It's probably been said before, but this was much better than the show. How it should of gone had the writers not been total morons.
But I still wanted to throttle your Buffy- selfish brat still made it all about her; does she not remember that she was the one who broke up with Spike and then told him to move on? She has no right to be pissy at him for doing just that.
About building up trust? Hate to tell you Buff, but if anyone needs to build up trust, it's you to Spike. You're the one who abused him, and then he did just what you told him to- moved on. You have NO right to even say a word, let along act like the injured party.
Sorry about the rant- watched Seeing Red last night and am mightly irqked with her.
Anyway, this was great.

much better than show

Nice rewrite, but not quite as I would have liked it to be, Buffy has alot  to explain aswell.
Beautiful writing though.

prefer this version. fine read, thank you.

Leaving it there is plain cruel.

Beautiful ficlet!!!

Much improved version of the scene.  : )

Oh, if only.  Great job, as always. 

Thanks for the kinder, gentler version.