Laundromatic by Verity Watson

kasumi-chan
12/30/2015 02:28 am
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Liked this! I've read all of your stories here and on EF. Love your work. A sequel to this series will be great, it's a pity you don't write anymore.
Can I hope you'll get back to writing someday?
Hugs

11/24/2010 08:08 am
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Adore this story!  Sweet and funny!

11/24/2010 08:08 am
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Adore this story!  Sweet and funny!

07/28/2009 05:36 pm
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I really enjoyed your two De Soto adventures - wonderful to have their story told through such simple things like "laundry duty"  yet telling such much of their history in the series -

poll
01/06/2008 08:38 pm
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This is so good. It's funny but both Buffy and Spike ring true. Look forward to the next one! Thanks

01/06/2008 03:45 pm
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That was gorgeous. I love cool Spike!

12/23/2007 11:08 am
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“Is this a commercial for dating vampires, Spike? Because I’ve seen the previews, and it’s gory.”
I love this line. Funny and so true.

“Gonna be the one you want, in the end.”
Another great line. Followed by his further insistence. This is Spike.

I really enjoyed this fic and will look out for the continuation.

12/16/2007 03:00 am
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This was a fun little fic. I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next in this little not-series! lol

kudagirl
12/14/2007 04:31 pm
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Have read several of your works and enjoyed all of them. Love your references to art, music and other things. Love the tiny little moments in your works.

Lea
12/14/2007 01:23 pm
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I love your language :) Sweet little story!

12/12/2007 03:15 am
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Always nice to leave Buffy flabbergasted!

12/11/2007 03:03 pm
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Best enticement in the world--hot and cold and all insightful.

Pam S
12/11/2007 01:35 pm
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Hopefully, the little series will continue.

Waiting for the last chapter of
"Pratt" ..who will be the one left standing? Spike a pile of dust..Buffy continuing on. Or Buffy dying of old age with Spike still at her side.. Probably will cheat and read the ending first. LOL

kim
12/11/2007 03:38 am
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Perfect! He really got to her there.

12/11/2007 03:31 am
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Hee - I'd like to see where they go from here. (although, speaking of wip...)

12/11/2007 03:26 am
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very good read, thank you. regarding author's note, you could dare.

BT_
12/11/2007 03:01 am
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oh - loved it. especially the tide and bounce. Spike's right.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)

12/11/2007 02:08 am
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Nice balsy Spike! Not as desperate as canon but more like the guy we first met even with a chip in place. Buffy has much to mull over while putting away the laundry.

Kathleen
Yes ... and I have to mull why there are no Spike-like men washing their Levi's at my laundromat. :) Glad you enjoyed.

12/11/2007 01:26 am
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I love stories where Spike has some dignity; awesome job! Can't wait for more!

time of change
12/10/2007 11:54 pm
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Well, I wouldn't complain if there was more. This is amazing. I remember reading your first postings on a now defunct site and thinking, "Wow, this is one to watch." And I have to say that I was right. You can always tell the real writers; they take chances. They try new things. They get better and better. That's you, doll.
Wow ... I'm speechless. (Trust me, this is rare.) I can't thank you enough for the kind words. ::Hugs::

12/23/2007 11:01 am
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“Sure. I’ve heard of disco.” Great line, and fun plot. I like the way your Spike and Buffy are interacting in a different environment.

11/29/2007 08:31 pm
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love the conversation. very good opening chapter, thank you.

time of change
11/27/2007 08:44 pm
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"Sure. I've heard of disco."

Hee! You are off to a great start. I look forward to reading more.

11/26/2007 11:48 pm
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Oh lovely! I hope your muse insists on more. This "other side of William the Bloody with hints of William the Human" would make a lovely relationship. Love Riley slopping hog and making jello LOL.

THIS is a film-worthy Spike comment the voice is so perfect:"Let me guess. Righteous Finn came back from his visit to Iowa and all is not well with our young lovers.” Excellent!




Kathleen

11/26/2007 10:38 pm
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Buffy's last line just makes me cringe. I wonder if she knows that Paul McCartney was in a band before Wings?
ROFL! Nightshift, I'm not sure if she's heard of Paul at all.

Tragic, isn't it?

caia
11/26/2007 10:24 pm
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Insightful Spike, reluctant-but-not-hostile Buffy... ah, S5. Quirky fun, this.

kim
11/26/2007 01:35 am
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LOL, she's such a cretin sometimes. Has she picked up nothing from having an art dealer as a mother? ;) My history teacher of a mom sure indoctrinated *me* with stuff.

Love how you write Spike. :D

11/26/2007 12:06 am
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I like the forced domesticity of this, and the view into Spike's level of culture that I don't usually see.

11/25/2007 11:38 pm
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I love it how Spike bedazzles Buffy with his smarts.

Cas
11/25/2007 10:04 pm
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Love your sense of humor. Great beginning.

11/25/2007 09:52 pm
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Wonderful story; love it when Spike is portrayed as actually having a brain; the tension b/n your B & S is excellent; I keep waiting for the shoe to drop; for Spike to say something he shouldn't and Buffy to bop him in the nose! Can't wait for update; please make it soon!

Pam S
11/25/2007 09:37 pm
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Buffy, what a limited child..
And Spike, for such a "beast" that she considers beneath her-cultured and educated.

She really doesn't have a clue. Poor Buffy, what a limited existance. Kill Demons or Die !

And not to throw stones and complain about this nice story you are continuing. But I have been checking religiously for Mr. Pratt to see what those Possibililties are. How's the muse?

Thanks, Pam! And yes, Buffy might save the world, but I don't know what gets her out of bed in the morning. :)

11/25/2007 09:28 pm
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ROFL - Love this valley-girl Buffy and sophisticated Spike. Some more revelations are undoubtedly right around the corner. :)

nichole
11/25/2007 08:25 pm
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great start look forward to more soon.