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Sideways: Interlude by goldenusagi
Very nicely done. Loved that he didn't bite her.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Secret Slayer
09/21/2008 12:46 am
Sideways: Interlude
great! i love everything you write! =)
Thank you so much!
you’re probably just doing everything to me that you did with them.
Good conflict right in the middle of a way hot sex scene. Good writing golden
Good conflict right in the middle of a way hot sex scene. Good writing golden
Thank you so much!
very glad you shared what was "floating around." fine read, thank you.
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Hot and tender.....excellent and very wise of you to post seperately so as not to effect the ratings of the complete story (although when I print this off it will be inserted in its proper place).
I rather like that their first time was BEFORE she was called. He was careful of the fragile human that, unlike the Slayer, can give as good as she gets.
He's already hers, you can tell it in how he was loving her. Just perfect!!!
Kathleen
I rather like that their first time was BEFORE she was called. He was careful of the fragile human that, unlike the Slayer, can give as good as she gets.
He's already hers, you can tell it in how he was loving her. Just perfect!!!
Kathleen
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Well, I also posted it separately because the first time around, I was nowhere near ready to write it. Though on my LJ, it will also be inserted into its proper place, since I can make the rating of any post whatever I want. :)
I liked that their first time was before she was called as well. But I also felt that it needed to happen so that they're already physically comfortable and have been intimate by the time the giving him blood comes around, which will slowly get more intimate as their relationship rebuilds.
And oh yeah, of course he's hers! Thanks for reviewing!
I liked that their first time was before she was called as well. But I also felt that it needed to happen so that they're already physically comfortable and have been intimate by the time the giving him blood comes around, which will slowly get more intimate as their relationship rebuilds.
And oh yeah, of course he's hers! Thanks for reviewing!
Deb
05/09/2008 08:21 am
Sideways: Interlude
Thanks for sharing your interlude. Definately about the pleasuring. However, I really love the tender moment in the after where he cherishes her and realizes his ability to break her and further that he doesn't want to. Really nice job!
Thank you so much! Yes, it's all about the pleasuring, Buffy is not just another girl for Spike. I'm glad you liked the bit where Spike (almost?) realizes how he feels about her. Thanks for reviewing!
IT
05/09/2008 05:49 am
Sideways: Interlude
That was HOT!!! I love the part where he's clamped on her neck, she can feel his fangs and tongue, but he doesn't bite. The description is awesome! Way to go, girl!
Thank you! Glad you liked the 'non-biting' biting scene. He wants to bite her so much, but doesn't want to hurt her... But we all know the real biting comes later! Thanks for reviewing! (And sorry I didn't reply to your Sideways review, but something seems to have gone funny with the reviews for chapter 48. But to answer your question, yes, next chapter will be bitey!)
Nicely done little interlude - and shows very well that he was already lost in her. No wonder he went out and got so drunk. Poor Spike.
Thank you! Yes, Spike is in deep, which was why he was so confused/horrified when she became the Slayer. Glad you liked!
Pam S
05/09/2008 02:38 am
Sideways: Interlude
Enjoyed... well done.
It will suffice.
It will suffice.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked!
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