very good beginning. love the last sentence. thanks for the fun read.

What happened at the abandoned house? Did they just fight since it sounds like they didn't have sex. Was she just aroused by him and nothing else. She wants him now, that's for sure and Dawn's not going to be home tonight. Naughty slayer. What's a vamp to do? Interesting start, looking forward to more.

uh-oh....i wonder what she's got in mind... :) i'm very interested to see, though...our favorite vamp is playing with fire, but the game could turn out to be a *lot* of fun!!! update soon :)

Liking this so far. Will it be canonish or not though, that is the question. Either way, I like your take on it all.