Great story. It would be nice if you wrote a companion peace, maybe filling in the blanks like a prequel.

oh really cooL! What an intriguing look at the way life could have been for them!

It is a sweet story and I love reading it.

What an intriguing dream but you've left out so much of this wonderful fic. I'm hoping that you will consider a pre-quel as well as a sequel. You've opened up a very interesting plot line, one that should be explored further. I'm sure it would be welcomed here as well. Great future look at Spike and his family. Thanks for sharing.

wow...what an intriguing little fic...you drew me into this little world immediately, and kept me fascinated the whole way through...excellent job :)

I agree with the first reviewer, it's a really good story, a new idea even. (cudos to your dream world::))It would be awesome to have a prequel to see how they got to this point. From what I've read already,you're more than able to write this and write it well and I hope you do.

It's very good. Though I wish it had been longer. That way we could have gotten a better idea of how things progressed to create the world you have come up with. You have given us an idea of how that happened but I would have like more. Still, very good story. It was nice read. =)