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Animal Nature by beanie Trevor Clarke 12/09/2008 12:49 am More Than a Monster really good 11 chapters honey im so proud of you they were very very good and i hope that when we get back home i can encourage you to write more ok i love you and im so happy that you followed your heart and decided to write all of this muah i love you my angel Cate 08/21/2008 03:13 pm More Than a Monster That was such a gorgous chapter. Please Update! elizabeth 09/11/2007 08:09 am More Than a Monster i love it gimme more i always wondered why she never saw what he could be very good chapter, thank you. Nice to see that dying helps one achieve clarity of thought; even if it takes awhile to get over the whole "my friends ripped me out of Heaven" confusion/resentment problem. I am just glad that at least on some level Giles is seeing what could be happening btwn Buffy and Spike. And could someone just shut Xander up?? Awesome chapter. platinumgoddess 08/18/2007 06:00 pm More Than a Monster NOOOOOOoooooo!!! That can't be all! There's got to be more! Jasbrico 08/18/2007 05:58 pm More Than a Monster I'm so glad you're back! I really like where you're going with this story! More Spuffy please! I love how Buffy is being so honest with Spike, and it's high time Xander got a reality check. He thinks his way is the only way! Great chapter. well "i know" will have to do for now..at least it's a step, since before she never admitted that she believed it ... great chapter, love :) clarityfades 08/18/2007 06:29 am More Than a Monster yea for update! really like the growth of spuffy's relationship...and the convo about heaven and if she'll tell dawn. really liked her admitting his love for her. excellent chappie! Esther 08/16/2007 02:34 am Answers Lead to Questions Absolutely loved it!! So glad that you put that tidbit about the Slayer's power/demon essence in there--maybe it'll get Buffy to see Spike even better. Can't wait for more! That confession was long overdue. Well, they all know who she feels comfortable with, now don't they, and I love it! She does have Spike and he'll help her through this, just like everything else. All she has to do is listen to that little voice of reason inside her. Thanks for the update, really enjoying this, wonderful chapter. Izzy 07/18/2007 03:16 am Answers Lead to Questions I love how Spike is so tender with Buffy in this fic, showing that side of a soulless being's love. I always liked stories that went into the source of the Slayer's power, which was why I liked the little growling for dominance with Spike and feral Buffy early on. I'm glad Buffy isn't in denial about Spike anymore. Too, I like that Spike is the one Buffy told about Heaven. I can't wait to see his reaction to the Scoobies after seeing the pain they put his beloved Slayer in. Violence? Those scathing and true words of his? I hope Willow and Xander are made to understand exactly how selfish and arrogant they were, and how much control they expect to hold over Buffy. Giles is surprisingly understanding and I hope he stays around for learning about Buffy's origins and how that affects Spike and how they could react to each other. Please update soon! I'm really enjoying this story so far and hope to go on. Oh that was great, at least Giles knows where she went, maybe it is because that is where he found her that morning. I wonder what her friends really say about that. I hope Spike can help her it must be a shock even to him where she was. MOre please fangfaceandrea 07/17/2007 04:33 pm Answers Lead to Questions Oh now the cat's out of the back. and I loved Buffy's reaction to the SDcoobies. she has every rigth to be angry. Can't wait for more. Great chapter. I'm glad Buffy admittet to being in Heaven, if only to Spike. looking forward to her dear friends finding out. very good read, thank you. well at least she finally admitted it to someone, and i'm glad it was spike..the others are clueless, except for giles, who seems to be taking it rather well...perhaps he'll be more of an ally to them in this fic...great chapter, love, looking forward to more :) Thanks for the update. Great chapter. clarityfades 07/17/2007 02:25 am Answers Lead to Questions ooh, glad she told him. can't wait til the scoobies find out. another terrific chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! Nice turn around from how she revealed it on the show. Glad she's given Spike and his feelings some thought along the way....much smarter Buffy here. Kathleen I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to more soon. awww, poor spike...he's so uncertain and insecure, and rightfully so considering how she's treated him in the past...but i think he'll soon find that buffy's feelings have changed toward him, for the better...great chapter, love :) Great chapter. I'm glad Buffy told Giles and Spike she wanted to be in the crypt. what a lovely read, thank you.. really hope this is not just an interlude in buffy's "normal" behaviour. Just love that she feel so safe with him and doesn't care who knows it. It's the best thing in the world to him, and I'm enjoying his happiness. Looking forward to more, thanks beanie. Oh I am so glad she standed up to Giles. The interaction between Spike and Buffy in this chapter was beautiful. Silent actions can say so much. Glad that Giles was told off. Esther 07/08/2007 08:57 pm Thank You Aww, great chapter!! Love the intimacy, and hope, that Spike and Buffy have now. I'm also glad that Buffy's not gonna let the Scoobies dictate her life. Can't wait for more!! Promising development. Groundwork for a relationship is laid. Now to deal with the rabble. Kathleen Izzy 07/08/2007 06:49 pm Thank You I really like this chapter. Spike's silent comforting of Buffy, shown several times in the show, was my favorite part of their interactions. Showing the 'evil, obsessed' vampire was more interested in just holding her, and Buffy wanting to be held, reveals a lot about both of them. I am looking forward to the Council's explanations about the feral side of the Slayer that was revealed by Buffy. I wonder if we'll get truth or a mixture of truth and plausible lies? I'm just sure the VAMPIRE Slayer is going to learn something that affects everyone, especially her relationship with the vampire! And the hot, leather-wearing one, too, not Tall Dark and Brooding. I like this Buffy -- I hope she gives the others some of the same treatment that Giles enjoyed! Pin 07/08/2007 03:33 pm Thank You Another great chapter. I like Buffy fighting back and not accepting meekly that her friends know best. Thanks! A very poignant scene for her. It showed just how lost she is and how much pain she's in. Love that Spike is the one that can comfort her as much as she can be at this time. Giles is not going to be happy when he finds out about this. Wonderfully done chapter. She could have used this outlet in canon...get that anger and despair out in the open. Spike wouldn't have had to suffer as much because of her pent up emotions later. Kathleen excellent read. much needed release of pent up anger and frustration. thanks for the very good update. That was a really well written chapter. I can't wait to see where the next one goes. There's so much to be done and said and I can't wait to find out what happens. Jace A powerful chapter! I think it's a good release of the inner angst to pound it outside of oneself instead of holding it in and making things harder for others. Now it's possible for some real communication. awww, poor thing... :( i feel kind of bad for that vamp, actually, and glad that spike wasn't on the receiving end of that... :P great chapter, love, painful and emotional and so sad....can't wait for more :) Very sweet. Excellent chapter -- I'd much rather Buffy took her anguish out in the fight than on Spike's face! Oh that was great, I wonder what will happen to the Vampire she was beating will someone put him out of his misery or will he live one. She was pure animal. I love it, so glad Spike can help her. All I can say is that Spike gave her what she needed. She needed a way to release some of her pain. I am glad that he was there for her. Why would the Council help? They all know it would only be for they're advantage if they did. So glad she spoke to Spike, at long last. Great work, thanks. Well the Slayer part of her was in gear from the start so patrolling makes sense. Kathleen I eaxpect this won't go down well with the others! Good - everyone is unhappy. Excellent story. this change seems abrupt, but the more i think about it, the more i think that's probably how it would be...buffy just taking time to come to terms with everything, and then, even though she's not really "better" yet, logically deciding that she needed to start *acting* better in order to get them to stop being so worried...great chapter, can't wait to see what her interaction with spike and dawn is like now :) great job, love :) Pet 06/30/2007 05:49 pm One Step Forward... I just found this fic and I love it. Hope you'll update real soon. Makes sense to me, her not talking. If she said anything, the Scoobies would be all over her again. Even though Buffy is not 100% herself yet, I gotta say I'm glad she talking again. Loved the chapter! at least spike realizes she is putting on an act. none of the others would. very good read, thank you. good chapter. I hope Buffy doesn't have to keep hiding what she feels though. akarinacj 06/29/2007 10:49 pm One Step Forward... Nice chapter. :-)) Please update soon . Great Story OH I loved it, So they don't know what to do with her so they just leave her in her room, it seems strange that Spike wasn't even up there with her, but I guess Dawn also needs someone. More please. Sorry I haven't been reading this but RL had put me behind as well. I hope to read all your updates tonight. Love that it's the Slayer side of her that feels close to Spike. Her demon has reached out to him. Hoping that Giles will continue to support Spike and Buffy's relationship. Very well done, thanks. Dawn is being very grown up...more than the clueless band of Scoobies. Kathleen I love Buffy resurrection fics. This one is shaping up nicely. :) Please, do continue! Izzy 05/29/2007 03:45 am Reinforcements I find the idea of Buffy reacting on Slayer instincts fantastic. Also, she can rely on her feelings about Spike without details of memories and thoughts of denial getting in the way. I find feral Spike or feral Buffy very interesting to read, as they both have a bit of animal that still has emotions in them. Good work and I hope for an update soon! GO Giles and put the rest of the Scoobies in their place. And I just love how for Buffy right now it is just all about feeling safe first with Spike and then with Dawn. That is really what they all get. very good chapter thank you. somewhat surprised by a reasonable giles, but definitely enjoyed it. I'm glad the Scoobies got scolded, and that Spike was allowed to stay. Nice portrayal of Giles. Loved the update! ella 05/24/2007 05:32 pm Reinforcements A great update. Can't wait to find out how Buffy's situation will develop. Will she come back to "normal" soon or will it take lots of time? When she does, what's her reaction to the Scoobies? Can't wait! Well that went unexpectedly smoothly! But Giles really needs to get to the bottom of this. OH I love it, can't wait to see what happens next. Why wouldn't Buffy be comfortable with Spike right now she is scared and feels weak and she can sense the power in Spike. well i'm glad none of the scoobies actually tried to separate them, though i'm not sure how long that will last...and i like your giles...not quite trusting spike fully, but willing to give him a chance to help buffy...great chapter, love, looking forward to more :) Glad to see a rather sympathetic Giles here... Dawn isn't completely annoying, either. (Amazing!) I liked Spike feeling comfortable in the house until the others appeared - sounded so right for him. Loved those scenes on the show...nice they weren't interrupted by Xander's pizza plans and everyone talking over each other in your take on it. Kathleen Naughty writer - you should have let Spike give her that bath. Absolutely loving this -- Spike and Dawn are doing really well. Esther 04/28/2007 05:55 am Family *sniffles* This was fantab!! I love the idea of Spike/Buffy/Dawn being a family so much and this just got me all teary-eyed just wishing for it. Absolutely great chapter, hon, and can't wait for more!! Yup, those are his girls and he will do everything to help them. Wonderful chapter, thanks. Spike seemed to be working himself into a frenzy with the doubts and fears that buffy will go back to hating him. I'm glad he seemed to gain a measure of calm at the end with his realization that he would do whatever he can to help them because they are his family. Buffy seems to be settling down now that it's just them, if her allowing Dawn to wash her is any inclination. awwww....i'm glad she's trusting him so much, allowing him to help her so far...can't wait to see how she recovers, excellent chapter, love :) I'm really enjoying the tender interactions between Spike and Buffy. Great update! The last paragraph pretty much sums up Spike. Now, let's see how the Scoobies can muck things up further. hotlipedjen 04/19/2007 10:26 am Family Great update! Jessica 04/19/2007 08:46 am Family This was a lovely little chapter. I think Spike is more right than he thinks. At least about them being a family. I think that a feral Buffy trusting both Dawn and Spike says that. More please. spike understands what is needed, but the scoobies will not. very good read, thank you. smlcspike 04/19/2007 04:37 am Family Oh I love it, has she actually said anything to him or just being near him. anon462 04/19/2007 04:08 am Family Very good!!! Looking forward to more. Ya know....that tower bit Buffy pulled after the resurrection should have tipped off the Scoobies that it wasn't hell she was saved from. Why would she be trying to go back if it had been hell? Just catching this story. Enjoying it and your take on a variation. Kathleen I want to slap Willow - she never means to. You captured her perfectly. Please strike Xander mute or something. I'm glad Buffy seems to be opening up to Dawn at least. With her reliance on Spike she seems to be regaining some ties to this world. Tara was smart to recommend them leaving as they have all clearly dealt with enough tonight why do i believe that xander will not listen to dawn's “Xander, shut up.†and he will definitely not heed anya's "Ah, Xander, grow up.†fun read, thank you I like the way Feral Buffy seems to know who her real friends are. MARGARET 04/08/2007 02:22 am Fall from Grace THANKS, GREAT START! LOVE ANYA"XANDER, GROW UP" It cost Spike some broken bones but at last they are both save for now. Xander is very hostile towards Spike even if he was the only one Buffy let near her. Well that was the reason for his hostility this day I guess. Having caught up I'm looking forward to more :) hmmm...xander might be presenting a problem, later, eh? but at least the others are at least wise enough to allow buffy the comfort she needs from spike...i like this version of willow, much less hateful and annoying than the season 6 canon version... and poor buffy, it breaks my heart to see her like this, too...poor spike, too, dawnie needs to do something about his back...he needs blood or something, because that tower is a pretty high fall.. :( great chapter, love, very much enjoyed it and looking forward to reading more :) smlcspike 04/07/2007 01:16 pm Fall from Grace OH this is great, I wonder why it is only Spike she wants right now. Love it more please. Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more. Jessica 04/07/2007 09:27 am Fall from Grace I'm so glad that she trusts Spike now. And this was such a great chapter. I found Buffy hissing at Willow to be very funny, probably more than I should have. lol More please. hotlipedjen 04/07/2007 08:12 am Fall from Grace Glad to see the update! I'd like to be the first to say "Go Anya!". I wonder if Buffy knows in some way who did this to her? Guess I'll just have to wait and see. Anya had it right. Xander needs to get for "HIS" obsession with her over before he can say anything about Spike. Hope Giles doesn't start in on him too. Thanks for the update, keep up the great work. Esther 04/07/2007 05:45 am Fall from Grace Great update!! Love that Buffy's trusting Spike and Dawn, and that Tara's aware of it. So happy to see that Willow's not all arrogant with her magic, either. Can't wait for more! anon462 04/07/2007 05:41 am Fall from Grace This alternate reality is so different from canon, but it is a believable reality. Very well done!!! Anna 04/07/2007 03:49 am Fall from Grace Great job. I love the way Buffy showed her recognition of Dawn. That was sweet. Great job, protective Spike always makes me happy. Tamara 04/07/2007 03:27 am Fall from Grace Great chapter. Good on Tara and Anya forkeeping thier significant others from making things worse. Kate 04/07/2007 02:15 am Fall from Grace Great chapter. I'm really loving the AU take on S6 so far. Thanks for posting another chapter!! Good Xander speech. Love Anya and Spike, of course. Lovely that she's listening to Spike. good job spike. can't take the swaying tower as to much of a threat (it is chapter 3.) good read, thank you. Evil cliffhanger. I'm glad Spike talked her into coming down again. The tower has a bad timing too. smlcspike 04/07/2007 01:08 pm Lost and Found Oh I love it. anon462 04/07/2007 05:11 am Lost and Found Good. Good. Very Good!!! nightshift 03/16/2007 12:17 pm Lost and Found Hopefully the Scoobies will leave well enough alone and not get so pushy if Buffy's so scary. Jessica 03/16/2007 08:44 am Lost and Found That was an evil place to leave it. Loved the update though. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this story. More please. Nothing much is ever easy for him is it? Just glad she's gone back to him and hopfully without the tower falling down, with them in it. The story's really coming along, thanks for the update. Esther 03/13/2007 07:06 am Lost and Found Eeep!!! Bad cliffy!! Great update, but please---I beg you---don't leave it there. More soon, please? Great chapter. Good that Buffy didn't jump. Now they just have to get off teh tower before it falls. I'm so glad Spike found Buffy. Loved the chapter! :) Kim 03/13/2007 12:49 am Lost and Found Good story, grr... I always thought that Xander was a jacka$$ for not letting Anya tell anyone of their engagement and her dying her hair blonde during that time makes me wonder if Xander was -completely- over his borderline obsessive attitude over buffy. awwww, how very sweet...so glad he managed to talk her down...lovely chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next :) Nice fight with the fab friends. What idiots they are. Anya is very funny. Surprisingly sensible Dawn -- but Xander? Words fail me. Please let them get what they deserve. you definitely have xander down pat. good to see dawn taking charge. very good update, thank you. LOL at Anya. Perfect. Buffy is very afraid of her feelings.. Spike calming her didn't take last long because of this. ~ The only one that was helpful was Dawn. Good that Willow didn't lie because she was responsible. smlcspike 04/07/2007 01:02 pm Buffy:MIA I love how Dawn took charge. anon462 04/07/2007 05:01 am Buffy:MIA I really do like your voice in this story. :) It was amazing the way Xander was behaving. He, along with the others did a spell to raise the dead, brought her back feral, left her in her coffin, and he takes an attitude with Spike because Buffy the feral slayer got away??? calling giles seems like a good idea...poor spike, why are they always so hateful to him...and anya's comment, darkly hilarious "we could just follow the trail of dead bodies" lol :) great chapter, love :) Munchkin 02/20/2007 07:52 pm Buffy:MIA Ah, an update at last. Saddly it was kind of short. I got really excited when I saw the update though. Still interested in what happens next. Actually I'm more then interested, it is a driving obsession of need. So what happens next? Aww... Poor Spike's nose, It's a shame Buffy ran away. I hope Spike finds her again. Loved Dawn's take charge attitude. Great chapter! Oh pooh, that didn't last. I was hoping that he'd be the lonely one to get through to her, Well now that the others are helping, maybe she'll calm down enough for Spike to help her again. Glad you've updated this story, thanks. Great chapter. Good that Dawn took charge and sent the others out to find Buffy. Jessica 02/20/2007 11:20 am Buffy:MIA Loved the chapter. I can't wait to see how Buffy will react to the Scoobies since she is all feral. Ooh! Maybe she will hurt Xander to make up for him being an idiot. It doesn't make sense for him to be mad at Spike for Buffy running away when he totally screwed up his job of making sure demons didn't mess up the spell. Can't wait for more. Really great chapter. Lots of confusion and desperation. Gotta love Dawn showing that Summers backbone. Yep, typical Xander. We screwed up, so let's smear the blame around to anyone else we can. I'm enjoying this story so far...looking forward to more. Esther 02/20/2007 04:25 am Buffy:MIA Ooh, I'm liking this, especially the idea of Buffy's inner Slayer being feral. Can't wait for more! Yea! More please! :) But hey - why was Buffy sitting on Spike's lap? What was going on there & how did that happen? Or did I miss something? sandyrah 02/20/2007 01:58 am Buffy:MIA Great chapter. I am really looking forward to new updates. I like the idea of this story, and I haven't really read any like it. Good work. Like the concept - LOL at Spike asserting dominance and Buffy accepting. That was great. That's why Buffy let her demon take over. So Spike's demon could go through ... I like the start, a lot :) smlcspike 04/07/2007 12:57 pm A Rude Awakening Oh I love it. anon462 04/07/2007 04:49 am A Rude Awakening Really like this first chapter!!! Interesting Buffy POV. sirc 03/06/2007 10:53 am A Rude Awakening well done :) very good read, thank you. sure the scoobies are going to love buffy responding to spike. oooh I can't wait to see how this tur.ns out Nova 01/23/2007 09:12 pm A Rude Awakening good start, cant wait to see what happens next Wonderful start! I look forward to reading more! Awesome! I've always wanted to see this story done - looking forward to it :) Lou 01/22/2007 10:23 am A Rude Awakening Ooh -- growly dominance. I like it. awww...poor buffy...this is a very intriguing premise...can't wait to see where you take it! :) Oh.. Me likey!!!!! This is really great! Please continue soon! :) Badia 01/22/2007 03:57 am A Rude Awakening Nice start. Very interesting start. Buffy gave in to Spike a little easily though. I'd like to see some of her internal monologue. If the Slayer is going to just accept Spike's dominance, I'd like to know why and how. It's a great concept. I'm eager for more. Very interesting start. Buffy gave in to Spike a little easily though. I'd like to see some of her internal monologue. If the Slayer is going to just accept Spike's dominance, I'd like to know why and how. It's a great concept. I'm eager for more. Max 01/22/2007 02:29 am A Rude Awakening Good start Aurelia 01/22/2007 01:13 am A Rude Awakening More, more, more. I demand more chapters lol. Seriously, update soon please. Jessica 01/22/2007 01:10 am A Rude Awakening This one looks promising. I can't wait for more. ; ) I like this. Her demon submitting to him, wow! This should be very interesting. Very good first chapter, can't wait for more. Thanks for posting. Munchkin 01/22/2007 12:08 am A Rude Awakening Well you can't just leave me hanging there, I expect more soon. In fact I'm ancy for it. You catch me, hook - line - and sinker. I have to say that this is a very interesting story line and I can't wait to see how things develop. Things could get very... what is the word I want... absorbing. I'll be looking back often to see if there is more. Esther 01/21/2007 11:54 pm A Rude Awakening Ooh, you've got me beyond interested now. Can't wait for another!! PyroChilde 01/21/2007 11:49 pm A Rude Awakening Interesting start, I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops. Fabulous beginning. Can't wait to read more. Love Buffy responding to Spike's demon. Dolau 01/21/2007 11:08 pm A Rude Awakening Captured. Well written and seems to be a great plot with Spike being dominant to feralBuffy. Looking forward to read where you'll take it. :-) Tamara 01/21/2007 10:41 pm A Rude Awakening Feral! Buffy is definitely an interesting way to go. Great start. OOO Spike, alpha vamp. I love it. Exciting beginning, looking forward to more. autumn 01/21/2007 09:56 pm A Rude Awakening That was very cool. Good start. I can't wait for more. | |||
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