Animal Nature by beanie

Trevor Clarke
12/09/2008 12:49 am
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really good 11 chapters honey im so proud of you they were very very good and i hope that when we get back home i can encourage you to write more ok i love you and im so happy that you followed your heart and decided to write all of this muah i love you my angel

Cate
08/21/2008 03:13 pm
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That was such a gorgous chapter. Please Update!

elizabeth
09/11/2007 08:09 am
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i love it gimme more
i always wondered why she never saw what he could be

08/24/2007 07:46 pm
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very good chapter, thank you.

08/23/2007 05:30 pm
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Nice to see that dying helps one achieve clarity of thought; even if it takes awhile to get over the whole "my friends ripped me out of Heaven" confusion/resentment problem.

08/19/2007 03:44 am
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I am just glad that at least on some level Giles is seeing what could be happening btwn Buffy and Spike. And could someone just shut Xander up?? Awesome chapter.

platinumgoddess
08/18/2007 06:00 pm
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NOOOOOOoooooo!!! That can't be all! There's got to be more!

Jasbrico
08/18/2007 05:58 pm
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I'm so glad you're back! I really like where you're going with this story! More Spuffy please!

08/18/2007 12:44 pm
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I love how Buffy is being so honest with Spike, and it's high time Xander got a reality check. He thinks his way is the only way!

08/18/2007 10:07 am
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Great chapter.

08/18/2007 09:02 am
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well "i know" will have to do for now..at least it's a step, since before she never admitted that she believed it ... great chapter, love

clarityfades
08/18/2007 06:29 am
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yea for update! really like the growth of spuffy's relationship...and the convo about heaven and if she'll tell dawn. really liked her admitting his love for her. excellent chappie!

Esther
08/16/2007 02:34 am
Answers Lead to Questions         
Absolutely loved it!! So glad that you put that tidbit about the Slayer's power/demon essence in there--maybe it'll get Buffy to see Spike even better. Can't wait for more!

07/18/2007 11:45 pm
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That confession was long overdue.

07/18/2007 07:08 am
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Well, they all know who she feels comfortable with, now don't they, and I love it! She does have Spike and he'll help her through this, just like everything else. All she has to do is listen to that little voice of reason inside her. Thanks for the update, really enjoying this, wonderful chapter.

Izzy
07/18/2007 03:16 am
Answers Lead to Questions         
I love how Spike is so tender with Buffy in this fic, showing that side of a soulless being's love. I always liked stories that went into the source of the Slayer's power, which was why I liked the little growling for dominance with Spike and feral Buffy early on.
I'm glad Buffy isn't in denial about Spike anymore. Too, I like that Spike is the one Buffy told about Heaven. I can't wait to see his reaction to the Scoobies after seeing the pain they put his beloved Slayer in. Violence? Those scathing and true words of his? I hope Willow and Xander are made to understand exactly how selfish and arrogant they were, and how much control they expect to hold over Buffy. Giles is surprisingly understanding and I hope he stays around for learning about Buffy's origins and how that affects Spike and how they could react to each other.
Please update soon! I'm really enjoying this story so far and hope to go on.

07/17/2007 06:54 pm
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Oh that was great, at least Giles knows where she went, maybe it is because that is where he found her that morning. I wonder what her friends really say about that.

I hope Spike can help her it must be a shock even to him where she was.

MOre please

fangfaceandrea
07/17/2007 04:33 pm
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Oh now the cat's out of the back. and I loved Buffy's reaction to the SDcoobies. she has every rigth to be angry. Can't wait for more.

07/17/2007 01:40 pm
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Great chapter. I'm glad Buffy admittet to being in Heaven, if only to Spike.

07/17/2007 07:33 am
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looking forward to her dear friends finding out. very good read, thank you.

07/17/2007 05:07 am
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well at least she finally admitted it to someone, and i'm glad it was spike..the others are clueless, except for giles, who seems to be taking it rather well...perhaps he'll be more of an ally to them in this fic...great chapter, love, looking forward to more

07/17/2007 03:22 am
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Thanks for the update. Great chapter.

clarityfades
07/17/2007 02:25 am
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ooh, glad she told him. can't wait til the scoobies find out. another terrific chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

07/17/2007 01:38 am
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Nice turn around from how she revealed it on the show. Glad she's given Spike and his feelings some thought along the way....much smarter Buffy here.

Kathleen

07/13/2007 05:18 am
Thank You         
I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to more soon.

07/10/2007 11:02 pm
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awww, poor spike...he's so uncertain and insecure, and rightfully so considering how she's treated him in the past...but i think he'll soon find that buffy's feelings have changed toward him, for the better...great chapter, love

07/09/2007 12:47 pm
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Great chapter. I'm glad Buffy told Giles and Spike she wanted to be in the crypt.

07/09/2007 05:43 am
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what a lovely read, thank you.. really hope this is not just an interlude in buffy's "normal" behaviour.

07/09/2007 03:41 am
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Just love that she feel so safe with him and doesn't care who knows it. It's the best thing in the world to him, and I'm enjoying his happiness. Looking forward to more, thanks beanie.

07/08/2007 10:12 pm
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Oh I am so glad she standed up to Giles.

07/08/2007 09:00 pm
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The interaction between Spike and Buffy in this chapter was beautiful. Silent actions can say so much. Glad that Giles was told off.

Esther
07/08/2007 08:57 pm
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Aww, great chapter!! Love the intimacy, and hope, that Spike and Buffy have now. I'm also glad that Buffy's not gonna let the Scoobies dictate her life. Can't wait for more!!

07/08/2007 07:45 pm
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Promising development. Groundwork for a relationship is laid. Now to deal with the rabble.

Kathleen

Izzy
07/08/2007 06:49 pm
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I really like this chapter. Spike's silent comforting of Buffy, shown several times in the show, was my favorite part of their interactions. Showing the 'evil, obsessed' vampire was more interested in just holding her, and Buffy wanting to be held, reveals a lot about both of them.
I am looking forward to the Council's explanations about the feral side of the Slayer that was revealed by Buffy. I wonder if we'll get truth or a mixture of truth and plausible lies? I'm just sure the VAMPIRE Slayer is going to learn something that affects everyone, especially her relationship with the vampire! And the hot, leather-wearing one, too, not Tall Dark and Brooding.

07/08/2007 03:42 pm
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I like this Buffy -- I hope she gives the others some of the same treatment that Giles enjoyed!

Pin
07/08/2007 03:33 pm
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Another great chapter. I like Buffy fighting back and not accepting meekly that her friends know best. Thanks!

07/09/2007 03:21 am
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A very poignant scene for her. It showed just how lost she is and how much pain she's in. Love that Spike is the one that can comfort her as much as she can be at this time. Giles is not going to be happy when he finds out about this. Wonderfully done chapter.

07/08/2007 07:41 pm
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She could have used this outlet in canon...get that anger and despair out in the open. Spike wouldn't have had to suffer as much because of her pent up emotions later.

Kathleen

07/06/2007 05:31 am
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excellent read. much needed release of pent up anger and frustration. thanks for the very good update.

07/05/2007 02:07 pm
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That was a really well written chapter. I can't wait to see where the next one goes. There's so much to be done and said and I can't wait to find out what happens.
Jace

07/05/2007 12:57 am
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A powerful chapter! I think it's a good release of the inner angst to pound it outside of oneself instead of holding it in and making things harder for others. Now it's possible for some real communication.

07/04/2007 08:14 pm
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awww, poor thing... i feel kind of bad for that vamp, actually, and glad that spike wasn't on the receiving end of that... great chapter, love, painful and emotional and so sad....can't wait for more

07/04/2007 06:27 pm
...Two Steps Back         
Very sweet.

07/04/2007 03:06 pm
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Excellent chapter -- I'd much rather Buffy took her anguish out in the fight than on Spike's face!

07/04/2007 11:52 am
...Two Steps Back         
Oh that was great, I wonder what will happen to the Vampire she was beating will someone put him out of his misery or will he live one. She was pure animal. I love it, so glad Spike can help her.

07/04/2007 04:26 am
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All I can say is that Spike gave her what she needed. She needed a way to release some of her pain. I am glad that he was there for her.

07/09/2007 03:08 am
One Step Forward...         
Why would the Council help? They all know it would only be for they're advantage if they did. So glad she spoke to Spike, at long last. Great work, thanks.

07/08/2007 07:35 pm
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Well the Slayer part of her was in gear from the start so patrolling makes sense.

Kathleen

07/02/2007 12:03 am
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I eaxpect this won't go down well with the others!

07/01/2007 11:17 pm
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Good - everyone is unhappy. Excellent story.

07/01/2007 10:06 pm
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this change seems abrupt, but the more i think about it, the more i think that's probably how it would be...buffy just taking time to come to terms with everything, and then, even though she's not really "better" yet, logically deciding that she needed to start *acting* better in order to get them to stop being so worried...great chapter, can't wait to see what her interaction with spike and dawn is like now great job, love

Pet
06/30/2007 05:49 pm
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I just found this fic and I love it. Hope you'll update real soon.

06/30/2007 09:01 am
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Makes sense to me, her not talking. If she said anything, the Scoobies would be all over her again.

06/30/2007 07:35 am
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Even though Buffy is not 100% herself yet, I gotta say I'm glad she talking again. Loved the chapter!

06/30/2007 02:32 am
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at least spike realizes she is putting on an act. none of the others would. very good read, thank you.

06/29/2007 11:07 pm
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good chapter. I hope Buffy doesn't have to keep hiding what she feels though.

akarinacj
06/29/2007 10:49 pm
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Nice chapter. ) Please update soon .

06/29/2007 03:57 pm
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Great Story

06/29/2007 11:56 am
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OH I loved it, So they don't know what to do with her so they just leave her in her room, it seems strange that Spike wasn't even up there with her, but I guess Dawn also needs someone.

More please.

07/09/2007 03:02 am
Reinforcements         
Sorry I haven't been reading this but RL had put me behind as well. I hope to read all your updates tonight. Love that it's the Slayer side of her that feels close to Spike. Her demon has reached out to him. Hoping that Giles will continue to support Spike and Buffy's relationship. Very well done, thanks.

07/08/2007 07:32 pm
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Dawn is being very grown up...more than the clueless band of Scoobies.

Kathleen

06/19/2007 03:41 am
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I love Buffy resurrection fics. This one is shaping up nicely. Please, do continue!

Izzy
05/29/2007 03:45 am
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I find the idea of Buffy reacting on Slayer instincts fantastic. Also, she can rely on her feelings about Spike without details of memories and thoughts of denial getting in the way. I find feral Spike or feral Buffy very interesting to read, as they both have a bit of animal that still has emotions in them. Good work and I hope for an update soon!

05/25/2007 05:01 pm
Reinforcements         
GO Giles and put the rest of the Scoobies in their place. And I just love how for Buffy right now it is just all about feeling safe first with Spike and then with Dawn. That is really what they all get.

05/24/2007 08:28 pm
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very good chapter thank you. somewhat surprised by a reasonable giles, but definitely enjoyed it.

05/24/2007 08:25 pm
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I'm glad the Scoobies got scolded, and that Spike was allowed to stay.

05/24/2007 08:16 pm
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Nice portrayal of Giles. Loved the update!

ella
05/24/2007 05:32 pm
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A great update. Can't wait to find out how Buffy's situation will develop. Will she come back to "normal" soon or will it take lots of time? When she does, what's her reaction to the Scoobies? Can't wait!

05/24/2007 04:14 pm
Reinforcements         
Well that went unexpectedly smoothly! But Giles really needs to get to the bottom of this.

05/24/2007 12:33 pm
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OH I love it, can't wait to see what happens next. Why wouldn't Buffy be comfortable with Spike right now she is scared and feels weak and she can sense the power in Spike.

05/24/2007 04:34 am
Reinforcements         
well i'm glad none of the scoobies actually tried to separate them, though i'm not sure how long that will last...and i like your giles...not quite trusting spike fully, but willing to give him a chance to help buffy...great chapter, love, looking forward to more

05/24/2007 04:33 am
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Glad to see a rather sympathetic Giles here...
Dawn isn't completely annoying, either. (Amazing!)
I liked Spike feeling comfortable in the house until the others appeared - sounded so right for him.

07/08/2007 07:29 pm
Family         
Loved those scenes on the show...nice they weren't interrupted by Xander's pizza plans and everyone talking over each other in your take on it.

Kathleen

07/01/2007 11:10 pm
Family         
Naughty writer - you should have let Spike give her that bath.

05/24/2007 04:04 pm
Family         
Absolutely loving this -- Spike and Dawn are doing really well.

Esther
04/28/2007 05:55 am
Family         
*sniffles* This was fantab!! I love the idea of Spike/Buffy/Dawn being a family so much and this just got me all teary-eyed just wishing for it. Absolutely great chapter, hon, and can't wait for more!!

04/25/2007 11:58 pm
Family         
Yup, those are his girls and he will do everything to help them. Wonderful chapter, thanks.

04/21/2007 02:26 pm
Family         
Spike seemed to be working himself into a frenzy with the doubts and fears that buffy will go back to hating him. I'm glad he seemed to gain a measure of calm at the end with his realization that he would do whatever he can to help them because they are his family. Buffy seems to be settling down now that it's just them, if her allowing Dawn to wash her is any inclination.

04/19/2007 03:35 pm
Family         
awwww....i'm glad she's trusting him so much, allowing him to help her so far...can't wait to see how she recovers, excellent chapter, love

04/19/2007 12:56 pm
Family         
I'm really enjoying the tender interactions between Spike and Buffy. Great update!

04/19/2007 12:35 pm
Family         
The last paragraph pretty much sums up Spike. Now, let's see how the Scoobies can muck things up further.

hotlipedjen
04/19/2007 10:26 am
Family         
Great update!

Jessica
04/19/2007 08:46 am
Family         
This was a lovely little chapter. I think Spike is more right than he thinks. At least about them being a family. I think that a feral Buffy trusting both Dawn and Spike says that. More please.

04/19/2007 07:01 am
Family         
spike understands what is needed, but the scoobies will not. very good read, thank you.

smlcspike
04/19/2007 04:37 am
Family         
Oh I love it, has she actually said anything to him or just being near him.

anon462
04/19/2007 04:08 am
Family         
Very good!!! Looking forward to more.

07/08/2007 07:25 pm
Fall from Grace         
Ya know....that tower bit Buffy pulled after the resurrection should have tipped off the Scoobies that it wasn't hell she was saved from. Why would she be trying to go back if it had been hell?

Just catching this story. Enjoying it and your take on a variation.

Kathleen

07/01/2007 11:06 pm
Fall from Grace         
I want to slap Willow - she never means to. You captured her perfectly.

05/24/2007 04:02 pm
Fall from Grace         
Please strike Xander mute or something.

04/09/2007 10:36 pm
Fall from Grace         
I'm glad Buffy seems to be opening up to Dawn at least. With her reliance on Spike she seems to be regaining some ties to this world. Tara was smart to recommend them leaving as they have all clearly dealt with enough tonight

04/09/2007 06:03 am
Fall from Grace         
why do i believe that xander will not listen to dawn's “Xander, shut up.” and he will definitely not heed anya's "Ah, Xander, grow up.” fun read, thank you

04/08/2007 04:59 am
Fall from Grace         
I like the way Feral Buffy seems to know who her real friends are.

MARGARET
04/08/2007 02:22 am
Fall from Grace         
THANKS, GREAT START! LOVE ANYA"XANDER, GROW UP"

04/08/2007 12:55 am
Fall from Grace         
It cost Spike some broken bones but at last they are both save for now. Xander is very hostile towards Spike even if he was the only one Buffy let near her. Well that was the reason for his hostility this day I guess.
Having caught up I'm looking forward to more

04/07/2007 03:20 pm
Fall from Grace         
hmmm...xander might be presenting a problem, later, eh? but at least the others are at least wise enough to allow buffy the comfort she needs from spike...i like this version of willow, much less hateful and annoying than the season 6 canon version...
and poor buffy, it breaks my heart to see her like this, too...poor spike, too, dawnie needs to do something about his back...he needs blood or something, because that tower is a pretty high fall..
great chapter, love, very much enjoyed it and looking forward to reading more

smlcspike
04/07/2007 01:16 pm
Fall from Grace         
OH this is great, I wonder why it is only Spike she wants right now.
Love it more please.

04/07/2007 12:06 pm
Fall from Grace         
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more.

Jessica
04/07/2007 09:27 am
Fall from Grace         
I'm so glad that she trusts Spike now. And this was such a great chapter. I found Buffy hissing at Willow to be very funny, probably more than I should have. lol More please.

hotlipedjen
04/07/2007 08:12 am
Fall from Grace         
Glad to see the update!

04/07/2007 06:15 am
Fall from Grace         
I'd like to be the first to say "Go Anya!". I wonder if Buffy knows in some way who did this to her? Guess I'll just have to wait and see.

04/07/2007 05:48 am
Fall from Grace         
Anya had it right. Xander needs to get for "HIS" obsession with her over before he can say anything about Spike. Hope Giles doesn't start in on him too. Thanks for the update, keep up the great work.

Esther
04/07/2007 05:45 am
Fall from Grace         
Great update!! Love that Buffy's trusting Spike and Dawn, and that Tara's aware of it. So happy to see that Willow's not all arrogant with her magic, either. Can't wait for more!

anon462
04/07/2007 05:41 am
Fall from Grace         
This alternate reality is so different from canon, but it is a believable reality. Very well done!!!

Anna
04/07/2007 03:49 am
Fall from Grace         
Great job. I love the way Buffy showed her recognition of Dawn. That was sweet. Great job, protective Spike always makes me happy.

Tamara
04/07/2007 03:27 am
Fall from Grace         
Great chapter. Good on Tara and Anya forkeeping thier significant others from making things worse.

Kate
04/07/2007 02:15 am
Fall from Grace         
Great chapter. I'm really loving the AU take on S6 so far. Thanks for posting another chapter!!

07/01/2007 11:01 pm
Lost and Found         
Good Xander speech. Love Anya and Spike, of course.

05/24/2007 03:59 pm
Lost and Found         
Lovely that she's listening to Spike.

04/09/2007 05:53 am
Lost and Found         
good job spike. can't take the swaying tower as to much of a threat (it is chapter 3.) good read, thank you.

04/08/2007 04:54 am
Lost and Found         
Evil cliffhanger.

04/08/2007 12:27 am
Lost and Found         
I'm glad Spike talked her into coming down again. The tower has a bad timing too.

smlcspike
04/07/2007 01:08 pm
Lost and Found         
Oh I love it.

anon462
04/07/2007 05:11 am
Lost and Found         
Good. Good. Very Good!!!

nightshift
03/16/2007 12:17 pm
Lost and Found         
Hopefully the Scoobies will leave well enough alone and not get so pushy if Buffy's so scary.

Jessica
03/16/2007 08:44 am
Lost and Found         
That was an evil place to leave it. Loved the update though. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this story. More please.

03/13/2007 08:34 am
Lost and Found         
Nothing much is ever easy for him is it? Just glad she's gone back to him and hopfully without the tower falling down, with them in it. The story's really coming along, thanks for the update.

Esther
03/13/2007 07:06 am
Lost and Found         
Eeep!!! Bad cliffy!! Great update, but please---I beg you---don't leave it there. More soon, please?

03/13/2007 06:13 am
Lost and Found         
Great chapter. Good that Buffy didn't jump. Now they just have to get off teh tower before it falls.

03/13/2007 05:21 am
Lost and Found         
I'm so glad Spike found Buffy. Loved the chapter!

Kim
03/13/2007 12:49 am
Lost and Found         
Good story,
grr... I always thought that Xander was a jacka$$ for not letting Anya tell anyone of their engagement and her dying her hair blonde during that time makes me wonder if Xander was -completely- over his borderline obsessive attitude over buffy.

03/13/2007 12:23 am
Lost and Found         
awwww, how very sweet...so glad he managed to talk her down...lovely chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next

07/01/2007 10:57 pm
Buffy:MIA         
Nice fight with the fab friends. What idiots they are. Anya is very funny.

05/24/2007 03:54 pm
Buffy:MIA         
Surprisingly sensible Dawn -- but Xander? Words fail me. Please let them get what they deserve.

04/09/2007 05:40 am
Buffy:MIA         
you definitely have xander down pat. good to see dawn taking charge. very good update, thank you.

04/08/2007 04:50 am
Buffy:MIA         
LOL at Anya. Perfect.

04/08/2007 12:19 am
Buffy:MIA         
Buffy is very afraid of her feelings.. Spike calming her didn't take last long because of this. ~ The only one that was helpful was Dawn. Good that Willow didn't lie because she was responsible.

smlcspike
04/07/2007 01:02 pm
Buffy:MIA         
I love how Dawn took charge.

anon462
04/07/2007 05:01 am
Buffy:MIA         
I really do like your voice in this story. It was amazing the way Xander was behaving. He, along with the others did a spell to raise the dead, brought her back feral, left her in her coffin, and he takes an attitude with Spike because Buffy the feral slayer got away???

02/20/2007 08:39 pm
Buffy:MIA         
calling giles seems like a good idea...poor spike, why are they always so hateful to him...and anya's comment, darkly hilarious "we could just follow the trail of dead bodies" lol great chapter, love

Munchkin
02/20/2007 07:52 pm
Buffy:MIA         
Ah, an update at last. Saddly it was kind of short. I got really excited when I saw the update though.

Still interested in what happens next. Actually I'm more then interested, it is a driving obsession of need. So what happens next?

02/20/2007 06:20 pm
Buffy:MIA         
Aww... Poor Spike's nose, It's a shame Buffy ran away. I hope Spike finds her again. Loved Dawn's take charge attitude. Great chapter!

02/20/2007 01:57 pm
Buffy:MIA         
Oh pooh, that didn't last. I was hoping that he'd be the lonely one to get through to her, Well now that the others are helping, maybe she'll calm down enough for Spike to help her again. Glad you've updated this story, thanks.

02/20/2007 12:24 pm
Buffy:MIA         
Great chapter. Good that Dawn took charge and sent the others out to find Buffy.

Jessica
02/20/2007 11:20 am
Buffy:MIA         
Loved the chapter. I can't wait to see how Buffy will react to the Scoobies since she is all feral. Ooh! Maybe she will hurt Xander to make up for him being an idiot. It doesn't make sense for him to be mad at Spike for Buffy running away when he totally screwed up his job of making sure demons didn't mess up the spell. Can't wait for more.

02/20/2007 08:17 am
Buffy:MIA         
Really great chapter. Lots of confusion and desperation. Gotta love Dawn showing that Summers backbone.

02/20/2007 07:52 am
Buffy:MIA         
Yep, typical Xander. We screwed up, so let's smear the blame around to anyone else we can. I'm enjoying this story so far...looking forward to more.

Esther
02/20/2007 04:25 am
Buffy:MIA         
Ooh, I'm liking this, especially the idea of Buffy's inner Slayer being feral. Can't wait for more!

02/20/2007 01:59 am
Buffy:MIA         
Yea! More please!

But hey - why was Buffy sitting on Spike's lap? What was going on there & how did that happen? Or did I miss something?

sandyrah
02/20/2007 01:58 am
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Great chapter. I am really looking forward to new updates. I like the idea of this story, and I haven't really read any like it. Good work.

04/08/2007 04:47 am
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Like the concept - LOL at Spike asserting dominance and Buffy accepting. That was great.

04/08/2007 12:13 am
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That's why Buffy let her demon take over. So Spike's demon could go through ... I like the start, a lot

smlcspike
04/07/2007 12:57 pm
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Oh I love it.

anon462
04/07/2007 04:49 am
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Really like this first chapter!!! Interesting Buffy POV.

sirc
03/06/2007 10:53 am
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well done

01/24/2007 09:16 pm
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very good read, thank you. sure the scoobies are going to love buffy responding to spike.

01/23/2007 09:20 pm
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oooh I can't wait to see how this tur.ns out

Nova
01/23/2007 09:12 pm
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good start, cant wait to see what happens next

01/22/2007 09:58 pm
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Wonderful start! I look forward to reading more!

01/22/2007 03:11 pm
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Awesome! I've always wanted to see this story done - looking forward to it

Lou
01/22/2007 10:23 am
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Ooh -- growly dominance. I like it.

01/22/2007 07:19 am
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awww...poor buffy...this is a very intriguing premise...can't wait to see where you take it!

01/22/2007 04:54 am
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Oh.. Me likey!!!!!

This is really great! Please continue soon!

Badia
01/22/2007 03:57 am
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Nice start.

01/22/2007 03:49 am
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Very interesting start. Buffy gave in to Spike a little easily though. I'd like to see some of her internal monologue. If the Slayer is going to just accept Spike's dominance, I'd like to know why and how. It's a great concept. I'm eager for more.

01/22/2007 03:49 am
A Rude Awakening         
Very interesting start. Buffy gave in to Spike a little easily though. I'd like to see some of her internal monologue. If the Slayer is going to just accept Spike's dominance, I'd like to know why and how. It's a great concept. I'm eager for more.

Max
01/22/2007 02:29 am
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Good start

Aurelia
01/22/2007 01:13 am
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More, more, more. I demand more chapters lol. Seriously, update soon please.

Jessica
01/22/2007 01:10 am
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This one looks promising. I can't wait for more. ; )

01/22/2007 01:07 am
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I like this. Her demon submitting to him, wow! This should be very interesting. Very good first chapter, can't wait for more. Thanks for posting.

Munchkin
01/22/2007 12:08 am
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Well you can't just leave me hanging there, I expect more soon. In fact I'm ancy for it. You catch me, hook - line - and sinker.

I have to say that this is a very interesting story line and I can't wait to see how things develop. Things could get very... what is the word I want... absorbing. I'll be looking back often to see if there is more.

Esther
01/21/2007 11:54 pm
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Ooh, you've got me beyond interested now. Can't wait for another!!

PyroChilde
01/21/2007 11:49 pm
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Interesting start, I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.

01/21/2007 11:47 pm
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Fabulous beginning. Can't wait to read more. Love Buffy responding to Spike's demon.

Dolau
01/21/2007 11:08 pm
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Captured. Well written and seems to be a great plot with Spike being dominant to feralBuffy. Looking forward to read where you'll take it.

Tamara
01/21/2007 10:41 pm
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Feral! Buffy is definitely an interesting way to go. Great start.

01/21/2007 10:21 pm
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OOO Spike, alpha vamp. I love it.

01/21/2007 10:18 pm
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Exciting beginning, looking forward to more.

autumn
01/21/2007 09:56 pm
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That was very cool. Good start. I can't wait for more.