Shanshu Bugaboo by firefreezes

12/01/2007 01:25 am
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buffy thinks she is avoiding a mess? was hoping her mind work in this well written tale. very good read, thank you.

Fiona
11/29/2007 04:23 pm
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You have to update more often. I almost forgot about this story. Buffy needs to be hurt badly. LOL No, Spike needs to grow a spine and walk away from her. Let her chase him.

Good story, update more often please.

11/28/2007 11:08 pm
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I suppose it's too much to hope that Buffy doesn't drive Spike nuts with will I-- won't I! Cool Illyria.

fangfaceandrea
11/28/2007 09:01 pm
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ouch! nicely done. love triangles amidst the apocalipse, it does't get better than that.

Tamara
11/28/2007 04:23 pm
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I really want to smack the crap out of Buffy.And I kinda hope Spike rejects her at first and she has to work for it.With her hot and cold, hypocritical (The Immortsl) behavior she deserves to not get everything too easily.

11/28/2007 03:04 pm
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ARGHHH! Will that girl NEVER learn??? I hate that she can hurt Spike even by mistake! Hope everything turns out for the best ... and soon?? *bats eyelashes* Please *pouts*

XXX

11/28/2007 09:05 am
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Liking the way this is going. I think it is about time for Buffy to make a decision with both vamps in her life at the same time and love that you actually have her realizing this. Can't wait to see how this plays out!

12/01/2007 01:09 am
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very good read, thank you. really enjoy the dawn-spike scenes.

02/01/2007 12:18 am
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I wonder what's happening in LA that Buffy doesn't think they need to go. Loved Dawn's reaction to finding Spike, and his joy at seeing her again. Seems Rafael was decent about the break up and a good rebound for her. Now if only she and Spike would stop being stupid and move forward with their own relationship
well, someone's going to LA..just not buffy.

01/30/2007 10:41 pm
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huh. So "Raphael" (the Immortal?) knows she's leaving, but she isn't going to LA?
This is a fun story.
Rallying the troops...

01/30/2007 06:47 am
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Thank you for updating. She'd kissed Angel but not him? She was happy to see him but what about Spike? She's in love with him, would it be to hard for her to at least do the same for him? or can't she take that step yet, hoping for some spuffy lovin though. Glad that thing's are finished with Rafael, good that he's an empath so that was easy enough. Looking forward to more. Great chapter, thanks.
Thanks for the review! Again with the insight...

01/30/2007 03:26 am
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YAY! There you are again! I'm thinking the Immortal might have something up his sleeve the way he is acting ;)

Hmmm.
Perhaps.

Karen
01/30/2007 02:22 am
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I liked your interaction between Spike, Dawn and Illyria but I don't agree with how you portray "The Immortal" given the little we know about him. First of all, the fact that he goes by a name like that shows how massive his ego is. This is the guy who chained up Angel and Spike just so he could screw Darla and Dru. In "The Girl in Question" he set up the two vampires just so he could humiliate them once again. He obviously knew they were coming to Rome since he sent them on that whole run around Rome which took elaborate planning to steal that bag, switch it and lead them on that chase. A huge give away is that two old and powerful master vampires were able to get so close to Buffy without setting off her Slayer sense. If the guy is an empath, he would have felt if Buffy loved and missed Spike. So, if he was being truthful when he told Buffy:

“Only when I know they still want me. Your heart is with someone else, pantera. It is not something that happens to me often, but amore allineare is something I am loathe to tamper with, even being the cad that I am.”

then he would have told Buffy about Spike the first time she was in Rome. The only other explanation is that Buffy didn't feel like that towards Spike since an empath would be able to feel what Buffy felt, even if she was denying her feelings or trying to forget about them.

Other than the part about "The Immortal," I think this is a pretty good story so far.
Thank you for your very thoughtful review. I hope you choose to keep reading, even though I think ultimately, you and I will have to agree to disagree on the Immortal.

But I will say this: my Immortal (creative liscence at work!) is not the sort who would look at a woman and say "Oh, she's taken, can't mess with that." He's the Immortal, he's got power and mystery and all sorts of traits to make the ladies tingle, and he does. Women (and some men) are drawn to him. That's what I believe was the deal with Darla and Dru...I don't think he kidnapped them or forced them in any way. Nor do I think either of them felt true love for Angel or Spike.

Furthermore, whatever Buffy feels for Spike, throughout her relations with the Immortal, she believes he's dead. What she feels (and what the empath can sense) changes with her perception of the situation.

The Immortal also has too much pride to chase after a woman he knows he has no chance of winning back.

01/29/2007 08:40 pm
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Ah yes another apocalypse started by Angel/us. The boy just can't seem to stop himself from taking the world to the brink of disaster can he. I thought that when NFA aired....oh yes, Angel logic. Take on a foe he admits they will not be able to defeat, merely wound a bit....be a speedbump to. Set your people up to either leave you to swing in the wind alone (unlikely) or commit suicide helping in your quest. Kill a true innocent (Drogyn) to position yourself. All for....what?????? Perhaps if Angel was tired of the good fight he should have merely retired instead of destroying all of LA and killing friends in the process.

Look forward to the rest of this story. Great start.

Kathleen
yeah...Angel. boo.

but somehow he's a big part of this story.

01/29/2007 06:44 pm
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oh man..that's a sobering thought...really excellent chapter, love dawn's reactions, the interactions between her and spike...and your illyria is flawless...
one little point though, that was just sort of niggling at me...dawn *has* seen a dragon before, and quite memorably, while at the top of glory's tower when the portal was opening... :P
a minor point, but one i noticed :)
as for the chapter itself, though, love, beautiful work, very very emotional and touching and true to the characters, loved it and looking forward to more :)
thanks.
and yeah, immediately after i posted it, that fact sort of snuck up on me and whacked me in the back of the head. i'll be fixing it soon.
and thank you so much for your kind words.

01/29/2007 06:12 pm
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That last sentence just goes to show--Buffy is better at the apocalypse thing than Angel is. Looking forward to more awkward interactions.
then i think you'll like the next chapter...

Jessie-55
01/29/2007 04:55 pm
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OMG I love this story please keep up the great work!!
thank you!!

Lou
01/29/2007 04:08 pm
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He doesn't stand much chance against Dawn the Battler and the new improved womanly Buffy.
that's the idea.

01/29/2007 03:41 pm
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Wondering what will happen between Spike and Buffy.
Great chapter.
thanks! you'll see soon

07/26/2011 10:32 pm
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I love your style of going back and forth filling in little bits to build up your story.   Love the last line.  Angel deserved that after his behavior.

02/01/2007 12:06 am
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Hmm seems Angel has some thigns to explain himself after all those cookie references. Hopefully Spike will realize that there isn't anything between Buffy and Angel anymore. Stupid kissing decisions aside. Now if only she would let something happen between the two of them. You have to love Illyria's comments about everything and general snarkiness.
thanks for reading, hope it doesn't dissapoint!

01/30/2007 03:08 am
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very good read, thank you. love the ending question. angel is such an ass.
i'd have to agree with you about angel. best intentions, and all that...

Lou
01/29/2007 04:01 pm
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God, poor Spike making his usual zero impression! Run while you can, mate.
well, he might, but it is a spuffy story...

01/18/2007 12:51 am
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Yes Angel gets his new lovers thrown back at him!! can't wait to read more!!!
Keep up the good work,
Nox
thanks, nox!

01/13/2007 12:51 am
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Poor Spike, just had to arrive second, didn't he. But is Spike's the one she loves, that's the big question. Waiting to see how you're handling this Immortal thing. Cool, Willow's a hippy. At least we know that Ilyria will have Spike's back and hope that it make's Buffy jealous. Great beginning, looking forward to more.
wow.

you're insightful.

and thanks for reviewing!

01/12/2007 11:45 pm
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There's my girl! Nice to see you posting it up here Jen! ^^
only because of you, des.

thanks for everything!

01/12/2007 09:57 pm
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oh this is an excellent beginning to this story....love it so far...love your version of willow...and it's sad about nina...wonder what buffy will think of that whole situation? :) love illyria, too, the way you write her is perfectly in character, and hilarious....looking forward to an update, love :)
thanks! illyria was the one i was actually most worried about writing.

01/12/2007 09:15 pm
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Oh, I love Illyria! And snaps for one of the funniest story titles I've heard in a while. Thanks for writing and sharing, and good luck with the ongoing story!
thank you so much for your encouraging review!

01/12/2007 07:42 pm
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*So hell was interactive? Ok*

*They were Buffy and Angel, reminding themselves in the most painful ways of what they couldn’t have was what they did. Except that Spike was here now, and he usually sent all traditions flying out the window.*

LOL. What happened to L.A.?
well, there was this apocalypse...

:D

01/12/2007 06:23 pm
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Now you look extra-dead - LOL. Buffy should really have a kissing lock on her face.
i like that idea!

01/12/2007 03:24 pm
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Nice beinning, hope there's more soon.
the first few chapters will be kind of spread apart, as I'm dealing with some heavy RL demands at present. but hopefully soon i'll be moving to a more regular posting schedule.

Melissa
01/12/2007 03:18 pm
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I hope you update soon (and often) as this is a very intriguing start. Angel is such a jerk. He wants Nina and his half-baked cookie, too. Meh.
what can i say? he's angel. poopy-head.

01/12/2007 02:59 pm
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I see what she means about Willow's hippyness. But it looks like it could be worth living with if she gets useful flashes like that.
i like to think that willow enjoys it...every part but the falling down.

kim
01/12/2007 01:00 pm
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Kissing? Again? Icky Buffy.
i know.
but buffy does what she does...

01/12/2007 09:02 am
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Intriguing start... looking forward to seeing where this goes.
thanks...so am i!