The Right Kind of Wrong by moluvsnumber17

03/16/2013 05:10 pm
Epilogue         
Beautiful!  The best thing was Buffy finally realizing that there was real love involved.

Sunshine
12/08/2009 09:20 pm
Epilogue         
Nice story! I suppose Spike now will let Buffy know once he materializes in L.A:)

buffyconvert
05/31/2009 05:32 pm
Epilogue         
This was a sweet & exciting story. I've read some of your other ones too. I won't start the unfinished ones, tho! That's too scarey

12/30/2008 09:01 am
Epilogue         
I'm glad they came to an understanding before the end.

All4Spike
12/29/2008 07:17 pm
Epilogue         
Lovely ending, and hopefully after their closeness in the past, when Spike pops up in LA he'll actually contact Buffy.

12/23/2008 11:54 pm
To Forgive and Forget         
I still think they should have listened to that demon before they killed it!  Why must Buffy and Spike die???  Got a feeling there is still much to happen here.

Glad to see this excellent update.  Buffy might take courage from Joyce NOT being upset about her being with Spike (even not knowing about the soul).

Kathleen

Fangfaceandrea
12/23/2008 10:26 pm
To Forgive and Forget         
Mmm Buffy's so full of it, you'd think that if she was going to admit to anyone that she loves Spike is to herself :P

Nice talk she had with her mom too, poor girl.


All4Spike
12/23/2008 06:18 pm
To Forgive and Forget         
Love that Joyce has given FutureBuffy encouragement to follow her heart, and that FutureSpike has told PastSpike about Buffy LOL
Now then... have both spells worked as they should?

m.
12/23/2008 04:37 pm
To Forgive and Forget         
Yay! A new chapter! I love how future Spike got to play with past Spike. I'm also glad future Buffy got a chance to talk with her mom. Your writing is wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter!

buffyconvert
05/30/2009 02:12 am
The Fight of My Life         
Hey! Where's the rest of the story????
I put it back on here. I guess it got deleted somehow. Thanks for reading.

11/28/2008 03:54 pm
The Fight of My Life         
Blimey! Condemnation in all time zones!  Good thing they're used to it!

11/25/2008 10:44 am
The Fight of My Life         
Oh this looks promising i can't wait to see what happens next! Great Story!

11/22/2008 10:51 am
The Fight of My Life         
I loved it!
Please update soon.

11/20/2008 08:04 am
The Fight of My Life         
you do have a knack for chapter endings. very good read, thank you.

Miranda W.
11/20/2008 04:47 am
The Fight of My Life         
Oh my goodness! I am literally on the edge of my seat! I'm counting the minutes until the next update! Great work!

lilly
11/15/2008 06:42 pm
The Fight of My Life         
please please please update soon i love this story! can't wait to see what happens next! xxx

11/14/2008 11:24 pm
The Fight of My Life         
 good update i love it

11/14/2008 05:56 pm
The Fight of My Life         
Give 'em a chance!  Someone sticking their nosey noses in!  Grrrr.

All4Spike
11/14/2008 04:38 pm
The Fight of My Life         
Not sure I like the sound of Buffy & Spike living to bring about an apocalypse, and wasn't it a bit short-sighted to kill the demon before it could explain? Oh well done FutureBuffy for Carpeing the diem! Oops, now who's seen them?

All4Spike
11/14/2008 04:28 pm
Two Spikes Are Better Than One         
So it's now shortly after Spike's BuffyLove dream? Willow is having a very typical reaction to the amulet, dying to get her hands on the power. I love the way that PastSike reacted to FutureBuffy's simple 'please'. PastBuffy's reaction to the vibe between FutureBuffy & Spike is interesting too.

10/02/2008 12:26 am
Two Spikes Are Better Than One         
was looking forward to a spike-joyce conversation, but this is even better. fine chapter, thank you.

gia
09/28/2008 12:36 am
Two Spikes Are Better Than One         
OOOOOH!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!

ya_lublyu_tebya
09/24/2008 06:39 pm
Two Spikes Are Better Than One         
Past Buffy is starting to twig... could be interesting. Liked the update and I look forward to more.

All4Spike
11/14/2008 04:10 pm
A New Demon in Town         

Love the way both Buffys are referring to their other self as 'me'. It could be confusing, but it isn't. Sweet moment between FutureBuffy & Joyce. Glad to see Joyce noting the difference in the relationship between FutureBuffy & Spike and not freaking out.

05/28/2008 02:29 am
A New Demon in Town         
Oh, yay! I love this story, and loved the update! Glad to see Buffy seeing Joyce again.... and Joyce being all motherly... cant wait to see what happens in this fic!
~liz

05/28/2008 01:50 am
A New Demon in Town         
very good read, thank you. joyce and spike's talk should be entertaining.

05/26/2008 10:43 pm
A New Demon in Town         

Great update. Love their closeness. Look forward to the next update.

05/26/2008 08:32 pm
A New Demon in Town         
Thanks for the update.  Looking forward to your next!

spuffy
05/26/2008 08:25 pm
A New Demon in Town         
well nice chapter
i was sure that someone will catch them on the couch!!!
well.. i love it! hope you update sooon

All4Spike
11/14/2008 03:55 pm
This is the Part         
Oh no, powerful witch? Tell me it's not one of FutureWillow's attempts to 'fix it'! Hope Giles walks in on FutureB&S sleeping all snuggling on the couch...

04/20/2008 12:27 am
This is the Part         
very good chapter, thank you. loved the ending of this update.

04/15/2008 04:27 am
This is the Part         
awww... cute end to this chappie. i like this story, can't wait to see how things turn out.
~liz

IT
04/14/2008 09:10 pm
This is the Part         
I've just finished reading what you've written so far and I like it!

I like the way you're contrasting the two Buffys.  And Spike's "‘Hey, mate. I'm you from the future, and guess what? You’re still a pathetic love sick wanker.’ "  LOL!

I'll be following this fic from now on - looking forward to more!

04/14/2008 08:57 pm
This is the Part         
Hum....two Buffy's and Spike's that should prove more thana handful for Giles.  Of course even one Riley is one too many LOL.  How past Buffy gets a look at how it COULD be while they're there.

Nice update.  Wonder who the witch is?  Doubt this is the work of the FE.  More like the PTB or even future Willow.

Kathleen

ya_lublyu_tebya
04/14/2008 04:02 pm
This is the Part         
Love this concept. Glad to see an update. Must be really weird for future Buffy and Spike to see what they were like before. More please!

04/14/2008 03:01 pm
This is the Part         
Glad to see the update, hope you'll have more for us soon!

04/14/2008 01:57 pm
This is the Part         

I like this version of the amulet much better.  Even early Buffy seems to have mellowed fractionally!  I wonder how the Scoobies will react... and early Spike too! 

buffyconveart
05/30/2009 12:33 am
Back to the Future         
This is really good, but I think Spike, being from an earlier, more lierate time, should speak better English.  It isn't  "enemies who...would take you and I out of the battle", "you & me". The way to tell is could the you and _  be changed to  "we",  or to "us".
O.k., obviously I hadn't finish reading the chapter when I wrote the above. Mom? Yeah, Mom!

All4Spike
11/14/2008 03:46 pm
Back to the Future         
FutureBuffy's not going to be able to resist trying to save her mum, is she? I hope she manages to talk some sense into PastBuffy too...

ya_lublyu_tebya
03/29/2008 04:10 pm
Back to the Future         
Ohhh, more please!

03/25/2008 06:04 am
Back to the Future         
believe the last line will throw out buffy's thought of  "it's not right." very good read, thank you.

Dreylin
03/24/2008 04:52 am
Back to the Future         
I how things will play out this time.  Will events mirror the original timeline, or will Buffy and Spike change things enough to alter the path the plot takes?  I can't seem to get enough of these time travel stories.  I'm wondering if Buffy's encounter with Angel and her fight with Caleb happened in this story.  She and Spike haven't mentioned it so far, but unless I'm mistaken, that would have taken place earlier in the day.  Or was that yesterday?

jess
03/22/2008 05:23 pm
Back to the Future         
so this is during season 5 before buffy finds out that spike is crushing on her and riley is cheating with Vamp HOs

03/22/2008 02:05 am
Back to the Future         
Good job with the two Buffys - maybe they'll learn something from each other.

Lauren
07/06/2009 08:35 pm
A Quiet Night         
sweetness.
i love time travel stories!

Buffyconvert
05/29/2009 11:55 pm
A Quiet Night         
Oh I love it so far! Great idea, making Faith  and Robin take the little bed.

Buffyconvert
05/29/2009 11:55 pm
A Quiet Night         
Oh I love it so far! Great idea, making Faith  and Robin take the little bed.

11/14/2008 10:41 pm
A Quiet Night         
So many people have done "the night before", but looking at the genre I saw you had done something unique and different--how refreshing!  Time-travel--that opens so many possibilites.  Very intriguing first chapter.  I look forward to more.

All4Spike
11/14/2008 03:34 pm
A Quiet Night         
Only just started this fic and already well and truly hooked. 2 Buffy & Spikes in what... season 5? How intriguing! I wonder what the demon intended?

TwilightChild
04/15/2008 06:23 am
A Quiet Night         
  Very nice beginning.  From the summary, I thought this would be another 'they could have had sex the night before' stories, but this is looking much more original.  I commend you on a good start :)

03/25/2008 05:57 am
A Quiet Night         
this looks like it is going to be fun! enjoyed the first chapter, thank you.

03/22/2008 04:45 pm
A Quiet Night         
great start - an AU displacement just before the Climatic Battle - sounds very interesting -

03/22/2008 01:59 am
A Quiet Night         
Oh yum!!!  This is going to be fun!

birdman45
03/18/2008 06:23 am
A Quiet Night         
This is interesting, I like it please continue writing.

ya_lublyu_tebya
03/15/2008 05:52 pm
A Quiet Night         
ohhh, interesting... More please.

Amy. B
03/15/2008 05:22 am
A Quiet Night         
Great start you've got me interested :-)