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Fate by moluvsnumber17 tamisnead 07/11/2016 11:52 pm Epilogue I wanted to let you know I've really been enjoying your story, unfortunately the last two chapters seem to be missing. I loved this story and your original character Camilla - she is a wonderful child character. Enjoyed very much reading your other works as well. I like how you used all of the characters and even that you managed to bring back Angel. I really Loved your Story :) Uh oh, same problem again no text just horizontal lines.??? I think it's because the text is also black. I'm not sure how to change the text color. You can see it if you hightlight it. I'll see if I can figure out how to change the font color. random observer 11/10/2012 12:16 pm Chapter 16 Hi, the text is black on a black background - changed the coloring option to light and could read it. sayra 10/25/2012 03:10 am Chapter 16 Yeah same hear. Only blank pages. Saggit 10/25/2012 02:34 am Chapter 16 Maybe it's me, or maybe the story needs to update somehow with each chapter, but I'm only seeing blank space above with horizontal lines. Just writing this to let you know. Best of luck--been enjoying what you've written, thus far. :) How about just putting a soul back in the bastard? But no let's hurt Spike to get the answers. That's a much better plan. TwilightChild 10/11/2012 12:56 pm Chapter 14 I'm very glad you decided to finish this story. It has kept me reading all the way through, well into 7 in the morning. I greatly look forward to your next update. Amaya 10/09/2012 11:54 pm Chapter 14 I liked the chapter. Please try to update as soon as you can. Crap! Why would her father steal her from the airport and take her to a warehouse? And who in the hell called Buffy? Tessica 10/16/2012 10:47 am Chapter 12 Loving the story, hope to see more updates soon! Since your note states you have finished this story I definitely picked the right time to find it. I wonder if Spike was kicked out of the 'Hell' dimension for having too much good in him. cheryl 01/18/2012 12:13 am Chapter 11 Please finish this? I am really enjoying it. Kind regards, Cheryl Tell me it doesn't end there! em_wishes 06/23/2011 01:22 pm Chapter 11 I've only just started reading this and now I can't wait for the next update - horrid cliffhanger ;o))) Cheryl 06/09/2011 01:31 pm Chapter 11 Lovely chapter - cannot wait for the next installment! Thank you and kind regards, Cheryl Cheryl 05/05/2011 11:19 pm Chapter 10 Hi, I don't normally read unfinished fics anymore (too depressing if they remain unfinished) but I just read this one. It is super fabulous, and I cannot wait to read future installments. Please keep up the good work! Kind regards, cheryl More please please please :-) :-) :-) 06/05/2010 05:15 pm Chapter 9 More 06/05/2010 05:14 pm Chapter 9 delightful chapter, thank you. So happy to see an update! More please. Fangfaceandrea 05/08/2009 03:56 am Chapter 9 hee like Camilla wouldn't approve . XD Nice chapter. That took long enough! Sweet. :-) 06/05/2010 05:07 pm Chapter 8 very good read, thank you. I'm really happy about the update. I like how you treat the characters as if they actually were grown-ups. *gasp* I'll be interested to find out how you will handle Buffy and the fact that she gives everyone else's opinion more weight than her own concerning Spike. I've never really understood that. I mean, arguably, she's spent way more time with him than anyone else under a huge variety of circumstances. They don't seem to be in possession of the facts to truly back up their opinion. I assume it's a low self-esteem issue on her part. (Sorry, my musings.) Given the structure of your story and how Buffy is haunted by Martin, I assume he will be making an in person appearance at some point. I look forward to that. Although...I am wondering, since so far he has been portrayed solely as an insensitive, heavy-handed jerk and not as well-rounded and well, as real as the other characters, what did Buffy ever see in him? There must have been something. Hope to find out - maybe in a flashback? I think that balance needs to be there given your story. I don't think he can just have been evil in sheep's clothing. A nice, sensitive portayal of adults with complicated lives and feelings. Refreshingly different. I'm looking forward to more. good chapter. delightful ending, thank you. This koolaid sounds just like Buffy's lemonade :-) 06/05/2010 04:54 pm Chapter 6 Tish Tash 05/19/2008 10:29 pm Chapter 6 Update soon! I love this story, so cute and easy to read. Wow, that had obviously been weighing on her mind all day. Talk about your random blurting out of important things. hopefully it will work out better than the sugarless kool-aid. fun read, thank you 05/14/2008 10:06 pm Chapter 6 Love it this far! Super-sweet :) anon462 05/13/2008 11:29 pm Chapter 6 Yeah, being friends?, that's good. Being friends with ... benefits? that's even better. ;) Okay, friends is good... But sometimes Buffy is just so stupid. I'm sure Giles looked fab in those heels :-) 06/05/2010 04:48 pm Chapter 5 Jelly 05/08/2009 12:48 am Chapter 5 Great, just marvy... now if I see JM at DragonCon this year, I won't be able to keep a straight face! (Great story!) HAHAHAAHAHA. I can just imagine Spike dressed up playing tea party. Camilla's so sweet and Spike is a great surrogate daddy. Hope Buffy and Spike get their arses in gear soon though - they so want each other. Loved the imagery of Spike at a tea party! Too funny! feh Buffy just had to go and ask about Captain forehead one of the many joys of being a single parent. still have to love them. good chapter, thank you. April 01/31/2008 05:37 am Chapter 4 Let me just say that I am ABSOLUTELY loving this story! It''s cute & fluffy & just the right bit of UST! & Kids are always great! My FAVORITE line was "I'm ok, but I don't think Barbie's gonna make it!' Can't WAIT to read more! Allmost kissing is good, I mean they can't have wild couch sex with a child a home. Is Camilla going for a sleep over soon? Thanks for the update! Read this over on Spuffy Realm and thought it was finished. So glad you've continued it, I was really hoping you would write about what happened after Spike decided to go with them! Love Spike with Camilla and hope Buffy figures things out before she makes the situation worse. IT 01/29/2008 05:14 am Chapter 4 Hmmm... just wonder how much Spuffy will ensue with a five-year-old around. Good thing there's a sitter next door! :) Thanks for the update, looking forward to some Spuffy soon! Well done! Spike stared at himself in the mirror ???? :-) 06/05/2010 04:19 pm Chapter 3 seems camilla will cause them both to think a bit differently. very good read, thank you. I like the story line, I was disappointed in the lack of dialogue - even without their history, if you hadn't seen someone in years there would be questions, conversations etc. Also evenone being so excepting of Spike just turning up not really getting that? I'll keep reading to see where you go with this, as I said I like the premise nice idea. Is this the end? I hope not, more soon, please? Like the awkwardness - that feels very right. :-) 06/05/2010 04:09 pm Chapter 2 the reunion was not as awkward as it could have been. camilla does tend to steal scenes, doesn't she? very good read, thank you. There's a lot of fuzzy math with vamp ages in canon; I wouldn't worry about it much. This story is shaping up so nicely. The awkwardness of the reunion was completely realistic and not a bit overdone. And Cammy is a darling! I look forward to more. Great update, looking forward to more soon! Ok, so SPike's not her father; I was hoping that Cammie was old enough, but oh well... still, good story; looking forward to seeing where you're going to go with this; please update again soon. nice start - I love that Buffy's daughter can kick a vampire hard enough to hurt. :) Someone who didn’t know them who saw them right now might think they were father and daughter. And that thought was enough to disturb Spike immensely. That's too funny... Yes, Spike as daddy... thoroughly disburbing. Blue Cool :-). Hope it gets finished sometime :-) 06/05/2010 03:59 pm Chapter 1 I'm hooked and ready for the next chapter! just a note for you. you wrote: She had taken Camilla out for ice cream. When she had been ordering the little girl had wondered off and no one in the shop knew where she’d gone. The second sentence is a little grammatically awkward. now on to chapter 2! I'm enjoying this immensely. Oh, that was wonderful!!! Is Spike the father?? Please, PLEASE let him be the father!!! Going on to read the next chapter now; awesome story so far!!! tammy 12/12/2007 05:42 pm Chapter 1 ok where is the rest. Please give me more. camilla has spike hooked already. very good read, thank you. Intriguing enough that I definitely want to read more. Buffy's little chip off the ol' block is too cute for words. Another Summers girl who's obviously gonna have Spike wrapped around her little finger. Really looking forward to the scene where Spike and Buffy meet again after all these years. Oooh, I'm liking it so far! Like Mom, like daughter re "bampire". Does Spike have a clue? JO 11/04/2007 08:56 pm Chapter 1 Wait until he finds out he's the daddy that's gonna throw his head into a spin , can't wait for the reunion, more pleae. Rigby24 11/04/2007 06:50 am Chapter 1 Oooh, I like this a lot! Hi Moluv - nice story. You don't need all the backstory in the beginning - who gives a damn where Angel is? Also, I don't believe for a minute that Buffy wouldn't be running around like a crazy person looking for her kid - not for two hours. The little girl is cute and her conversations with Spike are very nice. duke6665 11/04/2007 01:49 am Chapter 1 great start. can't wait to read more. | |||
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