Unchecked by Xela

09/23/2012 01:01 am
Chapter 9         
Wonderful tale!  Very well written with equal doses of romance and conflict.  I especially like they way you delved into the aspects of the various claims.  One thing though..why wasn't Angel able to discern the mated claim of Spike and Buffy through his link to Spike?

Diana
08/22/2008 03:22 am
Chapter 9         
Awwww i love this :] the end is perfect- but god. Does annes middle name have to be kendra? blargh. Kendra sucked. I love Will though AND I CANT BELIEVE WhAT AN ASS ANGEL WAS! omg. great job ;}

alým
02/13/2008 12:51 am
Chapter 9         
LOVED ÝT! I'd ask for you to continue,but that would be too much.You left it in a brilliant place an I totally loved it! Gonna look for the other fics of yours,so,thanks for the great read

01/12/2008 07:06 am
Chapter 9         
Wonderful.

01/09/2008 06:21 pm
Chapter 9         
AWWW! Yay! Wonderful fic - love that Spike and Buffy took on Angel together, but that it wasn't all "Angel's just a jealous wanker". Also, Willow's spell - genius!

jm junkie
01/05/2008 05:18 pm
Chapter 7         
Awesome story! More please?
I've finished it; hope you enjoy the end!

RaD ReD
11/15/2007 07:03 am
Chapter 7         
YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS!

by the way, loved it so far, but now I need more!

RaD ReD
11/15/2007 07:03 am
Chapter 7         
YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS!

by the way, loved it so far, but now I need more!

Rapsody
10/25/2007 01:14 am
Chapter 7         
Very Creative, I would enjoy more... much more.

09/14/2007 11:11 pm
Chapter 7         
I just hope that it is Buffy the one giving it to Angel.

alým
02/13/2008 12:05 am
Chapter 6         
Brooder the Bastardio ...Grrr! God,wanna rip his head off of his body and catch his dust as it floats in the air!!!  So I could ressurect him,then torture him,and then kill him again-maybe with a stake...or,of coýrse,there are always good old railroad spikes...ironic,huh?
More like sadistic,I suppose...anyway,loved the chapter! Gonna read more

alým
02/12/2008 11:52 pm
Chapter 5         
I wanna kill that Brooding Nightmare!

By the way,loved the story

08/08/2007 06:10 am
Chapter 3         
What a great way for her to connect with him, through their daughter! Fantastic chapter, thanks Xela, I'm really enjoying this trilogy.

08/07/2007 12:43 am
Chapter 3         
I found this story last night and read what you had written so far. This is a really good continuation of the two previous stories. Anne is precious, great combination of Spike and Buffy. I'm waiting for Buffy to get a hold of Angel and give him what he deserves.

08/08/2007 05:57 am
Chapter 2         
So glad you continued with Fred as his confidant. She'll get things going for them. Nothing like your children to bring things into prospective. This is going great, thanks sweetie.

08/08/2007 05:52 am
Chapter 1         
What a cop out! Giles would have told Angel that the children were Spikes! Love that Spike got that little dig in though. Good got two more chapters to go. Wonder who he'll convince to call Buffy, because this Spike it's going to give up, not like canon!

08/08/2007 05:45 am
Prologue         
Sorry, I was a bit confused, this was the eipologue to Check Point. I know it's late, I thought I was seeing things. On to the second chapter!