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The Truce by Eternal_red
alya
03/23/2011 10:10 pm
Chapter 20
Text I absolutely loved this. You have created a magical world - enchanting, funny, exciting and totally gripping. PLEASE write more.
Sarra Ambrai
01/27/2011 04:57 am
Chapter 20
This is fabulous! One of the MOST creative and intriguing AU's I've ever come across. I really hope you finish!!
allypetals
01/25/2011 08:30 pm
Chapter 20
oh great googily moogily, I'm praying you haven't forgotten/given up on this amazing story! I'm completely hooked! LOVE LOVE LOVE
Haze
01/09/2011 07:47 pm
Chapter 20
PLEASE FINISH!! IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
Brunettepet
07/28/2010 12:35 am
Chapter 20
It's terrific to see more of this richly detailed, entertaining story. The Etti were vividly drawn and I enjoyed the image of the battle with such small, toothy opponents. I also loved Buffy accidentally breaking their big rock. That "oops" was hysterical.
The Etti lavishing the couple with delicacies and jewels was a nice bit of calm before the storm. There's still a battle to wage and really no idea how the Axe and Buffy and Spike are going to figure in it.
Buffy might have been a bit upset to discover she really is part and parcel of the prophecy, but she's certainly rolling with the compassionate leader role. She's got a big heart and she'll do what she can to make the universe safe.
Son now Spike and Buffy are in yet another strange new place with only a young Etti prince to lead them. This should be a lark. Or not.
Thanks for updating this. It's always a pleasure to read more.
The Etti lavishing the couple with delicacies and jewels was a nice bit of calm before the storm. There's still a battle to wage and really no idea how the Axe and Buffy and Spike are going to figure in it.
Buffy might have been a bit upset to discover she really is part and parcel of the prophecy, but she's certainly rolling with the compassionate leader role. She's got a big heart and she'll do what she can to make the universe safe.
Son now Spike and Buffy are in yet another strange new place with only a young Etti prince to lead them. This should be a lark. Or not.
Thanks for updating this. It's always a pleasure to read more.
Deb
07/23/2010 10:56 am
Chapter 20
Wow, I'm so sorry that you had updated and I hadn't known, otherwise you'd have a review so much sooner! Another fabulous installment. What a treat and respite for Buffy and Spike as they prepare to return. Just lovely.
06/17/2010 03:13 pm
Chapter 20
Lovely. Hope life lets you post another soon.
w
06/15/2010 08:09 am
Chapter 20
God I love Buffy's excalibur moment, that was awesome. I love their lighthearted banter...and this story really enchants and transports, thanks for the update
Yay for updating! Really loved the Ettii worshiping Spike and Buffy and especially Buffy's reaction to waking up next to Spike. Bow chica wow wow.
Varin
06/15/2010 03:19 am
Chapter 20
Yay, more Truce is up! I have a soft spot for the really strange AU Spuffy stories. Yours is well done. I'm glad they've finally found the axe.
Deb
04/28/2010 12:08 pm
Chapter 19
Another amazing chapter. I like how you've completely transported us into this other world. Fabulous cliff hanger. Look forward to more at your very earliest opportunity. Love it!!
Nathalie
03/20/2010 03:22 am
Chapter 19
I am so enjoying this story. Your characterization is excellent and this alternate universe you have created is a great feat of imagination.
I hope you can find time to add a new chapter soon, I can't wait to see where this goes.
Thank you for the great gift of this story.
I hope you can find time to add a new chapter soon, I can't wait to see where this goes.
Thank you for the great gift of this story.
02/19/2010 09:37 pm
Chapter 19
***Brava*** I love how you've written Andii.Keep it up, Sarah. I'm watching with anticipation!
02/15/2010 02:17 pm
Chapter 19
Oh my! If you're going to write such cliff-hangers don't be mean and make us wait months for the next chapter again. Please
02/12/2010 01:03 am
Chapter 19
Good to see an update. This is so original, I'm loving it and hope for more soon.
Oh, what a horrible, horrible cliffhanger!
I am reallly loving this story. It's got to be one of the most original concepts I've seen yet in Buffy fanfiction. I love how you incoporate the characters into the new world.
Hope you update again soon!
I am reallly loving this story. It's got to be one of the most original concepts I've seen yet in Buffy fanfiction. I love how you incoporate the characters into the new world.
Hope you update again soon!
W
02/03/2010 11:59 am
Chapter 19
You don't know how I clapped my hands in delight to see you've updated, and I'm every bit as enthralled with it now as I was then. I love this world you've put them in, and I see them getting into an another one. Oh I'm certainly up for more.
Brunettepet
02/03/2010 12:15 am
Chapter 19
It's wonderful to read more of this captivating story. The world you've created here is vividly drawn and the small details really make the story sing.
You captured the claustrophobia of venturing through the underground tunnels. and I was as relieved as our heroes to have a breather in the large cavern. Finding other refugees and being able to share what will kill the Terr-Khan bodes well for some of this town's survival. It had been looking hopeless on the surface.
The final leg of the journey was also well drawn and I enjoyed the description of the long abandoned dwellings and their remaining artifacts. Jontan's cave was fascinating, and I love that the guardians left Jontan's body so he might meet this savior.
Buffy's reaction to touching the book spurred them all to action and I wondered what she had experienced. When Spike awoke alone, the mystical portion of this quest began to unfold. The image of the blue fire and Buffy's eerie silence gave me goosebumps, and Spike's fear was palpable. Everything clicked with the two of them re-enacting Jontan's painting and that bite seems to have been the final act necessary to send them both on the rest of their journey.
Thank you for updating this vivid, fascinating story. I'm looking forward to discovering where Buffy and Spike have ended up.
You captured the claustrophobia of venturing through the underground tunnels. and I was as relieved as our heroes to have a breather in the large cavern. Finding other refugees and being able to share what will kill the Terr-Khan bodes well for some of this town's survival. It had been looking hopeless on the surface.
The final leg of the journey was also well drawn and I enjoyed the description of the long abandoned dwellings and their remaining artifacts. Jontan's cave was fascinating, and I love that the guardians left Jontan's body so he might meet this savior.
Buffy's reaction to touching the book spurred them all to action and I wondered what she had experienced. When Spike awoke alone, the mystical portion of this quest began to unfold. The image of the blue fire and Buffy's eerie silence gave me goosebumps, and Spike's fear was palpable. Everything clicked with the two of them re-enacting Jontan's painting and that bite seems to have been the final act necessary to send them both on the rest of their journey.
Thank you for updating this vivid, fascinating story. I'm looking forward to discovering where Buffy and Spike have ended up.
BT_
02/02/2010 03:15 pm
Chapter 19
yay - an update!!! Thank you!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
YAY UPDATE.
And it was great too.
“I won’t let you fall.” Spike breathed in her ear. “I’ll never let you fall.”
Amazing.
And then the cliffhanger! GR ARG.
And it was great too.
“I won’t let you fall.” Spike breathed in her ear. “I’ll never let you fall.”
Amazing.
And then the cliffhanger! GR ARG.
Great to see that you have returned to this story - Can't read right now, but will get to it later tonight - I really like what you are doing with this fantasy/scifi realm for the Buffyverse.
Thank you so much for getting back to this -
Thank you so much for getting back to this -
REgrrl
01/21/2010 07:33 pm
Chapter 18
As always, a compelling story and unpredictable occurrences. Updates would be so enjoyable. Looking forward to your next installment.
em
01/18/2010 08:03 am
Chapter 18
Ahhhhh I'm dying to know more! Please pretty pretty please!!!
Anca
09/02/2009 09:52 pm
Chapter 18
I love your fantasy world
very good read, thank you. love where you ended the chapter.
Wonderful update. High on tension and action and more backstory as well. Yes they will make them pay and dearly.
Love the tenderness between Andii and Ahnja (and the echo of her dying while saving him in canon not to mention the diagonal cut that killed her).
I really love your use of canon characters in this new and unique way. Excellent. Could easily be altered into an original work yet still plays well with the Buffy characters.
Kathleen
Love the tenderness between Andii and Ahnja (and the echo of her dying while saving him in canon not to mention the diagonal cut that killed her).
I really love your use of canon characters in this new and unique way. Excellent. Could easily be altered into an original work yet still plays well with the Buffy characters.
Kathleen
sin_amatic
08/25/2009 10:36 am
Chapter 18
Lovely to see an update. I find myself completely enamored with your perfect blend of Spuffy angst, along with such a compelling and spell binding tale. It's incredible how it can feel so familiar and yet so new
It's also a "hoot" trying to place some of the "new" spelling of names with the various characters. I admit, sometimes if it isn't a main player it takes me a moment or two to sound out the name.(I'm a bit slow.) <G>
Looking forward to more... and more...and more. Ta!
It's also a "hoot" trying to place some of the "new" spelling of names with the various characters. I admit, sometimes if it isn't a main player it takes me a moment or two to sound out the name.(I'm a bit slow.) <G>
Looking forward to more... and more...and more. Ta!
this is one of the most exciting stories i've read. keep it up! excellent writing!
vanillamortel
08/25/2009 01:04 am
Chapter 18
Just found this story today - it's brilliant!! Such good writing, original plot and excellent characterisations. Looking forward to further updates. Soon please???
Brunettepet
08/24/2009 09:56 pm
Chapter 18
This was another richly detailed, entertaining chapter. Andii's prowess as a storyteller was a nice surprise. He's usually used for comic interludes, so it's nice that you changed the character up here. He did have a keen mind in canon, though it was seldom used.
The prophecy is intriguing, and I'm left wondering who the three hearts refer to. I'm sure it will all be clear once the prophecy begins unfolding.
The shocking prophecy believably sent Buffy to seek comfort in Spike's arms. These two are becoming closer every day. I loved the image of them quietly, hurriedly dressing for battle. Spike lending a hand felt right, and her more battle worthy outfit seems like it was much needed.
The brutal attack on the city was well drawn, and the events taking place in the village square are violent and frightening. Dalla has the town in a strangle hold. I don't see many of these villagers surviving the night.
Finding Anjha dead is a blow, though I'm hopeful that Andii was able to save the book. This was a lovely heart hurting image: "Sobbing harder, Andii’s tears fell into the eyes of his beloved. They gathered for a moment then trickled gently down her cheeks, giving the illusion that she shared his sorrow."
Thanks for posting more of this entertaining story. I'm thoroughly enjoying the world you're creating here.
Spike and Buffy are so cute together! I hope it won't be another two months before I find out if they kick ass and take names. And hopefully Faith was wrong about Buffy having to lose Spike to see what she's missing!
anon
08/24/2009 03:31 pm
Chapter 18
You've made my morning!
Mandessa
08/24/2009 10:49 am
Chapter 18
*squeals* I love this story, so glad you are still working on it. I went back and read it all over and then read this chapter again. Love how the story is moving along.
Brunettepet
08/24/2009 09:22 pm
chapter 17
That first review was me. I always forget to sign in here.
07/15/2009 12:40 am
chapter 17
This was another richly detailed, entertaining chapter. Buffy waking up in Spike's arms reignited their passion and it was wonderful to find them in such a light, loving place. Of course it didn't last once they opened their mouths. They need to start communicating without all the sniping and cutting remarks.
The shopping trip was fun and light, and it cleared the air between the squabbling couple. For now.
Ahnja and Andii were comedy gold. I love that Andii has used access to the ship's transmissions to cull every bit of Earth culture he can. That meal sounds like the magic has garbled some of the information, but maybe that was just Andii's brain doing the garbling! This made me laugh out loud: “You’re just perfect,” breathed Andii. “I chose it to represent the feminine, sexual, yet businesslike women of the late 20th century whose credo was ‘greed is good.’ I thought it suited you.”
“You’re right, it does suit me...although I am glad that I ignored your suggestion of not wearing any undergarments, and crossing and uncrossing my legs in front of our guests.” Thank goodness Ahnja thought twice about that bit of instruction. I don't think Buffy would have liked this strange woman flashing her husband.
Thanks for another update of this wildly entertaining story.
The shopping trip was fun and light, and it cleared the air between the squabbling couple. For now.
Ahnja and Andii were comedy gold. I love that Andii has used access to the ship's transmissions to cull every bit of Earth culture he can. That meal sounds like the magic has garbled some of the information, but maybe that was just Andii's brain doing the garbling! This made me laugh out loud: “You’re just perfect,” breathed Andii. “I chose it to represent the feminine, sexual, yet businesslike women of the late 20th century whose credo was ‘greed is good.’ I thought it suited you.”
“You’re right, it does suit me...although I am glad that I ignored your suggestion of not wearing any undergarments, and crossing and uncrossing my legs in front of our guests.” Thank goodness Ahnja thought twice about that bit of instruction. I don't think Buffy would have liked this strange woman flashing her husband.
Thanks for another update of this wildly entertaining story.
You don't say who you are (although I have my suspicions based on your writing style - and the lovely review). Thank you anyway. Am happy that you liked the Basic Instinct bit, perhaps I should have had her flash Spike - would have been worth it to see the expression on Buffy's face. Next chapter not so light but I hope you'll enjoy reading it.
very good read, thank you. loved: "And, just like that, they were back to square one."
I know, I'm naughty. If it's any consolation they'll be too busy to squabble over hurt feelings soon.
WOW - I am so glad to see an update - only last week thinking about this very special alternative work and hoping that it was not going to be left WIP -
I LOVE the realm you have created -
I LOVE the realm you have created -
No not a permanent WIP I promise you that. Check BSV tomorrow.
lulu
06/30/2009 03:09 am
chapter 17
Laughed out loud at the image of Andii spying on all of the entertainment broadcasts!
All that magical talent and he uses it to watch TV! I'd probably do the same. Thank you lulu.
sirc
06/24/2009 11:09 pm
chapter 17
Well done
Ta sirc!
Pin
06/23/2009 02:01 pm
chapter 17
Love the new venue for such beloved characters. Great chapter! Thanks!
Thank you Pin. Glad you like.
anon
06/23/2009 05:04 am
chapter 17
Kudos! I thought that perhaps I would never see more of this story, and I am happy to see I was wrong. Each chapter is better than the last. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Thankyou too and yes, there will be more soon.
Great chapter - ER - I loved Anjiaa's shop and Andii's appearance. Very funny. Hope will be seeing more of Ennico too. I love him.
Love that you love Ennico, usually original characters are barely tolerated in Spuffydom so you give me courage to pull him into the story.
I literally pumped my fist and shouted "yeah!" when I saw this had been updated. Now my roommate thinks I'm crazy. Haha. I'm so glad that Spike and Buffy seem to be getting along a little better. I love this story! Keep up the good work and update again soon please please please!
Better make sure that you're roommate isn't around tomorrow then, when I post Chapter 18. You made me laugh out loud when I read your review, thank you for that.
Pam S
06/23/2009 12:15 am
chapter 17
So finally... a little intimate encounter between our two.. that didn't end well.. Buffy LOL Quite normal for them I guess.
And now for the axe and the prophesy..
Enjoyed..
And now for the axe and the prophesy..
Enjoyed..
Don't you want to bang their heads together sometimes? More prophesy up next.
sin_amatic
06/23/2009 12:10 am
chapter 17
Sheer perfection! Roast beef with a side of (tiny) marshmallows.... Too funny.
It was an absolute thrill to see your new post. I don't have a clue how difficult this is too write or envision, but please remember you have a "loyal" fan who's chanting your name "eternal_red" because I just can't wait for the next installment.
Ta, Shelby
It was an absolute thrill to see your new post. I don't have a clue how difficult this is too write or envision, but please remember you have a "loyal" fan who's chanting your name "eternal_red" because I just can't wait for the next installment.
Ta, Shelby
Thank you Shelby, it gives me a warm tingle to know that you like my story so much.
smokescreen
08/25/2009 03:34 am
Chapter 16
that was an amazing fight scene. and the aftermath was so sweet. :P
very good read, thank you. excellent fight sequence, and really enjoyed the chapter ending.
Thank you vladt.
rkm
05/17/2009 01:42 pm
Chapter 16
no, no, no - THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ ON THIS CITE, AND THERE'S NO MORE??!? sniff! this story quickly pulled me in, and i LOVE the newness of it all - planets, etc. enjoying the evolution of the buffy/spike relationship, and the newsness of the tarah and dorn friendships. how i wish there was more ... ok, now i'm really depressed :(
Poor lamb, don't get depressed, although I'm delighted that you care so much! New chapter finally ready (yes I can hardly believe it either).
sirc
05/01/2009 10:00 am
Chapter 16
Well done!
Thanks again.
Good fight scene and excellent chapter. Can't wait to read about Annja's curiosity shop. Changing the spelling of the names is very clever. (weren't you spelling Buffy's name differently Buffee? before or am I having a senior moment?) Great story.
Thanks. No you weren't having a senior moment, Ennico does say 'Buffee' when they were up the honey tree together. All the humans have their proper names and I've played around with the 'aliens' to make them sound more exotic (and to confuse people). Hope you enjoy Ahnja.
IT
04/28/2009 09:16 pm
Chapter 16
Woohoo! Back on the BSV! :)
I know and I'm almost over losing some of my precious reviews. Almost. Thanks IT.
mamaly1975
04/28/2009 03:39 pm
Chapter 16
I love this story! It is unique and very well written!! Your characters come to life and I have a great time picturing the original btvs character in the role you have given them!! Very clever!
Thankyou for that. Hope you like the latest characters too - coming up soon.
"You can go back to being all contradictory in the morning" - I love it.
This story has me really confused, but it's extremely engaging. Then again, that's probalby your diabolical plan, right? :)
This story has me really confused, but it's extremely engaging. Then again, that's probalby your diabolical plan, right? :)
Want to keep you guessing but not confused. Hope all will become clear... eventually. Glad you like though, thanks.
Deb
11/05/2008 10:40 am
Chapter 11
A little adventure to let them respect each others skills. Another excellent chapter. Hope you are feeling inspired. Love this fic!
Yep am on a roll for some reason, despite all the other things that I really should be doing. Next chapter up tonight. Hope you like it.
=W=
10/13/2008 11:12 am
Chapter 11
This is quite lovely. When I first read the summary, I wasn't quite sure I was going to like the mixy genres, but now I can't wait for the updates. Very unique and absorbing. I regret not reading earlier. Oh and I love what you did with the names, very clever and amusing, the sic-fi-cation makes me smile. ooh that last sentence kills me...sigh.
Am glad that you gave it a go and delighted that you are enjoying it. Thank you =W=
athena606
10/06/2008 02:41 am
Chapter 11
bad boy spikey love it.
But we do love him to be a bit bad don't we.
Brunettepet
10/05/2008 05:27 pm
Chapter 11
Thanks for posting more of this vivid, entertaining story. You continue to paint a rich picture of these people. I love that Anjell inadvertently outed Spike, and I loved this strong image: "Buffy stepped in front of Spike and raised her wrists, holding them together. Then slowly, and pointedly, pulled them apart. " Punctuating her displeasure with a trademarked punch to Spike's nose gave me a grin. I can understand why Spike wouldn't want to be controlled by a human, but he's going to have a long road explaining himself to his new wife.
Your attention to detail made the physical sensations of travel disconcertingly vivid, and Aurelia is already intriguing. Buffy is definitely in a strange new world, though it's more welcoming than I anticipated. Full and tipsy, she's unconsciously reaching for Spike. I'm sure that softness will be absent in the cold light of morning. It's all making for a great read.
Your attention to detail made the physical sensations of travel disconcertingly vivid, and Aurelia is already intriguing. Buffy is definitely in a strange new world, though it's more welcoming than I anticipated. Full and tipsy, she's unconsciously reaching for Spike. I'm sure that softness will be absent in the cold light of morning. It's all making for a great read.
There's certainly a lot of hidden yearning going on isn't there. Am relieved that you understood my failed claim thingy (not everyone does) and glad you liked the travelling through space passage.
Not sure how long they will be able to resist each other. Excellent chapter.
Makes it more fun this way though don't you think?
sirc
10/03/2008 10:19 pm
Chapter 11
Well done!
Thanks sirc.
Excellent Update - love how you describe the new camp location - well done. Nice Ending too.
Very much enjoyed the "would be claim" section as well - showing how Anjell would have done the same helped to show just how important this ritual of couple is, not just to Spike but to the Aurelian males - being mated and so closely connected and potentially controlled by a human female is so removed from established traditions. This really helped to bring back again just how much of an experiment and "outsiders" Buffy and Spike will be.
I also liked how he comes to help and comfort her in the transportation -
Always a pleasure to get a review from you and not just because you're good for the ego. Your thoughtful comments always help me to clarify my own sometimes fuzzy logic. Thank you.
E - you do a beautiful job with the descriptions and settings. LOL at Buffy finding out the trick Spike played.
Since you're pretty much the queen of amusing stories I hope that you'll approve of my next chapter.
Leilani
10/02/2008 03:28 pm
Chapter 11
OH thank you for getting us this new chapter so quickly - I'm absolutely in love with this story and can't wait to see the story pick up speed.
I'm not sure about the speed - but I do my best. New chapter up shortly.
ya_lublyu_tebya
10/02/2008 09:01 am
Chapter 11
Aww, I hope she doesn't stay mad at Spike for too long. He's looking out for her and all. Great update. I love how you set the scene in this story.
Thank you. There is a definite gap between what they say and what they do and I love to play with that. Not too much Spuffy interaction in the next chapter but I hope you'll still enjoy it.
oh, great chappie. i love how spike held her through the jump but acted like he didn't care afterwards in the visual presence of the others. and how buffy already is used to sleeping next to him. wonderful update!
Am just a big softy at heart. Am pleased that you liked those touches - they're my favourite bits.
Damn - wanted to see those cunning sweater sets.
With a row of little pointy teeth on them perhaps? Thanks as ever Spikez_tart.
sirc
09/25/2008 05:50 pm
Chapter 10
Well done
Thank you again sirc.
Well, that was pretty concise and to the point. Classic Angel (or Anjell) idea, too, leaving the wimmenfolk behind for their own good.
I know, he is a bit of a control freak but then I guess he is the boss (for now). Thanks nightshift.
So great to see that you have updated your excellent story - Was thinking just couple of days ago how much I had missed reading about your Scifi Buffyverse realm. This is one of my favorite new works. I sure hope that you will be able to bring us new chapters.
Placing your story in this very different setting really appeals to me - the characters have taken on a fresh new look and feel. Even if I know them from Sunnydale, I feel like I am meeting new characters, characters that I care about and want to know more and more.
Will never abandon this even if it does take me a while. Am very pleased that you are still feeling kinship with the characters, altered as they are, and my world, strange as it might be. thank you.
verito
09/16/2008 06:06 am
Chapter 10
i love this story, i can´t wait till the next chapter
well at long last you'll get your wish.
Mere
09/16/2008 02:43 am
Chapter 10
Nice Buffy, nice.
Can't wait for more!!!
Can't wait for more!!!
Yep, I really enjoyed writing that bit. Thanks.
fine read, thank you. excellent ending to the update.
Thanks very much vladt.
sin_amatic
09/15/2008 01:24 pm
Chapter 10
Great to see an update. I really am enjoying your story telling. It's a lovely change to see s & b among the stars. And can I just say, "You go girl!" Throw Anjell a few times for me :)
Ta and keep up the "great" work!
BTW - While you're throwing Anjell (again and again) can we please have more _bare chested_ Spike. ::Wipes drool from lips: Yum!
Ta and keep up the "great" work!
BTW - While you're throwing Anjell (again and again) can we please have more _bare chested_ Spike. ::Wipes drool from lips: Yum!
You know I haven't found one person yet who thinks throwing Anjell around was a bad idea (except for the trouble she'd get into). I guess all the Spangel readers are keeping quiet. I agree with you, naked Spike parts are always worth dwelling on.
Wow, I just found this and I'm so hooked. Very orig AU, the characters are very recognizable. Can't believe that S & B were interupted like that - soo unfair. Looking forward to the next post. Thxs :)
So pleased that you found and liked this story.
Brunettepet
09/15/2008 04:50 am
Chapter 10
Willow's theory about the agripods was inspired. The Aurelians would have many untried myths and truths at their fingertips and I love the way you're weaving them into the futuristic fabric of this story.
Spike's warm teasing of Buffy bodes well for the newlyweds to reconcile fairly easily, but now that Buffy has given Anjell a smack down, he may do his best to keep them apart. She's certainly injured his pride. Nice job getting in on the mission, but beating up the commander is never a good idea.
Thanks for more of this entertaining story.
Spike's warm teasing of Buffy bodes well for the newlyweds to reconcile fairly easily, but now that Buffy has given Anjell a smack down, he may do his best to keep them apart. She's certainly injured his pride. Nice job getting in on the mission, but beating up the commander is never a good idea.
Thanks for more of this entertaining story.
Wonderfully considered review as always, thank you. Am really trying to weave and not unravel now. Thought I'd better bring a self made obstacle to the surface to be resolved later and an outside influence to make them get a bit contrary. You'll see - I hope, in the next chapters.
love the ending. go buffy! very interesting plot developments. cannot wait to see how this goes through. can't help but wonder if caleb is going to play the good guy or the bad guy this round... love it!
Hope the plot twists make sense in the coming chapters. It's all clear in my brain (sort of). Take a wild guess about Caleb, I'm saying nowt.
athena606
09/15/2008 02:39 am
Chapter 10
lol that was great. I'm really enjoy this story i hope you keep it up.
I hope I can too. No, I'll finish it I promise. Thanks athena606.
Yippee!! So glad you've given us more. Off to read now.
Thank you. Another one ready now (at last).
09/01/2008 06:20 am
Chapter 9
Woot! Your back! This is one of the most creative takes on this ship that I've seen, and I hope you see it through to the end.
Lady Olwen
Lady Olwen
I will Lady Olwen. All being well there'll be another chapter up tomorrow. Thanks for finding me again.
sirc
08/13/2008 10:44 pm
Chapter 9
Glad to see that the deceit has been revealed and the important things have been talked through.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Well done!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Well done!
Thank you Sirc
Mere
08/12/2008 07:57 am
Chapter 9
Ahhhh, so good!!! I can't wait for more!!!
Thanks.
Cas
08/08/2008 04:39 am
Chapter 9
Ah, should have known it was good Anjell, not Anjellas, so it couldn't have been him. Great twists.
Anjellas - wish I'd thought of that one! Thank you.
oh, this chapter was so. super. good! i loved it! the way you include all the buffy characters and creatures with slightly different names... i shall forever adore that. it is amazing. oh, do i sense willow/tara-ness?? love the new twists. can't wait to find out how they'll fight against the terr-khan.
Have had enormous fun twisting the names too, although it's sometimes hard to keep the new spellings as I type. Love that you love it. Thanks.
Brunettepet
08/08/2008 01:55 am
Chapter 9
It's a delight to see more of this vivid, entertaining story. Buffy's initial angry reaction to Spike was understandable, but him keeping her away from the torture shows he certainly would have acted differently given the same circumstances. I like that Giles was surprised at the gesture, maybe it will stick with him, making him understand these two factions aren't as dissimilar as he believes.
Having Buffy wake to Anjell's coup as a fait accompli helped keep the story moving forward rather than bogging it down in a fight. I love that Anjell asks questions rather than resort to Giles' torture technique, another tactic that should sway Giles that they're all on the same side. They're going to need to trust one another if they're to stand up to Nesst, Darla, Kralykk and the Terr-Khan.
The enemies back story is creepy, especially being related to Spike and Anjell. It will be interesting to see how that is going to play out.
Of course there's tension between Buffy and Spike. He's been betrayed and Dorn and Tarah were nearly violated. I don't know how she's going to get back in his good graces, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
Thanks for posting more of this richly detailed world.
Having Buffy wake to Anjell's coup as a fait accompli helped keep the story moving forward rather than bogging it down in a fight. I love that Anjell asks questions rather than resort to Giles' torture technique, another tactic that should sway Giles that they're all on the same side. They're going to need to trust one another if they're to stand up to Nesst, Darla, Kralykk and the Terr-Khan.
The enemies back story is creepy, especially being related to Spike and Anjell. It will be interesting to see how that is going to play out.
Of course there's tension between Buffy and Spike. He's been betrayed and Dorn and Tarah were nearly violated. I don't know how she's going to get back in his good graces, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
Thanks for posting more of this richly detailed world.
Thanks for your thoughtful review it is very much appreciated. I have finally reached the point of getting them onto the next stage of their adventures. Although Spike would be well within his rights to be fed up with Buffy I ended up being lenient with her in the next chapter. Not all hugs and puppies though. I am trying to make Giles a pragmatic leader in this so 'demons bad' will be more Riley's refrain instead. Plenty of mistrust flying about still though - from all quarters. Glad you're enjoying.
silverwolf
08/08/2008 12:47 am
Chapter 9
yay! an update!!
Thankyou and yay! - another chapter on its way.
Great update! Very dramatic. I look forward to more.
Chapter 10 should be up soon. Sorry for not thanking you sooner for your encouraging words.
sirc
06/22/2008 07:37 pm
Chapter 8
Well done
Ta Muchly!
hotlipedjen
06/22/2008 04:00 am
Chapter 8
Ohhhhh! Just started reading. Very exciting.
Welcome to my strange world - and I hope you've brought some knitting because I write reeeaaallly slowly.
Deb
06/12/2008 10:19 am
Chapter 8
Another brilliant chapter. I'm hurting for Spike and Buffy as they are being ravaged by events far from their control. Thanks for updating!
Thanks Deb. You're right they are being buffeted by events right now and it's hard for them to think straight under the circumstances. All will be revealed eventually and I hope that neither character will lose the readers' sympathy, despite all the mistakes they make.
very good read, thank you.
Thank you Vladt, glad you are enjoying it so far.
Brunettepet
06/11/2008 07:36 pm
Chapter 8
This was an exciting, vivid chapter. Dorn and Tarah's violent treatment set the stage, and although Giles was apologetic, I fear that the Aurelians are in for a world of hurt. Finn's cold, dismissive attitude paints the picture of the huge gap between the races, and poor Buffy is stuck straddling it.
The robots futile cleaning of the carnage was grisly and chilling, and you masterfully unfolded the silent, violent scene. The Master and Darla are certainly Aurelians, but who are their companions? I'm looking forward to finding out.
The robots futile cleaning of the carnage was grisly and chilling, and you masterfully unfolded the silent, violent scene. The Master and Darla are certainly Aurelians, but who are their companions? I'm looking forward to finding out.
Yeah - the challenge said not to turn any of the good guys into bad but I think that if you took away Riley's feelings for Buffy you'd be left with a pretty inflexible attitude to 'hostiles'. Glad you liked (?) the grisly bits - even if it was mostly 'after the fact' and hope you aren't disappointed by my guest monsters. Thank you for reviewing Brunettepet.
ya_lublyu_tebya
06/11/2008 09:55 am
Chapter 8
Really hope they don't hurt Spike. Great update- you could really see how Buffy was torn between old alliances and beliefs and what she's learnt lately. Look forward to more.
He's tough - he can take it! Have another chapter ready (finally) so I hope you enjoy.
Annie
06/11/2008 04:41 am
Chapter 8
I love how Gilesand the others jump to conclusions about Spike's involvement. I hope Buffy refuses to gather some men.
Am trying to make everyones reactions to each situation as believable as possible and decided that Giles's reaction would be a valid one - that there was at least a possibility that Spike knew of the invasion beforehand. Don't see him as a villain - just a pragmatist. Buffy will be making mistakes for a while though. Thanks Annie.
Cas
06/11/2008 02:36 am
Chapter 8
Could have doen without the gore, but not an unexpected turn of events.
Um... sorry about the gore - and here was me thinking it wasn't scary enough! thanks Cas.
oh, the wait was worth it! loved it! who were those other strange creatures?! i just hope buffy gets spike back soon.
~liz
~liz
I love the fact that no-one guessed the identity of my featured creatures. Our Spuffy lovers will be dancing around each other for a while yet, but I'll try and lay off the angst - hope so anyway. Thank you.
M
06/11/2008 01:01 am
Chapter 8
Uhoh. The Master is back! Can't wait to read more.
Thanks M and at long last I have more ready for you.
Oh yes and the Master as well I'm thinking! Poor Spike is going to be torn between his own sense of honor and dislike for Darla and the Master and his loyalty to his people! I can only hope Buffy sides with her family.
Kathleen
Kathleen
Well spotted! I decided to give Spike a break over this particular dilemma but Buffy is still all over the place with her loyalties. Thanks as ever.
Was so glad to see an update - I JUST LOVE this story - hope things are going better for you now - what a great change from their loving making to the ending change -
Greedy me wants another update asap -
Greedy me wants another update asap -
Thank you.
Deb
05/29/2008 10:57 am
Chapter 7
Another amazing chapter that you've created. Kinda scared at the possibilities that now loom immediately in front of them. Ripping the bandage off of the warm and fuzzies are you? Update soon as you are able. Love this fic.
Thanks.
meredith
05/21/2008 07:59 am
Chapter 7
I have to say, this is probably my favorite fic in a long time. I can't wait to hear more!!
Thank you meredith
05/21/2008 07:51 am
Chapter 7
I want to hear more! Please!!!!!!!
Thank you.
notwhomever
05/07/2008 04:43 am
Chapter 7
great cliff hanger didnt see that coming at all.
a unique and enjoyable AU hoping to be able to read more soon.
a unique and enjoyable AU hoping to be able to read more soon.
yes their little Eden contains more snakes out of the water than in it. Never fear, our intrepid couple will prevail - but I am going to apply some pressure first. Can make the story much longer if I do. Thanks.
04/29/2008 06:56 pm
Chapter 7
Well done!
Thanks.
Brunettepet
04/22/2008 12:22 am
Chapter 7
The cruel back story of Buffy's sexual experience explains a lot. Fracturing Parker's pelvis would put a girl off sex, but it couldn't have happened to a bigger sleaze.
Spike lighting the flame and just letting Buffy's libido smolder was lovely, and it paid off in the sensual lake scene. It was romantic and erotic and you believably brought them together. I thought they were on the road to a real relationship, so the attack was a complete surprise.
I can't wait to read more of this entertaining story.
Spike lighting the flame and just letting Buffy's libido smolder was lovely, and it paid off in the sensual lake scene. It was romantic and erotic and you believably brought them together. I thought they were on the road to a real relationship, so the attack was a complete surprise.
I can't wait to read more of this entertaining story.
Felt the need to give Buffy some emotional baggage to add to the awkwardness between them, so I just called up one of the usual suspects - since Angel is off limits. Makes the Spuffy loving sweeter I think. Am old enough - and old-fashioned enough to want the seeds of a proper relationship to grow between them as well as lust. but that might just be me. Spike is definitely the experienced one here so yes he is taking advantage at this stage, but perhaps that's what she needs. thanks for the review Brunettepet.
what a great read and what an evil chapter ending. beautifully done, thank you.
Thanks. Hang in there pet.
Oh my GOD! What a place to leave it; you evil, evil thing! Please, you have to update soon, I'm dying to see what happens next! Absolutely love the way the relationship between them is blossoming; can't wait to see if Buffy will trust in Spike through this new revelation! Hurry hurry hurry!
Mmm... I must be evil since so many people have told me so. Maybe I should immerse myself in scarab beetles or something till it goes away. Thanks lots and I am close to the next chapter if you aren't fed up of me by now.
nyhala
04/19/2008 10:48 pm
Chapter 7
wow! i started to read this fic today and i love it!!!! the story is great and very well writen it really got me, i couldn't stop reading till the last chapter!! i love the characters and their stories.... i think it's a really good job!!! so keep going i wanna know what happens next!!
I'm pleased that this tale caught your attention - and held it. An author couldn't ask for more. Thanks.
Devani
04/18/2008 07:46 pm
Chapter 7
Oh my gosh. More. Please.
Soon I promise.
Dammit - they really aren't going to have an easy ride with this one, are they?! Brilliant chapter, can't wait to see what happens!
Didn't mean to go all angsty but then there'd be nothing to fight for (and would be a much shorter story) if I didn't turn the thumbscrews - just a little.
BerMH
04/18/2008 06:04 pm
Chapter 7
Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! That was a very good cliffhanger, and I desperately want to know what happens. Will Buffy have to leave? How long until she figures out that Spike asserted his dominance? Spike was very clever in tricking her into that and getting her all hot and bothered. I need more! (and nice touch with the Parker thing. He deserved it, and Buffy needed more than him.)
Yep - even souled he's still not that noble - but then its early days in their relationship still. Parker? well he deserves everything he gets as I'm sure you'll agree. Thank you Ber MH.
ivy
04/18/2008 03:36 pm
Chapter 7
oh no the truce is off. Great chapter can't wait until the next one.
And poor Buffy will have to choose sides too. Poor lass - even in space she ends up in the same old pickle. Thanks Ivy.
ya_lublyu_tebya
04/18/2008 11:42 am
Chapter 7
Noooo!! Just when things were going well! Please update soon. Brilliant stuff.
Glad you are enjoying. Thank you for reviewing.
wait wait wait... WHAT?!?!?!
okay, in desperate need of more here!!!!
waiting,
liz
okay, in desperate need of more here!!!!
waiting,
liz
Well - you take the prize for exclamation marks! Just as well people can't reach down through their computers and strangle me or I'd be in a sorry state by now. Am close to finishing the next chapter (strokes reviewer in soothing fashion).
wickedorgood150
04/18/2008 07:58 am
Chapter 7
Poor Buffy. Please write more soon. I wanna know what happens next.
Poor Spike too - after all he's the one with the headache. More soon - honest.
Brittany
04/18/2008 04:44 am
Chapter 7
WHOA!!! sooooo didnt see that coming!!
Good. Hope the rest of the plot reveals a few more surprises too. thanks Brittany.
Wonderful chapter. Nice detail and tone.
Thank you Spikez_tart.
Cas
04/18/2008 01:56 am
Chapter 7
Not the ending of the consummation that I was expecting. The plot is back on.
Mmm.... maybe I should have let them have a little more quality time together, but that mean soldier just elbowed her way into the scene.
IT
04/18/2008 01:22 am
Chapter 7
Oh, what a wonderfully naughty Spike at the beginning! :)
I love the way the chapter flowed, bringing them slowly together. Spike obviously had alterior, physical motives at the beginning, but the way you had him slowly 'see' her as a person, an equal, a woman was very believable and beautiful. He was very patient with her, yet teased her enough that she just couldn't resist him anymore - and let's face it, who would want to resist him?! :)
But the end!! You are wicked! You can't leave us hanging like that for long, please!!!
I love the way the chapter flowed, bringing them slowly together. Spike obviously had alterior, physical motives at the beginning, but the way you had him slowly 'see' her as a person, an equal, a woman was very believable and beautiful. He was very patient with her, yet teased her enough that she just couldn't resist him anymore - and let's face it, who would want to resist him?! :)
But the end!! You are wicked! You can't leave us hanging like that for long, please!!!
Honestly didn't know if I was moving too fast or too slow there. Glad you liked it anyway. Close to (writing) the end of the next chapter - am going to be upping the suspense though. sorry.
02/08/2009 04:58 pm
Chapter 6
absolutely love this story....more,more,more please and soon!
Okay, if you insist.
04/29/2008 06:38 pm
Chapter 6
Great chapter :)
Thank you.
Hmmmm... I think that story sounds a little familiar... ^_^
so that's what this joining is all about heh? not only the peace between two fighting planets, but the reunion of their souls.
cool.
~liz
so that's what this joining is all about heh? not only the peace between two fighting planets, but the reunion of their souls.
cool.
~liz
I know. Am just a soppy interplanetary romantic at heart.
Severine
04/07/2008 05:55 am
Chapter 6
Please more updates! This is such a good story.
At long last - a new chapter. Hope you like.
Deb
03/27/2008 09:55 am
Chapter 6
Another fabulous chapter. Spike's story is spellbindingly told. Love the interaction of all characters in this chapter, but really enjoyed Buffy and Spike's careful handling of getting to know each other. I liked that they have prickly moments and yet there's gentleness as well. Love it!
Spike's story just wrote itself - which was a bit weird really. Good that Tarah and Dorn are appealing to you too. thank you Deb.
IT
03/26/2008 06:23 am
Chapter 6
I LOOOOVVVVEEEE this story!!! Tarah and Dorn are so great! Spike and Buffy seem to be coming to some sort of understanding - I'm really looking forward to what happens next. And please don't make Spike suffer too much longer! :)
More soon, please!!!!!
More soon, please!!!!!
Poor spike - he'll be needing some ointment on it soon. Will put the poor guy out of his misery soon.
Brunettepet
03/25/2008 01:23 am
Chapter 6
Spike's unsubtle seduction for information was charming, and I love that he just accepts Buffy's word. Their growing acceptance of one another is a delight to read, even as Spike is being tormented by their lack of intimacy. I laughed at the shout out to canon cramps!
The story of Wyll and Saya was rich with the romance and sacrifice of an epic poem. Like Buffy, I liked the second ending better. Saya's spirit may already have found a warm home in Buffy, and I'm looking forward to what occurs when she finally looks at Spike and sees<i>"...her one true love.”</i>
This was another entertaining chapter.
The story of Wyll and Saya was rich with the romance and sacrifice of an epic poem. Like Buffy, I liked the second ending better. Saya's spirit may already have found a warm home in Buffy, and I'm looking forward to what occurs when she finally looks at Spike and sees<i>"...her one true love.”</i>
This was another entertaining chapter.
Thank you Brunettepet. Spike is pretty mischievous isn't he - yet he really isn't as in control as he'd like to be. Pleased I made you laugh too. Will be delving more into the tale of Wyll and Saya as the plot progresses.
Leilani
03/24/2008 01:14 pm
Chapter 6
Seriously - you need to write faster. This is a wonderful story - a great use of our favorite characters. I can't wait to see how you develop the plot.
Seriously - I know! If I were only rich enough not to work and be knackered each night - or find writing as easy as others do. Glad you like it though.
BerMH
03/24/2008 01:50 am
Chapter 6
Love it love it love it! I can't wait until the two make certain dicoveries about what Buffy is and the relationship between them. Nice touch with the Saya and Wyll thing. I wonder when Buffy and Spike will make that discovery.
A lot of discoveries and twists are ahead for our favourite couple. Things are hotting up in all senses very soon. thanks for continuing to leave such nice comments.
llong wait but well worth it - but pray, don't make us wait so long again. I just LOVE this story - what a wonderful realm you are creating - Congratulations on your nominations, well deserved. I loved the story of Saya and Wyll - well done. This is such an excellent new adventure -
Thanks for your patience nmcil. Sorry it takes me so long to produce a chapter - I really wish I was like other authors who write with such apparent ease. New chapter up very soon.
Love the closeness that is developing b/n the characters; absolutely loved the story of Wyll and Saya; can't wait to see more of this intriguing story!!
There will be more revealed on the Wyll and Saya front I promise. Lots more closeness next chapter too.
Would be so easy to snap her neck, heh heh, there's the Spike we know and love.
Yes I like Spike to have a bit of an edge too - or at least to think he does!
Ann
03/23/2008 12:43 am
Chapter 6
Very, very happy this updated! I loved the tale Spike tells her, and thinks it's a great way of introducing the idea for them to understand later what Buffy is. Tarah and Dorn were perfect in this chapter, too, and I really liked poor Spike's problem. I really want to see the newlyweds get together in the together sense!
Great job and you totally deserve an award.
Great job and you totally deserve an award.
Well our couple are finally going to get together physically - hope its worth the wait. I had to get over all my repressed britishness in order to write it! Thanks for the award comment - still gives me a warm feeling to know that I've been nominated for something.
Deb
03/15/2008 03:51 am
Chapter 5
Here muse...let it be known that with gentle stroking of the muse there might be a glorious outcome known as inspiration and the delight of a new chapter to read. Soothe...stroke...good muse.
Of course if real life is in the way, then all bets are off. Truly looking forward to new chapters for this fic. It's original and a joy to read.
Of course if real life is in the way, then all bets are off. Truly looking forward to new chapters for this fic. It's original and a joy to read.
The Muse is currently shrieking in my ear for me to stop ignoring it - nasty work has been getting in the way of everything. New chapter very very soon. Thank you Deb.
02/25/2008 06:21 pm
Chapter 5
Mooooooooore please!!!
Soooon and thanks for your patience.
love what you have done with dawn and tara. very good read, thank you.
Thanks again Vladt.
sirc
02/13/2008 05:15 pm
Chapter 5
Well done! :D
Thank you for your encouragement. New chapter just about ready.
Deb
02/13/2008 03:42 am
Chapter 5
Great update. Love how you've incorporated Dawn and Tara into the fabric of the story. Just like Spike to help her even when he's certain that he doesn't like her. Then your last line, about her not being human, open mouth, insert foot. Can't wait to see how you take the story next!
Well Spike can be pretty blunt - at the moment he has no real reason to spare her feelings. Those two crazy mixed up kids ( sighs).
Brunettepet
02/13/2008 12:41 am
Chapter 5
Spike's struggle to get Buffy mended and well was wonderfully detailed, as was his melancholy surety that they were both going to die. Dawn being cast as Spike's sister is inspired. I loved her attacking him, shaking him out of his death bed.
So now it turns out both mother's died as a result of this war. What a lot of baggage these two have. You're believably, subtly having them soften toward one another. It's very entertaining.
So now it turns out both mother's died as a result of this war. What a lot of baggage these two have. You're believably, subtly having them soften toward one another. It's very entertaining.
Thank you Brunettepet. Pleased that you are responding to the highs and lows these two are going through - is hard to stay angsty so am glad the funny lines are not jarring with you.
02/12/2008 02:01 pm
Chapter 5
Love. It. Very excited for more!!!!
Am glad and thank you.
Oh wonderful update. Good that Buffy is seeing this "enemy" in a domestic setting...he and his sister are precious together. Tarah is another new view of these people. This is delightful.
SO there is a bond already that ties them...interesting!
Kathleen
SO there is a bond already that ties them...interesting!
Kathleen
Those pesky marriage vows - plus its all about the blood as usual. New chapter soon and thanks.
thanks much for the update - like your story very much - having them in this environment is great since it allows for Spike and these vampires to live without the restriction of night only -
Yes its quite a domestic story really - well for now anyway. Didn't want Spike too disadvantaged - plus didn't want to write nothing but night scenes.
02/12/2008 03:23 am
Chapter 5
She's busted. Great job!!
Yep - lets see if she can wriggle out of this. Hmm.
Lovely chapter. You should really make this into a non/Spuffy book and sell it.
I wish I could - would certainly be better than getting up early and going to work.
Brittany
02/12/2008 12:09 am
Chapter 5
more please!!!
Oh all right then.
IT
02/12/2008 12:03 am
Chapter 5
Yay, another update!!
I love this story, thanks!
I love this story, thanks!
Watch this space - new chapter very soon.
Capricorn, on the cusp of aquarius, and you?
Sorry, anyway, very good chapter! I like that Dorn is Spike's sister - always had a better brother-sister bond than Buffy and Dawn anyway. All goodness.
Sorry, anyway, very good chapter! I like that Dorn is Spike's sister - always had a better brother-sister bond than Buffy and Dawn anyway. All goodness.
Very droll! I agree Spike and Dorn work together as family very well - more soon.
Leilani
02/11/2008 11:02 pm
Chapter 5
All I can say about this story is - MUST WRITE CHAPTERS FASTER!!!
I know. I know! - (beats self with cruel whip) - blame my job - it keeps making me get up in the mornings and flake out in the evenings. New chapter ready though - plus I've mapped out two more.
BerMH
02/11/2008 10:48 pm
Chapter 5
I think they're starting to respect each other, or at least realize that they need each other. Buffy likes Spike a little bit for taking care of her, and he'll see her as more than just a human. Once again, great job! As always, I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
At long last the next chapter is waiting to be posted. hope you haven't got fed up with me in the meantime.
Pam S
02/11/2008 10:46 pm
Chapter 5
Secret soon to be learned..
Enjoyed.
Enjoyed.
Thank you.
ya_lublyu_tebya
02/11/2008 10:37 pm
Chapter 5
Really like this idea. And love Spike being sweet. All great stuff so far and can't wait to see where this goes.
Sweet, snarky, sexy, sneaky Spike. Still a few hurdles left though - and they're big ones!
Reb
02/11/2008 10:11 pm
Chapter 5
Another terrific chapter! How sweet it is to see old friends in an unexpected way. I am glad that Spike is already embracing the spirit of inquiry.
Will be a few more familiar faces emerging in later chapters too. Glad you're still reading Reb.
sirc
02/13/2008 05:01 pm
Chapter 4
Psst...! The word order and punctuation in this sentence - "Even the comfort offered by Droo and Anjell, his grieving sister, hadn’t been enough to calm the rage and anguish" - makes it sound like Anjell is Spike's sister, but I remember you keeping him male :P
Other than that, great chapter, as always :)
Other than that, great chapter, as always :)
Eeek! Thanks for pointing that out - you're absolutely right - will change as soon as I work out how - am pathologically afraid of messing with my posts as I always seem to cause chaos when I do. Its either a mac thing or a stupidity thing - my money's on the latter.
Brunettepet
02/13/2008 12:31 am
Chapter 4
Spike waiting on Buffy, biding his time until he can wrest control of the relationship out of her unwary hands is devious and perfectly in character. The sad bit of back story about his mom garnered my sympathy, but holding a grudge over all humans doesn't bode well for Buffy.
Like Buffy, I was lulled by the passive fauna and the beauty of her surroundings. The attack came as a real shock. The underwater fight was exciting and vivid.
Like Buffy, I was lulled by the passive fauna and the beauty of her surroundings. The attack came as a real shock. The underwater fight was exciting and vivid.
Buffy has a few grudges of her own too - they've both got a lot of reassessing to do yet. Pleased that you were lulled and startled by the snake scene - was really hoping it would come over well.
seems hating is falling of the radar. very good read, thank you.
Hi Vladt - its two steps forward, one step back for our dancing couple. Glad you like so far.
02/08/2008 03:49 am
Chapter 4
I really like this story so far. It's different from other AU stories that I have read. I just had one question though. Did you mean to spell 'Angel' and 'Drusilla' wrong?
I did - it's just me being playful. Hope you can spot all the other 'aliens' as they appear.
Great chapter. I'm simply enthralled by your story, and I can't wait for more.
Thank you so much Inzey.
Deb
02/06/2008 11:38 am
Chapter 4
Love this story. So very exciting to see them as strangers to each other, wary and yet hopefully intrigued by the others mannerisms. You've nailed a unique perspective and it's a joy to read. Am anxiously awaiting updates.
New chapter in the can as we speak - will post on Spuffy Haven first - after all I grabbed the plot on the Art before fic Challenge there. Thanks for being patient.
Fantastic chapter! I ADORE this story....so imaginative and a wonderful take on our characters. For a Sci/Fi - Fantasy fan like me this is a gift. The characters are a perfect fit and the story is compelling.
Love how Spike didn't hesitate when Buffy was nearly a footnote to his life story. He is being wonderfully patient with her. She'll have a bit of trouble keeping her feelings for him neatly in the hate category after this (or so I hope....fair is fair).
Kathleen
Love how Spike didn't hesitate when Buffy was nearly a footnote to his life story. He is being wonderfully patient with her. She'll have a bit of trouble keeping her feelings for him neatly in the hate category after this (or so I hope....fair is fair).
Kathleen
Am going all gooey as I re-read your review. Yes Spike is pretty patient but he's still capable of being pretty devious too. To say that they're both going to be a bit conflicted about their feelings is an understatement - but you understand that very well with your own lovely fics. Thank you.
It's great having Spike and Buffy in this new environment - wonderful to see how the Buffyverse Fan Fiction writers are expanding the Buffy realms and experimenting with Buffyverse characters as established literary works also.
Hope that you can have an update for us soon -
Hope that you can have an update for us soon -
Thank you nmcil
It's great having Spike and Buffy in this new environment - wonderful to see how the Buffyverse Fan Fiction writers are expanding the Buffy realms and experimenting with Buffyverse characters as established literary works also.
Hope that you can have an update for us soon -
Hope that you can have an update for us soon -
Is quite liberating to try on a different world for them - am actually finding it easier than if they were in a more traditional environment. I do owe this setting to Liliaeth on Spuffy Haven - who's Art/Fic challenge I happily pounced on. Thank you nmcil.
BerMH
02/04/2008 11:32 pm
Chapter 4
I think this one is my favorite so far. I love the dreams Buffy keeps having, and I can't wait for her to see the similarities in her dreams and her husband. And, of course, Spike will take excellent care of her. I love it! Can't wait for more.
Thank you BerMH - glad you like the dreams - I hope these little interludes will make things clear and not confusing as the story progresses. Hope there are no dream analysts out there too or I'm in big trouble (not to mention the snakes!).
Hey - am in middle of lunch break, so just a quick review. Loved it as ever - drowning bit was wonderfully remeniscent of series 1, and wil hopefully lead to Buffy feeling a bit guilty about her "unfortunate accident" musings, even if it does turn out that Spike had an ulterior motive. V cool.
Love the idea of you eating your sandwiches and reading this - am honoured!
Reb
02/04/2008 08:06 am
Chapter 4
This is lovely. A whole new world, and still Buffy manages to drown at the beginning. I wonder if Spike will become curious how this small girl came to be part of the elite guard, and I wonder if Buffy will find a gal-pal to help her understand what's going on. Also, nice slayer dream! What was Spike's other hand up to before she woke up?
Damn I wish I'd wondered about Spike's other hand! Lets just say he's being a gentleman - for now.
IT
02/04/2008 07:51 am
Chapter 4
Another great chapter! I wonder how long it will be before Buffy remembers her conversation with Droosilla. I loved "Now she was lying on his fishing rock...and he wasn't pleased." Such a man. lol
Very territorial is our Spike - in any corner of space. Buffy will be doing a bit of wondering about Droo's words - eventually - wonder if Spike will get his way before she does? (evil laugh)
LadyforSpike
02/04/2008 06:31 am
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Oh I love this story.
Nice work and promising plot.
I can hardly wait for the next chappy.
Nice work and promising plot.
I can hardly wait for the next chappy.
Am frankly amazed that people are enjoying this so much - and delighted too.
02/04/2008 04:25 am
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This story seems fascinating so far and I love the cultures created, but still understandable compared to canon ideas. Hearing that Spike shook off his human features, like the vampire were the regular, was new and pointed out the main difference of viewpoint very well. I can't wait to see how Spike reacts to her power and awakening predatory instincts. I wonder if drowning will have an effect on her 'slayer' side now that she's mated to him?
Looking forward to finding out! Please update soon!
Looking forward to finding out! Please update soon!
Glad that you don't mind the switch in venue or the playing around with ideas. You're right that they are both linked in some pretty serious ways now. Thank you for your thoughtful review.
jessica
02/04/2008 02:22 am
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awesome keep it coming. Aww spikey seems to be on his way towards being hopelessly devoted
Not quite yet - but then that's half the fun.
I just love how you're handling this story; it' such a unique perspective on the Spuffy relationship, and I can't wait to see where you take it; please update again soon!
Sorry about the delay - in responding to you and for not updating as fast as I'd like. New chapter ready as soon as I can wrestle it from my beta.
I'm enjoying the lustiness of the dream sequences and the constant tension between the two in their waking moments. Fun read, looking forward to the next chapter.
Glad you like the dream thingies - its easier than literal sex scenes - which I suppose I'll have to get to sooner or later (buries head in hands). Thank you pennydrdful.
Outdoor toilet - EWWWW. Big snaky water things EWWWWW. Spike must like her a little if he saved her.
Oh yes - the horrors of the great outdoors! And Spike is saying one thing and doing another? Well he's not really in control here - poor mixed up creature.
Brunettepet
02/13/2008 12:15 am
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The markings are going to alert everyone that the "happy couple" haven't gotten happy yet. I'm sure Spike won't take kindly to the unwelcome notice.
The matriarchy of the Aurelians is going to put Buffy at an unknowing advantage. Dru spelled it out for her, but she probably hasn't put it all together yet.
The matriarchy of the Aurelians is going to put Buffy at an unknowing advantage. Dru spelled it out for her, but she probably hasn't put it all together yet.
yes Spike is not going to be a happy bunny about the tatts and he'll be pretty determined not to let Buffy get the upper hand. Poor dear.
what a lovely thought to start a marriage: "The bitch was going to pay for that." fun read, thank you.
Methinks he doth protest too much. Our jaded soldier Spike is going to have a few more bad thoughts before he's done - but then so is Buffy. Glad you like.
Reb
01/28/2008 09:43 pm
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I love the little hints you've dropped that neither party will find the other's world as distastful as they imagine, once they get around to actually tasting. The fresh air and matriarchy intrigue Buffy, the music and technology appeal to Spike, and it's only been one day. I'm sure they'll find many other surprising and satisfying cultural exchanges as they go along. Such as, ". . . all he had to look forward to was a dutiful rut with the fragile little earthling." And he thinks she has no idea!
Yes I almost feel sorry for Spike - this will definitely be a battle of the sexes - and of other things. Perceptive comment about their mutual curiosity - thank you.
sirc
01/28/2008 06:09 pm
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Well done :)
Thank you sirc.
This foc is so much fun. Can't wait to see where it goes :P
Thank you Avalon.
Deb
01/28/2008 09:45 am
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I love your truly inventive way of pitting them against each other as enemies that have to make the best of a tough situation. Remarkable glints of Spike's devotion to do Droosilla's (hoot!)bidding. Buffy's "I'm tired" bitchiness. I'm cracking up with mirth and loving the tension at the same time. Really interesting writing and I'm truly looking forward to updates!
Love the to-and-fro of attraction/annoyance between our couple in other fictions - would be boring if they just fell into the other's arms. Glad you share my sense of humour too.
LOL - poor Buffy. Wonderful chapter.
Thank you Spikez-tart - really glad you liked the chapter.
Jasbrico
01/28/2008 12:32 am
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Awww poor things, arranged marriages are never fun at first.
I can't wait to see more of Buffy learning about her inner beast (and its effect on Spike!)
Keep up the great work and be sure to feed your fans soon!
I can't wait to see more of Buffy learning about her inner beast (and its effect on Spike!)
Keep up the great work and be sure to feed your fans soon!
Spike's almost the civilized one in this pairing. Buffy's inner beast will be coming out to play some more before her human self realises that she's on to a very good thing. Thank you Jasbrico.
Damn indeed. Poor little Spike. Nice idea - was wondering what would break the barricade Buffy would inevitably put up. Now let's see how long she lasts. He he he.
Nothing like a bit of UST to muddle the feelings - poor things indeed. Thanks jess.
I remember reading this (at least this far) on the LJ and lost track of it. I can't tell you how delighted I am that you are posting it here. I have thought of it often and enjoyed rereading up to here and can't wait for more. This is so original!
Kathleen
Kathleen
Am back in the flow of it now. Am so glad you remember it after all this time.
SpaceLord
01/27/2008 08:26 pm
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Is this going to be some lame ass story where Buffy's got Spike by the balls and we have a wimp Spike?
Ah. Well given the original challenge brief on Spuffy Haven it probably should be but as I don't much care for wimpy Spike myself It will even out in the end. You may want to protect your manly bits for a little while longer though.
IT
01/27/2008 08:15 pm
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This just keeps getting better! More soon, please!
Soon I promise
Cas
01/27/2008 08:01 pm
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Like he would need any extra incentive! Love the touch about the wrisst cuffs - can't wait to see how it plays out.
Glad you liked the cuffs. Like to steal little touches from the original show and playing with them.
BerMH
01/27/2008 07:38 pm
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So, I'm very interested to know what the "marriage" entails. I can't wait to hear more of the bond that they share, especially when they figure out that they aren't so wrong for each other after all. Keep up the good work!
This fic is all about their relationship. Like all marriages its going to take a lot of work but I think we know how its going to end up.
Brunettepet
02/13/2008 12:06 am
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This was another entertaining chapter. The rites and rituals are fascinating, and I enjoyed the deep detail in the wedding ceremony. Although it seems the newlyweds shared something with the co-mingling of their blood, I bet it's going to be a while before they're happily sharing much more than barbs. I'm looking forward to the flying sparks.
Yep I love happy ever afters - but not without a struggle first. The friction between them is what makes this couple so appealing and I'm glad that you agree too.
very good read, thank you. nice job with droo. really looking forward to read what caused spike's shock.
Thanks Vladt - am pleased that Droo doesn't seem to be putting people off - I'm usually up there going boo hiss at her but she insisted on better treatment.
Jasbrico
01/28/2008 12:23 am
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OMG that was so hot at the end! I love a great hunter/prey scene and your's was perfect!
Beautifully creative world you're weaving (especially Dru's role in it :D) I can't wait to read more!
Beautifully creative world you're weaving (especially Dru's role in it :D) I can't wait to read more!
Am delighted that you like it. Find it easier to write sex scenes if they're in disguise.
Great - that was some wedding. Hope the traditional Disco will be preserved LOL. Love your descriptions and settings. They're excellent.
Then I hope you like the description of the reception. My tongue was firmly in my cheek at times I'm afraid.
PJ
01/27/2008 12:24 am
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Wow you have me totally hooked!! Cant wait to read more and see where this is going. Update soon, please!
With encouragement like yours I'll always be writing more
Still liking it - hate "droosilla", but that just means you've written her well, as I hate the show version as well. Really enjoying this story - whole new and original spin on the "have to marry/claim for the greater good" idea.
You may get to have a bit more sympathy for her here (you never know) but she's still completely wrong for our Spike.
sirc
01/23/2008 06:15 pm
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Great chapter!
Thank you
Deb
01/23/2008 11:52 am
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Intriguing premise. Very original. Hope to see more of this fic!
Thanks very much Deb
IT
01/23/2008 09:10 am
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Interesting! I love it so far. More, please.
Am writing more right this minute.
Cas
01/23/2008 03:26 am
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Imaginative recasting. Still, it seems to work. Wonder what Spike saw?
Glad you accept my playing with the characters. Spike (and Buffy) have a few more shocks ahead of them.
nikki
01/23/2008 02:12 am
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Wow. The ceremony was unique. I am definitely interested in knowing how Buffy and Spike will react to being wed.
Not very well I think. Am glad you liked the ceremony.
Pam S
01/23/2008 12:33 am
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Not bad.. interesting ceremony.. And the bracelet I guess mean's Spike is Buffy's.. And she is doing it to help the humans.
Waiting for the banter
Enjoying.
Waiting for the banter
Enjoying.
And what a terrible sacrifice. Married to Spike.
BerMH
01/22/2008 10:52 pm
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I can't wait for more! I loved this chapter, and I'm eager to see how Buffy and Spike react to one another in their new marriage.
Lets just say that they have a few differences to iron out - and both are equally devious and stubborn - I almost feel sorry for them. Almost. Glad you're reading, thanks for reviewing.
Dad
08/28/2010 10:34 pm
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Intriguing!
The Lady Meow
04/01/2010 05:53 pm
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This is a very interesting tale, which i am finding i enjoy very much indeed. i love how you switch around the names of Angel and Drusillawith the new spellings. and the entire concept- something i have never seen before and am delighted to explore. i shall loook forward to reading this tale. if i do not review every chapter, you must forgive me, since i usually am too anxious to continue reading if other chapteers are already posted. the fact that i am reviewing this first chapter when most is available to me - miracle. anyways, love the story and can't wait to see where it goes.
~liz
~liz
Thank you Liz. Yes I've enjoyed playing with the names, in the tradition of fantasy books I've toyed with spellings for the Aurelians - cos hey aliens! Mostly left the human spellings alone (well so far anyway), and Spike of course, after all why tinker with perfection ;) Any reviews are welcome, I certainly won't expect one for every chapter.
Brunettepet
02/12/2008 11:52 pm
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I'm already enjoying this unique universe and the clever dialogue in this entertaining start. The sharply written characters and vividly described scenes are making this universe come to life.
Hope I can strike the balance in dialogue between familiar and alien Spike to be halfway believable. probably won't succeed but as long as you don't mind going with the flow then I'm happy. Thank you.
exciting to have such a different treatment - hooked on this story right away - nice work. Looking forward to reading your story, hope that it will be a long piece and that you will be able to bring updates on a regular basis - Good Luck with your new work, really great to have all our beloved characters in totally new environments - On to the next chapter now.
The way my brain is going on this I think it will be some chapters to go before its done. Apologies if the updates aren't as quick as you (or I) would like them. Thanks for all your nice comments.
exciting to have such a different treatment - hooked on this story right away - nice work. Looking forward to reading your story, hope that it will be a long piece and that you will be able to bring updates on a regular basis - Good Luck with your new work, really great to have all our beloved characters in totally new environments - On to the next chapter now.
Thanks.
very good read, thank you. eagerly await your take on dru.
Hope you like her - she was a bit tricky - I mean who wants to get inside her head?
Oooh, love this! New concept; can't wait to see where you take it; please update again soon; I'm intrigued! Especially love the spelling "Droosilla"; makes me think of all the times Harmony butchered Dru's name!! LOL! Eagerly awaiting your next chapter!
Ah there you are! Hugs reviewer
Rapsody
01/14/2008 11:11 pm
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Delightful Idea, you have a new world,and angle, within your grasp. I can't wait to read more.
So far am really enjoying writing this. Thanks for the encouragement
Brittany
01/14/2008 08:23 pm
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It's only the first chapter and I'm already loving this story!!!! i need more please!!!
Then more is on its way
nimsimbelmyne
01/14/2008 06:14 am
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Love the premise. Can't wait to hear more!
Thanks mim ..er nim er ..well just thanks (teasing!)
nikki
01/14/2008 01:39 am
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This is definitely a new take on things. I am excited to find out what happens next!
Hi Nikki - glad you like - am finding it quite liberating not to be tied to the series at all - just this once.
Kristen
01/14/2008 12:35 am
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This is good! Very original and I cant wait for the next chapter!
Thank you Kristen
Great premise and excellent writing. The thing with Spike's uniform is downright spookie.
I have a theory about that - I think that both me and the costume designer on Torchwood have a thing for Sean Bean in a British TV series called Sharpe - set in the Napoleonic wars. Just a thought.
sirc
01/13/2008 11:27 pm
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I'm very glad to see this story, again. I really liked it and I hope that you have enough inspiration to keep writing this.
I do I promise. Love this genre and glad that I bagged this challenge on Spuffy Haven.Years of poring over SciFi and Fantasy books not entirely wasted after all.
Very interesting so far, I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Glad you like it. Next chapter up now. Yay.
BerMH
01/13/2008 10:21 pm
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This story is already very interesting, and I am looking forward to reading more. This is a very interesting concept, and I think you have the potential to really show Spike and Buffy's characters and attitudes. Can't wait for more!
Thanks! Its a challenge to make Spike like himself without the lines and references that we are so familiar with. Draw the line at 'frelling' and other alternative words - you'll just have to forgive me if a few Earth-isms(?) sneak in.
SpaceLord
01/13/2008 10:19 pm
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Interesting start but I would really like more info on how Spikes kind looks, I mean I don't think that they are the same Vampires that you see on the show right? Maybe you are keeping that for later but I think it needs to be established here in the beginning. Now there is mention of a clawed hand and yellow eyes and fangs but still that leaves a lot of room for how they would look.
Food for thought - thank you! I'll address their physical description more fully later. So easy to make assumptions that the reader has the same picture images in their head as the writer. Hope you'll stick with me though.
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