Great Story :)

 

I loved this fic.  Definitly entertaining, and nice to see Buffy fighting for the relationship for once!

fun read. thanks for the tale.

A sweet ending!

haha! loved the ending! and cute story!

haha! loved the ending! and cute story!

okay, I just loved this story.  This was one where Buffy did't really care about anyone but her feelings.  I am glad that they got a chance to talk and make a decision as a couple.  Awesome story from chapter 1.

Love it. I'm surprised Willow took it so calmly though...

*stands up and claps loudly*  Fan-bloody-tastic!!! I loved it, can't wait to read more of your work, keep up the great writing,
Jace

straight to the point buffy is refreshing, but she will probably shorten the tale. very good read, thank you.

Mmmm... that was swoony.

Smart boy went and thought it all out then!  YAY Spikey.  Good for honest Buffy even the I don't know part rang true.

Kathleen

Whew! the finished button must have been activated before the last couple of chapters became available. Love Honest!Buffy. We see her so rarely.

this should be a long interrogation. fun chapter, thank you.

But... but... but you can't stop there! I want to hear The Talk! I want to find out what happens next! I want to see Xander's head explode! *sob* I want more!

Lovely trade....I'd take that one with Spike any day.

Hope this isn't tied to the spell cause it is just too yummy altogether.  Yes this would have changed his path in S4 without question LOL.

Love it....hot without being detailed and funny too.  Nice to have Buffy do the chasing for a change.

Kathleen

very good read, thank you. really enjoyed the last line.

She's scaring the ^&&*) out of the poor vampire here LOL.  Too funny but so glad she is sdiering on.   Smart, smart Buffy...just keep up the advance and he'ss crumble.

I can just picture his panicked face as he struggled to put on clothes and make sense of this.

Kathleen

Time for Spike to be brave!

Aww, nervous Spike.  I (heart) nervous Spike, he's so sweet.  I can't wait to read more!
Keep up the great writing,
Jace

Love befuddled Spike and Buffy willing to go with her need for lips of good.  Smart girl this Buffy. 

Nice how it has gone from hot passion to tenderness.  Oh yeah...he needs to remember what Dru told him and give up on the whole hate thing.  It never worked anyway.

Kathleen

So much fun - how can they resist the inevitable?

hehehehe this is FUN!

Something tells me Spike isn't going to resist for long....

I'm enjoying how this story is beginning :) .  I can't wait for more!

Fun Spuffy - think you should mention her carrying the ax at the beginning of the section instead of tacking it on later.  It sort of seems accidental.

love the starting point. buffy has got it bad. very good read, thank you.

Cute start - are you sure Spike isn't just a little bit affected?

Oh great start here!  Hey I never snapped to the first words Willow said to end the spell!  Lots of possibilies there with the healing beginning (Buffy's heartbreak over Angel?  Buffy's walls around said heart?...Youza lots to choose from).  Great catch on an important and unexploited line.

Love the whole lips of good, hands of good and IT...LOL but very good inner Buffy voice there.

I think Spike is protesting too much (in canon it looked like it was "self defence" against his perceived rejection).  Reall really nice...going to favorite this to make sure I don't miss any.

Katheen

A very promising start!  It's not often that someone writes Buffy as the one who wants Spike.  Good job.  Can't wait to see what you do with this. 

Ooooh lips of good! Is Buffy going to be the chaser rather than the chasee this time? Promising beginning...

What a great beginning! I think 'The Hands' were my favorite part, but the description of the kissing was really great. Can't wait to see where you'll go with this, good luck!