Evil Me by Eowyn315

09/19/2012 04:40 am
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Now that's True Love!  It would be interesting to read a follow up after the Scoobies find out about that major consequence.   

03/06/2007 03:32 am
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Great fight. Looks like Dawnie is the really strong one.

03/01/2007 06:18 am
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Yep, leave it to Dawn to not stick with the plan and to leave herself exposed at the same time. Even if it does save the day, she's in for a lecture of epic proportions.
I think maybe the saving the day will lessen the grounding though, don't you? And if she doesn't save the day, well, they'll probably all be dead, so no grounding at all!

03/01/2007 04:10 am
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Wow! Now that was one intense, action-packed chapter! The cliffie is sorta evil. Some of us readers are kinda fragile, ya know. Can't handle the stress of waiting for the next update. :)
Haha, sorry... I have been told I'm a master of the evil cliffie, but I'm good about not making you wait *too* long. See, the next chapter's already up!

time of change
03/01/2007 04:09 am
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Great chapter!
Glad you liked it!

kim
03/01/2007 01:12 am
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Whoa! Go, Dawnie! Saving the two most important people to her...not really something she has to think about.
Yeah... and they've risked their lives for her so many times, it's kind of nice to reverse it for a change.

Cas
03/01/2007 12:51 am
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Well, Angel did provide a useful distraction. And even Dawn is proving useful.
Best thing Angel could do is fall on his ass... besides, people seem to like it when he gets injured. ;)

02/28/2007 11:10 pm
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Oh yeah! The "unholy" triumverate! (unholy in honor of Spike of course). Lovely way to have Dawn do a power boost while still having it be Buffy and Spike joined.

Excellent.

Kathleen
Those three make a great team, don't they? (Who needs the Scoobies?)

Lou
02/28/2007 09:34 pm
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Great fight!
Thanks. I tend to think fight scenes are my weakest point (since I don't know the cool moves or their names). Glad you liked it.

02/28/2007 07:37 pm
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oh my goodness...what did dawnie just do? i hope it helps, whatever she did..that vamp buffy is one scary chick...excellent chapter, still loving this fic very much :)
Thank you so much! Glad you like.

Dawn was part of Willow's original plan... guess we'll see if Buffy's fears were unfounded or not.

02/28/2007 07:09 pm
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Great chapter.
What will happen now that Dawn gave Buffy power?
Heh... you mean *besides* blowing Spike's mind (possibly literally...)?

03/06/2007 03:29 am
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Oh boy a double Buffy cat fight. Can't wait.

Cas
03/01/2007 12:45 am
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Love the fact that Vamp Buffy still hasn't lost her sense of humor!
Yep, just as snarky as ever!

02/27/2007 04:10 pm
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oh man...hope they're ready for this....and i hope that this thing made them *both* stronger, because if it just basically drained spike...oh, that could be bad....*biting nails while waiting eagerly for next chapter*
Heh... uh... well, you remember who we're talking about, right? So it's probably gonna get bad... ;)

02/27/2007 09:41 am
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VampBuffy gets better lines than HumanBuffy. That just isn't right.

I like that you're writing Buffy still extremely protective of Dawn, and that Willow is still not thinking consequences, just the quick fix.
Vamp Buffy gets better lines because she's evil. ;)

Would you believe that in my first draft, the entire fight between Buffy and Vamp Buffy was SILENT? I was so wrapped up in writing the action, I just neglected to write dialogue. Then I went back and read it and went, "That's not right. The quippiest girl in the world is fighting her snarky evil twin, and they don't talk?"

02/27/2007 07:24 am
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very good set up. enjoyed the read, thank you.

02/27/2007 12:43 am
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Oh oh...showtime! Wonder if VampBuffy needs an invitation to this Revello Drive house? I suppose she would.

Glad it turned into Spike and Buffy...I think they can take her.

Wonderful update. Look forward to more.

Kathleen
Yeah, she needs an invitation... that's why Spike figured they'd all be safe if they stayed in the house.

It always ends up being Spike and Buffy, doesn't it? ;-) Whether they can take her... we'll see.

Thanks for the review!

kim
02/27/2007 12:31 am
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Concentrate, guys!!!

Oh, dear....
Heh, you think that will be a problem for Mr. and Mrs. ADD?

time of change
02/27/2007 12:31 am
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Very exciting! I love your dialogue.
Thanks!

07/13/2007 06:53 am
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oh very clever using Dawn as the power source.

07/13/2007 06:41 am
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oh very clever using Dawn as the power source.
Thanks! I thought so. ;) Buffy, on the other hand... not so much.

03/06/2007 03:26 am
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Excellent Anya - she's great.

02/27/2007 07:23 am
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that is a surprise. can hear buffy and spike screaming "no way." very good read, thank you.

02/27/2007 07:19 am
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that is a surprise. can hear buffy and spike screaming "no way." very good read, thank you.
Hey! Stop anticipating my plot points! ;)

Thanks for the review!

02/26/2007 02:50 pm
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oh wow...something tells me buffy's not gonna go for that too easily, and neither is spike...glad angel's on their side, as he so seldom is a good guy in spuffy fics, and it's kind of a refreshing difference...really enjoying this fic, and love how you write anya!! very well done ;)
I don't really write too much Angel as the bad guy... while I was never on the Bangel bandwagon, I don't really dislike the guy (though I do get some amusement out of injuring him...).

And I love writing Anya - she can be difficult, because there's a delicate balance in her frankness that can come off as the author trying too hard - but she can be really fun, too (and she says all the things you wanna say but don't know how).

kim
02/26/2007 09:09 am
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Uh-oh.....somehow, I'm thinking that could go *really* wrong!

Interesting, seeing alterna-Angel.
Ha! Now whatever might make you think that?

02/26/2007 06:14 am
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Great chapter.

02/26/2007 04:12 am
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oooh... this is getting interesting :D :D
"Getting" interesting? You mean it wasn't before? *pouts* ;-) Thanks for the review!

02/25/2007 10:16 pm
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Officially intrigued.
Well, I'm glad it's official! ;-)

02/25/2007 09:33 pm
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Ooooh - interesting development. I love stories that make use of Dawn's latent talents or abilities.

Cas
02/25/2007 09:18 pm
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Aha! Figured it wouldn't be our Angel! But why would Buffy's merging with Dawn rather than Willow et all not incur the first Slayer? Not that I really understood that whole bit anyway. Can't not-Angel make himself useful for once?
Hmmm... didn't mean to confuse you. They're not actually doing the spell from Primeval (as will be evident when you see it done), just using the "merging for more power" concept.

As far as I could understand it, the First Slayer spell required the four components (hand, mind, spirit, heart) - but it didn't matter WHO the four people were, as long as one of them was a Slayer (I assume) because the power doesn't come from the spell's participants, but from the First Slayer.

What Willow's suggesting now is to choose someone with power (i.e. Dawn with all her Key energy) to merge with and use *that person's* power.

Hope that makes sense...

02/25/2007 09:10 pm
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Wow, Willow actually using that big brain of hers to come up with something useful. I like the Anya comments, too. Looking forward to more.

02/25/2007 08:37 pm
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Ooo nice surprise at the end. Everyone will likely think Willow meant Spike, not Dawn. Should be interesting.

Wonderful update.

Kathleen

03/06/2007 03:20 am
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I already wiped the floor with your vampire - Heh heh - everybody knows Spike belongs to Buffy but her. And what is Forehead doing here?
Well, Buffy's kinda swimming the river when it comes to Spike... ;)

02/27/2007 07:14 am
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very good update, thank you. love angel running into the disinvite. would be fun if spike walk passed him into the house.
Heh, don't worry, he'll get there!

zanthinegirl
02/25/2007 02:12 pm
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hee, this is great fun!

02/25/2007 01:59 pm
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Looking forward to more.

02/24/2007 02:01 pm
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Still giggling over that last paragraph. Let's see what the Scoobies can do about vamped Buffy.

02/24/2007 12:11 pm
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Angel? What's he doing here? And again, what's up with vamp-Buffy?
Heh, well... Angel is here because I can't seem to write a Spuffy fic without him. (It's like a disease.) And what's up with vamp Buffy? You'll just have to wait and see!

Cas
02/24/2007 04:05 am
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I'm betting Angel has the wrong Buffy. Great story.
Hmm... that's interesting, curious what you mean by "wrong Buffy." Is it our Angel who's seen vamp Buffy and panicked? Or alterna-Angel, who may or may not know he's not at his Buffy's house?

02/24/2007 02:48 am
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Ah - another player! Nice to know it wasn't "our" Buffy who was turned.

kim
02/24/2007 01:06 am
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Angel knows?

And good instincts on Willow and Spike's part. VampBuffy is like going up against Glory.
She is kind of like Glory, except bitier... and with an intimate knowledge of exactly who Buffy is and how she thinks... which can't bode well for our heroes.

02/23/2007 11:45 pm
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Tee hee....Angel going splat is such a funny visual...sorry but I had to laugh and say thank you.

Wonder how VampBuffy slipped into our dimension? Looking forward to how you go with this well written story. Enjoying it thus far.

Kathleen
Heh, everyone seems to like Angel going splat... if I didn't know better, I'd think you people didn't like him or something. ;-)

02/23/2007 10:25 pm
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oh what's angel doing there? and is it even her angel? this gets better and better, though i gotta say i'm very glad they got buffy out of there before she got killed...wonder how they're gonna stop her double...excellent chapter, love :)
Hmmm... very good questions. ;-) Thanks for the review!

02/23/2007 10:13 pm
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Oh please tell me he hit his butt when he hit that barrier, and that Spike will get to tease him while holding Buffy in his arms.

I'm totally liking this story so far.
Ha! But wouldn't it be more fun if he hit it with his big head and knocked himself unconscious?

time of change
02/23/2007 10:05 pm
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This story is terrific.
Thanks!

03/06/2007 03:15 am
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couldn’t believe they’d mistaken it for the real Buffy - Buffy's friends are idiots aren't they?

02/27/2007 07:02 am
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love buffy's last line. i'm sure she will not heed spike's last line. good update, thank you.

Cas
02/24/2007 04:10 am
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I think she needed a stronger warning, judging by how easily she tore Spike apart. Wonder why the two of them seem to have split wherever it is they are from- and glad to know that there is still regular Buffy to counterbalance the extra vamp Buffy.
Don't worry, we will find out eventually where the timelines split.

02/23/2007 04:22 am
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I hope she realizes that there's potential for two vamp Buffys if she's not careful.
Jeepers creepers, that's a scary thought... wouldn't that just blow poor Spike's mind?

kim
02/23/2007 02:57 am
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Poor Spike...can't win for trying.
But that's why we love him, isn't it? (well, one of the reasons...)

02/22/2007 10:27 pm
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Nice chapter. I really liked the “I have to go… stake myself.”.

02/22/2007 08:42 pm
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surely she knows that if they're dealing with alterna-buffy, alterna-spike must have been the one to turn her!!!! she shouldn't be mean to him about this, it's sooo not his fault!!! looking forward to reading more, love :)
Oh, I think she realizes that alterna-Spike was probably the one to turn her - but she still doesn't really trust this Spike either. I mean, he did recently chain her up and threaten to let Dru eat her unless she admitted to having feelings for him. But she's gonna have to learn to trust him if she wants to get through this...

03/06/2007 03:11 am
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Great Buffy Vampire. I can hardly believe that Spike is running to save the Scoobies. Except Dawn.
I think, even if he doesn't like them, he knows that Buffy - if she weren't a vampire - would feel absolutely horrible if she killed them. Plus, they're not ALL bad... he kinda likes them, 'cept Xander.

Cas
02/24/2007 04:08 am
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Love the glimpse of whats on Spike's mind.

02/22/2007 08:49 pm
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maybe he could warn everybody but harris? very good read, thanks.
*snort* Ha! Nice idea, but I think the others might tell him...

02/22/2007 08:38 pm
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oh man she's mean!! poor spike...i wonder why he doesn't remember turning her...or if he even *did* turn her...i hope she doesn't hurt dawn, or most of her friends (xander and willow can die though :P)

02/22/2007 02:49 pm
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Ooh, me like. This looks very promising, can't wait to see where you're going with it. Spike's reaction was great, the fact that the first thing he did was try and kill her tells us exactly how he feels about vamp!Buffy - and not in a way that can be argued, because it wasn't just something he said. No matter what the Scoobies will think his feelings on the matter are, WE know. Not gonna waste time wondering about Spike's lack of memory, I'll just go with the scenario your summary suggested. ;-) Looking forward to more.
Oh, clever girl, reading the summary. ;-) You know, I've been playing with this story for awhile now, and it didn't occur to me until last night that Spike actually DID turn people and not remember when he was under the control of the First.

02/22/2007 02:14 pm
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he turned her? and doesnt remember?? whatttttttT??????

please update.. i like this beginning :D
"whattttttt" indeed.... ;-)

02/22/2007 12:27 pm
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I think Spike would have remembered if he turned Buffy, so how did this happen?
Not telling...

02/22/2007 10:09 am
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“If this is a game, it isn’t funny. Don’t act like you don’t remember turning me.”


Somehow I don't think that is something Spike would forget!

Wishverse Buffy, maybe?
Interesting idea, but Wishverse Buffy didn't get turned... she was killed by the Master. And it was a neck-snapping, so even if Spike had been there, I doubt he'd have been able to turn her before she died.

02/22/2007 09:37 am
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Must've been one heck of a drunken bender. Or another Buffy from another timeline/universe.
Haha, that would be quite the bender...

kim
02/22/2007 08:50 am
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Ooo, it's a Buffy from another dimension, I bet! No way did our Spike turn her, as that's something he'd never forget.....and it made him ill, so it's not something he'd even want to do at this point.
Hmmm...

07/13/2007 06:53 am
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uh oh...evil buffy. :)

07/13/2007 06:27 am
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uh oh...evil buffy. :)
Heh, that's always a fun time. :)

03/02/2007 10:29 pm
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Uh, hmm! Is she really a vampire? Or what? Can't wait to find out!

zanthinegirl
02/25/2007 02:03 pm
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Woe-- didn't see that one coming!

You have a great character voice BTW. Very believable season 5 Spike!

02/25/2007 01:52 pm
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!! Must read on...

Cas
02/24/2007 04:06 am
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What a place to leave it - glad you've already posted more.

02/22/2007 08:43 pm
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fantastic opening chapter, thank you.

02/22/2007 08:38 pm
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oh my gosh!!!! buffy's a vamp, and apparently a very evil one!!! excellent, fascinating start...looking forward to reading more :)

kim
02/22/2007 03:51 am
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Vampire? in Season 5? Our of the blue?

very evil cliffie!
What do you mean, out of the blue? There've always been vampires on this show!

Ohhhhh, you mean a Buffy vampire? ;-) Well, we've had a vampire version of just about everyone else... except, hmmm... *starts working out Vamp Giles fic* I'm seeing - The Adventures of Spike and Ripper...

Wow, I'm easily distracted.

02/22/2007 03:34 am
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Oh...ouch! Didn't see that coming!
Oh, and it's about to get so much worse...

02/22/2007 03:25 am
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Ohhh! Nasty cliff-hanger! lol Okay, consider me hooked.
Ha, and you'll just have to wait till tomorrow to find out what happens...

Or, okay, maybe I'll go post the next chapter right now.

02/22/2007 01:50 am
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WHAT?!?! What kind of cliffhanger is that! How totally rude! I need more here! Please!!!!
Ha... blame Always_jbj... she's the one who suggested only posting one chapter per day. *evil grin*