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Playing Creatively by msclawdia
BT_
06/13/2007 07:00 am
Chapter 4b/4
oh - now I get it. I'm a bit slow, here.
Pretty amazing what can happen when you mess with time. Perhaps the mangler should have thought of that.
Nice story - intersting dilemma Buffy has. Good food for thought.
Pretty amazing what can happen when you mess with time. Perhaps the mangler should have thought of that.
Nice story - intersting dilemma Buffy has. Good food for thought.
both beautiful and hilarious. loved it. thank you.
Thanks! I can't really see writing a longer vamp!Buffy story, but it was fun to do a short like this.
I liked both of the endings very much. This story was great, like all of your work!
Thank you so much!
Twisted! Enjoyed this extra bit...ahhhhh the alternate universes possible *G*.
Kathleen
Kathleen
Twisted! Enjoyed this extra bit...ahhhhh the alternate universes possible *G*.
Kathleen
Kathleen
Thanks! Couldn't resist exploring some possibilities.
fanxstitch
06/10/2007 07:50 am
Chapter 4b/4
I think I like the other version better, but the last chapter of the other was really confusing as was the end. The rest of the story was great--fantastic--love time traveling fics but very confused still.
Sorry the end was confusing. Glad you enjoyed the rest of it!
This is dire! I liked this version even better.
Me too! Thanks!
*shiver* very very well done, love, i'd been looking forward to reading this...poor kendra, but i love vamp!buffy :) great job, love :)
Thanks! I'd never really thought about writing vamp!Buffy, but a darker ending was too tempting to resist.
BT_
06/13/2007 06:55 am
Chapter 4/4
I'm realy confused. REALLY confused. I was quite enjoying this up till this chapter, but your ending has thrown me and I don't get what jsut happened. I"m sorry!
aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhggggggggg!!!!
Great story! I really kept thinking there was going to be more and I would comment at the end ,,, but i didn't realize the end was like the END END
I went into this story with mixed feelings I really wasn't sure if i would like it or not,, but i really really did! Great job!
Great story! I really kept thinking there was going to be more and I would comment at the end ,,, but i didn't realize the end was like the END END
I went into this story with mixed feelings I really wasn't sure if i would like it or not,, but i really really did! Great job!
Thanks; glad you decided to give it a chance and ended up liking it. Indeed this one is just a short. The alternative ending is as far as it goes!
excellent wrap up to what i hope is the first section of a longer tale. buffy is a tad confused (like that is news.) if you change the past, you change the future. her mission statement caused a lot of thought in the past and how it would effect her future. she could not get beyond the mission statement. very good read, hope for more. thank you.
Thanks! I don't have a sequel planned or anything. I wanted to do something shorter this time around. It's a really difficult decision for Buffy. If you change the past, what might happen to the future, and if you don't change the fact that your lover killed thousands and thousands of people, what kind of person does that make you? Not a great decision to have to make.
Enjoyed! More, please?
Thanks, but other than the alternative ending, this was intended to be a short one.
OH I need more, am I reading that right did Buffy kill Nicki or Spike 30 years ago if it was Spike he wouldn't be here now.
Please don't end it now need more.
Please don't end it now need more.
The next chapters make the possibilities clearer...
Thanks for reading!
Hey - that ended too soon - you could have cranked that up into a much longer piece and I hope you will.
Thanks, but I wanted to keep this one short. So many of my stories run long; I needed to do something shorter this time.
very realistic ending...it would take buffy a bit to get past this, wouldn't it? great job with this, love :)
Thanks, I think so. After struggling with whether or not to kill him, and then getting pulled away before she could act on it... yeah, she needs a little space for a few days.
Cool. :-)
06/08/2010 02:00 pm
Chapter 3/4
excellent read. including the evil cliffie. thank you.
Thanks; glad you liked it.
oh no what happened I hope they went home so it could all right itself the way it should be.
Depends on which ending you prefer.... Thanks for the feedback!
Buffy was on her own against the Slayer of Slayers - He wouldn't have been the S of S yet - he'd only killed one Slayer.
Really liked the scene with Nikki and the whole coat thing Creepy!
Really liked the scene with Nikki and the whole coat thing Creepy!
Thank you! Good to know the creepy was effective.
this was quite the cliffie, love, had me on the edge of my seat and begging for more! :)
Well, good! :)
Absolutely fantastic chapter!
Good. :-)
06/08/2010 01:47 pm
Chapter 2/4
well, at least, this times' spike is showing common sense. very good read, thank you.
Thank you!
I am confused at the end you made it seem like the 70's Spike then it seemed like the 00's spike.
The first Spike scene is 'now' Spike, the second is past-Spike.
I don't quite understand how or why she would come to the conclusion that she had to change time. It seems a bit odd. I know its hard for her to ignore her duty, but I don't think she'd decide to kill him and change everything just like that.
Still, the story is entertaining so far. I like the past Spike following her around. Naughty thoughts, he's having.
Still, the story is entertaining so far. I like the past Spike following her around. Naughty thoughts, he's having.
Buffy loves Spike and has made peace with what he is. What he used to be is a different problem. Given the chance to prevent the deaths of thousands and thousands of people... she has to at least consider it. Thanks for the feedback!
Wow - Buffy's a block of ice - contemplating killing her lover while she's eating cold french fries. Love it.
Ha! Buffy has definitely learned how to put on emotional armor when she has to make the big decisions.
typical buffy...but i do feel bad for her, it is quite the dilemma....great chapter, love :)
Thanks. It's really a terrible spot to be in.
This is a bit of a conundrum. Wonder why Spike didn't scent himself or feel someone being a voyeur?
:-)
06/08/2010 01:41 pm
Chapter 1/4
:-)
06/08/2010 01:40 pm
Chapter 1/4
enjoyed the conversation of spike and buffy. shows what their realation is like from where they came (or from when they came.) very good read, thank you.
Thanks! I wanted to show-not-tell that this Buffy and Spike were comfortable together.
Gotta love the image of Spike jacking off to watching himself having sex with a Slayer. Very nice.
Glad you enjoyed it ;)
Great story - like the little details about Spike's card-playing and Spike watching himself have sex with Buffy, LOL.
Thank you! This was a fun chapter to write.
i reviewed this over at lj, too, but wanted to let you know here as well how much i enjoyed it...i especially love in this chapter your characterization of past spike :)
No such thing as too much feedback! It was a lot of fun to write past-Spike. Thanks!
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