This is an interesting fic. I like how you portrait the people true to character, and hope you will update soon:)

Hey that story's great! I loved reading it. Well, what's written of it so far, anyway... The way you write Spike is awesome and your plot seems to be evolving rather well too. I like Dawn and I like Buffy and I like pretty much everything in here, which is pretty rare, I might add. I'll be keeping an eye on this fic then, see when you add a new chapter! Good job,

- YB

HOLY CRAP! I don't like the jars with vampire hearts of every lineage in them... and what does the Immortal *cough*asswipe*cough* have planned for Buffy ... you know I don't care ... Go DAWN, Go SPIKE!!!!

GO SPIKE! RUN! Hurry to find Buffy before it is too late. Damn Immortal. Hope Spike gets there in time. Look forward to more.

Grrrh I'm on tenterhooks waiting for the big revelation. Love it udate soon.

I really hope that they all can figure this out. Great update. always love Spike and can I just say GO DAWN..

Very interesting story, what is the Imortal wanker up to? Gonna have fun reading about it in the coming chapters.

excellent, would say more but barely awake :D

Go Dawn for getting to Andrew like that. {chuckles} I'm heading to Chapter 6 now.

Such a tangled web. Delicious!

OMG! That first pressing can be a real bitch! Hoping for a bit of rescue coming up. Loved the chappie and eager for more. Thanks.

Is the Immortal going to show Buffy where he has Spike imprisoned and what is being done to him? Is Dawn capable of calling Buffy's cell phone and getting Andrew to talk to her? How badly are you going to hurt Spike before Buffy wises up?

CM, love your Dawnie--go slayer sister...and that sniveling weasel Andrew...just should be shot...great story so far!

Kill the Immortal soon :(

oOo! I can't wait to see what The Imortal is up to! And what happens to convince Buffy that Spike is real. Update soon please!

Great to have an update. Methinks that Spike may be the victim of a bout of Immortal skullduggery soon. Will Buffy realise that it's really him? I need to know! More please, soon. Thanks ever so.

Excellent chapter 3 and 4. Glad to see this one still here and reposted. At least Buffy wasn't rejecting Spike. She was rejecting what she thought was some thing trying to be Spike. I hope that Dawn can get Buffy to understand that Spike is really alive. Giles should know that Spike is alive because of Andrew. I hope that it all gets worked out. i don't like the Immortal, and I hope he dusts in the wind.

I'm liking this story.Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more!

~*~Tasha~*~ 09/20/2005 @ 10:28 pm Loved that last line of Chapter 2. Look forward to more of this one. I wonder what the Immortal is up to. Hope he doesn't try to steal Spike.

lovesbitca37 09/18/2005 @ 11:40 am I love it! The last line of ch2 is just perfect :) I can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to Spike and how they find out what the Immortal is up to! Please update!

Schehrezade 09/17/2005 @ 05:43 pm Whoa how did I miss this! You're doing a response to my first ever challenge I posted! Awesome and I am enjoying it so much -- write more cos that Immortal is soooo needing sorting! And that final line CLASSIC! Keep writing

Gina 09/15/2005 @ 06:00 pm Ooh, the Immortal's got a dirty little secret! That last line was all Spike! Update soon!

Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm Great last line to Chap 2! lol I see the Immortal's being a bad boy; Spike's going to have to do something about that.

Stephanie 09/13/2005 @ 03:23 pm LOL - first love the complaint about the genes she ended up with - that was so cute and so dawn. Oh now that last line is so freakin funny. LOL... just pleased to see you ROFL! Fab - good intrique with the Immortal. Need more!

Shadowsbabe 09/12/2005 @ 08:30 pm "LOL!!!"...That line should go down in fanfiction history. Too bad Buffy's gonna to kick some major butt in the next chapter. If I was Dawn, I don't think I'd stick around to watch.

vladt 09/12/2005 @ 08:18 pm great start. thanks. love the chapter 2 ending.

spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:12 pm CM--you just keep making it better and better. Love that line--"not a stake in my pocket" LOLTIP! that is classic! you rock, Girl! now go write some more!

ComedyofErrors 09/12/2005 @ 10:10 am And what will Buffy say... Interesting conversation the immortal was having.

vicki 09/12/2005 @ 09:26 am great cliffhanger ending. now please give us more.

Mali 09/12/2005 @ 04:55 am O.o Has Buffy realised it's Spike yet? And I have a feeling that he doesn't know how pissed off she's gonna be. *rubs hands together in classic evil genius move*

Esther 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm Yipee, he's finally seen her and grabbed her, but don't end it there....need more...please? Oh, the Immortal is up to something....and I hope my...um....Spike isn't caught up in it....great job, and I really can't wait for ch. 3!!!

Opal 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm It's not a stake....lol...

Uh, oh. The Immortal is up to something! Can't wait for next chapter!

I love Dawn taking charge like this. Poor Spike picked the wrong place to be drunk in. 'The first pressing' has an ominous ring to it. Great chapter.

Oh yay! The site's back up and I can read these two marvelous new chapters. Wonderful confrontation between Buffy and Spike. Nothing is easy between them, definitely. Let's hope Andrew shows up shortly to straighten things out. Very interested in the plot the immortal is trying to inact. Evil manipulative fiend.

Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:39 am Great story need more... more Seriously, goo dstart... can't wait to see what happens next... I like SPike finding Dawn. It is logical and makes me wonder why he never bothered before. Now ... more!

Shadowsbabe 09/10/2005 @ 12:05 am Okay, I'm hooked. I love this. So glad you remembered to fix the Spike/Dawn relationship. It was too important to both of the charcters. I'm still mad they never had time to show this kind of scene before the end of season 7. Can't forgive those darn Potentials for stealing screen time from important relationship moments like this. Please be a fast updater. Please!!!!!!!!!

Tamara 09/09/2005 @ 07:44 am I can't wait to see his reaction to telling Buffy . Y'now I reslly have kink about Spike hardening his heart towards Buffy post TGIQ with her desperately persuing him. The hypocrisy of her being with the Immortal after all her going on about soulessness and normal really bothered me especially since thye left it so late in the verse.

redwulf50 09/08/2005 @ 09:49 pm Like Patti said us old folks need quick updates :P great fic so far :P

ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 07:54 pm Great Dawn reactions: hug then slap. I wonder what Buffy will do...

Gina 09/08/2005 @ 07:30 am Awww. I love Spike/Dwan friendship! Hurry and make Buffy dump that poncey slime bucket!

Esther 09/08/2005 @ 01:53 am Oh man, great beginning!! I'm hooked already! More...soon....please?

Slaymesoftly 09/07/2005 @ 09:24 pm Great start! More soon I hope? Not nagging, just hoping. I'm old, you know, and I forget stuff if it's too long between chapters....lol

~*~Tasha~*~ 09/07/2005 @ 09:12 pm Nice start.

spike_spetslayer 09/07/2005 @ 03:01 pm Great start, CM--always wondered why Spike never looked Dawnie up when in Rome...keep going, sounds great