10:27 am Chapter Five Tasha~*~ 09/20/2005 @ 10:36 pm
Hmmm ... read ch. 4 and 5 today to catch up. Interesting developments. I wonder just what Buffy is and what Spike is going to do about it. Very interesting. Looks like an original take on things too. Look forward to the next update.
Esther 09/24/2005 10:26 am Chapter Five Esther 09/16/2005 @ 01:13 am
Hot damn, ch. 5 was great! The Spike scene was HOT...goodness, I drown in a puddle of drool...and seeing him battle his 'inner demons' (no pun intended) was great. Classic Spike/William.
The Buffy scenes were very interesting. Like that you've given us a clue as to her environment and a sneek peak to her attraction for Spike. Can't wait for more!!!
ComedyofErrors 09/24/2005 10:26 am Chapter Five ComedyofErrors 09/15/2005 @ 02:58 pm
Uh-oh. Something to lose, extra money, hmm...this sounds like trouble.
Like Spike's conversation with himself.
OracleHolly 09/24/2005 10:25 am Chapter Five Oracleholly 09/15/2005 @ 02:52 am
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You've really got my curiosity peaked about the 'state' of Buffy. What has she become? Who's her boss?
Yummy Spike masterbating. Always a plus.
hmmm....wonder if whistler's right....and wonder how buffy's gonna take to him back in her bar... Hmmm... intriguing idea! Can't wait to see what is going on.
LOL... Poor Spike I volunteer to kiss all injured body parts better for him. It's a sacrifice I know... one that I will gladly undertake! ElizabethAnneSummers 09/24/2005 10:24 am Chapter Four ElizabethAnneSummers 09/15/2005 @ 02:19 am
Oh noes, she didn't lose her soul did she? Well... who needs a soul... bleh... lol
spike_spetslayer 09/24/2005 10:23 am Chapter Four spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 11:04 pm
CM, you TEASE! come on! SpikeWank was good, but we need more, and wtf is going on with Buffy? More more more!!!
karyn 09/24/2005 10:22 am Chapter Four Karyn 09/14/2005 @ 10:09 pm
damn muse...you completely stumped me that time..had no clue until you mentioned the necklace...lol very good chapter
Oracleholly 09/24/2005 10:21 am Chapter Four Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:08 pm
*up to ch 4*
OOOOO what an interesting premise. I've read other Post-Becoming stories where Spike finds Buffy, but different situations. This promises an interesting twist to this set-up.
margaret 09/24/2005 10:20 am Chapter Four margaret 09/13/2005 @ 01:16 pm
great twist on the story can't wait to see what spike does next
tadams 09/24/2005 10:20 am Chapter Four tadams 09/12/2005 @ 10:44 pm
great storyline I like where you are taking this
Celestia 09/24/2005 10:19 am Chapter Four Celestia 09/12/2005 @ 12:46 pm
Really interesting like story... but could you explain more about your prophecies and everything. I did like to know what REALLY happened to buffy because she rock! More soon please!
Nikkole 09/24/2005 10:18 am Chapter Four Nikkole 09/12/2005 @ 11:33 am
Interesting....VERY! Buffy some sort of elevated demon? HMMM, the possabilities are endless there! Good job! Keep those updates coming!
ComedyofErrors 09/24/2005 10:16 am Chapter Four ComedyofErrors 09/12/2005 @ 10:05 am
Whoops, always a prophecy. Interesting idea that Buffy would have gotten "turned", will wath to see where you go with it.
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/24/2005 10:16 am Chapter Four ElizabethAnneSummers 09/12/2005 @ 01:21 am
OoooOOOOoo, interesting twist there. More please.
Esther 09/24/2005 10:15 am Chapter Four Esther 09/12/2005 @ 12:42 am
Color me shocked cause I totally didn't expect for Buffy to be non-human...great twist!! Not a vamp; don't know what she is; elevated: damn, this is turning out to be freaking awesome!! Can't wait for another chapter!!! Soon....please?
oh she's so not gonna let him go there...not yet anyway :) Now that was just YUM!!! *fans self* Opal 09/24/2005 10:14 am Chapter Three Opal 09/11/2005 @ 11:49 pm
Love the update! Can't wait to see where this one goes!
Stephanie 09/24/2005 10:14 am Chapter Three Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:46 am
Hmmm... Nice body shot scene I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I am intrigued and need more. More. and I really want to know what kind of punishment Buffy would delve out to the big bad
spike_spetslayer 09/24/2005 10:12 am Chapter Three spike_spetslayer 09/10/2005 @ 05:51 pm
Gosh, CM, this just keeps getting better and better--i feel the need for some tequila right now! LOL Keep going, please!
Isabella 09/24/2005 10:11 am Chapter Three Isabella 09/10/2005 @ 01:04 pm
Ok, the first chapter teased me. The 2nd chapter left me going, there's got to be more. I read thru it so fast I had to re-read to make sure I missed nothing. Please keep up on this story I've really enjoyed Buffy's walk on the dark side.
I'm also enjoying your story Cara Mia. will you be updating both? I really hope so.
LOL
Isabella
opal 09/24/2005 10:10 am Chapter Three opal 09/10/2005 @ 12:42 pm
need a carton of ciggies! now!
Slaymesoftly 09/24/2005 10:09 am Chapter Three Slaymesoftly 09/10/2005 @ 11:50 am
Holy shit! Drooling now - and I don't even LIKE tequila! lol This is wonderful - and prudish Buffy is still in there? So this is just her pretending to be somebody else so she can forget her pain? Cannot wait to see where you go with this. Wherever it is, go there quickly, please! *begs humbly*
Tasha 09/24/2005 10:08 am Chapter Three ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/10/2005 @ 03:39 am
Wow, that was a hot description of a body shot party. Awesome!!!! Look forward to the next update.
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/24/2005 10:08 am Chapter Three ElizabethAnneSummers 09/10/2005 @ 01:56 am
Oooooo *fans herself*
Esther 09/24/2005 10:07 am Chapter Three Esther 09/10/2005 @ 01:12 am
Wow, just the thought of taking body shots off of Spike....yum!! Loving the new, more mature/darker Buffy (including her appearance) and Spike's obvious attraction to it. Those two are gonna combust!! Great job!
aten 09/24/2005 10:06 am Chapter Three aten 09/09/2005 @ 07:46 am
I like this. Very interesting twist with Buffy -moe like Faith.
lol...wonder how she's gonna react to this... Ooh, very interesting!!! *runs off to read more!* ComedyofErrors 09/24/2005 10:03 am Chapter Two ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 07:48 pm
I like Spike's monologue a lot, and I can't wait to see this drinking contest!
romero 09/24/2005 10:02 am Chapter Two romero 09/08/2005 @ 06:16 pm
It's good to see Buffy with a rowdy attitude. Can't wait to read more.
Nikkole 09/24/2005 10:02 am Chapter Two Nikkole 09/08/2005 @ 02:48 pm
Nice twist of events you have here! I can't wait for the update!
Mali 09/24/2005 10:01 am Chapter Two Mali 09/08/2005 @ 08:45 am
Ooh. I'm guessing that's Buffy. Brilliant. This is gonna be good.
Esther 09/24/2005 10:00 am Chapter Two Esther 09/08/2005 @ 01:22 am
Hot damn, I love your totally different take on this....Buffy in a bar guzzling it up w/others....wow...can't wait to see her reaction when she sees Spike. FIREWORKS!! Great job!!
Daisy 09/24/2005 09:59 am Chapter Two daisy 09/08/2005 @ 01:15 am
can't wait to see how buffy reacts to spike being there. i hope she doesn't try to stake him. i can't wait to see what you do with this next, so PLEASE update soon.
DK 09/24/2005 09:58 am Chapter Two DK 09/07/2005 @ 10:40 pm
Good story, hope to read more updates.
jodi 09/24/2005 09:57 am Chapter Two jodi 09/07/2005 @ 10:35 pm
yummy. more please.
msberry 09/24/2005 09:55 am Chapter Two msberry 09/07/2005 @ 10:25 pm
Liked it very much!
Tasha 09/24/2005 09:54 am Chapter Two ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/07/2005 @ 09:19 pm
Good update. Look forward to CH. 3
slaymesoftly 09/24/2005 09:53 am Chapter Two slaymesoftly 09/07/2005 @ 09:13 pm
great new chapter. And now he's found her and the fun begins!
Chanel 5 09/24/2005 09:51 am Chapter Two chanel 5 09/07/2005 @ 08:17 pm
I like it. keep going.
oh this should be interesting...what exactly is he planning on doing when he finds her, now? :) catching up on this fic so i'm starting from the first chap. I forgot how good it is!! great update CM, can't wait to see what Dru wants...teh hee! Poor impatient spike! lol, wants his results and he wants them now, ummmmm, determined spike gets me hot...oh hell any spike gets me hot....rofl I'm procrastinating as the muse is not talking to me so I decided now was a good time to start reading something new. I am so glad I did! I really enjoyed this first chapter and am off now to read some more! Nikkole 09/24/2005 09:48 am Chapter One Nikkole 09/07/2005 @ 01:21 pm
HMMM. Nice beginning. Let's see where this goes, it has a lot of paotential! Good work!
slinkypsychokit 09/24/2005 09:47 am Chapter One slinkypsychokit 09/07/2005 @ 12:30 pm
Oh, I like this, I do. Is there more? Can we have more, please? Such a wonderful start you've made. Very intriguing. I would very much like to see where you take this.
Tasha 09/24/2005 09:46 am Chapter One ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/06/2005 @ 11:50 pm
Nice start. I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
Slaymesoftly 09/24/2005 09:44 am Chapter One Slaymesoftly 09/06/2005 @ 08:43 pm
Oh! Love this beginning! Wonderful idea - can't wait to see how you work it.
Megan 09/24/2005 09:43 am Chapter One Megan 09/06/2005 @ 07:53 pm
Oops, confused the name, but I knew which fic I was talking about! More more...LOL. Haven't even read karyn's yet. Stupid pregnant brain!
Megan 09/24/2005 09:42 am Chapter One Megan 09/06/2005 @ 07:52 pm
Karyn, this is a fantastic effort. Was just telling Stacy that I found you at aff.net and she told me all about you ;) I hear you have more? Please please don't make us pant for more. The way you've had Spike find out through Joyce is so original and I loved the build up with the telling of his troubles and traumas with Dru--very believable. Excellent job and I wait eagerly for more.
ComedyofErrors 09/24/2005 09:41 am Chapter One ComedyofErrors 09/06/2005 @ 06:51 pm
hmm...has possibility. Like to see more.
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/24/2005 09:40 am Chapter One ElizabethAnneSummers 09/06/2005 @ 03:58 pm
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I'm intrigued...
Rae 09/24/2005 09:40 am Chapter One Rae 09/06/2005 @ 02:26 pm
Very much like the start. I can't wait to see where you are taking this and hope you update soon.
mary 09/24/2005 09:39 am Chapter One mary 09/06/2005 @ 01:49 pm
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Great start. Cant wait to see where you are going.
Wendy Jane 09/24/2005 09:38 am Chapter One WendyJane 09/06/2005 @ 01:36 pm
Ooh- I like this! Great start- looks like the perfect layout for a great new fic!!
Can't wait to see more of this!!
Daisy 09/24/2005 09:36 am Chapter One daisy 09/06/2005 @ 01:26 pm
great start cant wait for more. whats buffy gonna be like when spike finds her.. more soon please
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