Through Time to Me by Lilachigh

04/10/2013 11:28 am
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Great Story

Thanks. :-)
06/01/2010 06:18 am
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05/10/2009 11:05 am
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Very Neatly Done - wonderful combination of a the time travel and fantastic meeting and the individual sorrows of both - plus the very sad tale of Maria being chosen at such a young age.

Deb
02/04/2009 10:59 am
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A lovely jaunt.  You did a great job of straddling the irritation and solace that Buffy and Spike experience in their relationship.  So very unique to put them back into tudor england with Shakespeare.  Thanks for your story.
 Thank you so much for taking the time and trouble to comment on this story, which is a particular favourite of mine!   Always nice to hear what people think about older work.  You peer back at it, tempted to change this and that, then decide that perhaps it is better left just as it is because that was what you were writing then!

Glad you enjoyed it.  I could just see WS as a Watcher!

Jessei-55
01/29/2007 05:07 am
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That was great I loved it..

cassi can see
01/22/2007 07:17 am
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good story

bob
10/27/2006 08:04 am
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I just loved this story! Very cute. I hope it continues and buffy stops being a wench.
Thank you.

astrodex
10/23/2006 03:53 pm
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So great! Will was a cute twist.
Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it.

10/19/2006 06:20 pm
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wonderful! Sigh I wish I knew what happaned to maria lol - I am nosy. *Sigh* that would have been kinda cool to just stay in the past and no time would have moved in the future. I wonder what would have happened when they caught up to current time.
thanks for reviewing each chap. So glad you enjoyed my Tudor time travel romp! Pleased, too, that you got the Darla/Liam ancestor link. Lots of people didn’t! I was going to edit it to make it clearer, but thought it would spoil things. What do you think?
Like the idea of time standing still until you reach present time. Hmm, runs away to think....

vladt
10/13/2006 05:30 am
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fun read, thank you. enjoyed the tease at the end.

10/12/2006 06:16 am
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oh what a perfectly delicious ending! love it! would love to see a sequel to this, and you do realize you've left it wide open for one?
Thank you so much. Yes, going away to have a think! But must finish some wips first! Hits head on desk.

Deb
10/12/2006 04:03 am
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Very inventive and fun to read. Good job!
thank you so much.

10/12/2006 02:42 am
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oooOOOooo
I do hope that’s not a scream of dislike! Crosses fingers.

Irina
10/11/2006 05:13 pm
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Fantastic story! I loved Spike and Buffy's adventure, and the ending of the story was wonderful.
I really appreciate your comments.

10/11/2006 03:49 pm
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I love how Spike always seems to understand what’s going on with Buffy and that she let him comfort her. I love the open ending and the possibility of more adventures. Thanks so much for such a fun read.
Thank you so much.

idk5743228
10/11/2006 03:06 pm
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ooh! possibly a sequel? as always a great story. A winner from beginning to end. As I've said before, I love Buffy and Spike's interaction. Makes for great story telling. Can't wait for next story
Thank you for reviewing. yes, there will be another story! Not sure when hopefully sometime fairly soon! Wracks brain!

Lou
10/11/2006 01:10 pm
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I love the open ending - at least she's isn't blowing him off completely.

BecomingChosenGirl13
07/14/2008 03:49 am
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Oh, Lilac.. I love shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet are one of my favorite books!. Very very Cool.

BecomingChosenGirl13
07/14/2008 03:43 am
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Oh, Lilac.. I love shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet are one of my favorite books!. Very very Cool.
 So pleased you enjoyed it.

Lex
04/09/2008 05:40 pm
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If I remember my intro to Shakespeare correctly, I think The Taming of the Shrew is sometimes referred to as Love's Labours Won.

Lex
04/09/2008 05:38 pm
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If I remember my intro to Shakespeare correctly, I think The Taming of the Shrew is sometimes referred to as Love's Labours Won.

10/19/2006 06:17 pm
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oh lovely story - nice twists with the queen and Darla and |Liams ancestor

10/13/2006 01:32 am
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Aha, so that was her real name which she didn't want us know! Kinda pretty actually.

vladt
10/11/2006 04:59 am
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wonderful read, thank you.

Lou
10/09/2006 02:25 pm
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Neatly done! How will Buffy be when they get back home, I wonder.

Irina
10/09/2006 11:00 am
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I really enjoyed your portrayal of Queen Elizabeth, her interaction with Spike was fun. The Cressida, and Sir Toby twist was a nice surprise. Loved the closing line of the chapter, Spike leaving his mark on Shakespeare's work was absolutely awesome. Great update!
Thank you so much for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed the story. Epilogue coming soon.

10/09/2006 09:42 am
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Hehehe, awesome. Will there be happy sappy ending?
Well, there will be an ending of sorts. Happy? This is Season Six we’re talking about!

10/09/2006 06:44 am
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Perhaps Marie will be granted court with her Majesty or made guardian for her, something better then living with her watcher. Wow, they were all there, Liam and Drusilla's descendants, but that would mean that Cressida didn't make to Virginia since Dru's family was from England, unless she was her direct descendant. Hoping Spike poketed the cross somehow. That would be funny. Thanks for the wonderful read.
I think it’s canon that Darla was turned by The Master when she was out in Virginia in 1604. Perhaps in my story, over a hundred years later, she arrived in Ireland to track down Sir Toby’s ancestor! Liam.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.

Robyn
10/09/2006 05:04 am
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I loved the connection of Cressida and Sir Toby. Buffy’s advice and goodbye to Maria was sweet. I enjoyed the lines from and references to different plays. I have really enjoyed reading this, thanks.
Thank you for all your comments. Watch out for the epilogue in a couple of days!

10/09/2006 04:50 am
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another lovely chapter,pet...liked your writing of the queen, very well done....lots of surprises in this fic

Tamara
10/09/2006 03:36 am
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Darla was in cahoots with an ancestor of Angels. I wonder if she knew who he was or she just really liked his type. Great story.
Thank you. I think she tracked him down on purpose!

kim
10/09/2006 02:52 am
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Heeheehee...

Too early to be Liam..an ancestor, though...
Definitely!

10/19/2006 06:06 pm
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oh i like this - very intriguing I can't wait to see what you do next!

vladt
10/11/2006 04:48 am
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deceit must be part of the travers family motto. very good read, thank you.

Robyn
10/09/2006 04:40 am
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Spike’s joy at being in the presence of Will was so sweet. I loved the insight Maria has towards Travers and that she filled Spike in on the spell.

Cas
10/08/2006 03:51 am
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Of course you do know that the real author of the plays was a woman? Really, I can't see how you can wrap this all up in only one more chapter.
Well, if everyone wants it, I might add an epilogue. But only one more proper chp. Posting that very soon. Hope you like it.

10/08/2006 01:07 am
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Treachery must be ingrained in the Travers' genes. What harm could it do if they knew? She's not going to give up or try and change anything. Oh there's only one more chapter? It must be a long one, alot of things to happen and what their relationship will be upon return.Sorry to see this end already, it's just begun. Great read, thanks.
yes, only one more chp. but am writing an epilogue as I’ve had losts of people asking for one!
Hope you like last chp. Posting soon.

Irina
10/07/2006 10:44 am
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Wonderful chapter! Loved Buffy's musings. I also enjoyed Spike's interaction with everyone. Can't wait to find out how everything turns out.
So pleased you are enjoying this Tudor romp. Last chp will be up soon.

10/07/2006 08:18 am
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Travers is in on it!!!

jeanie
10/07/2006 07:52 am
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sent back to shakespeare huh? great, hope spike tells buffy cause im sure he caught on. great story.
Well, if he doesn’t tell her, I don’t think she’s going to work it out for herself!

10/07/2006 04:57 am
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Very atmospheric - love all the neat historical details. It's so sweet that Spike's in seventh heaven being there with William Shakespeare. I guess we all knew that there was bad blood in that Travers family. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for reviewing. So pleased you are enjoying the story. Next chp up soon.

10/07/2006 03:36 am
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wow...i just got it...who will is... great job, pet...this story is amazing...and i think they *want* maria to get killed, don't they? and summon a new slayer? looks like all traverses are jerks...lol..looking forward to the end
Yes, the job and the evil mind obviously run through the family gene pool. And watch out in next chp for the same thing......

kim
10/07/2006 02:13 am
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Cute.

10/07/2006 01:54 am
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That's so cool that you put Will, the famous, in here!

Lou
10/07/2006 12:55 am
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What a romp - Buffy in doublet and hose!

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06/01/2010 02:18 am
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10/19/2006 06:02 pm
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lovely chapter again. I really enjoyed it! I cant wait to see what happens next - and buffy as a boy - lmao

vladt
10/11/2006 04:36 am
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maria is fortunate,the bard is a romantic. if she lives, he won't screw up her life the way most watchers would. fun read, thank you.

Robyn
10/09/2006 04:28 am
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Buffy’s insistence that Spike is with her as well as her description of him was a wonderful thing. I love the suggestion of who Will is and the two quotes that have been used so far.

Cas
10/08/2006 03:50 am
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I wonder what the play will be?

10/06/2006 10:14 am
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No wonder he wanted the slayer's help. Turn the Queen to control the court and country. Quite a smart idea truth be told. Looking forward to more, thanks LH.

claddagh
10/06/2006 02:29 am
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Shakespeare?!?! OMG!!! A watcher? Wow.

10/05/2006 08:58 am
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*has a sneaking suspicion what william's last name is, heehee*

10/05/2006 05:13 am
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Really like this fic. It's got an intriguing plot, neat original characters and an unusual setting. Looking forward to more.
Thanks for reviewing. Always nice to hear readers’ comments. Chp 3 up later today, Friday. Hope you like it.

10/05/2006 01:23 am
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it surprises me that this watcher is so okay with this...maybe the council was corrupted much later...hm....lovely update, looking forward to more

cheryl
10/04/2006 06:24 pm
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great so far, can't wait to see where you go with this!

kim
10/04/2006 04:51 pm
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A romantic, and an actor, for a Watcher. Strange, indeed. I have a feeling I know what Spike suspects. Makes perfect sense, and is very clever.
Hmm, I’m sure you have guessed correctly. It was hard trying to keep it a secret. Glad you’re enjoying the story. Next chp up very soon. Let me know what you think about it!

Lou
10/04/2006 04:36 pm
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To be a slayer or not to be a slayer, that is the question. Plenty of inspiration there for a budding writer!

Irina
10/04/2006 03:58 pm
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I'm really liking Will the Watcher, loved the Shakespeare twist. The dialogue between Spike and Buffy was fun. Fantastic chapter!
Pleased you like Mr S. I thought he fitted in quite well as a Watcher! But I get the feeling Maria is going to be on her own a lot in the future!

Lindsay H
10/04/2006 02:59 pm
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Shakespeare, nice! I'm loving this story, by the way. Keep up the good work!
Thank you for reviewing. Glad you like the story.

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06/01/2010 02:10 am
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10/19/2006 05:59 pm
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oh excellant chapter and start of a fic. Poor Maria - called at eleven. I am happy Buffy decided to stay and help out!

vladt
10/11/2006 04:23 am
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very good hook. a look at maria and buffy concerns take second place. very interesting beginning, thank you.

Robyn
10/09/2006 03:40 am
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What an interesting concept. I love how Buffy asked for more time from Spike to figure things out and then they are transported back in time with time standing still for them in there normal time.

Cas
10/08/2006 03:49 am
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Interesting twist on the time travel idea. Love the story, glad I chose it.

10/05/2006 04:35 am
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Interesting start. Looking forward to the rest of it. Is there some automatic translator thingie working here re language? Just finished reading Timeline(Michael Crichton) set in the 14th century and they spoke Occitan, a mixture of French and English. Did the language change that drastically in the 200 years? The more I think about it, it must have sounded drastically different especially for Buffy.
I opted out of dealing with the language problem by having a “click” sound in Buffy‘s head when they started talking! As the story is a romp rather than too serious, I thought the readers didn’ t really want a long discussion about language differences and there was no way i could write it anyway! So glad you are enjoying the story,

Lou
10/04/2006 04:23 pm
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Very interesting start -- methinks Buffy doth protest too much!

Irina
10/04/2006 02:21 pm
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Great start! Can't wait to read more.

10/04/2006 10:18 am
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1594! What and awful time do be stuck in. The filth and disease, the living conditions and the food! YUCK! But I do like the concept and I'm looking forward to seeing what you've got in mind. Thanks for the read.
But just think who they are going to meet! i’d go back quite willingly. Sorry for pun!

jeanie
10/04/2006 08:10 am
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great start! please update soon.
Hopefully Chp 3 posting tomorrow, Friday. Glad you’re enjoying the story.

10/04/2006 07:36 am
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Lol, it took me a moment to realize why Spike sputtered at the end, lmao! *giggles at the idea of vampire crabs*

10/04/2006 06:16 am
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Cool. Very original idea for a fic. Would love to see more.
Thank you for commenting. Chp 2 just about to post. Hope you like it. Crosses fingers!

10/04/2006 06:08 am
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okay...you've hooked me...again.. i already like maria, am glad buffy's staying to help her...and maybe learn something about her feelings for spike in the process? great opening, love
Feeling guilty about hooking!! But only a little. I like to get my readers under my thumb early on! Just about to post Chp 2 which I hope you will enjoy as well. Thank you for reading.

10/04/2006 03:48 am
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hehe I love this...Spike and Buffy back in time together.

10/04/2006 03:15 am
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You can smell the privy – and the sewage in the streets. Unwashed bodies, rotting garbage, the smoke from a thousand chimneys. Tudor London, pet. - Ahh the age of manure. Wasn't so great in Spike's day either.

Excellent story Lilac - the little Slayer is very cute.
Thank you, yes I have great hopes of developing Maria, if not in this story, then in something else. I’ll see what people think.

idk5743228
10/04/2006 02:18 am
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Loved the first chapter. Time travel is always fun. and as always you've captured Buffy and Spike beautifully
Thank you. Just about to post chp 2. It’s all good fun, not too angsty.