Half and half by Eternal_red

Belle116
07/30/2010 02:24 pm
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 I love this story. It is great how you made the split personalities. I really enjoyed it. It shows the vulnerabilities of the characters and it makes for an awesome story. Great job. 

IT
03/26/2008 08:12 am
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I've just found this fic and I'll definitely be following it to see what happens.  The premise is great.  I like how the two Buffys and two Spikes interact, with each other and with themselves.  
Great ending to this chapter "... you made another bloody bear!"  lol 
Always a thrill to find that someone has read a fic out of curiosity - even if it has languished untouched for a while. I will be back to this one when I can. I promise.

Deb
01/25/2008 03:43 am
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An imaginative fic. Looking forward to more updates.
Thanks Deb. Doing a bit of to-ing and fro-ing between this and my other fic but will be back soon with a new chapter.

01/19/2008 07:01 am
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great way to end a chapter. thank you for the fun read.
Thank you Vladt. Its nice to be posting again - not to mention checking for reviews - always love that bit

01/14/2008 01:13 pm
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This fic has me laughing out loud in places, between "he’d look so cute wearing the uniform" and "What the f...! I don’t believe it, you made another bloody bear!" I'm having hysterics; brilliant; please update again soon!!!
Soon I promise - in the meantime why not try The Truce - unless its not your cup of tea?

01/14/2008 11:17 am
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It would be a bear! LOL

Glad to see this updated. VERY glad that Buffy is letting Spike know it isn't only William she cares for and finds attractive.

Kathleen
Yup my beta raised her eyebrows a bit at the bear too! Thanks pfeifferpack - tis good to be back

All4Spike
01/14/2008 01:05 am
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I'm loving this fic more and more. just enough humour to liven up the suspense. More please..
Glad you like the balance of humour and suspense - I don't do it consciously - its just how it appears when I write it down. More soon I promise. What do authors say? real life has been getting in the way but things are settling down now. thanks for sticking with this.

01/14/2008 12:13 am
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I can't believe I hadn't found this story until now! This is so great. I have to go back and read all the reviews on my favorite chapters and see others' ideas for the plot twists. I always loved the idea of Spike's demon caring for people rather than him being 'tamed' or on a leash like so many thought of Angelus. I wonder how Dawn will react to seeing him in demon form? After all, she spent a summer without a sister being protected by a mourning vampire with no soul. I also thought the Angelus-Angel-Liam theory was great and explained clearly but didn't veer off from the plot.
Really hope this updates soon, it sounds great. Dawn is wonderful and I'm glad Fred is getting a good part too. Good work, keep it up!
Am delighted that you're enjoying this Izzy and thank you for the lovely review. Am glad you like Dawn - I think she deserves a few layers too.

01/14/2008 01:09 pm
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Yeah, more Dawn; love the character, and always enjoyed her interactions with Spike; can't wait til she's reunited with her sister! Great chapter, but no Spuffy! Need Spuffy!! LOL!
Yikes you're an impatient bint! Thanks though

08/31/2007 05:51 am
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Good for Dawn. What a fitting tribute to Spike, Docs. I love that writers continue to show Dawn as a smart and resourceful girl. Spike helper her so much. Great update, thanks.
Thanks Verda.

08/30/2007 04:11 am
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this lovely chapter should have a banner of black,pink and purple dawn. very good , thank you.
Thanks.

BT_
08/29/2007 12:56 am
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ok, so I wrote this big long review...then the computer ate it. It even came back with "thank you for leaving a review" or whatever it says to acknowledge receipt. Oh well. In a nutshell:
I'm so glad to see an update on this fic! Cool reason you have invented for the whole split thing. Really wondering if you even CAN seperate the girl from the Key.
On the last chapter - you seem to say that William was Angel's first soul, that Angel has lost his soul a few times since he was first cursed (and how did he get it back??) and that the soul he had when Buffy first met him was William's. This seems mutually exclusive...where did I get mixed up?
Hopefully this one makes it to the database...
Hi BT. Thanks for your review - even if it is the abridged version. Sorry if the soul thing has you stumped. In my imagination It was William's soul that was cursed into Angelus by the gypsies and stayed with him till his night of passion with Buffy. He was then resouled by Willow with a different soul just before getting sucked into Acathla (work with me here) Once Angel had settled in Los Angeles he lost his soul twice more - once as a result of a 'Happy' pill and again by the magic of a Shaman. I like to think that whatever soul he possessed at the time took the opportunity to scarper and let another one take its place. Well that's my theory and I'm trying to stick to it. xx

08/28/2007 07:33 pm
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Oooo the plot thickens! So the amulet was sent so that Dawn would wear it huh? That makes sense. Knox is a bad boy no matter what universe, heh? LOL.

Really happy to see this updated again. Great job. Love the mythology you are putting together here.

Kathleen
Have always had a soft spot for Knox - and Holden for that matter. Thanks for your kind words kathleen.

08/28/2007 06:44 am
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Great chapter.
Thanks Inzey

08/28/2007 05:14 am
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oh i'm so glad she got away..but what happened to fred? :( *bites nails* great job with all the characters in this chapter, perfectly written, love :)
Blushes. Thanks DreamsofSpike, the more characters I introduce - the more I break into a cold sweat. Thanks for continuing to review it helps keep me going.

veronica
08/28/2007 04:39 am
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great chapter! I missed this fic, seriously. Hopefully Dawn will be able to get to Buffy, without any interference from one Mr. Angelus!
Hi Veronica. Glad you missed it. Now where oh where can Angelus be?

kim
08/28/2007 01:50 am
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Go, Dawnie!!

Run, run, run!

poor Fred.....
poor things are all going to be exhausted by the time I've finished with them. Thanks Kim.

08/28/2007 01:42 am
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Just love the chapter. And I loved the imagrey of the outfit that dawn is wearing. And what in the world will she do now that she is out of the cage. Awesome chapter and really the senior partners and Harlen just never learn.
Love that you love the chapter - actually I got the outfit from trawling thru a few goth clothing sites. You too could look like Dawn - if you really wanted to.

08/28/2007 01:14 am
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Ah - finally caught up with the rest of this. I had no idea I'd missed so much of it. Very imaginative and a good mixture of BtVS and AtS characters. The demon and the Slayer are such fun! And without their demons Buffy and William seem to be able to conduct actual conversations that don't involve yelling and fighting. Who knew? LOL
Thanks Slaymesoftly its lovely to hear from you. I know B & W are being pretty reasonable to each other considering. Must be an age thing - I don't feel angst like I used to, will have to watch that.

01/14/2008 01:04 pm
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Great explaination for Angel's personality; also loved that it was William's soul that Buffy fell in love with; fantastic! Only two chapters left to read! :( Sob!
Now don't cry - you'll make me feel all guilty

07/18/2007 06:53 pm
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What a fantastic revelation about Angel's first soul and those that followed. It made sense that Liam's soul couldn't keep Angelus at bay and now William/Spike know that they were meant to be with Buffy from the beginning, love it! Leave it to Harmony to think it was a party, great work, now to find out what's happened to Dawn and Fred and if Dawn was seperated from the Key. Really enjoying this, hope you can update again soon. Thanks for sharing this fantastic tale.
Wanted it to be William's all along but had to try and justify all the stupid things Angel did without blaming our beloved hero too much. I find that I can't be too cruel to Harmony but she is so easy to make fun of. Thank you Verda.

Veronica
07/09/2007 09:21 pm
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very original take here... i'm really loving this story! can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks veronica am trying to come up with something new - but really they're just trapped in a big old haunted house with a touch of Jekyll and Hyde thrown in.

06/01/2007 10:11 am
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Why do I think meeting 'separated into her component pieces' Dawn is going to be extremely interesting? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Hope I don't disappoint you too much when I get to Dawn in the next chapter, which, shock, gasp, I have finally posted.

05/30/2007 11:21 pm
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oh no...that worries me about dawnie...what if *she* was separated into her parts? though i suppose it wouldn't make much difference but to just make her not the key...right? hmmm....
as for the deal with angel's soul, very interesting and original take on the subject :) great job, love :)
Thanks as always DreamsofSpike and glad you liked the soul thing. As you'll see in my next chapter my idea of half and half has become a little flexible - but then I did cut Angel into thirds (if not fourths).

05/30/2007 06:45 pm
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Nice. Your convolutions are wonderful.
The new soul didn't love Buffy, so he could go to LA and do his own thing.
SO cool.
I'm hoping Fred got Dawn into the science lab and turned off the cameras.
Thanks BT_ am hoping my convolutions don't leave me tied up in knots before the end of the fic.

05/30/2007 04:07 am
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love the chapter. And it was so eye opening with William's soul being the first to be bound to Angelus. They have worked through that thus far, but now I am scared for Dawn.
Dawn's a feisty little thing but yes its time to give her some attention too. Thanks for the soul comment too.

05/30/2007 03:49 am
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very, very good read, thank you. very evil chapter ending, thanks for that also.
Glad you're still enjoying it. Can't help ending on cliffhangers, they just seem to appear. Wouldn't mind but when other authors do it to me I just jump up and down in frustration.

05/30/2007 03:05 am
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Oh oh! Is there a green blob of energy out there somewhere slamming doors!?!?

Lovely update. Never saw that idea about Angel's first ensouling (although the idea of it being a different soul than Liam's is one I've entertained as well). Whew! That was quite a bomb to drop on William and Buffy!

Kathleen
Slamming doors isn't in her best interests right now, but you're right about the green energy. Glad you liked the soul twist in the plot, had to think up a damned good reason why Buffy could have fallen for Angel in the first place. As ever, thank you Kathleen.

kim
05/30/2007 12:09 am
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Well....that's an interesting revelation.

Aww, our rescuers have a full plate....I think Fred and Dawn are probably making a good team, though.
Thanks Kim - hope my next chapter answers some of your questions.

01/14/2008 12:54 pm
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Oh, awesome scene; I can't wait to hear how you explain the differences in the mess that is Angel/Angelus/Liam; just love how both halves of Buffy love both halves of Spike/William, and vice versa; can't wait for more.
Just hope you believe my explanations!

04/18/2007 06:33 pm
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What a hoot to find Angel divided into thirds LOL. Makes perfect sense actually. You can tell the difference too whereas Spike and William have similarities enough to blur. Yes, what a treat that the one Buffy assumed to be Angelus was really Liam. Laughing myself silly over that one. So true!!

Also loved this:Spike spoke quietly. "Zombies, pet, they won't bother us"

With a pang of sympathy for the Wolfram and Hart staff who would spend eternity cleaning up after their evil masters, Buffy brushed past the sorry assortment of once-people and caught up with the others.


Since my husband and I own and operate a commercial cleaning company I can assure you that we, like our employees, are indeed Zombies! LOL How did you ever know??? Rather like the term once-people actually. We find that we are usually invisible too BTW.

Wonderful update.
Kathleen
Am amazed you're still speaking to me after that Zombie dig - but am very grateful for your lovely review regardless.

04/18/2007 06:06 pm
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Of course, Angel's soul was a cursed one where Spike's was his own, hence William is in tact. Poor Buffy now she gets to see the real truth about him. Good thing she's already got Spike and Angel's part of her past, but it still hurts. Nope, it's pretty clear what Liam said, potty mouth. Great update, looking forward to more of this story, thanks.
More revealed in next chapter - hope you can suspend your disbelief enough to like it. Thanks as always Verda.

04/18/2007 06:00 pm
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Well, isn't Liam just a class act. Let's hope this finally puts paid to the whole Angel/Angelus are two *different* people thing.
I love being playful - hope my next chapter doesn't have you running for the hills. Thanks Nightshift.

04/18/2007 07:30 am
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perhaps they can save liam and and angelus, and forget angel. at least both angelus and liam are genuine. the same cannot be said for angel. just a thought, love. fun read, thank you.
Thanks Vladt, seems we share some of the same 'issues' with Angel.

kim
04/18/2007 01:49 am
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No more illusions! Ha ha ha....
Poor Buffy the shocks just keep coming. Thanks Kim

04/17/2007 11:39 pm
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lol....what a rude awakening for buffy, to see what angel was really like before...maybe it will change a few things for her as far as spike is concerned...great chapter, love ;)
So sorry not to have replied sooner. Thank you for responding like the lovely reviewer you are. Oh and I love your fic by the way.

04/17/2007 10:37 pm
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Figures that Angel would have three personalities.
Great chapter.
Um three... personalities?
Thank you Inzey

01/14/2008 12:25 pm
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oh, loved the "bitch" comment; that was great; one of my favorite scenes with Spike was that little countdown!! Awesome chapter; great story, really unique!
Out. For. A. Walk.... Bitch was one of my very favourite lines - just had to refer to it somehow - so glad you are enjoying this

04/10/2007 12:41 am
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Just so giddy that I saw this chapter and I just LOVE IT. It was great that William calmed her down. And love that Spike was getting the Slayer cleaned up. And I am on their side mostly about Angel. Loved the look of the Slayer trying to get at William.
Letitia thank you and thanks also for your lovely reviews of my story on Spuffy Realm - even before I put some sensible punctuation in it!

04/09/2007 10:52 pm
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I'm glad Buffy and William got to have a sweet moment together instead of going off on hormones. Liked the banter between her, Spike and William. Her suggestion to find Angel went over better than I thought it would, of course I'm thinking that might change if she gets in any danger
I don't think William and Spike need worry overmuch. Think Buffy and William deserve a few sweet moments - but maybe that's just my age!
Thanks Deb

04/09/2007 06:48 am
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awww, liking this story lots...they're both so protective, of both buffies :) lol to her explanation of why they had to rescue angel...great chapter, love :)
Glad you like it DreamofSpike and I adore your fics so your reviews mean a lot

04/08/2007 09:35 pm
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Glad to see this updated. I am really tickled with the Slayer....she's a hoot and Spike knows just how to handle her. Nice that she wants William and Spike both just as Buffy does. This little adventure will go a long way towards sorting out just who feels what for who.

Look forward to more.

Kathleen
I know that I should be plotting every inch of this carefully but it really is forming as I type (the folly of a first time writer I suspect). Hope my untangling of relationships works out in the end - thanks Kathleen

BT_
04/08/2007 07:13 pm
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So many directions this could go! I'm enjoying the interplay amongst Spike/William/Buffy/Slayer. It's interesting that the Slayer is all "Grr-Ugh" and Spike is so articulate. Lead on - I'm happily following! :)
A new reviewer - thank you BT. The Slayer is sort of Beer Bad Buffy only with more beer and much more attitude. Still a brain in there though.

04/08/2007 07:37 am
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wonderful read, luv. thank you. the last three paragraphs ending with "And I'll be helping him," are hysterical.
I'm glad my attempt at humour is working for you (giggles hysterically) thanks Vladt

04/07/2007 03:09 am
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Leave it to Spike to think of putting her in his favorite colors, love it! Isn't William human too? Why would the slayer want to kill him ? And wouldn't he need to go to the bathroom as well for a change? Better and better, thanks sweetie.
You got the colour thing thank you. In my strange imagination William is in human form but is held together by mystical means - else he'd be a pretty unimpressive corpse after the split. So no bathroom breaks required!

Kate
04/07/2007 02:20 am
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Hee! Love the little smack at the end...William does have a bit of Spike in him, doesn't he? *wg* Great story and awesome chapter!! Love how the two sides of Spike & Buffy connecting like-to-like yet each couple is learning from the other. I also like that Buffy is learning that she became such a great slayer because of who she is and not just because she's a slayer. Great revelation for her.
yes I liked the little smack bit too - now I have to decide whether to take that idea further later - i'm definately no Jolynn though!

thanks Kate

01/14/2008 04:05 am
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Loved it; always figured Buffy's inner Slayer saw her match in Spike; glad to see I'm not the only one! Awesome chapter; can't wait to see the rest!
I always felt that the Slayer was attracted to Spike - Glad you agree too.

04/07/2007 02:35 am
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Guess she forgot about her slayer self. Spike may be a demon but his love for her still shines through. I liked the idea of the three of them with the whipped cream but that's not an option anymore since the slayer claimed him. Does it count to only say the words and not exchange blood? Guess we'll find out if the slayer tries to claim him as well. Wonder if Spike will feel guilt once he awakes up and sees Buffy. He does love all of her as well. Can't wait to see how they all react to this new development. Hate that I missed this when you posted it but glad I have a second chapter to read now. Great chapter, thanks.
Glad you caught me again - never seem to choose a quiet time to post - get knocked of the page every time - still can't complain as I'm an avid reader too

03/18/2007 12:04 am
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Well, well I wasn't expecting that! I was a little disappointed in Buffy for rejecting Spike, but seems the slayer came and took care of it for him. It's telling that Buffy decided to claim William so that the slayer side of herself couldn't have them both. Not to mention that in each case she was the one starting the claiming ritual.
Wanted to muddle up the relationships a little to make it more interesting and for Buffy to finally sort out what she wants. Nothing like a rival in the mix for her to get her priorities sorted out. thank you for reading and especially for reviewing

nightshift
03/16/2007 11:53 am
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Possessive little wench, isn't she? Nothing like a little competition to get her going.
Thanks.

03/15/2007 03:34 pm
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Oooo a foursome *G*! They all need to claim each other and make it official once and for all that all sides of each are accepted and wanted. I Really wanted to wack Buffy for hurting Spike. Glad you put it in the story that the demon had given up everything for her and died for her only to have her reject and hurt him......bitca!

Love the update.

Kathleen
Thanks.

03/15/2007 06:36 am
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Poor demon-Spike being rejected by Buffy, luckily Slayer-Buffy came and wanted to play.
Thanks.

03/15/2007 06:07 am
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wow...intense and sexy and funny all at once...excellent writing, love, can't wait to see what happens now that they've claimed each other :)
Thanks.

03/15/2007 04:27 am
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so buffy. one moment she loves them both. next she panics at the demons caress. then she's jealous of her slayer taking "her" demon. loved the read, thank you.
Thank you.

dj
03/15/2007 04:08 am
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love it, update soon
Thanks.

01/14/2008 04:02 am
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ha ha ha, a threesome with the demon!!! LOL!! Oh, that's awesome! Bravo! You don't read that in every fic!
My what a naughty mind you have - bit like mine really

03/07/2007 03:05 pm
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This is definately becoming more interesting. Love two Spikes! Of course Spike would know where William would take Buffy. Let her enjoy this. It's been a long time for all of them. Can't wait to see the next chapter and if she'll give in to them. Watching for your next update, great chapter, thanks.
Thank you.

03/07/2007 05:24 am
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well, she just finished think that she loved them equally. very good read, thank you.
Thanks again Vladt - but you know what they say about the path of true love

03/07/2007 12:09 am
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lol...how did *that* happen? not that she would mind that much...great chapter, loved it...
I'm pretty sure I wouldn't mind (drools over keyboard). thank you DoS

03/07/2007 12:08 am
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Hmm so it seems Spike found them and decided to join the party. I have to say Buffy is a lucky girl for that. This is a situation to be enjoyed and savored. Now let's hope they do that instead of moralizing or worrying about the future
um ...

03/06/2007 11:27 pm
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Oh what a nice turn of events for Buffy....Two for the price of one LOL. Oh yeah!

I always wondered at the zipless F^&k betweeen Spike and Harmony...he never loosened his pants at all (talk about magic sex) in that scene! *G*

Interesting how you have split the hybrids. Like how Spike knows all the secret places at W&H too.

Excellent update.

Kathleen
yeah - never understood why he could remain celibate for so long and then just drag Harmony off for a quicky. I refuse to believe that he got very far. I know I'm stretching it a bit to have a building within a building but W&H is a very strange place with all sorts of possibilities

sandyrah
03/06/2007 10:02 pm
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(snort) Hee hee. Only Buffy would get into this sort of situation. But it makes you wonder about the whereabouts of the Slayer. . .
Well - if you can just hang on till the next chapter - thank you sandyrah

01/14/2008 02:34 am
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Oh, I love where you've gone with this; did NOT see that coming!!! Excellent chapter!
Yep - more twists and turns than a twisty turny thing - thanks SpikesKatMac

03/04/2007 02:30 pm
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Interesting to see Spike and the Slayer sides having such a good time with their spot of violence, while Buffy and Will run for their lives. Angelus really is a moron if he thought Spike would stand back and let Buffy be hurt. Although he seemed ok with inflicting a little blood loss, I'm thinking he wants to be the only demon that gets to experience it.
Yes Angelus is cunning but not too bright when it comes to reading Spike. Don't want buffy and William to be wimps but there lack of demonic strength will mean that they'll have to be extra resourceful to survive

Lou
03/03/2007 12:00 am
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I see the no-punching didn't last! Superb developments. Very clever how the physical differences reflect the characters. Can't wait to see what Angel's like!
Yes - I know that the way I've described them makes them seem like two different species but that's how they appeared in my head so I went with it

03/01/2007 10:15 pm
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twice the fun and probably twice the problems. fun read, thank you.
Thanks Vladt - there are more possibilities with more characters - although they get a bit confusing to identify when writing

03/01/2007 05:31 pm
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oh wow...this is getting *very* interesting!!! love this turn of events, can't wait to see what happens...hope the slayer dusts angelus good...but i hope she doesn't go after spike...i guess i'll just have to wait, won't i? *pouts*
Better not say anything or I'll give the game away! Thanks for continuing with the reviews - they mean a lot to me

03/01/2007 01:16 pm
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Guess that was one way for the Senior Partners to get Angelus back but where is Liam? Wondering about how the pairing is going to go. Both Spike and William love Buffy will they also love the slayer too? I guess they probably do. Isn't this a twist, this will be very interesting, thanks.
yes I'm going to get a bit playful with the pairings - just wait and see

03/01/2007 09:19 am
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Is this the only fic you have written? I am really enjoying it and would love to read any others.
Thank you Bigbird - i'm delighted that you would read other stories if I had them. This is my first but hopefully not my last fic

03/01/2007 06:56 am
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I like the great hybrid split. I like Spike's demon, too. In a weird sort of way. Looking forward to more--this is starting to get weird and I revel in weird.
Well weird you shall have - in spades. Hope this fic doesn't get too unbelievable for people though

03/01/2007 06:30 am
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Split in half? Wonder how that happened and what's going to happen now.
Go Spike the demon, beating up Angelus the demon.
Yep - Angelus deserves a right good thrashing - glad to give it to him!

03/01/2007 03:54 am
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Yes the demon loves Buffy too to the point that it/he agreed to get that soul not knowing what would happen to it/him! Angelus is just NOT capable of caring for anyone or anything. The difference is the man AND the demon.

Interesting twist. Looking forward to further pieces of information. Nice plotting, good character voice.

Kathleen
I completely agree with you - Spike's demon is in a class of his own. Shame Buffy couldn't see the differences before. Thank you Pfeifferpack

dicecanntcry
03/01/2007 03:07 am
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Woah! Now there's a pickle!

More please! :)
And more you shall have - thank you for sticking with me

01/14/2008 01:06 am
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No!!! NO, no no! What are you doing to me???? ARGH!

Can you tell I'm captivated by your story?? Good guess! Can't wait to read the rest!
I just love your enthusiasm - thanks so much

Lou
03/02/2007 09:48 pm
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Excellent chapter. I love the shcck ending.
Didn't set out to end on cliffhangers but they keep appearing anyway - thankyou for reviewing

03/01/2007 10:03 pm
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and they danced. good update, evil cliffie, thanks for both.
thank you Vladt - nice name by the way

03/01/2007 04:23 am
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Good fight. Spike needed to have his butt kicked.
Mmmm do I detect a pattern here - just a small thirst for vengeance?

dicecanntcry
03/01/2007 02:59 am
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WHAT? Spike just cheated on Buffy, again! Where's all the groveling?! lol.
Thanks dicecanntcry. Think Buffy owes Spike one or two apologies too.

02/22/2007 12:01 am
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Wonder what the heck just happened to them, and why it had to happen now when they were just getting to the good part of the reunion
because i'm eeevil!

02/21/2007 05:38 pm
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Gaaahhhhhh What the F*** happened to them??!????!!! Got a feeling they just started one heck of an adventure. Good thing they connected (in their own Spuffy language of pop/whap) before they were sent elsewhere.

‘I’m a complete slut, crush me against your un-beating heart, you sexy bloodsucking beast you’ just BEGS to be made into a Tee-shirt...complete with Spike picture! LOL. I think it would be a sell out.

Lovely update. Intriguing story. Lots of plot hinted at in the lab even before the final paragraph. Clever!

Kathleen

Hmmm T-Shirt now that's a good idea. Already designed a 'Bite Me' one maybe I'll have a go before writerconuk.

Thanks for your lovely review

02/21/2007 02:36 pm
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what???? oh my goodness!! what just happened there? that "too late" does *not* sound good!!! i want to see what's going to happen next!!!! come on, come on, more more more :)
Am writing as fast as my lovely beta will let me!

02/21/2007 01:10 pm
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Hey, that mystical weird-thingy ruined the kiss!
Great chapter.
yes i seem to have developed a bad habit for sneaky cliffhangers. sorry can't help myself.

02/21/2007 09:29 am
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Hoping that you mean that metaphorically and not literally because anything is possible in that place. Kinda surprised with all the seers and witches and warlocks working for them they haven't picked up on Dawns "keyness". Thanks for the quick update. Really enjoying this.
Glad you're enjoying this and as to Dawn... well...

02/21/2007 09:15 am
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Okay, you've really got my attention now. Looking forward to more.
Hope I can keep your attention with the next chapter too. thank you

02/21/2007 08:43 am
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“The ‘I’m a complete slut, crush me against your un-beating heart, you sexy bloodsucking beast you’ kind of statement?”

“See, now you’re getting it.”


LOL...loved this!

The Spuffy fight is so typical of them, why say with words what you can with your fists.

Nice update, thank you.
Am so enjoying doing this. I had no idea writing could be so much fun. thank you for your comments Always.

02/21/2007 08:32 am
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**waves happily**Here I be, commenting like I meant to last chapter. Love the fighting-for-talking thing you had going on. It is so them. I can just see the grins on their eager faces.

Beautiful second chapter, pet. Looking forward to more.
Thank you Spikes_heart and it was a pleasure to 'meet' you the other day. Hope I can keep my characters believable for you

01/14/2008 12:21 am
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Oh my God; can their timing GET any worse??? Just found this story; am going to read the rest of the chapters that are posted; really intrigued by the first chapter; always wondered why all-powerful Willow wouldn't have sensed such a big foul up in the "force" as was shown by Spike's return to corporealism (is that a word???); so glad Buffy came for Spike, but again, her timing???!!! ARGH! Off to the next chapter!
Now if it was all sweetness and light at the beginning it would be pretty boring wouldn't it (smiles wickedly)

Lou
03/02/2007 09:25 pm
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Spike should take a crumb of comfort from the fact that at least Buffy hasn't punched him!
Yes I'm trying for a slightly older and wiser Buffy this time round. Thank you Lou

03/01/2007 04:18 am
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hmmm, pretty lame apology from the Spikester. The author must punish him.
bloodthirsty little thing aren't you! Don't worry - there'll be a few bumps along the road to complete happiness

02/19/2007 08:26 pm
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hilarious opening scene. spike will have to come up with an unique apology. very good read, thanks.
Glad you liked it. took a while to realise that I could use that scene to my advantage.

02/19/2007 06:25 pm
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Great start. Everything seems so much like the way it would have gone....your characters are acting just spot on. Glad you are posting it here!

Kathleen
Thank you. Coming from you that's praise indeed! Am delighted to be posting here.

02/19/2007 10:01 am
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Sometimes Spike deserves to be slapped. I mean, come on! Harmony!
Great beginning, looking forward to more.
Yes naughty Spike, and poor Harmony. She never does get her man!

02/19/2007 08:18 am
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That is a really good place to start. Nothing like continuing on with their scrwed up relationship. Happy that they might have a chance to straighten this out. And of course, Angel would try and send her away or dust Spike. Looking forward to your next update, thanks.
Thank you Verda. There won't be too much Angst. If everything was sweetness and light straight away though then there wouldn't be much to write about.

LadyYashka
02/19/2007 06:16 am
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Good first chapter. I can't wait to see where you go with this one.
Thank you. Lots.

02/19/2007 04:10 am
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WOW this is very good and I can't wait to see the next chapter!!!

P.S. Keep up the great work;)
Am delighted that people are liking it so far. I had no idea that writing could have such nice rewards.

02/19/2007 03:11 am
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Real tough Buffy. He needed a punch in the nose for boffing Harmony. Great start. Need more. Need Spuffy.
I'm Spuffy through and through - and proud of it.

02/19/2007 02:37 am
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Very nice first chapter. Looking forward to more.
Thank you nightshift. Am writing as fast as my little fingers and my wonderful Beta will let me.

02/19/2007 12:38 am
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Thank heaven for Lorne! Very interesting start, I look forward to seeing where they go from here.
Thank you Always.
Hope I can keep you interested.

Jessie-55
02/19/2007 12:05 am
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WOW this is really good keep up the good work!!
Thank you for reviewing Jessie.

02/18/2007 11:35 pm
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It sounds very promising and I really like the way it's written. :)
Looking forward to read more of this!
Glad you like the way I write, am learning as I go - thank you.

Syndyloo
02/18/2007 11:01 pm
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Great start to this story. Can't wait to see what happens next and I hope Angel doesn't interfere too much.
Well Angel... now funny you should say that. Nope, not saying another word.

02/18/2007 10:57 pm
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awwww....he's handling this well so far...and with that beginning, that's a tricky thing indeed...this is fascinating so far, very very good...looking forward to seeing more of this :)
Thank you DreamsofSpike. I didn't want to make Spike a villian really.