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End of the Bloody Line by BSV Projects
Great Story - while it was extremely sad to read the final battle with Jenny, I think it was a great treatment. Great use of Jenny and Dru in very different roles.
Ohh and I have to say that this story has been amazing. It flowed very well especially for having so many different authors.
I have to say I love the way you had Spike find out about Buffy's news with the hole blood thing.
Fab read. Thanks. :-)
05/02/2010 04:03 am
Chapter 18
Emma
01/31/2009 12:24 pm
Chapter 18
really great story, all the authors were fantastic. Loved the storyline, good twists of canon
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 09:59 am
Chapter 18
ohhh...that was sweet...buffy and spike had a baby and everybody's happy... you guys did a good job! i loved the story!
Oh I love it.
gaeliclassie
04/26/2007 07:57 am
Chapter 18
I have truely enjoyed this journey
and the gathering of supreme writers
whose words brought nothing but reading pleasure.
Although shifting off canon the characters remained
in tact more then expected. Cudos to each author
all I can say is that it ended to soon it left you
wanting more.
and the gathering of supreme writers
whose words brought nothing but reading pleasure.
Although shifting off canon the characters remained
in tact more then expected. Cudos to each author
all I can say is that it ended to soon it left you
wanting more.
sirc
03/04/2007 10:59 am
Chapter 18
Loved it 
Dolau
02/24/2007 10:26 pm
Chapter 18
That was an amazing read.. Loved how humour mixed well through the events. Well written and descriptive. Love the new dynamics of the group. Thanks for the awesome read 
delightful ending to a fun read, thank you.
Squid
02/11/2007 07:50 am
Chapter 18
Whole story was amazing.
awwwww....you managed to tie it all together and give it a lovely ending...very good job, love
Wow. Great ending, and a truly lovely story.
clarityfades
02/10/2007 05:15 pm
Chapter 18
excellent end, oracle holly. big bad dad! and to everyone involved, wonderful job! i had a blast reading the entire story!
Awesome ending. I'm glad things were able to work out and the bonds between all of them were strengthened. Love the idea of Kendra staying and being a true sister, not to mention her taking on some of Spike's characteristics. I'm glad Willow was able to recover from losing Xander, and that Lillian was given to Spike and Buffy
You did great Oracleholly. Kendra replacing Dawn, Devon replacing Xander, which I think was probably better in the long run since he hated Spike so much. Loved how you had her give him her blood to tell him about his child. They trully have become a family now. Happier and stronger then ever. Thanks all of you ladies for your contributions, it was very well worth it. Excellent fic.
kim
02/10/2007 05:35 am
Chapter 18
Awwwwwwwww......
Interesting changes/developments. Turned out very nice.
Interesting changes/developments. Turned out very nice.
Cool. :-)
05/02/2010 03:36 am
Chapter 17
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 09:33 am
Chapter 17
ooohhh!!!.. i think a spuffy child is being made
Oh what Dru told Buffy about almost did not work, did Spike not hear what Dru told Buffy.
Dolau
02/24/2007 10:06 pm
Chapter 17
So that was what she meant by the gypsies gift... Had me fooled
Great chapter with a lot of action. Very well written an emotionel. Loved it
Great chapter with a lot of action. Very well written an emotionel. Loved it
excellent read, thank you. always loved dru.
BerMH
02/10/2007 07:34 pm
Chapter 17
That was beautifully written, and I loved it! I just wanted to say what a good job you did on that chapter and tell you that it inspired me to read some other stories that you wrote.
I'm glad they were able to kill Jenny and Xander and the threats against them have been neutralized. Seems like Spike might be experiencing some significant changes, not the least is the baby hinted at
Aww, a baby! Very cute. And also, great chapter.
Holy crap, Tam, that was awesome! Everything was totally awesome. Willow, Giles changing his mind about killing Spike, Dru stepping in to help Buffy and Spike with Xander. Jenny making him fertile, and of course the baby. This is huge, but will she tell in the morning or wait for later. Love what you all have written here.
clarityfades
02/09/2007 01:56 am
Chapter 17
ooh, i like it a lot! good giles characterization, doing what's necessary...liked the show of willow's power and the return of dru and her surprise. well done! so...when's spike gonna figure out what his special "warmth" means? can't wait to see his reaction. keep up all the goodness!
kim
02/09/2007 01:05 am
Chapter 17
Well....didn't expect a pregnancy angle...He's gonna freak..initially.
oh wow....isn't that kind of the equivalent of messing with somebody's birth control pills though? 
a little bit unfair...lol...but incredibly hot, and a very very good chapter...looking forward to reading more
a little bit unfair...lol...but incredibly hot, and a very very good chapter...looking forward to reading more Thanks. :-)
05/02/2010 01:44 am
Chapter 16
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 09:17 am
Chapter 16
oh my gosh!..willow...
Oh please tell me that they can stop Jenny from turning Willow, maybe Dru can show up and help.
Dolau
02/24/2007 09:53 pm
Chapter 16
Oh, wow. That was sooo good. Filled with surprices, actions and emotion. Well written and one hell of a cliffie
Vamped Xander, couldn't have happened to a nicer asshole! To bad Willow just won't learn about vamps. Now all but the Watcher will be left, all because of Angelus. Glad he's dust. At least Buffy's got Spike and her Mom. Excellent chapter Schez, thanks.
I can't believe Xander is a vamp and Willow is dying. I really hope they are able to get to Willow before Jenny completely drains her. Buffy is going to be devastated over the danger to her friends, not to mention the worry over her Mom and Kendra. I was so glad Giles didn't actually give into the Ripper side of himself, but I do wish his aim had been better
oh man...how could buffy be so dumb?? xander is clearly not the greater threat...she should have waited to deal with him until later and helped spike save willow...excellent chapter, love, looking forward to more
Bridget
02/07/2007 07:02 pm
Chapter 16
Interesting. It appears that things are going badly for Buffy and Spike right now. But what about Buffy's wish. I believe that Dru told her to wish wisely. Does this mean that she can wish that none of these bad things happened? Please update soon and thanks for the quick updates.
Great chapter, hope more will be posted soon.
clarityfades
02/07/2007 12:44 pm
Chapter 16
ooh...will willow live? i hope so and i hope buffy kicks xander's weak butt all up and down sunnydale. i liked that giles let ripper out long enough to try to do some good. another fun-filled chappie!
kim
02/07/2007 09:57 am
Chapter 16
Nah, that's Detroit iron! As long as there's a frame intact, you can re-build a car. And that big ol' boat wouldn't crumple like modern cars. Smashing through an old, thin storefront? Just needs body work....
Huh, didn't imagine that Xander would be pulled in this way...and now Willow's almost dead...well, if they manage to save her, she probably won't be able to do magic again. Which is good, really...
Poor Giles will be lucky to get out of the hospital before a month!
Huh, didn't imagine that Xander would be pulled in this way...and now Willow's almost dead...well, if they manage to save her, she probably won't be able to do magic again. Which is good, really...
Poor Giles will be lucky to get out of the hospital before a month!
Cool. :-)
05/01/2010 04:00 pm
Chapter 15
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 09:02 am
Chapter 15
so exciting!!!
OH it looks like they might have made it in time.
Dolau
02/24/2007 09:36 pm
Chapter 15
Loved the Buffy7Spike interactions and the fight with the other vamps.. Well written and catchy..
Oh, and love your etheral Dru. Her riddles gives me all kinds of scenarios. Love it
Oh, and love your etheral Dru. Her riddles gives me all kinds of scenarios. Love it
Pin
02/10/2007 01:12 am
Chapter 15
Lovely & what an excellent rescue!
Spike changed into what? That was great. Now Jenny's going to have to deal with the slayer and her mate, a freaky, scary, powerful vamp. Great job Niamh, another excellent chapter to this fantastic fic, thanks.
clarityfades
02/07/2007 06:09 am
Chapter 15
ooh, i like what's happening to spike and buffy...even if i have NO clue what it is. well, i have my guesses. and i love that dru put in an appearance to aid them. great chapter, and i especially liked the ending...spike and buffy have always loved making an entrance!
excellent chapter, thank you. grand entrance to the shop.
Hmm seems Spike really doesn't take threats against his mate well. With the description of his eyes changing colors again it seems like there is even more changes afoot with their mating. I'm glad they were able to get to Giles before Jenny tries to turn him as she is clearly a strong threat
lol...what an entrance, eh? excellent writing, love, very much enjoyed the chapter...wonder if they'll be able to stop her before she turns him ....
excellent writing, love, very much enjoyed the chapter...wonder if they'll be able to stop her before she turns him ....Great chapter, loved the entrance.
kim
02/06/2007 12:45 pm
Chapter 15
Well, that's gonna be hell on the paintjob....
More help from Dru...well, I guess they wouldn't have made it in time, otherwise, having to search all over town.
More help from Dru...well, I guess they wouldn't have made it in time, otherwise, having to search all over town.
:-)
05/01/2010 03:46 pm
Chapter 14
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 08:51 am
Chapter 14
whew!..i thought for one second that she'll turn giles...
OH Jenny almost got a soul.
Dolau
02/24/2007 09:22 pm
Chapter 14
Really intriguing with her clan trying to curse her with a soul.. Love how you write her. And for a minut I thought she was turning Giles, but seems she wants to play a bit first perhaps...
And OMG, Angelus' demise... priceless and so worthy of him. That had got to be humiliating to go out like that.. Loved it
And OMG, Angelus' demise... priceless and so worthy of him. That had got to be humiliating to go out like that.. Loved it
Pin
02/10/2007 01:05 am
Chapter 14
Angel's dusted! Wow - not Jenny's the big bad. I love this twist and like the attempt to re-soul her. Wonder what she plans for Giles.
very good read, thank you. happy to see angel dust. not terribly worried about giles, as he is high on the list of characters who deserve so much worse than canon dealt them.
Well Giles got to kill Angelus but I'm worried about him being with Jenny, as clearly her demon is strong. I was hopeful that her clan might be able to curse her with a soul, but it seems that was not meant to be. I hope Buffy and Spike are able to rescue him soon
clarityfades
02/05/2007 01:16 pm
Chapter 14
hmm...interesting. little janna thinks she can keep HER family from cursing her? i'm hoping she'll be begging for the curse when buffy sees what she's done with giles. this is a great story and i can't wait for the next update. terrific job!
Wow, hope they can try again, anything else would be bad. She's to powerful Bully for Giles! he may have been weak, but he did have the satisfaction of dusting his ass. Another wonder chapter to this great fic, thanks Mefiant.
Inzey
02/05/2007 08:35 am
Chapter 14
Great update, love the story.
AHA an ensouling I'm thinking? Her clan may help a lot. Chilling thought that she might turn Ripper!
Kathleen
Kathleen
kim
02/05/2007 06:22 am
Chapter 14
Huh, they already knew to do the soul curse on her,huh?
And Giles is in seeeeerious trouble......
And Giles is in seeeeerious trouble......
oh man...for a second there i thought they were going to get her ensouled before she could do any damage...oh man...and poor giles...i hope she doesn't turn him...great chapter, love
Jenny as a vampire - I have never run across this scenario before. Like how you incorporate the magical powers of her people with the vampiric powers.
Cool. :-)
05/01/2010 03:19 pm
Chapter 13
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 08:42 am
Chapter 13
nice job, jenny... angelus sooo deserved that.
Oh what is Jenny going to do.
Dolau
02/24/2007 09:12 pm
Chapter 13
Very good. Loved the hot Spuffy lovin'..
And great carachterisation on Vamp-Gypsy... very vengeful. Can't wait to find out what she has in mind and how much she drained her Sire..
And poor Giles, talk about actions coming to bite you in the a$$..
And great carachterisation on Vamp-Gypsy... very vengeful. Can't wait to find out what she has in mind and how much she drained her Sire..
And poor Giles, talk about actions coming to bite you in the a$$..
Pin
02/10/2007 12:57 am
Chapter 13
Wow - great chapter! I love this version of Jenny. And the Buffy/Spike interlude - burning hot!
Seems Jenny is much more denagerous than any of them could expect. I wonder what will happen if Giles sees her again in this form. Angelus certainly got more than he bargined for when he decided to change her.
Loved the scenes between Spike and Buffy. How much emotion, care and concern was shared during the intimate moments, and the innate desire in both of them to cement their relationship further.
Loved the scenes between Spike and Buffy. How much emotion, care and concern was shared during the intimate moments, and the innate desire in both of them to cement their relationship further.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 01:12 pm
Chapter 13
ooh, what's jenny gonna do now? i really like that spuffy redid the claim w/o the PTB's interference. and willow's reaction to giles touching her made me laugh. it's what he deserves for being a poophead. another wonderful chapter from this round robin.
Sad trade off. Buffy finds her mate, Giles loses his lady love. Now she's the one to worry about. Not only a vampire but one with power. Excellent Niamh, great work.
oh wow...jenny's the danger, isn't she, not angelus? i think angelus got a little more than he bargained for with this one...great chapter
love the contrast of the spike/buffy bonding and jenny attitude towards angel. excellent read, thank you.
Oooo well now that is an interesting turn of events. As Spike said there is a reason not to turn a gypsy. Hum.....
Well done.
Kathleen
Well done.
Kathleen
Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
Vinity
02/04/2007 04:43 pm
Chapter 13
Enjoying this fic. It's taking some surprising turns.
kim
02/04/2007 01:31 pm
Chapter 13
Uh-oh......how evil is she gonna be?
Spike and Buffy double-y bonded......Giles knowing how much of an idiot he really is....poor Willow caught in the middle...
Spike and Buffy double-y bonded......Giles knowing how much of an idiot he really is....poor Willow caught in the middle...
Thanks. :-)
05/01/2010 03:04 pm
Chapter 12
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 08:12 am
Chapter 12
i hope jenny will stake angelus hehe...
Oh I can't wait to hear how Giles takes that news.
sirc
03/04/2007 10:09 am
Chapter 12
Great chapter
Dolau
02/24/2007 08:57 pm
Chapter 12
Oh, wonder why the Master thought it a no no to turn gypsies.. Seems that Angel doesn't have that strong a hold of his childe as he thinks.. Can't wait to read, what their future will reveal.
Well written and exciting chapter
Well written and exciting chapter
Pin
02/10/2007 12:38 am
Chapter 12
Tricky Jenny; hmmm I wonder how that is going to work out.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 01:04 pm
Chapter 12
yea..kendra still lives...for now. hmm, jenny's a bit of an upstart vamp..wonder if she'll take care of angelus on her own just for payback? and will giles continue to be a wanker, or will he start doing his watcherly job? i heart this story!
excellent read, thank you.
Another excellent chapter Patti. So happy that Joyce has included Spike in as part of her family. I know she'll be cool about the mating thing. I have no doubt that Spike will continue to amaze Kendra. He is one of a kind. Good thing that nurse was raised in SunnyD, it's a whole lot easier that way. Poor Willow, she thinks that she's embarrassed now, wait 'til she knows everything. Once again Giles and Xander aren't going to be happy but that's just tough. Love this, thanks.
Great chapter.
ooh.. whats jenny upto.. hmmm?
Tee hee...even at the most dangerous of times our intrepid Vamp has a one track mind....go Spike. Willow had best invest in ear plugs.
Excellent.
Kathleen
Excellent.
Kathleen
I'm glad Joyce and Kendra are ok. I'm surprised Willow was able to contain herself and not beg for details after seeing Spike and Buffy together. I think Angelus got more than he bargined for when he turned Jenny, because something tells me she will not be easy to manage at all. I wonder how the other scoobies will respond to news of Spike and Buffy's claiming each other. I loved Joyce apologizing to Spike for not listening to his concerns, and his attempts to put her mind at ease about it, while acknowledging Buffy would be more upset
wow...so they're sharing emotions here...and youre doing an excellent job with jenny, left me wondering if maybe angelus has bitten off a bit more than he could chew...great chapter
kim
01/31/2007 10:52 pm
Chapter 12
Yup, that's one childe who's not gonna love her maker. If there's any of Jenny still left in there, she's just biding her time until she can reek everlasting vengeance on him.
Thanks. :-)
05/01/2010 02:56 pm
Chapter 11
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 07:48 am
Chapter 11
this is good...
Oh that was interesting, I wonder what all Dru's part will be.
sweetpea
03/22/2007 12:46 am
Chapter 11
WOW! I mean, WOW!
that was awesome!
that was awesome!
sirc
03/04/2007 10:02 am
Chapter 11
well done
Dolau
02/24/2007 08:35 pm
Chapter 11
Oh wow, that was awesome writings.. Carachterisations and flow was amazing. Really having a hard time finding the right words right now... Thanks for great chapter
Pin
02/10/2007 12:30 am
Chapter 11
Loved the parallel joinings, so very different in nature. Great pacing and the battle at the end - well done!
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:58 pm
Chapter 11
great job megan! dru a higher power? maybe she was always meant for that even before her turning. and jenny...can't wait to see her die...hopefully, i will, she and her sire. never really liked either one of them. stoopid vamps, when will they learn? and will kendra live? or was she always meant to die? i don't know, but i can't wait to find out...and what's goin' on w/ our fave blond duo? guess ima gonna have to read more!
oh man!!! i had no idea you were going to vamp jenny!!!! 
man, that was intense...and i like the idea of dru finally being at peace...great update
man, that was intense...and i like the idea of dru finally being at peace...great update Poor Jenny, turned into a vampire and having to be with Angelus. I hope they kill her soon and spare her from that life. I also hope Kendra is ok and they didn't actually kill her.
OOO Jenny as a vampire! I don't think I've ever seen that done! What an interesting turn of events. Love the blessed release/redemption of Dru. Intriguiging.
Kathleen
Kathleen
Great chapter.
kim
01/31/2007 08:18 am
Chapter 11
Goodness! This really took a dark and violent turn....Jenny as a vamp!
Truly unique, guys...
Truly unique, guys...
Wow! that was another incredible chapter. I'm thinking turning a gypsy is a bad idea, like turning a slayer. Hopefully Angelus will pay for that. Gypsies are powerful people. Thank you for reassuring Buffy in their relationship. Yup, now to face the scoobies and Giles' skeptical eye. Thank you Megan_Peta, you did not disappoint. Excellent chapter.
Cool. :-)
05/01/2010 02:44 pm
Chapter 10
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 07:33 am
Chapter 10
ooohhh...very exciting!...
OH that was a nice interlude but did they get Jenny.
Sweetpea
03/22/2007 12:47 am
Chapter 10
POETIC. BEAUTIFUL. PASSIONATE.
Serenity
03/17/2007 05:56 am
Chapter 10
I like how this chapter flowed, even though it jumped from person to person. Great job!
Yea! Spuffyness!
Yea! Spuffyness!
Dolau
02/24/2007 08:21 pm
Chapter 10
Huh... what the h.. happened? Very nice with the jumping between the couples..
Pin
02/10/2007 12:03 am
Chapter 10
Wow! That was very well done. Definitely want to see what happens next.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:51 pm
Chapter 10
passionfish, you are one of my favorite authors and you prove it once again with this chapter. wonderful work! "twin growls" and "amber eyes"? ooh...is the slayer coming out to play? i hope so.
that was an interesting twist. I'm kind of confused about what it all meant, and what Spike and Buffy claiming each other had to do with Dru and Angel. Seems like something significant is happening, or about to happen, just not sure what
fantastic read, thank you.
whats going on?? its exciting and disturbing at the same time and i like it.. i just not sure what exactly "it" is...
OMG, that was amazing PF. I had to read that last half three times. Can't wait to see who writes the next chapter and how they can continue your awesome chapter. So eager to see what they've become and what it means to Angelus and Dru. This is so exciting, can't begin to express it. *sitting here bouncing* Thanks, sweetie. Good to be reading anything from you.
Nice chapter.
kim
01/30/2007 08:10 am
Chapter 10
Whoaaaaaaaaaaa.........
oh wow...intense, and very poetically written...can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Thanks. :-)
05/01/2010 02:39 pm
Chapter 9
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 07:24 am
Chapter 9
i'm scared of what will happen with jenny calendar...hope buffy and spike can rescue her before it's too late...
Oh I wonder what the promise of tonight will bring, after all he said he didn't want to do anything since she was only 16
Serenity
03/17/2007 05:52 am
Chapter 9
Glad to see that Spike is still handy with his namesakes!
sirc
03/04/2007 09:43 am
Chapter 9
well done
Dolau
02/24/2007 08:16 pm
Chapter 9
Wow, powerful. Loved the confrontation Spike did on Giles and Dalton. Really hope that Giles will remain open to the difference that is Spike... "I thought we needed one of those manly talks that we Brits try to avoid.".. LOL, priceless line.
And very good imagery on the evilness that is Angelus and Dru..
And very good imagery on the evilness that is Angelus and Dru..
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:32 pm
Chapter 9
ewwww...i know vamps like pain, but i hope i never get picked up the way dru was. actually, it was kinda interesting. and wonderful payback on dalton, i really enjoyed seeing him use his namesake. terrific chappie!
Poor Jenny left alone with those monsters. She really deserved better. I hope they rescue her soon. I wasn't at all surprised when Spike killed Dalton, and part of me wish he ahd tortured Giles a little more so he would know better than to go against them in the future
If that doesn't give Giles something to think about and open his eyes to, nothing will. I liked Dalton, sorry he pissed off Spike. For someone who's pretty aware, Spike totally missed how Dalton felt. Hoping Jenny survives this fic for a change. Now Spike and Buffy can get on with their future. Who's got brown eyes? James and Tony both have blue eyes and of course James' are the most beautiful. Thank you for adding another great chapter to this wonderful fic.
great read, thank you. hope giles learned from watching dalton.
oh how hard on both of them...but at least now they know, there's no going back as far as angelus and dru are concerned...glad they figured out and stopped dalton's plan, and i hope they can rescue jenny in time...great job, love
Great chapter. Glad Dalton got what was coming to him.
kim
01/29/2007 04:54 am
Chapter 9
Not sorry to see Dalton dust.
Cool :-)
05/01/2010 02:26 pm
Chapter 8
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 07:02 am
Chapter 8
poor watcher... hope he'll learn his lesson by now....
OH I am glad Jenny didn't go for it. I hope Angelus doesn't kill Jenny she is on their side.
Serenity
03/17/2007 05:38 am
Chapter 8
i really like how Jenny was used in making Buffy realize what a git Giles is being. Good work!
sirc
03/04/2007 09:20 am
Chapter 8
Great chapter
Dolau
02/24/2007 08:02 pm
Chapter 8
That'll teach Giles.. Loved Jennys words on arrogance and men..
Glad that Ted is out of the way now and that Giles' plans of killing Spike is out in the open.
Glad that Ted is out of the way now and that Giles' plans of killing Spike is out in the open.
Pin
02/09/2007 11:22 pm
Chapter 8
Excellent chapter! Glad Giles finally got punished. Hope this time around Jenny can be saved. Great Willow dialog.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:25 pm
Chapter 8
yea! i'm glad buffy found out about giles' betrayal early, and i love her response. yea to spuffy for saving joyce. i hope buffy gives everyone a piece of her mind about ted and trusting her slayer instincts (just like she did to giles). hmm, will jenny be killed as on the show? super lovin' this story!
I'm so glad Buffy and Spike were able to get there in time and stop Joyce from being killed. Giles needs to be alone after all he did, and what his arrogance almost cost Buffy. What could he possibly have been thinking?
wonderful read, thank you. jenny's arrogance line is great.
oh man...jenny's dead, isn't she? 
i'm so glad she managed to get the truth to buffy before she died, though, of what they were planning...and i'm with buffy...giles needs to die...or at least be hospitalized with severe internal injuries... lol...great chapter, love, looking forward to more
i'm so glad she managed to get the truth to buffy before she died, though, of what they were planning...and i'm with buffy...giles needs to die...or at least be hospitalized with severe internal injuries... lol...great chapter, love, looking forward to more Giles is getting what he deserves, butthey should beat him up a little too.
Great chapter.
Great chapter.
Poor Jenny, if he didn't kill her right away, it can't be good for her. He'll torture her that's for sure. Glad that Willow discovered the plot to sacrifice Spike. Don't blame Buffy one bit to let Giles have it like she did. He deserves nothing less. Excellent addition Dia, thanks.
kim
01/28/2007 07:57 am
Chapter 8
Won't Jenny already be dead?
Intense chapter.
Intense chapter.
Cool. :-)
05/01/2010 02:09 pm
Chapter 7
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 04:32 am
Chapter 7
oh no!... freakin' watcher!...he's soooo gonna get his a** kick by buffy!
Oh they better not do anything to Spike some how I don't thinks Joyce will allow it either.
Serenity
03/17/2007 05:19 am
Chapter 7
Ooh damn that Giles for being so pigheaded!
sirc
03/04/2007 08:59 am
Chapter 7
I've always hated when GIles or any of the others does something like this. On the other hand, I can see that they're just doing it because they think it's what's right.
Great chapter
Great chapter
Dolau
02/18/2007 10:49 pm
Chapter 7
"She’s emotionally unstable. We’ll have to make the decisions for her. She’ll thank me in the end.â€....
Uhm, think again Giles. *sends evil eye* he better hope that Joyce doesn't get wind of his plans.. she's pretty handy with an axe. LOL
You really know how to write betrayel. Makes my blood boil. Really Good writings.
And loved how Buffy was able to see through Spikes attempt of protecting his unbeating heart. Sweet..
The Drusilla/Angelus interaction was well written and so decadently evil/crazy. Loved it
Uhm, think again Giles. *sends evil eye* he better hope that Joyce doesn't get wind of his plans.. she's pretty handy with an axe. LOL
You really know how to write betrayel. Makes my blood boil. Really Good writings.
And loved how Buffy was able to see through Spikes attempt of protecting his unbeating heart. Sweet..
The Drusilla/Angelus interaction was well written and so decadently evil/crazy. Loved it
Pin
02/09/2007 10:31 pm
Chapter 7
Gahhh, Dalton and Giles - what gerks! I love the way the first idea is always 'kill Spike'. Great chapter!
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:17 pm
Chapter 7
ooh, giles turning on buffy and it isn't even her 18th b-day! dalton and giles are gonna regret this...i hope! great chapter w/ the backstabbing and the spuffy fluffy feelings.
very good read, thank you. giles will have a difficult time when joyce and buffy become aware of his intent.
oh no...giles is in with the bad guys, even if he doesn't know it....i love that they worked it out, that buffy was perceptive enough to call him on his bluff, great chapter, love
Oh Giles is so going to get a beating when Buffy realizes that he's trying to kill Spike. As if he could take him! And I'm sure Dalton is going to meet the business end of a stake. Its a good thing Buffy called Spike on that nonsense he was spewing about them going back to Angelus and Dru before he actually tried to follow through will the ridiculous plan.
Kawaki
01/26/2007 03:33 pm
Chapter 7
Giles. I'm so disappointed in you. Didn't Buffy tell you about the slayer dream?
Oh no, bad Giles and evil Dalton! They won't be allowed to sacrifice Spike.
If they resoul Angelus, won't he stay mated with Drusilla?
If they resoul Angelus, won't he stay mated with Drusilla?
gasp! no you cant sacrifice spike!! its just wrong!
So glad that she still wants him, but Giles doesn't know about Dalton's feelings for Spike, so he won't want to sacrifice Spike. Nope, no way. Hope Spike and Buffy get closer, if you know what I mean. Show her some of the pleasures of sex without going all the way. If Joyce gets wind of Giles plan, she'd use the axe on him! She want's her daughter happy. Thanks SpikesDeb, great job, loved the chapter.
Cool. :-)
05/01/2010 01:46 pm
Chapter 6
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 02:24 am
Chapter 6
should they really trust dalton? hmmm..
oh I do believe something can go wrong.
Serenity
03/17/2007 05:03 am
Chapter 6
Great chapter! Especially loved Daltons reflection on Spike. Is it bad that I don't want them to put the soul back into Angel? How's bout we just kill him.
sirc
03/04/2007 08:36 am
Chapter 6
Well done
Dolau
02/18/2007 10:12 pm
Chapter 6
Oh, i actually kinda liked Dalton until he went all psycho scorned wannabe lover.. LOL
Awesome way to bring up Spike's background through the telling of Daltons story. Loved that
Can't wait to find out what Dalton has in mind.. Officially as well as unofficially
Awesome way to bring up Spike's background through the telling of Daltons story. Loved that
Can't wait to find out what Dalton has in mind.. Officially as well as unofficially
Pin
02/09/2007 10:11 pm
Chapter 6
Bummer, I always liked Dalton. Love the snapshot of William's background. very effective.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:08 pm
Chapter 6
oh dalton...you silly, silly vamp. i'd feel bad for him, but since he set this in motion...not so much. maybe if he redeems himself in some way, we'll see. i like the idea of dalton falling for the william in spike, but brains aren't everything. off to the next chappie!
very well done chapter, thank you fascinating twist on dalton.
Great chapter. I really love Dalton. He's a great character that got chopped off by the Grim Whedon Reaper, way too soon.
Oh good grief trust Spike to have a groupy, and one that feels hurt because his affections weren't returned. I really hope Dalton doesn't do anything too stupid, because he really won't like what Spike and Buffy do to him when they realize he tried to double cross them
Hey Icemink, great job. So he's got a thing for Spike, but he can come in handy, even if he is jealous he's got something to offer and he's smart, someone that they need on there side, if they're to battle Angelus. he and Giles would work well together. Thanks sweetie, hope you're still working on "Possession", loved it since the first chapter. Great work, thanks.
Esther
01/26/2007 07:50 am
Chapter 6
Whoa, mama, that came outta left field but I loved it!! Hmm, seems Spike and Buffy have another enemy in Dalton---great character to use, too, since we know nothing about him. Lots of freedom in characterizing him, which you did a fine job in.
hmmmm
kim
01/25/2007 07:20 pm
Chapter 6
Hmmm....uh oh....
wow...i dont think i've ever read dalton written as a true villain before...and you wrote it so believably, i could see him taking that sort of a direction...an even though i can tell he's going to be a thorn in their sides, i still sort of feel some sympathy for the poor little loser great chapter, love
great chapter, love Really nice chapter.
Though I have to say I don't like Dalton.
Though I have to say I don't like Dalton.
Yum, deliciously gentlemanly indeed! Very well done.
Excellent. Thanks. :-)
05/01/2010 08:03 am
Chapter 5
spuffy chick
07/22/2008 02:07 am
Chapter 5
i'm glad that giles didn't threaten to stake spike...
OH did Angelus send him or did he come on his own, I can't wait to find out.
Serenity
03/17/2007 04:01 am
Chapter 5
I am so glad Buffy finally put Xander in his place. His attitude towards Spike. Great Chapter!
sirc
03/04/2007 08:28 am
Chapter 5
Loved it
Dolau
02/18/2007 10:02 pm
Chapter 5
Love that she stood up to Xander and everyone else.. And Spike being a gentleman.. Me kinda like.. LOL, especially since it doesn't mean fondling is off limit..or so it seems *grins*..
Oh great humour how Angel lost his temper and that it left him very few minions..
Oh great humour how Angel lost his temper and that it left him very few minions..
Pin
02/09/2007 08:17 pm
Chapter 5
Great chapter and I like the confrontation with Xander - who always deserved to get pummeled, in my opinion. Thanks!
clarityfades
02/05/2007 12:03 pm
Chapter 5
glad to see spike isn't the pedophile i've always felt angel/angelus is. so protective...wondering if there will be more slayer dreams. and dalton? will there still be the judge and his death? or will dalton survive on the side of spuffy? wonderful writers, i bow to your excellence as i go on to read more!
great read, thank you. highlights: xander bashing, physical, by spike; verbal by buffy. and joyce is wonderfully written.
ROFLMAO. The Xander scene is way too funny.
hmm seems Buffy and SPike have both gotten real comfortable with the idea of having a relationship, and a real one at that. You have to love Spike for going all alpha male at the thought that Xander had tried to hurt Buffy. I also respect his wanting to wait until she's older before progressing in their relationship. Not to mention it putting Joyce's mind at rest about the nature of their relationship and him staying in the house.
Really nice, lovely. Love the story.
That whole chapter was wonderful Always. From a very pissed off Spike, to their banter to Joyce realizing that they would be more. Xander finding them and then pissing himself, to a peaceful afternoon together. Spike's remarks about Angel being the pediphile not him and worrying about her tender state of mind and young heart was great. Wondering just what Angelus wants, guess he didn't kill all of Spike's minions. Fantastic chapter, thank you for this fun round robin.
Loved it.... and she finally caled Xander on his actions! yeah!
Gah! Hot! Hot hot hot!!
Much with the hotness and more please?!?
Much with the hotness and more please?!?
i love buffy telling xander off..he deserved it, being all nosty and intrusive in her life like that...and i wonder what dalton's there for...i kinda hope he takes their side, cause i always kinda liked him, great chapter, love
hmmm... thats interesting...
Esther
01/24/2007 02:21 am
Chapter 5
SQUEE!!! Great job, sweetie!! Goodness, I swear, everytime I read some of your Spuffy loving I die!! *falls in ocean of drool* Absolutely loved it!! Ooh, and great job bringing up Xander's attempted rape of Buffy and showing us Spike's reaction. I'm always glad when that tidbit's brought up. Ooh, can't wait for Icemink's next chapter, either!
kim
01/24/2007 02:03 am
Chapter 5
Ah, Dalton...did he escape Angelus, or was he sent? He used to be loyal to Spike....
Oh, my.... Was this real or a dream? Excellent chapter!
Excellent. Thanks :-)
05/01/2010 05:17 am
Chapter 4
spuffy chick
07/21/2008 07:48 am
Chapter 4
haha! it was just a dream...thought they really did it. oh, i wish they'll claim each other...
Oh was that a dream or did they really just mate.
Serenity
03/17/2007 02:56 am
Chapter 4
Yowzers!
sirc
03/03/2007 09:37 pm
Chapter 4
Loved it
Jessica
02/26/2007 09:48 am
Chapter 4
Ok wow. And that was just the dream. ; )
Dolau
02/18/2007 09:38 pm
Chapter 4
Nothing like a bit of dreaming to stir up those emotions.. LOL
And loved how Joyce had to mother both our superhumans in a mediator way.. Poor Joyce, rough couples of days for her..
And loved how Joyce had to mother both our superhumans in a mediator way.. Poor Joyce, rough couples of days for her..
Pin
02/09/2007 07:57 pm
Chapter 4
Ohhh, psychic mating! I love it - very hot and very well done.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 11:51 am
Chapter 4
oh yeah...gettin' to the good stuff early! excellent job with the shared dream...so, how long will our couple decide to live in egypt? guess i'll have to keep reading to find out. *snort* as if i'd stop now!
loved the chapter, and that was before the last two paragraphs. wonderful read, thank you.
ROFLMAO! at the sheets and Buffy's "apology." It is with a deep sense of embarassment that I report that my mother once made my father a set of Strawberry Shortcake pajamas because the material was cheap. His faves.
Joyce always struck me as a scotch on ice before bed type of girl.
Joyce always struck me as a scotch on ice before bed type of girl.
Hmm seems like they had a shared dream. Wonder if it will have consequences in the real world or is just prophetic of what might happen between them. You have to love Joyce for making Buffy apologize and accepting Spike into her house because he had saved her child
Damn, it was a dream! They both had it so was Buffy's a slayer dream? Wondering how they're going to act around each other now and how long before she takes that trip to the basement. I hope they both had showers by now and is Spike going to brown bag it? Very exciting, Karbear57, thanks for your contribution to this story.
HA! Loved the Sheets Slayer!
Goooooo Spike with the smart-assery! Great chapter!
Goooooo Spike with the smart-assery! Great chapter!
kim
01/23/2007 01:29 am
Chapter 4
Shared dream, eh? Yeah, they're screwed, LOL.
Very nice dreams. Great chapter.
wow...that was incredibly intense...very hot...i was convinced it was real, italics aside, for most of the chapter...*sigh*...in time, i suppose excellent work, love
excellent work, love LOL
Awesome!!!
Esther
01/22/2007 10:29 am
Chapter 4
*falls in a dead faint* Hon, fan-freaking-tastic!!!!!
Psilo
10/12/2011 09:32 pm
Chapter 3
Oh Starshine you had me giggling in the end and not wishing just a little bit, to be in her shoes.
Buffy's standard response to something she can't handle... Loved it!
Excellent. Thanks. :-)
05/01/2010 05:08 am
Chapter 3
spuffy chick
07/21/2008 07:26 am
Chapter 3
i had fun reading this chapter...
Oh I am surprised she did not call him a pig.
Serenity
03/17/2007 02:38 am
Chapter 3
Poor Spike and damn that nasty Drusilla. Evil Bitch.
love the last part!
love the last part!
sirc
03/03/2007 09:30 pm
Chapter 3
loved it
Dolau
02/18/2007 09:26 pm
Chapter 3
well written and great dynamic. Just wondering: If Angelus can't remember being Angel, why would he consider Buffy his and know what makes her tick? Oh well, perhaps the answer will be presented further along the road.
Love that they're gonna pretend to be all couple-y.. wonder how long the pretend part will last.. LOL
Love that they're gonna pretend to be all couple-y.. wonder how long the pretend part will last.. LOL
Pin
02/09/2007 07:40 pm
Chapter 3
Ah, the trademark bop to the nose...Buffy and her permanent ticket to Egypt. Thanks!
clarityfades
02/05/2007 11:46 am
Chapter 3
excellent...no spuffy story can be complete w/o a good ol' sock in the nose! a little payback is exactly what the big ho and shaky soul deserve! y'all are doing a wonderful job w/ this story. chapter 4, here i come!
there is no way spike is ever going to learn to keep his mouth shut. wonderful chapter, thank you.
I can see why they would want to throw Angelus and Dru of track, but why would Angelus think of Buffy as his if he can't remember. And why would he care if he's mated to Dru? I wonder how Spike's going to respond not having his family connection anymore. Seems Buffy is more attracted than she thought, although Spike may need to stop baiting her if this is going to really work
So now they're mated and poor Spike's left alone again. Now Buffy knows just what they're in for. Oh yes, with that mouth of his, he could melt a saint. Great work Starshine, another excellent chapter to this wonderful fic, thanks.
Now she's finally got the picture. No need to act with he's wonderful mouth on hers, he could melt a saint. Another excellent chapter to this story, thanks.
Typical Buffy! Wench! Poor Spike, being released without warning. Thats gotta hurt.
lol...well that's our buffy, isn't it? *sigh*...go spike, though, at least he did convince her...can't wait to see how this goes
LOL. Spike could have had on the floor in another 30 seconds.
Great chapter, and a lovely kiss too.
Esther
01/21/2007 09:36 am
Chapter 3
Am totally loving this!! All three chapters were fantab and can't wait for the next one!
kim
01/21/2007 06:23 am
Chapter 3
Love how he gets to be the know-it-all.
I hope they'll be smart enough to do dis-invites and not meet up at the school.
I hope they'll be smart enough to do dis-invites and not meet up at the school.
Did the spell backfire to get both of them to lose their memories like that? And Angelus's true happiness is Drusilla. That's a fact since she makes him feel strong and doesn't talk back.
Thanks :-)
05/01/2010 04:36 am
Chapter 2
spuffy chick
07/21/2008 07:11 am
Chapter 2
good job!
OH that was good.
Serenity
03/17/2007 02:16 am
Chapter 2
Chapter was very well written and although I usually do not enjoy reading about A/D pairings, this one was better than most.
sirc
03/03/2007 09:24 pm
Chapter 2
Great chapter
Dolau
02/18/2007 09:15 pm
Chapter 2
Very well written Angelus/Drusilla dynamic. His actions gave me a 3-dimensionel Angelus and not just an evil cliché.
"Sending her thoughts of safety, love, and tortured babes, he immediately sensed her emotions lighten.".... sweet and kinda adoreable in a really messed up way.. LOL
"Sending her thoughts of safety, love, and tortured babes, he immediately sensed her emotions lighten.".... sweet and kinda adoreable in a really messed up way.. LOL
Pin
02/09/2007 06:42 pm
Chapter 2
Great explanation of the shift in Angel's and Dru's reality. Like the way you handle Angel's confusion and planning. Really well done transtional chapter.
clarityfades
02/05/2007 11:42 am
Chapter 2
oracleholly,
wonderful chapter...interesting that angelus remembers nothing of his "souled" days. hmm, i wonder, will this help spuffy defeat him and dru? or hinder them? off to ch. 3!
wonderful chapter...interesting that angelus remembers nothing of his "souled" days. hmm, i wonder, will this help spuffy defeat him and dru? or hinder them? off to ch. 3!
Well it certainly seems like angelus is back with a vengance, even if he doesn't remember going away. I wonder how he will respond to the news of how he's been spending the last century. Thankfully Xander managed to move Kendra out of the way before Dru could kill her
No wonder Spike grabbed Buffy, he knew what would happen once Angelus got started with Dru, he'd never get her back. Thanks OH, excellent POV from Angelus.
Ok the first link for Irish terms is not working but I checked out the second and a great number of those terms/sayings are pretty dead on. (My last name is Hannagan so that should clue you in a bit as to my having a clue as to what I'm talking about)
Anyhoo, loved the way Angelus/Dru are portrayed.
Anyhoo, loved the way Angelus/Dru are portrayed.
that history was very well done, very informative, fills in a lot of details i was wondering about...excellent job on this update, love
Great chapter.
Nice chapter
Oh I love it... evil Angelus and batty Dru.. sounds good to me
Very interesting alternative take on the events. Looking forward to more bonding.
Cool. Thanks. :-)
05/01/2010 04:20 am
Chapter 1
spuffy chick
07/21/2008 02:16 am
Chapter 1
i liked this chapter...
OH I wonder what she is going to say. And I am glad the Joyce invited him in.
Serenity
03/17/2007 02:04 am
Chapter 1
Great start! Everyone's personalities were captured brilliantly. Can't wait to read the rest!
sirc
03/03/2007 09:16 pm
Chapter 1
Oh, I loved this! It's great to read it again
Dolau
02/18/2007 08:57 pm
Chapter 1
Awesome carachterizations.. Love how Giles seem to really know what to blame on Spike (!!!):
"Spike had taken the only thing that resembled a bed by claiming the sofa, and Giles had no difficulty adding that to the long and lengthy list of items to be held against the vampire." ... LOL
And love Joyces :"actions speaks louder than words Mr. Giles".. You really nailed the diff. caracters.
"Spike had taken the only thing that resembled a bed by claiming the sofa, and Giles had no difficulty adding that to the long and lengthy list of items to be held against the vampire." ... LOL
And love Joyces :"actions speaks louder than words Mr. Giles".. You really nailed the diff. caracters.
Pin
02/09/2007 02:46 pm
Chapter 1
Great start! Interesting changes in the premise that should create lots of new opportunities for new directions. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. THanks!
clarityfades
02/05/2007 11:33 am
Chapter 1
ooh...a new and interesting take on the ritual...i like, i like a lot! poor spike, no matter what, dru is a big ol' ho! and spike the hero...to us, at least. great chappie, off to read ch. 2
Cas
01/29/2007 06:21 am
Chapter 1
Okay, took a bit to get the story line in my head...
Interesting that Spike would save Buffy. You have to love how he changes when directly confronted with Joyce, even if his mouth gets him into trouble on a regular basis. I wonder if Buffy will take him up on his offer, and how he's going to get out of that house without getting staked.
Good beginning BSB. I especially liked Xander. You did an excellent job of portraying him. Poor Joyce, she really understands now that Buffy's not crazy. It's all alot for her to deal with. I noticed that he didn't say anything about Dru! Excellent start, thanks.
Oooooh.... so intriguing. How does this round robin thing work? Are there a certian grouping of you ladies that will post or is it gonna be a free for all and you tag whomever you wish to write the next chapter?
*sneaking in here to answer that question* First of, this is not BSB but Dia speaking. I'll explain why in a second.
This story was written a loooong time ago, and posted on the original, first Bloodshedverse.
BSB had the idea, and Oracleholly organized the whole thing. We let her know that we were interested, and she assingned us a chapter and a timeframe. The whole thing was planned through carefully before we started. We would send our finished chapter to BSB and she'd post them.
Since that was the only RR we ever had on the BSV, and because watching other RRs has convinced me that without a certain ammount of organization you will only ever end up with WIPs, I didn't inclued a RR feature into the BSV script.
We're re-posting this under a normal account, which means that the reviews will all end up in the same place. (And that would be the reason no one is replying to them.) If this was a new fic, I'd give all the involved authors access to this account, but with many of them not even being around anymore (at least not on the BSV), I didn't bother.
Oh yes, I was gonna explain why I'm the one replying here: Right now only Always_jbj (Who's kind enough to do all the work and post the daily chapters.) and I have access to this account.
Hope that answers your questions. We weren't gonna reply to the reviews here, but I couldn't just ignore your question.
This story was written a loooong time ago, and posted on the original, first Bloodshedverse.
BSB had the idea, and Oracleholly organized the whole thing. We let her know that we were interested, and she assingned us a chapter and a timeframe. The whole thing was planned through carefully before we started.
We would send our finished chapter to BSB and she'd post them.Since that was the only RR we ever had on the BSV, and because watching other RRs has convinced me that without a certain ammount of organization you will only ever end up with WIPs, I didn't inclued a RR feature into the BSV script.
We're re-posting this under a normal account, which means that the reviews will all end up in the same place. (And that would be the reason no one is replying to them.) If this was a new fic, I'd give all the involved authors access to this account, but with many of them not even being around anymore (at least not on the BSV), I didn't bother.
Oh yes, I was gonna explain why I'm the one replying here: Right now only Always_jbj (Who's kind enough to do all the work and post the daily chapters.) and I have access to this account.
Hope that answers your questions. We weren't gonna reply to the reviews here, but I couldn't just ignore your question.
YAY for Spike taking the initiative here and being the one to instigate the taking down of Dru and Angel.
Man, Spike is in trouble. Joyce is definitely going to make him shape up.
Ooops forgot to review...my bad excellent start - I love snarky Spike!
oooh i wanna know what happens next
fantastic read, thank you. xander, red and giles at their very best.
oh wow...very intriguing start...i love this chapter, love the characterizations...can't wait to see what buffy says
Nice beginning, looking forward to reading more.
kim
01/19/2007 10:57 am
Chapter 1
Oooo, I like that Spike has the "high ground", as it were. Buffy owes him BIG time.
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