From Beneath by Yzba

03/24/2007 02:01 pm
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I love this story and look forward to the next chapter. I look forward to the interaction between the sisters and Dawn and Spike as well. I love stories in this arc alot.
Kim Adams

03/21/2007 11:27 pm
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great beginning and a very good read. thank you.

Kate
03/21/2007 03:12 pm
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OMG...awesome chapter!! I absolutely love where this is going so far. More! More! :) I'm so glad you leave the church scene/speech alone until it went AU. I hate it when writers rework scene from the actual show because to me you can't beat what was already written and shown on screen. I loved, however, that you added Buffy's internal thoughts into the scene. Worked very well. Finally, the scene at the end with Buffy and Dawn is always how I dream their relationship should've gone during season 7. I think it was hinted at but then got waylaid by all the potentials taking Buffy's focus off Dawn. Next chapter, please! lol

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03/21/2007 02:18 pm
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Great start; I like the way this is going - much more thoughtful than canon. Thanks!

03/21/2007 06:27 am
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Gret beginning, can't wait to read more.
Wonder how Spike will react when Buffy tells him she's in love with him?