Vices of My Blood by tamibrandt

08/05/2011 10:47 am
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I read straight through from chapter 1 till now and when I saw there were no new chaters up yet after 12 all I could think was "Noooooooooo!". I really love what you have going on here and will be waiting for the next chapter.

08/05/2011 10:47 am
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I read straight through from chapter 1 till now and when I saw there were no new chaters up yet after 12 all I could think was "Noooooooooo!". I really love what you have going on here and will be waiting for the next chapter.

08/05/2011 10:47 am
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I read straight through from chapter 1 till now and when I saw there were no new chaters up yet after 12 all I could think was "Noooooooooo!". I really love what you have going on here and will be waiting for the next chapter.

Salix
06/21/2010 12:09 am
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A Google search will reveal the rest of this 30 chapter story on foreverfandom.net.

03/11/2010 08:49 pm
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This was so well written, I hope it will be finished one day?

lilashannah
11/12/2008 07:25 am
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I am sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.

platinumgoddess
10/01/2008 09:15 pm
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OH COME ON!!!! THIS CAN'T BE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was just so freakin' good! Come on!!!!

jane
02/06/2007 05:11 am
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too bloody awesome oooh spuffy action ^^

karla
08/29/2006 06:29 pm
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wow
I loved it
Please update soon

05/24/2006 08:07 am
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i wonder what's happening to buffy...a bit strange but seems to be of the good can't wait for more, please say you haven't stopped writing this story!!

jane
10/22/2005 11:16 pm
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Another great chapter really terrific story.

10/21/2005 05:12 am
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Oh man! you have to keep this story going till its completed! I cant wait to find out what is happening with Spike and Buffy... and Xander and Angel... how will everything work itself out? Also a little Spuffiness would be awesome ahhaha Keep the good stuff comin'!! -Ashley-

05/24/2006 08:04 am
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i don't really want him re-ensouled at this point....i just want him dusty... but its your story, and its an awesome one, so i'll just stick to reading it

Lou
10/19/2005 04:48 am
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Absolutely gripping. Top story

jane
10/18/2005 02:44 am
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Smashing really exciting stuff, can't wait for the next chapter.

10/17/2005 04:43 pm
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Jenny should have kept her mouth shut. Drusilla knows what she's doing and eventually Angelus could figure it out from her babbling. More Spuffy please.

Ashley
10/16/2005 11:19 am
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Oh man you have to keep this story going! I cant wait to see what is going to happen! Keep the good stuff coming! -Ashley-

10/15/2005 11:21 am
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Okay, I am finally caught up with this story and can I say that I am so in love with it. I can't wia to see what Buffy decides, how Xander may or maynot be saved.... Absolutely loving it.

SpaceLord
10/14/2005 03:39 pm
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This is getting good and I demand more

Mary
10/14/2005 11:58 am
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I am really enjoying the story!

05/24/2006 08:02 am
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do it, buffy, do it! then you can save both of you and xander and kick angelus' booty!!! more story now

Whitelighter354
10/14/2005 07:26 am
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OMG! I loved it! This is an awesome fic and I cant wait till the next chapter! Please update soon! Lighter

Lou
10/13/2005 06:29 pm
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She does seem to be warming to him - fingers crossed.

SpaceLord
10/13/2005 05:41 pm
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Oh come on don't let me have to wait for too long for the next chapter

10/12/2005 11:04 am
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Cliffie here!! Will she be smart enough to do this? I like the way their relationship is progressing but worry that the Scoobies will get her back before Spike can heal her and claim her. More story please.

05/24/2006 07:59 am
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oh no!! i like your version of xander, don't want angelus to hurt him!! and he's probably gonna use him to get to buffy even worse!!! next chapter, like NOW!

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 01:02 pm
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I wondered if you were going to tackle the menses aspect of life. Very nice work in of that. You used it as a great intro into further intimacy with them and binding them a little closer. Nice work. Look forward to the next update.

10/08/2005 06:25 am
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Great chappy. Very sexy. Great writing on the Xander part. LOL

05/24/2006 07:55 am
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oh, angelus is a sick creep!! hate what he did and said, but loved the chapter

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 12:50 pm
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Cruel, sadistic ... {growls at Angelus} ... One thing that some people do not realize is that emtional and mental torture and/or abuse is actually more damaging than physical abuse. Unless you've experienced it, you have no idea just what it does to your brain ... how it can turn the strongest person in the world into a simpering kitten if the right chord is struck. Mental and Emotional torture/abuse is not something I would ever wish on anyone as Angelus is doing to Buffy and Spike. It is a hell in it's own making. {heads to read Ch. 9} I've seen some very real aspects in this and reactions.

09/27/2005 04:26 am
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bit gory. But still, I liked. I want to know where this story is going, so, more please

09/26/2005 08:37 am
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After the chatroom this morning (my morning) I decided to have a look at your fic... It is a very interesting concept with heaps of potential... this latest chap showed a great deal of improvement on the earlier ones in terms of your confidence. You are beginning to flesh idea's out a little more. Don't be in such a hurry, take the time to explain things in more detail, to allow the reader to become immersed in the fic. Watch your characterisations and 'voices'... they are a little off, even more so in the earlier chapters. Look at the motivations and the feelings of your characters, don't be afraid to delve into them in greater depth. Also remember at all times that you are dealing with a very determined, willful and extremely strong Slayer. If you don't have a beta already I suggest getting a good one and letting them help guide you into improving your fic. If you do have one then maybe you need to get another one as well, many writers use more than one beta for the same fic as some beta's are stronger in certain areas. I do hope you will take this advice in the manner in which it is offered, I really do think you could have a very good fic here with a little bit of work. I look forward to seeing where you take this fic.

09/26/2005 12:11 am
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Another great chapter, Tami. Poor Buffy. She is really brave though.

05/24/2006 07:52 am
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uh-oh...wonder exactly what he's got planned?? can't wait to see what happens next!

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 12:39 pm
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Definitely remember this chapter completely. Don't know why I was messed up on the other chapters. Good update.

Max
09/23/2005 05:49 pm
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Great chapter - update soon

09/23/2005 02:45 pm
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Another brilliant chapter, Tami.

05/24/2006 07:47 am
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poor buffy....and poor spike...it's just so sad...but i can see the devotion building between them...and i cant wait for angelus to get what he deserves...

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 12:31 pm
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Powerful chapter. Spike's vow to Buffy was very poignant. I fear what Angelus' cruelty will continue to think up against Bufy and Spike. Very tender scenes with Spike caring for Buffy's wounds and holding her.

09/27/2005 04:27 am
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Loved it. Angel is such a jerk. I hope he gets killed in some horrible way.

09/23/2005 07:06 am
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Interesting take on season 2. Like the premise. Looking forward to more

09/21/2005 08:10 pm
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“I’ll always be with you, Buffy, no matter what he does, I’ll be here with you.” awww me thinks someone is becoming attached. *grin* uh oh...angelus claimed her...spike won't take that well, oh well maybe can kiss it and make it better. *smirk*

09/21/2005 08:09 pm
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Another great chapter. Keep em coming.

09/21/2005 07:46 pm
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Oh no, poor Buffy. Poor Spike. Great chapter.

05/24/2006 07:40 am
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oh no!! poor buffy! i love how they've bonded already, and how they're trying in small ways to help each other...hope he can help her now

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 12:14 pm
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Uh oh ... I don't like Angelus' attitude. I'm really afraid for what is going to happen to Buffy next. {whimpers and heads to Ch. 6}

09/21/2005 08:08 pm
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"NO servicing you of any kind, Spike.” *waves hand in the air* 'me, oh me, pick me' lol Getting good, very nice way of getting spike and buffy to bond.

05/24/2006 07:28 am
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he might be in for a surprise...sweet the way spike and buffy ended up snuggling.. liked this update a lot

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 12:04 pm
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Buffy is asking for it with all the insults at Spike. Those two spar verbally so well. The insults just fly back and forth. The Little Bad comment was priceless.

09/21/2005 06:24 am
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“Are you always this much of a bitch or is just that I bring out the worst in you?” *giggles* "It’s just you, Spike. It’s always just you” lol..tell me about it. "Okay, she wanted him, but she wouldn’t act on it." rofl...yeah right! buffy, buffy, buffy, just give in honey. Trust me it's allllllll good. Can't wait to see the next chapter, tami, love to see how they react to each other, i don't think buffy's fully realized her situation yet. *big grin*

05/24/2006 07:23 am
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very intriguing scenario here...poor spike, poor buffy...but they may end up not minding so much

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 12:00 pm
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I understand in this chapter (or maybe it was a rewritten chapter) ... Buffy didn't try to escape because she is lacking the strength too. At least that is how it seems. She almost lost to the one vamp, did lose to Angelus. So, I wouldn't have expected her to try and escape at this point. Just letting you know since I know it was a point in conflict based on the reviews I read.

09/25/2005 11:21 pm
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OK this is a great premise, but I have two questions. What is keeping Buffy in the room? Dalton entered and Buffy could have easily fought her way out, but she stayed. That makes no sense. Second question: why hasn't she staked Spike? She has no reason not to. Buffy is pretty far out of character here. Up to that the fic was alright. Idea is sound just give us reasons why she is doing what she is doing.

09/21/2005 06:07 am
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teh heh! "Angelus’ version of a sick joke." one persons sick joke is another's source of entertainment...lol.. great chapter .. i love it that spike has a sense of humor about the situation.

05/24/2006 07:13 am
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i love the way you wrote their thoughts along with their words, showing the differences...always how i read it, too thanx

05/24/2006 07:07 am
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very interesting beginning...like the sparkage between buffy and spike even at this early point...can't wait to read the rest

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 11:46 am
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Okay, I started the reread, and I should be okay. You have things happening because Buffy tried to pull the dagger out during the ritual. That wasn't what I was planning. So, I shouldn't have to worry about my idea copying yours. {Smiles} I wanted you to still have an original idea as well as myself.

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 11:41 am
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Like the premise of the story. I need to reread and catch up though. I know for my story Duty or Destiny, Angel wasn't going to lose his soul by having sex with Buffy. I was going to use the ritual itself to actually bring Angelus out. I've been planning that since the story was a little seed in my mind. So, I'm going to need to reread through everything here to make sure that I can make my idea still work without duplicating yours. {Smiles} I know that Buffy would be keeping her Slayer strength for sure. I any case, I enjoy this idea you have. I look forward to reading how it is explored.

romero
10/10/2005 08:05 am
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Great update. I wonder about the familial blood of Buffy and Dru's visions of all the family. Looking forward to more.

09/21/2005 05:32 am
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"Whatever happened between him and the girl made him uneasy and he growled." mmmm. i sense a plot bunny..lol very good chapter. can't wait to see what else sparks. *big grin*