From the Journal of William Pratt by slaymesoftly

Jags
02/23/2012 09:07 pm
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that was a great start to...something
Oh, I think we know what it was the start to...

04/28/2009 07:06 pm
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I enjoyed Williams point of view and victorial sensibilities.  Good characterization.

Thank you. I'm glad you thought so.

07/26/2008 05:26 pm
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Excellent!  What a really intereting version of events.  I like this a lot; it raises so many questions about how, why, and what was really in the works when Drusilla managed to get him at last.  Great idea and really well done!  Thanks!
Thanks for reading and telling me you liked it.

07/26/2008 12:11 am
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beautifully done, thank you. ( william could have wasted ink on their depraved activities.)
LOL I'm glad you liked it. I'm afraid a smutty account of what he and Dru got up to might have been a bit much for William's delicate Victorian sensibilities.

07/26/2008 12:01 am
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A lovely idea, brilliantly done  I really enjoyed it.
Thank you so much for saying so.

Michelle_D
07/25/2008 07:58 pm
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The chill was in reaction to your story, not just because I was cold.    Specifically, this part - “You’re not ready for me,” she said with great finality. “Just try to remember that I wasn’t lying.”
Hee! yeah, I got that. I was just being a smartass. :_

Michelle_D
07/25/2008 03:29 pm
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I got a chill while reading this!

Um...good?  LOL  And, thanks!

spuffy
07/25/2008 02:53 pm
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wow i love it! so diffrent fron all the stories i have ever read!!  i love it!
but here is just an idea .... you can rewrite "choosen" you know the part with the "no you dont but thank for sain it"
i think you can make a nice story from there based on this entries of william  
(again its just an idea that poped in my head )
cant wait for you next story!!!!
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

07/25/2008 07:12 am
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This came out just perfect - I LOVE LOVE LOVE it and this short format - Excellent - I love the voice you have given him and the way you integrated the series and Spuffy treatment.

I hope to do more 3 images to go with the story.
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the banner.

Carol
07/25/2008 02:20 am
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That was fascinating!  You write beautifully.  Well done.
Thank you so much.

07/25/2008 12:45 am
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Intriguing!  So Buffy post Chosen is in his 1880 dreams.  Neat premise.  Naturally it ends just before he is turned, the one thing Buffy not only couldn't prevent but also wouldn't.

I love the idea of these two souls so connected that such would be possible.  Lovely.

Sylvia's banners are so beautifully done it is no wonder they inspire!

Kathleen
Thanks!  Yeah, once I saw that banner I couldn't resist going back and finishing it up so I could have a use for it.

07/25/2008 12:38 am
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 What a wonderful idea, this was! Buffy as golden warrior in William's dreams, protecting him from his fate. Out of love. And selflessness.

Great read.
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.