Love this story - hope you finish it someday

Love this story - hope you finish it someday

Hi, I totally love,this story. Please tell me your going to continue it ! It is awesome. Please finish it. Your an awesome writer. Cheers, khishane

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I love this story plz update soon

plz update!!! I love this story and I really want to know what will happen next! so update.

cant wait to see what happens next

I really want to see more please....

Travers offering help and getting off his high chair long enough to admit he needs help? :O ... Not exactly something I ever pictured him being like or doing. A change of heart like Travers' is hard to explain believably, but you did it well :)

Great chapter!

please put me out of my misery and update this soon, it is breath-taking and my excitement levels have reached peaks that I didn't know I had.

very good read, thank you. you are among the very few authors who can sell a repent travers.

Another excellent chapter. I'm so happy to see this story updated. Thanks!

Terrific chapter. Who'd have thought Travers could mellow? Surely Willow is lost to them after this.

Wow, a repentant Travers, now that's twist. Humbled by Buffy, I love it. You weren't knding about poor Tara, she's got more to go through. Now they have to deal with Giles' disappearance. Fantastic chapter, thanks.

Oh my---WHOA!! This was freaking fabulous!! Man, Willow just gets worse and worse...and now they've got Giles?!! Dude, he pissed me off, but to think of what they could do to him. *cries* Ooh, please---I beg you---more!!! Loved it!!

oh poor giles!! how sickening..i honestly feel sick at that..can willow even come back from this? and i'm still a bit suspicious of the council, even though it seems they genuinely want to help...

dun, dun, dun, damn you are a cliffie queen :P

Wow. A reformed Travers. This could be very interesting.

oh wow. I love this story and the whole travers turn around was really unexpected. oh no poor giles. lol great chapter.

Nice. And to the revelation of Tara's theory and explanation, I say "Duh!" Of course there's free will...

The Willow and Rack part was ewwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Piercings and touching and poor Giles? They really are demented. *shudder*

Loved Xander's realizations. Also neat to have Travers come around as a decent individual...certain isn't seen often!
Thanks for the reminder about Dawn being dispersed in them...I didn't remember that, since I haven't gone back and read the earlier chapters since you started updating again.

You have named the two demons found in the fireplace Dilbert and Matilda, but suddenly there is a Derek that, judging from the context, seems to be Dilbert to me. Very confusing...

An incident with a liner and an iceberg? Sound like the Titanic :P

Also, I like how you coupled off Wesley and Anya. I have never ever thought of them together like this, but you make it sound good, what's better - you make it sound natural.


Well done! :D

I love your Anya! She is just perfect and I'm glad that she gets the respect she deserves. You wicked Willow makes my skin crawl - which is good. Thanks!

Splendid, splendid chapters!! WOW!! Just got officially caught up---boy howdy I've missed this story!! Loved it and can't wait for more!!

excellent update, thank you.anya was wonderful which made for a great read. thanks, again

I miss Anya, she rocked.


Great chapter Schez, keep em comin'.

God I love Anya...

That woman cracks me up. I am so glad in fanfiction she can be not dead anymore... errr, if that sentence made any sense, yay me!

Dang, now I'm just itching for more chappies... and in another context, that would be so wrong... *LOL* But anyways; update soon, pretty please!!!!

Very dramatic - so nice for Wes and Anya too! Top story.

lol...i love anya...you have her dialogue down perfectly, a beautifully written chapter...and have i forgotten something from previous chapters, or am i not supposed to know who the poor thing is stuck in the box and hurting?? again, looking forward to your next update ;)

What an exciting and fun chapter! Knew Kristen's family had it in for old Rack. Feel really bad for poor Tara, She doesn't deserve it to go through all this because of Willow. Someone typed Dilbert's name as Derek. Who's cramped in a confined area? Thanks for the laugh at poor Spike's expense, I forgot that met a nutcraker up close and personal while in that harness! Yup! the kitties know. If mine are staring at something I always check closer because nothing gets past them. How sweet, their first kiss and what a one it was for her to curl a leg around him! Wow! Lilah deserves a Howler demon for sending spys. I'm so happy that you've updated this great fic. Hope it won't be to long before you can again. I just love it. Thanks for the excellent read.

Bloody excellent chappie, can we have another :D

Anya is hilarious...and I always love when she's given credit for her knowledge. And with Wes? An unusual pairing, but not hard to imagine.

I'm thinking Giles is not okay..

Poor Tara...she's really come up, though.

And it was a type of "key"...hope it's useful!

Sorry about the lateness of this :)

I love the extra excitement that you have brought in with Kirstin.

Great chapter :D

wonderful read, thank you, love. giles is an ass. kirsten? not sure what to think about her. the evil cliffie, not a clue. that is why it such a wonderful read. thanks, again.

This is still a WIP, I thought it was finish at ch.25. Rack probably stole magic from her family, killing them and she's after a way to get back at him. I want to know if that was planted by Travers or Rack? Throughly enjoying this fic. Very entertaining. Don't know how I missed that this was a WIP, anyway thanks for this wonerful story, thanks for the read.

Good job I reread the whole thing - I was on the wrong track! Excellent update with complete continuity. I guess there's some history with Rack and Kirsten - mmm have to give it more thought. Giles is spectacularly weird! Can't wait for more.

great chapter

*does the happy dance*

Look, Numfar! I'm dancing. . . . LOL An update. . . whoooooootttt

Now I need to go back and read (and review) all over again! Such a chore. . . . .

oh well that's a surprise...giles in on the plot...hopefully hes in it to help spike and buffy...great chapter, love... :)

hmmm is Kristen possessed by something? Perhaps something Rack did to her? Interesting plot twist, Schez. But WHAT are you doing to Giles?? He's gone insane!!!

oh yeah, and .... MORE

Delighted to see the new chapter and no, I haven't figured out Kristen. I'm re-reading the earlier sections to get refreshed.

HOLY EFFIN'.... Errr... I just won't finish that thought... *giggles*

Yay, you updated!!! I was beginning to despair that you wouldn't! And such a good update too! Lots of intrigue... and Giles getting all high-and-mighty again cracks me up... hope he gets his comeuppance. Anyways, please update again, soon!

I think Kristen has a dead relative stuck under her skin or just a enchanted one. And Giles , Really, let her make her own decisions wheter you agree with them or not. Just because they aren't the ones you would make doesn't mena that she's wrong and you are right.

good update. been a very long time.

Well, I'm just starting to remember what I'd read before, so.....

Kristin reminds me of Vampire Hunter D talking to his hand (it was possessed). :)

Giles is a dummy...

Guessing the piece of metal is some kind of key...

The kittens obviously see or sense something that the humans aren't...animals are good for that.

And yeah, Angel, you did forget the mission, but at least you're figuring it out on your own now.....took me a sec to figure out that Cordy took the fame and fortune offer in "Birthday" instead of keeping the visions. Shame...but I suppose it prevents Jasmine coming into play...Angel is at his best when he keeps his friends close and listens.

very good read, thank you. hope kristin states aroun, she is very entertaining.

Nice in for them. Connor's going to school and Angel's a seer. Guess Giles doesn't know that Willow is to be killed. Yup, guess there's a sequel somewhere. Thanks for this entertaining story.

great chapter

i'm quite worried about the council...adn willow's gonna be so far gone by the time they find her... *sigh*

I think I'll re-read this before enjoying the new chapter. Top story, Schez!

I really hope you continue this story! I love it!

Neeed an update waaaaaaa :(( lol

Question do you read Meredes Lackey?? Cause the way Rack uses Blood Magics sound like Falconsbane. :D

This story is everything I ever wanted out of fanfic. I hope you have at least 50 more chapters in the pipeline. I want lots more of this AU.

So how will I know when this updated because you know I will have to read it all now. It is a great story and heads up on the fang fetish awards.

I'm hooked, gripped, and hoping there'll be more soon? I'd hoped Giles would have grown out of his hidebound thinking, but obviously not *sigh*. Wesley and Anya, huh? *grins* So much to love about this fic, I'll only babble if I keep typing.

I'm so glad to see this story updated somwehere! I can't wait for the next part.

what a way to put a damper on the high reached after the flight. very good read, thank you.

Damn, I hate that they know that they're there already. Travers is having Willow killed? I don't understand why he finds it necessary for it to be done. They're must be a sequel to this since there's only two chapters left. Great chappie, thanks.

oh no...the council's trying to kill them...again...*sigh*...and poor xander..hope all's okay :)

I'm so glad that Xander is growing up. Don't know if I want him back with Anya or not. Love that Connor is feeling more at home and loved by his family. It may not be good but Angel now knows that Cordy's not coming back, at least anytime soon. Now to find Willow and bring her back home. Great work, wonderful chapter.

well i think they need to check out his chip :)

Thank you for getting the chip out. I feel safer for him with it out. Dark magicks change people and Willow wasn't a virgin anymore, so I'm not surprised that Rack would want to have her nor am I surprised that Willow is giving in to them and lost her inhibitions. Fabulous chapter, thanks.

excellent read, thanks. very glad the chip is gone and love that it was tara and fred who did it.

wow that last bit is pretty sick and disturbing...but then, willow's in a very bad place at the moment...glad spike got his chip out and made things right with angel...good chapter :)

Gosh, that was great! One of the funniest line's I've ever heard from Spike, was when he said "What's this, Bite Spike Night!" Don't feel sorry at all for Justine. She may have started out as a vampire hunter but when she hooked up with Holtz, she became the bad guy as well. Why did they through the shark overboard as well, Paddie could of sold the shark back at the dock. Good character, Paddie, nice homage to Dole. Great read, thanks.

excellent read, thank you. love the banter wes-groo, buufy-spike, tara-spike. lightens the tale an adds a balance to the read. thanks, again

poor spike's going through the wringer, isn't he? i feel so bad for them all...how painful for him, but hopefully talking it out will help :)

Wow, another amazing chapter!Nice that Wes and Anya talked things out, help her make some decisions. Yummm, Spike in latex! Love the rewrite. Good touch of exciement with the sharks, but why would the chip fire with the sharks? Naturally Angel's first response would be to take from his grandchilde, only blood better is slayer's blood. Great work on a fantastic chapter.

very good read, thank you. there never was much defference between angelus and angel. i know .... tortured ...blood lust....

it's probably okay...he's probably just in need of blood to live right now...wonder what's gonna happen next :)

A very entertaining chapter. I especially loved Spike's and Fred's humor when they gave Justine the truth powder but they have what they wanted. Of all the nicknames that everyone has Columba is one I don't like. It conjures up the image of an old TV detective named Columbo. That's just me though, love everything else about your fic. Thanks for the great read.

very good chapter. moving the plot along with enogh humor to last for many chapters. enjoyed lorne and tara. buffy, spike and fred were hilarious. thanks for the fun read.

oh i hope angel's okay you've made me actually care about him in this fic :P...not to mention poor dawnie...this is so riveting...

What! Angel? not Angelus? Then what happened? Guess I'd better start on the next chapter. Wonderful chappie, thanks.

very good read, thanks. all prepared for the wrong threat.

wow..this is getting more complicated by the moment...hope it all works out :)

Geez! Before long poor Groo will be introduced to strip clubs! They'll all get salaries, Yes! How in the hell are they going to fight Rack and Willow? This should be good, can't wait to see how you pull this off. Great chapter, thanks.

poor xander..but i think willow deliberately made his hatred for spike worse...this could get super uglier before its all over :)

Am I the only one who thinks it's a little strange for Buffy and Spike to have a sorta preoccupation with getting laid while Dawnie is..err, missing? Not trying to be rude cause the scenes were great, I just know if my kid was missing, sex would be the least of my worries lol.

How sad, know one ever said thank you to her! Wes and Anya would make a great couple. New York! He couldn't have takin' her to Vegas or LA. Great chapter, thanks.

good update. a little comfort and tlc for buffy before things get worse. thanks for the fine read.

wow....why new york i wonder? poor amy and her family, i feel so bad for them...too bad they need willow back to get dawn back...at this point i'd be ready to write her off... great chapter love :)

Thanks for the giggles here and there, it helped.Now they can't bring Dawn back without her. They could of gone anywhere. This is so very bad. Guess that means Buffy and Spike will have that romantic evening, he's been planning. Excellent read, thanks.

at least she still cares enough not to let tara die...but she's profoundly stupid otherwise...i think wes and anya should end up together....xander's a decent person at heart but he has a *lot* of issues...and he's never gonna catch up with anya, maturity wise....great chpater, love :)

the chemistry of the group is so good, do we really want to save willow? it is late. i'm sure it is the lateness of the hour, rather than the amount of scotch i have consumed,that cause me to dwell on trivial points. love the update, love the tale. thank you

Poor flaccid Spike, thinks Dawn is watching. Xander just won't give up on trying to blame Spike for anything. What an amazing gift from Dawn! Rack is a very good con artist isn't he. Bringing this fantastic chapter all together. Thanks.

wow...she just made a huge mistake..that is so messed up...spike's little problem was a bit amusing...glad that whistler cleared it up, though.... good chapter :)

"Oh my God! We are so never having sex again!" even with so much going on developing the plot, that line had me lmao. love whistler clearing that up for poor spike. fantastic update, fantastic tale, thank you.

Even thou this is a tremendously painful chapter, I just wanted to tell you how much I loved how you've presented it. The dialogue, the emotions, everything. Thank you.

oh no, spike...don't blame yourself for this...i feel so bad for them all..but i have this feeling that willow's faking even her guilt...and i dont think she just meant to fix dawn's arm....weird....oh well..on to the next chappie :)

excellent. covered a lot in this update. love the tale, thank you. willow still wants to fix everthing, rack is on his way back and dawn is scattered. fantastic read.

OMG! she turned her back into the Key! Crap! she's so out of control, how are they going to get her back! Poor Buffy and Spike. This is awesome, fantastic fic, thanks.

oh no....what did she do?? this willow is darker and scarier even than in the show...how can they stop her? on to more :)

amy has been a rat for a long time, otherwise she would know it was unnecessary to say "You're saying it wrong, it won't work!" great read thank you.

A lot of humor for the first of it but dealing with Janice's death is really hard for them all. Wes and Bit? She's a little young too young but I can see her point, he is a hottie now. Wonder what she's going to think about Groo. Well that's all for me this morning. I've so enjoyed this wonderful story with angst free Conner. Terrific fic, thanks.

wow...that's so terribly sad...poor janice, poor dawnie...you brought me to tears, love :(

wonderful read, thank you. love the new additions to the scoobies.

Super-fantastic! This is one of the most satisfying fics I've read in terms of giving the characters what they should have gotten. Love it love it love it! The idea of Wes and Groo in Sunnydale is genius.

Conner? Nice way to end a claim. At least your Angel is helping his "family". With allthis finished I thought they'd be on their way but guess with Conner here everyone's staying. Very interested to see how you're going to handle all this. One more chapter then i'm going to bed, wonderful chapter, thanks.

i wonder who it was? willow maybe? that was heart-rending, i actually felt so bad for angel...though it had to be done...on to more, pet :)

Sorry Shadow's b-day is next week, today's is Spikeskat.

Groo going to SunnyD as well! I do feel sorry for him but it's for the best. Wow testosterone comes to town! Two more handsome foreigners to make SunnyD they're home, oh how nice! So Angel claimed Buffy when he was poisoned? and he never told her, what an arrogant ass. Oooo that was fun watching Spike beat him down. That was funny Spike's thinking about Angel's weight gain and wondering if he had piles. Wonderful story. Going to wish Shadow a Happy Birthday. Thanks.

i wasn't watching "angel" at this time...but was cordy really that bad, or is there something majorly up with her in this fic? she's really being evil...i hope that they can get angel to go along with the ritual..great chapter, pet :)

no need for an explantion, cordy and angel were being cordy and angel. very good read, thanks

So happy that Buffy trully is over Angel and she knows it. With Wesley coming to SunnyD and Anh and Xander relationship more than a little shaky, Wes and Anya? Maybe? So great that Wes is feeling better about himself but I'm worried about Lilah and what W&H is capable of doing. Loved the idea of a girls night out, they could all use it. Wonderful moment when after making love Buffy cried, finally realizing that this is the way that a relationship should feel like. Marvelous chappie Schez. Thanks.

wow...that was so sweet...but..willow's tweaking again...so not a good thing... :( great chapter, love :)

excellent read, thank you. red going to fix everything. the only things broken are her and xander and the should be tossed not repaired. i should have added angel to that last comment.

That was so sweet having Tara encourging Anya. She was right about everything but one, in my opinion, and that's Xander. I think he will always be in love with Buffy, some part of him anyway, till the day he dies. This is your first fic? yes? I wouldn't have thought so, because it' so fantastic, guess you were brilliant from the beginning. Many times it's been inferred but that bit with Spike licking him and being turned on was fantastic. Boy, is Xander carrying around alot of baggage. Know wonder he's so screwed up. Spike hasn't gotten a fiddler's chance in hell to win Xander over. Too many strikes against him, 1)he's a vampire 2)Angel 3)He loves Buffy 4)Buffy loves him 5)saw Xander during a moment of weakness 6)saved his life and the last straw he turned him on, which apparently he's thought about more than once. Wes, Spike and Buffy do work well as a team don't they. Just love it, thanks for your wonderful words.

lol...no, wes wont be bought that easy... :) great chapter, pet, very much enjoyed it :)

love the tale. i know a have read part of this, but this is a great excuse reread a wonderful tale. only a minor grumbling over tara wasting time and effort on xander. thanks for the fine read.

This is such a good AU story. I hope you will continue it and give us more soon.

You definetely have to continue, this is a great story and it would be a shame if you didn't write more soon.

awww...poor wes... :( i'm glad they went to help him...but willow still doesn't have a clue how muchdanger she's in, stupid girl...*sigh* great chapter, love :)

good read read, very good glinda. thanks for the fine read.

Yes! Wes in SunnyD. To bad Tara's gay, I'd love to see them together. Both made to feel less about themselves by the people around them, till Buffy and Spike. Oh boy, what kind of trouble is Willow getting into? Rarely is it for the good. Great chapter, thanks.

love a powerful tara, and an annoyed whelp. very good read, thanks

wow...so they're gonna be facing something a lot worse than rack, then, eh? great chapter, pet :)

Love it when Spike rattles Xander's chain. Anya smelled them? that's weird. She's still human right? Dawn's so protective of the kittens, it's so sweet. Tara does have really strong powers and a good thing too. How sweet that they got to sleep together, tight in each others arms. I thought that Rack was a warlock, guess he isn't if he can lose his physical body and disappear. Fantastic story, thanks for the read.

fine read, thank you. hilarious that xander wants to deny what he sees and hears, and then wants to hear it tomorrow.

oh no...i hope he doesnt hurt amy, she's actually trying to do the right thing this time around...love that buffy's being honest with everybody about spike :)

So this Rack is pro-active Rack. Not a good thing by the looks of it. That Xander stay in Egypt as long as he wants as long as Buffy's happy, which makes Spike happy as well. I've always felt that there was more to Tara then she let on, or was aware of. Yup, Anya going to have a fit. Very satisfying chapter! Buffy told Spike she loved him! Thanks for the read.

very good read, thank you. tara always should have been friend and ally. she and oz were the only selfless members of the egocentric scoobies.

man...willow's in trouble but at least this time dawn's not with her...another great chapter, love :)

Willow's very scary and poor Amy she wants out and can't find a way to do it alone. I just love Tara, since this is going so much better then the original maybe they can move her in and Willow out! So glad that Tara's accepting of their relationship. She's a true friend. Just a wonderful fic, thanks.

great beginning, thank you

this chapter was excellent, a wonderful beginning....i'm scared for willow, but so happy that buffy and spike are getting off on a better foot :)

What a wonderful rewrite of S6. This is going to be good. Spike and Buffy together as we all wanted them to be, in a mutual relationship. It doesn't look all that great for Willow though does it. It's been a while since I've read anything of your's, I really looking forward to it. Great beginning, great read, thanks.

One of my favorite season 6 stories!!!!!