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Intervention by Immortal jagzz 08/05/2012 04:07 am Chapter Two Very cool. It's been a while but, come on, tell me you're gonna finish this. This is one of my favorite episodes and I love fanfic about it. Please complete this fic - it's really good. great chapter. would love to read more :) zombiegirl 05/25/2008 08:59 pm Chapter Two Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amost execellent chapter. Looking forward to more. that last statement is so buffy. very good read, thank you. I Like! Keep going, its going to be interesting! Thanks for a fabulous update! Loving her conflict, yet she can't seem to stay away! Looking forward to more! Poor confused couple! Tee hee...we all know WHY she did it, they are the only clueless ones. Love his comment on blow for blow Slayer choices LOL. Kathleen fun start. would have been a great one-shot, but makes a fantastic opening chapter. Awesome! And very hot. Now that would have been a way to make him feel better... Loved the end of the chapter. You had me laughing out loud :D Wow! Very nice for a first fanfic. fangfaceandrea 05/16/2008 07:28 pm Chapter One lol 05/16/2008 07:06 pm Chapter One Brilliant start. Can't wait for the next update and what Spike will do. Hot scene! Oh yeah you can run .... LOL. Looking forward to more. Glad you decided to jump in the Spuffy waters...nice offering! Kathleen Ivy 05/16/2008 10:48 am Chapter One I hope she doesn't take it back and say it never happened. Cant wait to see what happens next! That was fun! Uh Oh! I do believe she's been caught! Well done! June 05/16/2008 12:48 am Chapter One I really like reading how a scene looked from the character's POV and you did a great job. great how Buffy had to cut off Spike's line about bending her over...--!! Good story. Thanks for sharing it :) 05/16/2008 12:44 am Chapter One Oh, the timing! Great start. I loved how you showed Buffy's thoughts during the scene, so it wasn't just another rewrite of what we saw on-screen. Effective to make us pay attention to the moment and realistic with Buffy's reactions... and what led to the last act. And of course Spike would realize something! Looking forward to seeing how you show the repercussions, and what will Spike think later? Not to mention Buffy! Does the fact that he kept saying her name mean anything to her? How will things change from canon and what will we see? So many questions, really wanting to know how you choose to answer! | |||
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