Oooh, this is like my fourth, fifth time through this fic, and I finally read in the authors note that you thought that maybe you'd expand this? Any hope of that?

Fantastic! is the word for it!

great read, thank you.

Yay. I really enjoyed this sweet and light take on the episode : )

Now this is a very smart Buffy.

Honestly, one of the best post-Smashed fic I've read, mostly because it's not overdone, ya know?  If you decided to continue this story, I'd definitely be on board!  Looking forward to the next story!

Well done! Would love to see an expansion in this verse anytime you're ready.

Buffy certainly seems to be hooked - not sure Spike can believe it's real just yet.  Still, the future looks bright.  I'll be waiting for more - especially the big reveal.  Great job, you really captured that feeling of can't keep their hands off each other.

Buffy certainly seems to be hooked - not sure Spike can believe it's real just yet.  Still, the future looks bright.  I'll be waiting for more - especially the big reveal.  Great job, you really captured that feeling of can't keep their hands off each other.

Oh yes this demands a revisit or several.

Really hot and not just the sex.  I could hear Spike's low pitched voice as he warned, “Might not be able to stop myself from taking you wherever I find you.” and later with his promise, “Might not be able to stop myself from taking you wherever I find you.”  Grrrrrr ufff
Need air conditioning.

Really lovely way to correct Marti's mistake.  Thanks.

Kathleen

You're so good with the 'if only!' scenarios. I love it! :)

A great short story, and I do hope you decide to revisit and expand. I'd definitely be along for the ride.

This is a nice twist on the events of "Smashed."  I've really enjoyed these last two chapters.  I love a Buffy who takes control of herself and her sexuality.  Looking forward to more.

pretty cool!! Hope things keep looking up XD

Ah how she's changes her tune since Angel..."They could never be boyfriend and girlfriend: the thought alone seemed ridiculous."  She had no trouble calling Angel her boyfriend.  Hope she changes her tune because Spike deserves better from her than getting stuck with damage left by Angel (again!).  I take hope because your Buffy has at least decided not to deny herself or him and that's good.

I hope she is open about them being a couple...that always hurt him on the show.

Nice and hot.  I can see how she wouldn't stay away.  Le Sigh....

Kathleen

cute!  Oh how I wish this is how it had gone!  Lovely chapter, please keep going!!

Very sweet, looking forward to the next!

Oh she craves him all right. After seeing him, who wouldn't??? If it were me and Dawn were my sister, she could go straight to hell as far as I'm concerned :P

sweet morning after.  very good read, thank you.

Yes!  This is definitely the way it should have went.

Very nice.

YES this is what really happened and Marti Noxon put her version on air to work out her issues! 

Actually this is a wonderful morning after.  The whole "monster in the morning" was done already on the show and didn't need a retelling...thisDID need to be told though.  Thank you.

Lovely.  Look forward to the rest.

Kathleen

Lovely, so wish it would have gone that way.  Can't wait for your next update!

Lovely how that slight change in attitude changes so much.  Scrumptious slice of if only...

Yes, a little nicer Buffy would have been ... nice LOL

Waiting to see what happens next.. 

Enjoying..

Yay, new fic!!!!

A much nicer Buffy this time round ;)