To Ride A Pale Horse by WeyrAtheneWolfen

07/24/2008 01:02 am
Chapter Sixteen: Kiss         
enjoyed lindsey's thoughts of raspberries and death. hope you have deborah on the to save list. you could let nina's wolf out to play, specially with angel. very good chapter, thank you.

kim
07/22/2008 12:09 am
Chapter Sixteen: Kiss         
Powder keg situation....people are bound to start going nuts in their confined spaces.

Angel, would you pull your head out of your ass already?! You already learned that you'd moved on when Buffy died....how much does the past really have to mean anymore?!

Willow's sending her group to LA. A portal opening in W&H....that's gonna go over well, LOL. But someone does have to check on Xander.

So, I can't wait to hear how the good guys actually try to save the world, since I doubt they'll sit on their butts and wait for the zombies to starve themselves out of existence once they've exhausted the food supply.

07/21/2008 07:55 pm
Chapter Sixteen: Kiss         
Excellent chapter with lots happening in all departments.  Lovely gorey happenings, highs and lows evenly distributed, and Angel getting more full of himself by the day, it seems.  Really well done.

Lizette
07/12/2008 05:15 pm
Chapter Fifteen: The Hunger          
Just started the fic and wow I am impressed. I'm addicted to spuffy fic and zombie movies so add the two together and........ Well thanks for the great fic, waiting eagerly for ur next post.

07/03/2008 03:02 am
Chapter Fifteen: The Hunger          
of all the glimpses of personal tales my favorite has to be min and her need. very good read, as always. thank you.

07/01/2008 03:30 am
Chapter Fifteen: The Hunger          
Getting creepier by the chapter, guys! This was very interesting, and you are facing quite a challenge to tie it all together. Rowen's section was disturbing, and Dawn's was, as always, hilarious. Go Dawn! Wrest that bad boy with potential from the evil clutches of . . . Evil, Inc.

07/01/2008 01:43 am
Chapter Fifteen: The Hunger          
"Needed a fucking Midol.

The zombies outside her door never stood a chance"  TOO funny!  It's been years but I remember the times I could have taken on an army of Zombies easily.  LOL

Rowan is creepy in a whole other way and yet quite believable.  People will do amazing things to survive.  Her last name isn't Donner is it?

"She honestly expected more from a zombie invasion."  This is too funny too.  Naturally the poor girl has to have great expectations and with only Andrew to share her pain she is suffering.

"Besides, how many lawyers did he honestly think weren’t not evil? Especially in Los Angeles? She was pretty sure it was part of the standard contract ... become successful in LA, sell your soul."  Ahhhhh the workings of Dawns mind always amuse me.  Yes and she is not wrong.  

I loved Lindsey and hated they chose not to deal with his layers and only went with Angel's assessment.  I can see Dawn with a major crush (and one worried Spike).

Poor Nina AND Cordy....I think Angel did love Cordy and Buffy was a habit of thought (and a dog with a bone for that matter) but Nina had hopes too.  This is one interesting houseparty.

Still love Clem and Oz teaming up....I'd move in with those two.


WOW interesting look at what logically WAS happening at the end of the original Council...love that reform was in the works.  Good points by Kevin.

Really wonderful still...always delighted to read more.

Kathleen

kim
06/30/2008 02:48 pm
Chapter Fifteen: The Hunger          
You guys think to put things in fics no one else does. Love ya.

06/30/2008 02:30 am
Chapter Fifteen: The Hunger          
Interesting chapter. I liked Nina's little bit of jealousy - not to mention Cordelia's. Angel's got quite the situation on his hands, zombies aside. :) The Rowan section was totally creepy, although I did appreciate the parallel between her and the starving people in the Superdome. And Dawn having a crush on Lindsey just makes me giggle, as does PMSing Min.

06/05/2008 10:47 pm
Chapter Fourteen: Reunions          
Poor Phillips, caught by the lure of the Slayers:

" Magnificent." "She was an avenging angel. A Valkerie. A goddess."

He and Spike will have plenty to talk about, should they ever meet up.

Buffy has finally got a break, finding the one person in whose presence she can let go. Even if his nose eventually suffers from the reunion, I hope he finds some comfort, himself.
Thank you so much!  Glad that you like Phillips and his lust for the nose breaking Slayer. 

Glad you liked the reunion - we tossed it back and forth for quite a while to get that one hammered out.

*hugs*

06/03/2008 10:49 pm
Chapter Fourteen: Reunions          
What a tender and strained reunion!  So lovely and real.  He is completely insecure and she doesn't even realize SPIKE can be that way! 

Wonderful information on the plan to weaponize this virus, after finding a cure of course *snort*....how......  (deep sigh) typical? Expected? Chilling?

Looks a good time to regroup.  Angel can get his enormous head out of his arse and be happy for Buffy and Spike.  They can take stock of who is where an how they are and then tackle this thing together.

Excellent update to this unique and wonderful story.

Kathleen
Thank you so much!  We are thrilled to know you liked the reunion scene!  It was difficult to write so glad it paid off.

*Grins* weaponizing the virus was a fun idea - wasn't it - evil cackle

Hugs you tight!

06/03/2008 04:29 am
Chapter Fourteen: Reunions          
a very tender break from the murder and mayhem. very good read, thank you.
thank you - --- now back to your regular scheduled (or irregular) of murder and meyham

kim
06/02/2008 04:06 am
Chapter Fourteen: Reunions          

04/18/2008 05:54 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
bravo, dawn. and i can actually  "hear" spike bouncing. very good read, thank you.

Liza
04/08/2008 11:36 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
This has a cracking good plot and you're pacing it really well.  Some interesting character pairings - I'm delighted to see Clem has a new friend.  Did I mention that this has a great plot? I'm getting really bored with the endless sex scenes that some fanfic is composed of.  Hurry up with more please - this is my escape! 

desertrose
04/08/2008 12:54 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
Cool happy to see this story again. I was beginning to despair.

Great to see things move and happy to see Clem and Oz back, and with a healthy slayer. (oh I hope)

04/07/2008 11:17 pm
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
So pleased to see an update!!  Love this story, and can't wait to see what happens next!!!

04/07/2008 07:58 pm
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
Also....big thumbs up on Dawn taking a chunk out of Angel!  Woo hoo!!!

And...yay Oz.

Kathleen

04/07/2008 07:57 pm
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
YAY Clem!!!!! Love CLEM!!!!   NO, don't shoot Min but you may want to lock up the kitties.

Lovely reunion...so very "warrior" of them both to deal with the issues at hand and delay the personal connection.

LOL Nair!  Oh yeah, I can see Queen C taking a bottle to Buffy if jealous enough.

So.....was it the Initiative or Council doing the nasty experiments on vamps?  Either would do it in a heartbeat.  Nasty result all round.

Love the Slayers guarding the guards and glad they were.  Angel would have kept Buffy isolated if possible.

Too funny the varying expectations of the groups (and how in character that the fang gang would think Buffy would nearly swoon in the arms of the great poobah himself!  WHAT an ego!).  Love how Spike and Dawn know what Buffy's reaction really means.  Poor Spike needs that bit of reassurance too.

This is just fantastic.  Sorry for all the muse/computer issues (Know both well).  Well worth waiting for. 

Kathleen

PS as you are Betaless, you missed one: "Christie and Vi had went in briefly" should read had gone rather than went. That's all I noticed.

04/07/2008 04:33 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
Aww, poor Dawn. They've all been on the run so much that there hasn't really been time to mourn for Giles, but Dawn gets a chance here. I've kind of been waiting for the moment when someone finally takes a time out and tries to process all the unbelievable shit that's been happening to them. I'm surprised they're not all crying. I would be... but maybe I'm a wuss.

<i>“What do you mean it’s technically the second fist fight?”</i>

LOL!! Great reaction. I, too, am glad Buffy didn't punch Spike in the nose, but now that they've seen each other, I'm itchy to see them actually talk... or fight... or whatever... lol.

Love that Min goes out for chocolate and pads. Even in an apocalypse, a girl's gotta have her necessities! And I'm thinking this encounter with Oz and Clem will lead to an awesome alliance.

One question - is one of the dates wrong in that first section? The header puts it in 1995, but the text later says the subject died in 2004. If you're looking for an emergency beta, I'd be happy to help out until your regular gets the computer issues sorted, or even just a once-over for the typos in this chapter. Shoot me an email if you're interested.

04/07/2008 04:27 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
lol loved clem just talking and talking while oz was trying to tell him about mian
also gooo dawn lmao She bit me! I can’t believe she bit me!”

Tamara
04/07/2008 02:01 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
I forgot to mention .Dawn and Spike know Buffy very well to realize what the others don't .And I can only imagine who *cough*Angel*cough* gave them the ide that Buffy would jump into Angel's arms.

Tamara
04/07/2008 01:13 am
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         
That first bit certainly sounds like the initative referring to the infected person as it so they can dehumanize her (?).

Great update. If any demon comes off as harless , it's Clem.

kim
04/06/2008 11:30 pm
Chapter Thirteen – Fists Fights and Hair Pulling         

No broke nose=love. LOLOLOL

And Clem and Oz found a friend.....Min's really a target when she's walking around smelling like Slayer blood.

Dawn bit Angel! ROFL She and Spike are quite a pair in a place like that. :D

02/12/2008 04:08 am
Chapter 12: Perfect Plans          
Oh, man. I just caught up on this story and it's brilliant! For some disturbing reason, the idea of an apocalypse with global consequences really appeals to me. I guess because it's always hinted at on the show ("we have to save the WORLD") but the effects never seem to get past the Sunnydale/L.A. borders. And the zombie pandemic has just the right mix of supernatural and real-life terror. I love the idea of it being spread by people fleeing on planes, like it's bird flu or something.

You have a great storytelling style - I like the snippets of reports and essays from the future, reflecting back on it even while the story's still unfolding. I still don't think it's sunk in that Giles is really dead, but I like that you're bold enough to go there. Kennedy's death was excellent... and not just because I dislike her! :) It was very in character and cleverly told. And for a story posted on a Spuffy site, you've had me sufficiently distracted to not even care that they haven't seen each other yet. :)
Thank you so much for your review.  I always love zombues so having a spuffy zombie fic was to easy.  I love it!  Wery and I thank you for the wonderul review makes us giddy

Hugs you tight!  Oh and yes they see each other in ch 13

HUGS

02/11/2008 05:21 am
Chapter 12: Perfect Plans          
Yay! Hit Angel some more! woot
well okay ... more angel hitting will be loaded

02/11/2008 04:16 am
Chapter 12: Perfect Plans          
"Till the end of the world; even it (sic) that is tonight."  can't be tonight need much more destruction and chaos and many days (chapters ) of angel being hit by slayers.  very good read, thank you.
Grins heee glad you like!

Tamara
02/11/2008 04:01 am
Chapter 12: Perfect Plans          
I'm not surprised that Kennedy's arrogance came back to bite her in the ass not to mention whoever she kills.
Glad that you like the story!  Kennedy as a zombie was to much fun!

kim
02/10/2008 11:10 pm
Chapter 12: Perfect Plans          
Oooo, good chapter! Cordy's inner dialogue was great. Highlighting that Angel's over-stressed because of not only the crisis, but because those he cares about are missing was an important tidbit.

Ah, Spike...can only be chicken for so long, boy. And Kennedy's a zombie...big surprise. Feel bad for Willow. Nina ought to feel lucky now that her werewolfism brought her into Angel's view...only thing that kept her family safe.

Look forward to more, guys!
Grins glad you like the story!  We try to balance the characters out with thier reactions so glad so far it is working.  Grins and twirls you

02/10/2008 07:02 pm
Chapter 12: Perfect Plans          
It may not go as badly as he fears!!!  Here's hoping!
Grins well the next chappie is ready so we will finally know *evil cackle*

01/28/2008 12:47 am
Chapter Eleven: Fallen Soldiers         
very good read, thank you. also my thanks for the valentines day massacre it (appeases my lust for destruction.) "Many of our nation’s leaders were turned into members of the walking dead." actually that process has been going on since the 1920's. maybe it reach it peak during the massacre? poor faith. thanks again.
Grins - you know that I love you *sniff*  Seriously  - so of course I have to appease your desire for destruction - and who better to take out a large death toll then our capital *evil grin*

I am glad you enjoyed the massacre and Faith's poor flight into the night - I also of course hope you enjoy/ed her back story in Running Blind. 

Thanks again for the lovely reviews!

Hugs
Athenewolfe

01/21/2008 12:39 pm
Chapter Eleven: Fallen Soldiers         
Wood – her watcher, her lover, perhaps one day her husband… he was gone now

My heart aches for poor Faith, generally one of the characters I like least!! Loved this chapter; loved Dawn checking out Lindsey's butt, LOL; but no SPIKE!!! ARGH! hopefully Spike will be in next chapter??? Please update again soon! :)
I am so thrilled that you enjoyed the Faith scene - if your interested I wrote the back story which shows how everything occured for poor Faith.


And please (agreeing with you), Dawn would so be checking out Lindsey's butt - the man is hot!  *Evil grin*

Never fear, Spike makes an appearence in Chapter 12 - and yes we have Buffy and Spike intereaction in CH 13 *dances madly*

01/21/2008 06:52 am
Chapter Eleven: Fallen Soldiers         
Yay, Buffy finally got there! Now, she needs to see Spike pronto!
Evil grin ... would I make you wait to for the reunion... why yes, yes I would.  But I can tell you for a fact that it will occur in Ch 13.  *evil cackle* But Spike is in the next chapter, along with some fun Angel and Slayer scenes.

desertrose
01/21/2008 01:46 am
Chapter Eleven: Fallen Soldiers         
OMG! Poor Faith! Still love this story. The historical blurb up top was really a stunning bit of work there. Just sharp.
Thank you so much for your darling review!  I cannot tell you how much fun I had with the Living Dead in the White House *evil grin* My forey into politics there.  Faith is tragic - but there is hope for her still! 

HUGS

kim
01/21/2008 12:52 am
Chapter Eleven: Fallen Soldiers         
Poor Faith....

Ha! Buffy being so clueless about W&H's workings is hilarious. It's like she's the old lady that's so out of touch with the present.
*grins* Time waits for no slayer!  I enjoyed this chapter so thrilled to hear you did to!

01/18/2008 06:14 am
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
no death, no blood, no gore. but a good read and the last line makes up for the lack destruction.
Grins - Well Chapter 11 Hopefully appeased the desire for blood and death - sadly I am sure Ch 12 has no death but some great brawls!

01/13/2008 07:47 am
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
hmmmm....still of course holding little to no trust for anything that lindsay says...lol...loved the chapter, this story is shaping up wonderfully :) love it :)
Grins - thank you very much - we are having a blast writing it.

01/12/2008 04:48 am
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
love clem and his zombie knowledge .also loved clem and oz interaction
Thank you - I love Clem and Oz as well so they have to do the buddy buddy thing!

01/12/2008 03:45 am
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
Heeeey, no buddying up with the enemy *waves hands*
Giggles and runs around insanely!  Rubs hands

Carol
01/11/2008 01:33 am
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
I loved the Spike/Lindsey interaction. I've always liked Lindsey, and have wanted him to be a white hat (wishful thinking). Keep up the good work.
I adore Lindsey to!  I love the way Weyr writes him - so wonderfully *evil grin*  much more lindsey to come

kim
01/10/2008 08:34 pm
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
Oh, that's so a Buffy quote.

Hmm, have a feeling they didn't leave a door to be opened......can she climb high enough to break a window?

Nice convo with Lindsey.....I hope Spike will continue to make his life uncomfortable, even with the truce.

Even in that huge building, people are sure gonna go stir-crazy after a while....they can't just wait the zombies out.
I am glad you are enjoying the story and the lovely job Wery is doing with Lindsey!

Happy dances

Spikeskatmac
01/10/2008 05:33 pm
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
Awesome chapter; don't know how the hell you're keeping everything straight, between the excerpts from different 'books' and the story itself, but it's a great read! Can't wait for more!
Grins why thank you === we actually have a timeline and very extensive outlines of when everything happens, its the only way to manage it - but oh it is so much fun!

01/10/2008 04:29 pm
Chapter 10: Lockdown         
I was just thinking about this wonderful vivid story! Great update.

Love the idea of a legitimate friendship between Lindsey and Spike...great dialogue and character voices. Mutual dislike of Angel will be glue there.

Love his taking care of Dawn's needs and she of his. Buffy will fit nicely in the apartment *G*.

Love Angel and Fred and the discussion of logistics. I could picture the entire scene (the whole chapter for that matter).

Love the opening details of the spread....VERY 28 Days....scary!

Excellent.

Kathlen
I am so glad you like the chappie and the story Kathlen.  It is so much fun to play with this world and the characters.  Grins *hugs you very tight*

01/10/2008 06:57 am
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
“Good meat, next!” definitely makes up for letting riley live. great job , thank you.
Grins - Next chapter is up
I have to admit that Good meat is my favortie line so far!

12/30/2007 06:36 pm
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
Great chapter! I just love Harmony :) I hope you'll write more soon!
Thank you - Harmony is beyond fun to write - I love her character

12/28/2007 08:28 am
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
well at least they're making some progress...harmony cracks me up, you write her so well...wonderful work, love :)
Thank you - thrilled you like the way we write Harmony

12/28/2007 08:14 am
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
Hehe, poor Harm
Grins what a job for Harmony

Tamara
12/27/2007 09:07 pm
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
Ingenious detection method there. All you need is a cooperative vampire.
Grins - we thought so - shudders - but can you imagine normal vamps running around the street - it must be be awful smelling

12/27/2007 07:38 pm
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
lol good meat ..great chapter
Grins thank you very much!

TwilightChild
12/27/2007 07:15 pm
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
So SO glad to see you working on this again! I practically squealed when I saw it. Love Harmony's new job. Everyone seems to be doing their part.
Grin - I am sl glad that you like this chapter. Harmony's got a great new job doesn't she *Good meat*

12/27/2007 06:33 pm
Chapter 9: Good Meat         
I love this story; even while it gives me shivers, I read it quite happily; zombies give me the wiggins!!! Please update again soon; I can't wait to see what happens b/n B & S!
Grins - should have an update within an hour now! We are so glad that you are enjoying this story. Zombies are fun *evil grin*

Devin
12/03/2007 04:23 am
Chapter 8: Statistics         
Goodness!!! You MUST update this! It's addictive and creative and I'm LOVING it. Buffy + Zombie = Goddess, in my book.
Grins I am so glad you are enjoying this!  Dance all around!  *husg you tight*

10/22/2007 07:12 am
Chapter 8: Statistics         
oooh, clem and oz together?? interesting dynamic there, i'm sure...can't wait to see what happens next, love, especially now that buffy's been reintroduced :)
grins Clem and Oz what can we say?  Cept there is more in Chapter 13!  Spike and Buffy ahead!

10/20/2007 04:12 am
Chapter 8: Statistics         
wow i really really hope you finsh this one. I was totally blown away both of my favorite passions in one fic. lol buffy and zombies. I have never before had the pleasure of reading a zombie fic and the fact that its a spuffy is a major bonus. Great work so far and like i said really hope there is more coming .
Grins I am glad you like this story.  What can I say Buffy and zombies oh yeah! 

Hugs you tight (and ch 13 will be uploaded today)

desertrose
10/18/2007 02:59 pm
Chapter 8: Statistics         
Whoo hoo Clem and Oz!
More Clem and Oz in the next chapptie (ch 13 ) to be posted today!  HUGS

10/18/2007 06:24 am
Chapter 8: Statistics         
another very good read, thank you. now, if i can find the strength to forgive you, for letting riley live, i might continue to follow this fine tale. if i can find...
Grins I know I know - But never fear there is still many chapters to kill off the people we dislike!

10/17/2007 10:13 pm
Chapter 8: Statistics         
great chapter. Definitely one of most orginal post NFA fics out, as well as one of the best. Thanks for the great read so far.
thank you so much I am thrilled that you like it!

kim
10/17/2007 07:32 pm
Chapter 8: Statistics         
Think you meant "conscience" from Clem, not "conscious". Everything else is good. Love that he and Oz met up.

Ah, typical Buffy...she hasn't considered anything about Spike's return except kicking his ass for not telling her. It's all about Buffy...

Riley and Graham found Willow, and the infection is already in Brazil....whoa....

Just saw "Resident Evil: Extinction" on Saturday, so this fic was in mind. Glad you guys updated!!
Thank you so  much for your review!  There will be more Oz and Clem in Chapter 13 (which should be posted today)  Oh yeah and Buffy and Spike's first interaction together *grins*

Hugs you tight! thanks for the review!

10/17/2007 06:31 pm
Chapter 8: Statistics         
It so great you're briniging all of the characters into this story! Loving it so far.
I am so thrilled that you love this story.  More should be coming today *hugs*

10/17/2007 06:06 pm
Chapter 8: Statistics         
OZ AND CLEM.....I AM in heaven! What a glorious turn of events.

"5) Why did the scene in front of her give her interesting day dreams?" Too funny. Much prefer kinky any way Willow (who clearly had the hots for Riley at the start)to in love with Kennedy Willow.....

Love how they are relying on Zombie films for their most successful plans.

Really enjoying the glimpses of the aftermath where demon human lines of demarcation have ever altered in a world where there are no more ostriches and all the propaganda is out the window.

Lovely,
Kathleen
Grins so glad you are enjoying the fic!  Clem and Oz will be back in Chapter 13 *grins*

Glad you love the story - your reviews always make my day!

10/17/2007 04:17 pm
Chapter 8: Statistics         
Eeee, clem and oz! hehe
Grins - Well Chapter 13 (which should be posted today) will have more of your Clem and Oz!

HUGS - glad you are enjoying the story!

10/10/2007 10:43 pm
Chapter 7: Pale Horse         
oh man...that's so devastating...how awful, this story holds out very little hope...but i have to say that the dark comedy of the slayer scenes with andrew and the girls is a nice counterpoint :) great chapter ;)
Thank you very much! *evil grin* We are going for the dark comedy so its great to hear that you are enjoying it! Happy dance. I should hopefully be getting the chapter back from beta today *crosses fingers**

10/04/2007 08:45 pm
Chapter 7: Pale Horse         
"deadjournal.com" ...:::hoot, snicker:::...

“Why doesn’t she run away? I mean, seriously, those zombies are slow! In fact - the heck with running, why doesn’t she walk away? I could speed walk faster then those zombies are moving, and that was before I became a Slayer!” Yup, my question when it comes to Zombies....those critters move slower then I do at the end of a hard Friday night! I think I could outrun them even with heel spurs (of course I'd likely fall and then they'd be all over me LOL).


Such humor as these examples mixed with real horror (like the English Channel sequence to begin) are what set this apart and above! Wonderful, just wonderful.

Love this story and the rich characters you have created mixed with those we know and love. Love how the Council's sticking to the "old ways" has hampered the response whereas Andrew's odd methods are at least making sense.

I am actually pretty sad for Riley and feel bad he's ending himself over losing Sam. Makes sense the Initiative has been working the the Council and hasn't learned from its past either.

Yup, Giles was done in by a Zombified Slayer ..::nods head sagely::..


Kathleen

LOL - there actually is a deadjournal.com I came across it in my research - just like livejournal. *grins* so you know I couldn't help it!

LOL I always wonder the same on some movies - I mean hello walk faster people!

Thank you very much for the review! I have to say things are not always what they seem so be prepared for more twists and turns! *evil grin* Hopefully should have chapter back from beta today so I then can go ahead and upload! *happy dance**

10/04/2007 05:40 am
Chapter 7: Pale Horse         
Omg, this is going to give me nightmares! *flails*
THank you *evil grins* Okay to be fair I had nightmares about zombies half a dozen times since I started writing this fic (Athenewolfe)

desertrose
10/04/2007 03:49 am
Chapter 7: Pale Horse         
Wow this is the best story out there. Just killer. (commence eye rolling)

Poor Riley, and check it out Graham wanting to contact Willow out there. Smart and just glad for the whole integration of all groups. Makes for a better epic. Oh and the whole research by movie funny but serious. (he he zombie STD's)

Just wonderful, in a shocking, gory way
Grins I am so glad that you are enjoying To Ride A a Pale Horse!

Grins and Zombie STD's was one of my favorite lines! *giggles*

10/04/2007 03:41 am
Chapter 7: Pale Horse         
you almost forced me to feel sorry for riley, but deep seated prejudice stop that. excellent read, thank you.
Grins - everything is not quite what it seems in To Ride A Pale Horse *evil cackle*

darknightofthesoul
10/04/2007 03:24 am
Chapter 7: Pale Horse         
Zombie STDs...*giggle*
I had to mention zombie STDs i mean I had to!

10/04/2007 03:19 am
Chapter 6: Revelations         
was becoming fond of courtney, so is suppose min is next. very good read, thank you. any chance angel can catch this? please!
LOL I will neither confirm or deny that Min will live or die. Evil cackle! Giggles!

09/27/2007 09:38 pm
Chapter 6: Revelations         
great chapter.
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying To Ride A Pale Horse!

09/27/2007 09:08 pm
Chapter 6: Revelations         
Thanks for the update - really enjoying this new work -
Thank you so much! We have Chapters 8-11 done of To Ride A Pale Horse! Just waiting in the beta line! Hopefully should have one to post today! Thanks for reviewing!

cereza
09/27/2007 04:05 pm
Chapter 6: Revelations         
A great chapter. I loved that last part with Courtney, it was really scary. I'm looking forward to another update.
Thank you - we are really glad you liked the Courtney scenes! Should have another chapter of To Ride A Pale Horse back from beta today (We have four chapters (8-11) finished just all in line with beta!

09/27/2007 07:02 am
Chapter 6: Revelations         
so so good, loves :) every bit as frightening and exciting and fascinating as the latest zombie/apocalypse movie :) your writing style is excellent, can't wait for the next chapter :)
Thank you *grins* we have watched so many movies in research *grins* Next chapter should hopefully be up today or tommorrow!

09/27/2007 04:43 am
Chapter 6: Revelations         
Oh noes, you said the word! Heehee
Grins - we said the Z word!
Grins

desertrose
09/21/2007 07:40 pm
Chapter 5: Reunions         
i love this
Thank you - we are glad that you are enjoying To Ride A Pale Horse!

09/19/2007 11:19 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
Great chapter. Spike and Dawn together again? Oh, that was just touching! I always liked them as friends, however this comment about his being shirtless was funny and showed that Dawn's not a little girl any more. Oh, and Cordelia's comeback? I'm loving this fic more and more...
So glad you enjoyed the Dawn and Spike reunion

Grins - we are getting the gang together!

09/19/2007 08:15 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
loved the slayers telling the watchers what their options were. very good read, even if the death toll seemed to slow down (among verse characters.) thanks for the fun read. spike and dawn always make things better.
Grins I wrote a few more fun death scenes just for you *evil cackle* of course I am not sure which chapter they will appear in yet! Wait one is coming up somewhere in the next four chapters lol (Sent chapters 8-11 to respective beta's)

09/19/2007 05:35 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
oh NOES!!
Grins thank you hun! Glad you are liking To Ride A Pale Horse!

darknightofthesoul
09/19/2007 05:32 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
This is one of the most unique spuffy stories I have ever read. Creative doesn't quite cut it. I'm extremely impressed by this story....and Buffy hasn't even shown up yet...Wow... You are good.
Thank you! We are glad that you are enjoying To Ride A Pale Horse - we sent several chapters to beta (should have one back today for posting) and can confirm that Buffy does eventually get to LA *giggles*

kim
09/19/2007 03:52 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
Ah, hee hee!!!!!!! You have no idea how much I squeed with this chapter! I love you guys!
Thank you Kim! We are glad you are enjoying To Ride A Pale Horse!

09/19/2007 02:44 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
oh yea!!! you threw lindsay into the mix....never hurts to add a little extra hotness :P hehe...loved the chapter, can't wait to read more :)
Lindsey is so much fun! But yeah I so wanted his hotness - arguements over life and death based on how good they look with thier shirt off!

09/19/2007 02:12 am
Chapter 5: Reunions         
Exciting Start - feels something like what might have come with an Angel 6 season according to suggested storyline. Great Start - love having something with the new slayers playing a big role, and Andrew as well. Big surprise with death of Giles -
Hope that you update soon - looking forward to what sounds like a wonderful story -
Thank you very much for your review! I am glad you are enjoying to ride a pale horse!

cherie
09/17/2007 09:15 am
Chapter 4: Gathering Storm Clouds         
loving it, cant wait to read more, keep up the good work.
Thank you very much! We should be posting more today so as soon as it is approved by the admin it will be loaded!

09/15/2007 05:24 pm
Chapter 4: Gathering Storm Clouds         
More and more frightening every chapter... There are no many thriller fanfics, but I think this story's going to be a damn good one.

Keep writing.
thank you very much - We are really happy that you are enjoying this story! We are having a ton of fun writing it, and have plenty more in store for everyone!

desertrose
09/14/2007 11:49 pm
Chapter 4: Gathering Storm Clouds         
This is a helluva good story. Amazing.
Thank you - we are having a lot of fun writing this story! Very glad you are enjoying it!

09/13/2007 11:47 pm
Chapter 4: Gathering Storm Clouds         
well at least buffys headed to help dawn...this plague thing is so creepy...and its so sad that giles died :( wonder how spike is doing with the apocalypse and all
more will be revealed in the next chapter *evil cackle* Seriously, I am so glad you are enjoying this hun! There are a few deaths that will be sad - but at least Giles died a hero *smiles*

09/13/2007 02:38 am
Chapter 4: Gathering Storm Clouds         
loved the update, thank you. two lines had me rolling: "Considering the company, that actually might have been the plan." and "Smooth, idiot."
That line was weyr's I loved it myself! Thanks for reviewing hun!

09/12/2007 03:31 am
Chapter 4: Gathering Storm Clouds         
Oy, this is getting so scary *whimpers and hides under bed*
Thank you so much for all your reviews!!!! It helps to keep us writing, knowing that people are enjoying the story!

Evil grins - did I mention that is might get scarier? *Evil cackle*

desertrose
09/08/2007 03:14 am
Chapter 3: Sacrifice         
Wow way cool
Thank you very much!!!!

09/06/2007 02:52 am
Chapter 3: Sacrifice         
have to say giles is in the same class as l.a. love the chapter, thank you.
Evil wicked grin - ---- so thrilled you love the chapter --- happy dances around with you

09/05/2007 06:10 am
Chapter 3: Sacrifice         
oh man....did they get him??? i hope not, i hope giles lives, but i wouldn't be surprised in an apocalyptic tale of this nature if he was killed :( great disturbing chapter, loved it..reminded me a bit of dawn of the dead, or 28 days later...can't wait to see where this goes next :)
Grins thank you hun! I am so happy that you liked the chapter *dances around* Poor Giles, sigh....

evil grin - more should be updated today

09/05/2007 01:02 am
Chapter 3: Sacrifice         
Awww... this was a nice Giles. Why'd he have to die? *whimper*
hugs you tight ... poor Giles, nods nods ... but at least he went out in a blaze of glory!

08/31/2007 08:00 pm
Chapter 2: Damages         
Definitely ratcheting up to ominous! More, please!
Grins - well today is Monday so that means more Pale Horse today (providing they validated our account)

08/31/2007 05:21 am
Chapter 2: Damages         
i like your original characters, and i love your portrayal of andrew!!!! excellent work, love :)
Grins thank you hun! Andrew is a fun character to write and we are having so much fun with him!

08/30/2007 02:00 pm
Chapter 2: Damages         
This is so great! I like the way to portrait new slayers, I also think that the idea of those short diary-like commentaries is great. So I hope you'll update soon and give us more of this well started story :)
We thank you - the new Slayers have been fun to write. We enjoy their different and unique styles they have and the journal entries are a blast. Hope you enjoy Chapter three which should be updated today providing they validated our account.

08/30/2007 06:43 am
Chapter 2: Damages         
What is it, zombies or something like 28 Days Later or Resident Evil?
Now that would be telling hun! *evil cackle* All will be revealed in time! Thank you so much for reviewing (Ch 3 should be posted today providing they validated our account)

Darknightofthesoul
08/30/2007 05:12 am
Chapter 2: Damages         
My interest is majorly tweaked... I can't wait for the next chapter!
Grins - thank you! I am glad you liked On a Pale Horse - Chapter three should be posted today (Monday) providing that they validated our account.

08/30/2007 03:58 am
Chapter 2: Damages         
as i mentioned on another site, l.a. would not be that much of a loss. you really are working on mass death and destruction. good chapter, thank you.
Grins thank you very much! lol I am thrilled you are enjoying the story! Chapter Three will be posted today!

Tamara
08/30/2007 01:23 am
Chapter 2: Damages         
Looks like Nicky made a huge mistake.
*evil grins*

08/28/2007 04:17 am
Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The...         
This is exciting! Ever since that S7 episode, I've been thinking (and writing) that the Council was pretty much ended. But it makes sense that they'd have other facilities, other personnel ... and other agendas. The storyline about Vivian and her birth right denied is equally fascinating. And, finally, a plausible explanation for Giles and company keeping their distance from Angel and Spike! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you very much! We are so thrilled you enjoyed the chapter! I had a lot of fun playing with the idea that the Council was basically functioning yet still damaged. We posted the second chapter yesterday but it has not been validated yet. Hopefully it will be validated soon - otherwise you can catch it on our livejournal here - http://community.livejournal.com/weyrathene/693.html#cutid1

Enjoy and thank you so much for the review!

08/27/2007 06:22 am
Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The...         
powerful egos, two infected. sure there will be time to blame someone else. very good beginning, thank you.
*grins* why thank you! The next chapter will be up today (We are updating on Mondays) You can find out more about the infection *evil grins*

08/27/2007 04:13 am
Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The...         
Interesting new character, Weyr. Looking forward to more.
We thank you! Next chapter will be up today, (Monday)! Thank you much for reviewing!

08/25/2007 09:25 pm
Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The...         
hmmm...sounds like young vivian is getting sick...that could be very bad, i'm thinking...great start for this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next :)
Grins and evil cackles. The next chapter will be up today (Monday) - we are having quite a lot of fun with this story! *evil cackle*

Nichole
08/25/2007 04:01 pm
Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The...         
interesting i would like to read more. til next time..N
Thank you very much! We are posting more today (Monday) and are very exciting about this fic. Thank you for reviewign!

08/24/2007 12:38 am
Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The...         
Eeek, what the heck is going on??
*Evil grin* We are posting the next chapter today (Monday) and are very excited about thr story - more on Vivian, the Slayers and the whole plot thing...